Where Am I? #WriteTip

During the Fourth of July weekend, many folks were on the road, listening to music or daydreaming while stuck in traffic. Nothing at all interesting …

Where Am I? #WriteTip
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Revisit: The Next . . .

Published on December 19th, 2012, this is a very important post.  One that I wish I remembered before today since I think it holds even more true today.  We keep looking for the ‘next’ person to take the mantle of someone instead of letting newer artists be the first of their own name.

Many times I have been asked who I write like. Do I want to be the next Tolkien, Lewis, Jordan, etc.? I never liked this question because it immediately makes me think that people expect me to be unoriginal. I know they are talking about popularity and writing style, but it really does come off as a person claiming that everything has been done before. In my youth, I found this to be offensive and aggravating. In my current years, I find this to be surprisingly true to a point.

I think everything has been done before to some extent. There are only so many basic plots that exist and the artist has been around for centuries. I wouldn’t say everything is a rip-off or influenced by past works, but it isn’t too hard to make connections to some extent between current works and past works. The example that had me thinking of this recently is the Hunger Games. I admit to never reading the book or seeing the movie because of reasons that I will not get into here. Still, I immediately thought of Running Man, Battle Royale, Spartacus, and anything else that dealt with pitting one person against another. There are even some historical similarities that I think of like gladiator fights and child soldiers. I even thought it reminded me a little of The Most Dangerous Game. This isn’t to say that the Hunger Games is a horrible idea and should never have been created. There is an appeal to it and I have wondered a lot about what drew people into the story. I know there is my culture’s obsession with gore and violence, but I think there’s more to it.

I think a traditional plot device such as quests and tournaments to the death can be overlooked if they come with a new world and interesting characters. We read fiction to escape reality, so exploring a world that is different from our own is very appealing. You get a thrill of excitement whenever you come across a town or environment that isn’t on a map. Creatures that you would never meet in the real world are commonplace. It is almost like a child going to the zoo for the first time and seeing an animal that they never knew existed. There is a sense of discovery and wonder that comes from reading about a world that is not your own. Well, there is this sense as long as you let the world take you away until the book is closed. I meet a lot of readers who resist the pull of a book and focus on reasons why they shouldn’t like it. Things like a spelling error on page 74 destroyed the book for them or they already read a story with a similar plot, so this one must have been inferior. I really wonder what would have happened if these people read the second book first. Would the book they are praising now be the weaker of the two?

The second way to utilize a traditional plot device and still earn points with the reader is the method that I like to use. I love designing characters who the reader can relate to even if the reader only relates to a single character. My secondary characters have a history and some depth, so they are more than background. My main characters are flawed to the point where a reader might find them obnoxious at the beginning. Luke Callindor is a perfect example of a character who starts out whining, getting into trouble, and being about as heroic as a crying toddler. Still, part of the fun in reading a story is to see these flawed characters grow and adapt through their adventure. I always believed that character development can trump a standard plot as long as you keep it interesting and somewhat realistic. A hero that begins with no confidence and skills should not be an unstoppable warrior by the middle of the book. There is a recent movie example that I would like to use, but I think the movie is too new for me to safely say it. I will state that commercials made the hero look like some warrior badass, but when you watch the movie this character received no combat training. By the time of the final battle, this character spent the entire thing running and dodging until meeting the villain. This then resulted in a rather amusing beating and the hero wins through a lucky shot and the villain’s own arrogance. I find this type of character development and realism more interesting even when this was a movie that was not original in any way. It made me believe that the character was human and could possibly fail, which I think is very important to push a story.

The truth is that everything has a connection to something in the past. We are all influenced by the world around us and a lot of it is entertainment media. I grew up watching cartoons, movies, playing video games, reading fiction books, comic books, and all manner of media. I ran around my backyard with toy swords pretending to battle whatever historical warrior I was into at the time. Everything I have ever done has been influenced by something that came before me, so my books will be the same thing. This is why my goal is to make memorable characters within the story. I get more enjoyment from hearing someone tell me about their favorite character than being told why they liked the overall story. This may sound strange and it also comes off as me outing myself as someone who doesn’t sit in a dark room struggling to think of something that hasn’t been done before. Besides, I prefer to have the lights on when I create stories and characters. Prevents eye strain, stubbed toes, and the voices appreciate it.

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Tuesday – Anything Possible – Eternal Road The final stop is on Promotion

Eternal Road – The Final Stop is included in the Kindle Unlimited Reader Giveaway sponsored by Authorsxp.com eBook, Paperback & Kindle Reader …

Tuesday – Anything Possible – Eternal Road The final stop is on Promotion
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Teaser Tuesday: The Debut of the Baron

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

This is a big scene from Allure of the Gypsies because it’s where Baron Arthuru Kernaghan makes his debut.  Having a main villain trapped in one spot for the entire series was tough, but I think I made it work.  Peppering scenes of him talking to his minions and taking some action from afar helped to create a sense that he is contained for a reason.

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High Fantasy

Hi, gang. ✋ Craig here again. We’re continuing my series dive into the speculative genres. Today we’re going to look at High Fantasy. High Fantasy …

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Revisit: Game vs. Book Differences

Posted on December 12, 2012 . . . I was posting rapidly once I started.  Posts were either gigantic like this or around 200 words too.  Gee, I was a mess of a newbie blogger.

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At the age of thirteen, I was introduced to Dungeons & Dragons, which opened the door to several other dice-based roleplaying games. This hobby lasted through college and a few years beyond. If you think I’m outing myself as a nerd/geek/dweeb/whatever then understand that you would get this vibe from me within fifteen minutes of us talking. That’s being generous because I look the part, but that’s not the point of this.

When I hit college, I realized that the characters I was playing and the games I was either in or running would make good stories. So, for some games, I asked permission to write books based on the adventures and for others games I simply tested out characters. This method of story and character testing is what led to the creation of Windemere and many of the major heroes that I use. Unfortunately, this method also came with a major flaw that I did not realize until I sat down to write Beginning of a Hero.

The flaw is that what works for a game does not always work for a book. Very few secondary character conversations happen in games and many games devolve into battle after battle after battle. Your heroes start incredibly weak and level up, which does not translate well to a book setting because leveling is rather abrupt. Imagine if you are reading a book, a battle happens and suddenly one of the heroes instantly knows archery. In the book, you would have to give the character a reason to learn, time to learn, and a teacher, which takes away from the overall story. The ways to counter this is to either have the new skills learned between books or start the heroes off with a decent level of skill. I’m not talking perfect, but able to handle themselves in whatever role they are designed for. The best example of this is the spellcaster Nyx who appears in my second book. In the game, she began with only one or two combat spells, which led to her getting knocked out at least once per game. In the characters defense, the player (now my wife) was new to the hobby and had a habit of rushing into battle like she was a warrior. It was adorable, but not a good thing to transfer to a book. So, I had her start with incredible magical power and her challenge came from keeping it under control and fine-tuning her abilities. This made the book version and game versions incredibly different in ability, evolution, and personality.

Another part of this flaw is that many players will act out a character in either the same way or so off-the-wall that you have to change the character for the book. Noble heroes are the most common because they are the easiest to play, but there is very little difference in personality for these types. This is where character flaws and strategies come in. For example, two noble heroes that appear in Legends of Windemere are differentiated by one being a reckless warrior and the other being a strategist warrior. In a game, the reckless warrior is more likely to die because of a bad roll of the dice. So, for many characters I had to design new personalities with more depth, which is easier to do in a book because the author makes the rules. My psychotic vampire from World of Darkness can be more monstrous and violent in the book than he ever was in the game because he doesn’t have stats to prevent his rages.

One of the biggest downsides to using games for book influence is that a person can leave the game when they stop having fun or have something better to do. Legends of Windemere never made it to the end of the game. I’m not even sure it made it to the halfway mark. I do know that over the years several players left for various reasons, leaving gaps in the plot and issues for my books. So, you can probably figure out which characters belonging to players who left. At one point, over half the gaming group left, which left me with a weekend of figuring out what to do with the characters. Eventually, I decided that I would stop following the game and use it as a loose outline for stories. The game could change its plot and only we would know, but I couldn’t make essential characters expendable in the book after giving them major build-ups. I remember the biggest disaster that this came up was when a character was introduced and the player left college in less than a year. Within that year, this character was signified as an essential part of the plot’s prophecy and developed a deep relationship with another character. So, this character went through several kidnappings, comas, and other instances until the gamemaster and I had a fight on what to do. He wanted to kill her off while I didn’t see how the game could continue without her. This is probably a perfect example of the different mentalities behind games and books. In the end, I had to redesign the character for the books and redesign most of the events to include her because she was never around in the game. To this day, she is one of my favorite characters and I always feel sorry for some of the things I do to here.

I think of this topic a lot because I remember the characters and people that I gamed with every time I write the book scenes. Even the characters that I played are different than the one I spent years tracking stats and gear for. He has become a lot more powerful, a lot deeper, and a lot more believable. It is that last part that is strange to me because it really shows that when people play games of make-believe, they really don’t want to touch too much of reality. Many game characters lack flaws or are given minor flaws for the sole purpose of getting more points to increase stats. Rarely did you find someone who took a flaw because they wanted to act out the flaw because in the end for the players, the game was about winning and not about the story. It is a different mentality than the one of an author nurturing characters along their literary path. I have no sense of stats or dice when I write my scenes, which makes many of the game events impossible to transfer.

I would like to say that I treated every character with love and respect when I altered their backgrounds and skills to fit into Windemere. The truth is that some things simply could not be transferred and other things I never understood or liked in the first place. Heck, I’m still not sure about some of the character’s original backgrounds because they were never delved into in the game. I guess this is the risk people take when they try to transfer from a medium of multiple minds to a medium of the single mind.

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The Kangaroo: Nature’s Kickboxer?

Surprised that it’s taken me this long to do an animal post about kangaroos.  They are fairly popular and probably the most recognizable marsupial from Australia.  Sure, the koala is big, but I think it’s easier to recognize a kangaroo as a silhouette.  Now, there are four species and all are considered ‘least concerned’.  So, let’s just see some interesting facts about these guys:

  • A group of kangaroo is called a mob.
  • Some species can jump over 30 feet long and 10 feet high.  They can also reach a top speed of 40 miles per hour.
  • Their tail is used for balance, especially when hopping.
  • Kangaroos cannot hop backwards due to their tails and hind leg structure.
  • They have the same bite force as a grizzly bear at 6x that of a human and a punch/swipe that is 8x that of a human.
  • A kangaroo’s kick strength is enough to break ribs, damage internal organs, and disembowel.  Probably doesn’t have to be said, but this can kill you.
  • Kangaroos prefer to use their left hand when doing things like grooming.  Their right hand is used less often and tends to be utilized for strength-based tasks.
  • At 5 weeks old, a newborn joey (baby kangaroo) will crawl to their mother’s pouch.  They will only be an inch-long.
  • Females can utilize a process called ’embryonic diapause’.  This is when they pause the development of an embryo in order for a current baby to use the pouch.  After anywhere from days to months, development can continue as long as the older baby no longer needs the pouch.
  • Kangaroo ears can swivel to pick up more sounds.
  • They have chambered stomachs similar to cows and have a herbivore diet.  Unlike other animals with this digestive system, they release very little methane.  It is turned into acetate for extra energy.
  • All of their current predators have been introduced to Australia by humans while their natural predators are extinct.  Their biggest one is the dingo, which they have been known to kill through disemboweling kicks and even drowning.

Time for the fun of pictures and videoes:

Antilopine Kangaroo

Easter Grey Kangaroo

Red Kangaroo

Western Grey Kangaroo

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Goal Post: Week of Break . . . Downs?

Surprisingly, I’m actually writing this in the morning instead of Friday night.  That might be a warning about how things didn’t go well.  To be fair, I was at a friend’s BBQ and fireworks show last night.  I got home with enough time to write this post, but I just didn’t have it in me.  Bunch of conversations about a situation I’m still in had me thinking and not in a positive light.

I can’t go into details, but some people might be able to glean a bit from this paragraph being written just to get stuff out of the way.  So, I thought that I had reached a point where actions could be taken to change my situation.  I found out that all the people who said I could were wrong and that I’m stuck for a few years.  It also became clear that one of the other people in this situation is allowed to take these actions, act with pettiness, and be an all around asshat without consequences.  Meanwhile, I can get my world further wrecked by uttering a single swear word in anger.  This led to me complaining a lot about biased systems, which claim to not be biased.  Now, I feel even more trapped than ever, especially since that other person is showing signs they’re about to let their pettiness and vengeful nature take over.  I’m hoping to find ways to either prevent that or change something next week, but it’s not looking good.  Worst part is there is someone even more helpless than me trapped in the middle and they’re not doing well with the situation, but nothing can be done.

In happier news, my son and I had some fun at the Pokemon Go-Fest last weekend.  It was hot and I got burnt a bit, but we brought enough waters each day.  He had much better luck than me in catching special Pokemon.  Reached the point where he started catching what I needed and trading with me, which felt a little insulting.  Not by him, but the game since we were playing for 8 hours each day.  I mean, I paid money for an increased chance to get what are called ‘shinies’ and had terrible luck.  At least my son had a blast to celebrate the end of a really rough school year.  He passed all of his classes and Regents test with one being a ‘skin of the teeth’ situation.  I didn’t get upset because I told him that he just needed to pass Geometry and put it behind us.  Even math teachers were telling me that it’s the hardest of the required high school math classes.

Movies and television shows were watched as well last week.  We went with friends to see the live-action ‘How to Train Your Dragon’, which I enjoyed.  I was preparing myself for a big change of story and characters like you see with Disney, but it was a 95% retelling with a handful of changes.  Those changes were explained as well, so you didn’t feel like it was shoehorned in without thought.  I would recommend this movie for anyone who loved the original, but I know some people don’t want their favorites touched.  My son and I also watched ‘The Great Outdoors’ with John Candy and Dan Aykroyd as well as the first season of ‘Wednesday’.  I surprised my son demanded ‘Wednesday’ and followed the story even with the twists.  No questions, confusion, or boredom like usual.  Wish I knew what it was about this show that triggered his comprehension skills.

Once my son went to his mom’s, I ended up getting stuff done around the house.  I can’t quite remember a lot of the mundane.  With summer school starting on Monday, I had a list of chores and errands.  Trying to think of a healthy sandwich to bring and I’m on a pita with tahini sauce and chopped up strawberries.  Interesting taste combo with no protein, but it should work if I also bring a yogurt and zero sugar muscle milk.  Can’t really think of anything else since I won’t have time to heat food and we tend to eat with the kids, which means needing to stay on our toes.  So much adulting needed to be done, so I’m surprised I accomplished anything else.

Well, I got 3 chapters of edits for Darwin & the Beast Collector typed in by the writing of this post.  I’m hoping to get 2 more done, but I’ll be happy with 1.  Family is coming over today and there’s a Pokemon Go event from 2-5 both days.  With it being a rainy week, I should get my walking and fresh air in when I can.  I am learning that typing in part of a chapter at night is helping, but I’m not that consistent.  Can’t do this when my son is here because we watch anime until 9/9:30 and I call it a night around 10.  On non-son days, I really just need the 7-8 time to do it.  Otherwise, I feel like I should be relaxing and letting my stress leave.  My desk area also has bad lighting with no space to put a lamp, so reading my chicken scratch is made worse by shadows.  I’m definitely not going to be able to do this when I begin writing a new book . . . Still getting scared when I think about getting back into that, which is definitely looking like an August thing.  Fingers crossed that my mojo returns, especially given what the second paragraph of this post was about.

Goals of the week?

  1. Help students get into the summer school groove.
  2. Type in more Darwin & the Beast Collector edits.
  3. Spend time when son when he’s not at camp.
  4. Curse the rain that won’t leave us alone.
  5. Get tickets to the zoo for next weekend.
  6. Play Pokemon Go when weather and time permits.
  7. Keep fiddling with lunch ideas that don’t involve cold cuts, microwaves, or droopy salads.
  8. Figure out what to do about the ‘situation’.
  9. Try not to lose hope.
  10. Get pizza for lunch tomorrow.
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Happy 4th of July

To be honest, I almost forgot about this holiday.  It really isn’t any fun during the years I don’t have my son.  Just a Friday with a lot of explosions to me.  Going to post a bunch of old memes from over the years.

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Poetry Day: Seeking Balance

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(A poem about balance.  You know I had to have at least one somewhere.)

Life is on a tightrope
With predators below
Shadowy beasts
Leaping
Baring poison fangs
Before you even tilt

 

I lack the tools
To keep afloat
Feeling chunks
Ripped
From my mental form
Bleeding all my sanity

 

I see others
Dancing on the rope
Balancing above the horrors
As if everyone can do it
Never understanding
That many wish to fall

 

When do I get to rest
And seek out a bit of joy
Every day feels like a waste
Of the only life I have
Am I cursed to spend it all
Fighting to keep my balance

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