How It Feels to End a Second Series?

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Once War of Nytefall: Eulogy is published, it will mark the end to my second series.  It’s a true finale too instead of the series that I dropped due to time issues, no reactions, and other reasons.  This puts the series alongside Legends of Windemere as being a complete tale.  Means the Dawn Fangs are the second cast I’m putting into retirement outside of cameos.  So, how does that feel?

I have to admit that the emotional impact isn’t as big for War of Nytefall, but that comes down to three reasons:

  1. I spent 15-16 years working on the Legends of Windemere stories.  That was a longer series, but also my first one.  It was where I was getting the kinks out of my writing style.  So, there was more time spent with those characters.
  2. I knew what was coming this time, so I could brace myself for the finale.  It wasn’t a sudden surprise to be done because I’ve been through it before.  Kind of like the difference accidentally falling off something and intentionally jumping.  You can cushion the impact on the second scenario.
  3. My series take place in the same world.  This means I’m always going back to the same place.  I see familiar faces in the monsters, cities, and deities even if the story and characters are different.  Even if I don’t see them, I know they’re around as new regions of Windemere are introduced.  So, the ending of a series doesn’t always have the same since of finality as it would if I walked away entirely.

That isn’t to say that I didn’t tear up as I wrote the finale.  Like before, I wanted to go for an emotional blow here.  If I’m not feeling bad for what I’m doing to characters and how this is the end then I shouldn’t expect readers to care.  A lot of deaths and punishments this time around too, which meant I couldn’t shrug it off as any old ending.  I had to still put heart into it and that meant going for sadness.  Felt down for a while too even after I did editing runs because it was like saying good-bye another time.

I guess people do assume that your second series doesn’t hit as hard as the first when it comes to putting it to bed.  This probably depends primarily on the author too.  Some will have trouble and cry at the end of every book.  Others will simply move on to the next story that they have in mind.  I braced myself for it and have that shared world/cameos thing going to help.  Every author has their own methods and thoughts on this, which I’m sure people will see in the comments.

Outside of the fact that I’m retiring characters here, there’s a sense of accomplishment that comes from this.  I finished a second series.  That doesn’t always happen with authors since they might not have more ideas than the one.  Others can find that they aren’t able to leave the first series because the stories keep going or it doesn’t seem lucrative enough to step away.  I know I lost a lot of support once I finished Legends of Windemere, so it’s true that not everyone will follow an author.  Many readers will stick with characters, which means they leave once the retirement happens.  Those risks can give authors, myself included, some pause into actually finishing a series.  Although, I will admit that facing that demon the first time made it easier to make the decision a second time.  Been there, done that, and suffered the consequences.

I’m really kind of mellow on this right now.  Part of it stems from a rough couple of years, so I’m a little emotionally tapped out.  Who isn’t these days?  Hope those who give this series a chance enjoy it now that it’s all done.

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‘War of Nytefall: Eulogy’ (The Final Volume) is Available on #Kindle! #vampires #fantasy #99cents

On the eve of Clyde’s dream becoming reality, his life will be torn asunder.

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

As his dream of peace becomes a reality, Clyde faces his darkest challenge.

With the Dawn Fangs’ existence exposed, the time for negotiations has begun. Mortal rulers and the council of Nytefall gather to discuss terms, but chaos is already stirring. It does not take long for Clyde’s dream to become a nightmare as villages are slaughtered by a Dawn Fang who is rumored to be the newly crowned Vampire King. Bodies of friends and enemies pile up as this mysterious imposter reveals why mortals should fear Clyde. Will Clyde’s final adventure see his dream of peace fail before it is realized?

The truth is more horrifying than the Dawn Fangs ever imagined.

*****

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The Truth?

Coming to the windmill, Magrus coats his body in a protective shell and carefully climbs to the top of the broken structure. Slowly turning in a circle, he scans the area to get a full sense of the remaining magic. He ignores the auras of the guards, who are sifting through the wreckage to find more bodies. Those who have been located have already been moved to the outskirts where they are being prepared for transport. Peering down the narrow road, he can see an oxen-driven cart is getting closer and sighs at how it will not be enough to collect all of the dead. Magrus considers warning the lieutenant, but he fears it will lead to a long conversation and waste more of his precious time. He turns to where the man is helping to prop up a wall, which has crushed a family of four. Shaking his head, the Zarian climbs down from his perch and uses his staff to help him navigate his way out of town. Nothing catches his interest, but he stops momentarily to send a few more lost souls to the afterlife.

“Let us see what really happened,” Magrus whispers as he reaches the woods.

Turning back to the village, the man plunges his staff into the earth and grips it tightly to prevent himself from falling over. His eyes develop a rainbow shimmer over the gold as he wavers on his feet. Fighting through the looming fatigue, the priest lets his magical vision change from what is in front of him to revealing phantoms of the past. Transparent buildings rise back into place and ghostly figures go about their lives even though he can still sense a little of what is truly there. Magrus scowls at the sight of a black-haired figure landing a few feet away, the puff of dirt revealing an illusion covering the small crater. Within seconds of appearing, the man rushes at the town and begins destroying everything in sight. Using only his fists and feet, he breaks houses and shatters people. The attacker’s speed is almost too much for the Zarian to follow, so he focuses on examining the phantasmal carnage for clues. He spots bite marks on several necks and sees the chickens were devoured in the blink of an eye. Torches and candles are knocked over to start the fires, which explode into an inferno connected to the illusionary plume of smoke. Magrus is not sure what caused the sudden blast since the attacker had been tearing the local blacksmith in half at the time. Deciding he has seen enough, the man freezes the vision before falling to his knees from the exertion. He is able to hold the image for another second before it disappears, but it still gives him a clear view of the rampaging figure.

“This cannot be shared,” Magrus says as he takes out a piece of paper. He mutters a spell to transfer the image of a black-haired man with a corn-shaped necklace from his brain to the parchment. “It would appear that Clyde of Nytefall is not as big a fan of peace as one would believe. Yet, I still see mysteries here. The fires grew without his influence and I see no reason why he would want this place discovered. I have many questions, Lady Zaria, so I cannot purify the Vampire King until I have answers. There has never been a man or monster who has escaped my thorough investigations. This one will be no different. I swear on my goddess’s crimson hair that Clyde and the Dawn Fangs will be judged. Then, if necessary, they will be punished.”

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Interested in more Windemere?  Then don’t forget to check out Charles E. Yallowitz’s first series: Legends of Windemere

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About the Author:

Charles Yallowitz was born and raised on Long Island, NY, but he has spent most of his life wandering his own imagination in a blissful haze. Occasionally, he would return from this world for the necessities such as food, showers, and Saturday morning cartoons. One day he returned from his imagination and decided he would share his stories with the world. After spending many years fiddling with his thoughts and notebooks, he decided that it was time to follow his dream of being a fantasy author. So, locked within the house with only pizza and seltzer to sustain him, Charles brings you tales from the world of Windemere. He looks forward to sharing all of his stories with you and drawing you into a world of magic.

Blog: www.legendsofwindemere.com
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Immortal Wars: Light, Blood, & Tears Part 39

(Disclaimer: A warning to those who continue.  This is a sequel to a previous story.  Both of these were written in the mid-1990’s.  While the first one was slightly edited and vanity press published, this one has not been touched in over 20 years.  I figure I should do something with it and people may get a laugh or fright from how I used to be.  Every author comes from somewhere, so this is part of my origin.  To that end, I am deeply sorry for whatever nightmares I will inflict on the literary world and the American English language.  Enjoy?)

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Twenty-nine miles outside of Earth’s gravitational pull is the space skimmer that carries the female guardians.  Currently, it is moving very slowly behind Tegam’s larger space shuttle.  Both of the ships are covered in deep dents and several burn marks are on their wings.

“I can’t believe you used the electromagnetic pulse gun on him.  You knew that it would have destroyed all of his engines and our internals.  That weapon has been untested for so long and now was not the time to test it.  I can’t fix all of this without my tools.  At this rate, we’ll get to Neptune in a week at least,” complains Hydrana, who is rerouting some of the undamaged electric wires.

“Does it look like I’m happy about it?  Tegam said to make it seem like we’re trying to disable his shuttle.  That’s why he shot down our overdrive engines and blew up our backup cells,” replies Miracle.  She is attempting to send a message to the other space skimmer, but the only thing she can get is annoying static.

“Sorry, but the communication system can only receive messages for now.  I can fix it in about ten hours if I start now.  But I’m trying to get the environmental control systems online.  It’s too hot in this thing.  What does the radar say about Tegam?”

“Why not use your new senses?”

“They’re a little busy helping me with all of these repairs.  So, stop wasting our time and answer my question before I zap you into the next millenium.  With all these mangled wires, a water blast can do some nasty damage.”

“He’s still a good thirty-two and a half feet ahead of us.  Another shuttle has just left Earth’s atmosphere with Cybro and Adriana.  It’s ignoring us and heading back to Pluto, so we have some good news.  I hope.”  A series of soft beeps, followed by a circuit board exploding, goes off behind Miracle and Hydrana.  The Neptune guardian gets up to look at a fist-sized screen.

“Infinity is trying to send a message to us.  But we have some interference from Tegam’s communication jammer.  Give me three or four minutes and I can pull it through the interference.”

“What do you think we’ll find?  On Neptune that is,” the ebony-haired immortal casually says.

With a smile, Hydrana answers, “A new Tegam and a very battered space shuttle.  Maybe a couple of pissed off aliens that he owes money.  Who can guess what’s waiting for us besides Tegam?”

“I guess.  But the Glebnoks live somewhere on Neptune.  He’s definitely going to them for help.  That’s a good thing in my mind.”

“You seem to have forgotten a small detail.  Those aliens hate all Earthlings for what happened to the original planet guardians.  The fact that we’re the new guardians means absolutely nothing to the Glebnoks.  After all, they’ve been avoiding all contact with us for over a year.  Our closest meeting was when they tested that heat shield and twisted our emotions doing our first week in the Sun Base.  And that was an accident on their part.  They are not going to enjoy us landing in their backyard without an invitation.”

“Aren’t you the optimistic one on this trip?”

“Somebody has to be.  Look, the Glebnoks are supposedly a peaceful race and don’t like dealing with war.  So we’re fine.  Yes!  There we go.  I can only receive the verbal part of Infinity’s message.  Let me put it through the speakers.”  Hydrana turns the sound on, but Miracle doesn’t hear anything except a low droning.

“When are you going to put the message through the speakers?” inquires the Venus guardian.

“I already did!  In fact, it’s so loud that I can’t understand a damn word he’s saying!” yells the redhead.

“You forgot about the magic ring, water sprite.  Change the enhanced sense you’re using.  Use taste or something.”

“What!”  In annoyance and desperation, Miracle creates a pair of chains and smashes the speakers.  To silently restate her previous comment, she whips Hydrana’s hand that has the ring on it.

“Oh, the ring.  I forgot all about this.  But since you just destroyed the speakers there is no way we can hear the message.”

“Watch and learn.”  New, and better, speakers appear in place of the old ones and Miracle simple presses the on button.  But she has to continually force the speakers to remain in existence once the sound hits them.

“This is Steve.  We know what has happened with Tegam and where you two are going.  But there are a couple of things on Earth that Eddie and I have to take care of.  So you two might be on your own for that adventure.  Fate is busy being mobbed by reporters and photographers, so that’s one problem we don’t need.  He’s promised to help fix the damages to the city with my help and Eddie also tried to explain what happened with you, Delila.  But I don’t know if it worked or not.  As for our other three friends, there are . . . mixed emotions between the two of us.  I’m happy that they’re gone while Fate’s depressed.  The best news is that Draveon. . .”

“Draveon what!  Where’s the rest of the message, Kelly?” asks Hydrana.

“Hold on.  Give me a minute to catch my breath.  I’ve never had to sustain any of my solid illusions for this amount of time.  It’s a major strain on my entire body.  Here’s the rest, but get ready to catch me if I faint.”

Infinity continues, “Draveon is dead and gone forever.  Fate and Adriana joined forces in order to take him down.  Cybro is still around, but will be out of commission for a couple of weeks.  And, Adriana. . .Gee, I don’t know how to say this, but I swear that it isn’t a joke.  You can compare her DNA and his DNA by using the skimmer’s library files.  It’s strange how some of our enemies are closer to us then we thought. . .”

“Take a break, Kelly.  I’m skipping to the important part.  I don’t believe this.  He goes on mumbling like an idiot for ten and a half minutes.  That boy definitely has a motor mouth at times,” laughs the Neptune guardian.

The message continues, “I have to go help with the repairs, so I’ll just come out and say it.  Fate is Adriana’s son, who she was forced to abandon on Earth for some unknown reason.  I know it sounds like a very terrible movie and book plot twist, but it’s the truth.  Have a nice trip.”

Silence fills the skimmer while Miracle goes to look at the DNA of Adriana, Fate, and Kilanus.  After twenty minutes of staring at the intricate strands, she transfers it onto the largest screen that works.

“He’s right.  This explains Fate’s genetic resemblance to Kilanus.  There was never any genetic manipulation like we were lead to believe.  It’s a natural similarity between siblings.  I think we were slipped a fake hair a year ago in order to stop us from figuring out their connection.  Adriana’s been reading way too many comic books to attempt that trick,” explains Miracle.

“I can’t believe we even fell for it.  Now that you mention it, there is a physical similarity between the three of them.  The blond hair, slender body, and perfect skin are seen in all of them.  Of course, whenever they met, neither of those three would stand still for too long.  They always had to jump right into the battle or something.  Are you okay?” questions Hydrana when she notices buckets of tears forming in her best friend’s eyes.

“Hunh?  I’m great.  Never felt better in my life.”

“Don’t even try to lie to me with that face, Kelly.  I can see those two waterfalls are preparing to fall down on your face.  Remember, if I know anything, it’s water.  So, spill it, tomboy.  And I’m not talking about the tears.”

“It’s about Eddie.  What if this causes him to switch sides?  Finding out who his real mother is has been his biggest dream.  Even bigger than what the future is going to be like for him and me.  Now, we find out that our leader, my boyfriend, is the son of our most dangerous enemy.”

“Give me a break.  Both you and Adriana know that Fate isn’t going anywhere.  He’s the immortal boyscout.  Besides, he made it through eighteen years without knowing the bitch.  It won’t change anything between them.”

“You’re wrong about Adriana and Eddie.  This new connection between them is going to make the war a lot harder for them.”

Hydrana starts to laugh before saying, “I can see how this is going to be hard for Fate, considering he has to kill his own mother in order to win.  Of course, I can’t even try to guess his reasons for loving the woman who abandoned him and has been trying to kill him.  I wouldn’t think twice about killing Adriana, but that’s just some of the left over psychotic attitude talking.  Still, Adriana can be ruthless and evil beyond the extreme.  Just because Fate’s her son, doesn’t mean that it will affect her,” explains Hydrana as she starts to work on another terminal.

Miracle gets to her feet and puts her hands on her hips before saying, “Have you ever read any of the reports Fate has made on Adriana and Kilanus?  If you did, Delila, you would know that Adriana always cares about her offspring.  Her actions are occasionally done solely to protect Kilanus and she gets very angry if that girl gets so much as a papercut.  I’m willing to bet that the same thing will happen every now and then with Fate.  Not every time, but it will occasionally occur.  Why are you smiling at me?”

“Nothing.  Only a funny passing thought that you’d kill me for having.  Forget I even mentioned it.”

“No chance of that happening.  Tell me.”

“Well, you know how some guys tend to fall in love with a girl that reminds them of their mom?  Usually, they don’t mean for it to happen.  Anyway, I was just trying to find any similarities between you and the immortal slut.”

“And you didn’t find any.”

“You wish.  The two of you are physically built in a similar way with your wild, and I think, unnatural figures.  No normal creature can have a body like that.  Both of you wear daily clothing that would make some strippers feel embarrassed.  The only real difference between you two is that Adriana is a human king-sized bed while you, my dear friend, are more of a human hammock.”

Miracle lightly backhands Hydrana into an empty closet and creates a couple of steel locks to try and keep the redhead in.  They start using their powers on each other for the next couple of minutes until the two female guardians think of one other important fact that they had previously missed.

“Hey, Kelly.  What will happen to Adriana when the other villains find out about Draveon and Fate?” asks Hydrana, who is locked in a colonial stock.

“I haven’t the slightest idea.  But she is definitely not going to like it once it happens.  Uh, can you please let me down?  I think my butt is frozen solid,” answers the Venus guardian who is frozen to the ceiling.

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War of Nytefall: Eulogy is Coming this Weekend!

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Only a few days until the War of Nytefall finale is released!

That’s really it.  I’m putting the finishing touches on everything and should announce it as early as Friday evening.  I’m going to send out the blog tour info to volunteers on Saturday after I get some rest.  It’s not too late to join in and help say good-bye to Clyde and the other Dawn Fangs.

Let’s have some fun.  For those who have read the books or the teasers, what do you remember most about this series?

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Teaser Tuesday: Building a New Steed

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Today, we’re going to focus on Bob . . . Not as easy as I would like.  He’s a fun character to write, but he works best when used sparingly.  Also, best when he’s with other characters who act as his foil.  Still, he has some great scenes like this one from War of Nytefall: Lost.  Enjoy.

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New Release! “Wreck of the Lanterfish” by C. S. Boyack @Virgilante #newrelease #whattoread #writingcommunity #mustread

D. L. Finn is a wonderful author and one of my Story Empire colleagues. She’s generously offered to lend me her site today to talk about Wreck of the…

New Release! “Wreck of the Lanterfish” by C. S. Boyack @Virgilante #newrelease #whattoread #writingcommunity #mustread
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Questions 3: Filling in the Lost History of The World

Poneglyph from One Piece

In the manga/anime of ‘One Piece’, there’s a character named Nico Robin.  Her goal is to find these large blocks of stone called Poneglyphs.  They tell a variety of things, but there’s one that is supposed to hold a span of lost history.  It covers what’s called the Void Century or Blank Period, which nobody knows anything about.  This is a really cool subplot, which doesn’t get nearly enough attention.  It also got me thinking.

Robin’s quest is much like world-building.  You have your starting point, but a lot of gaps to fill in as you go along.  Every story adds to the world.  Not only in locations, but the past of those areas and the surrounding lands.  You learn about ancient wars, great heroes, old villains, and other colorful additions that make your world feel alive.  Thankfully, it’s much easier to find your world’s Poneglyphs when you’re the one creating them as they’re needed.  Personally, I think this is one of the most entertaining parts about world building, especially in fantasy.

Huh . . . This post was supposed to be longer, but that point was pretty clear.  Guess I’ll switch a few things around and make this a Questions 3 post.

  1. How much of your world’s history do you design before writing?
  2. Do you think minor details (local tales for color) are important or should be left out?
  3. What is one piece of advice you’d give your younger self or a new author in regards to writing a history for their world?
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Happy Hanukkah 2021! (Nope. I’m Not Early.)

Needless to say, I was shocked when I checked a calendar and saw Hanukkah started November 28th and went until December 6th.  Guess we’re really trying to escape the gravitation pull of Christmas this year.  Anyway, enjoy some funnies while I celebrate over here.  Not as many as I would have liked though.  Stopped scrolling the Yahoo Image search after the 3rd pro-Nazi meme showed up under ‘Hanukkah Funny Meme’.  Yikes.

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Goal Post: Guess I’ll Try Again Next Week

First:

War of Nytefall: Eulogy will be released next weekend. Email to volunteers will be sent Friday evening.

Well, that’s pretty much the extent of my writing progress this week.  I tried to use last Sunday to design the 4 main characters for Phi Beta Files, but it didn’t go so well.  The cold weather, busyness at work, and general life stress kept causing me to fall asleep next to the notebook.  I managed to finish only 2 of the characters, but I might have to redesign them because I was groggy.  This time of year is always a pain because the cold and stress makes it hard to focus.  Maybe I’ll have a better shot next Sunday since I feel like these characters are the first hurdle.  Not sure if I’ll go into detail on the others since the books may run similar to ‘Bedlam’ structures.

Rest of the week was spent handling things at work, which was kind of busy since we were heading into the Thanksgiving weekend.  Had to help my son get things ready for school too before the break.  It resulted in me not getting to relax until around 9 PM and that was just passing out.  One of these days, I’m going to make it longer or have the energy to be somewhat productive until 10:30/11 PM.

Just won’t be in December since it’s fucking freezing.  Something is wrong with the heating system, so the house gets cold quickly.  This is mostly at night, which is why crawling under the covers and trying to stay warm is my go-to activity.  Being so cold results in my brain having trouble focusing and my body lacking energy.  I mean, I’m sitting here writing this blog at 7 PM on Friday night and I’m trying desperately to stay awake long enough to meet up with some friends later.  It’s just difficult because I’m getting drowsy and cold.  Hate winter.  To be fair, I hate temp extremes in general, so summer isn’t fun either.

On the plus side of everything, I got all of the January blog posts done.  Well, I didn’t get the ‘Top 5 of 2021’ set up since it’s too early for those.  That takes some of the edge off my stress when it comes to this blog.  I may start in on February to create a bigger cushion, but I need to figure out Tuesdays for that month.  The teasers are getting repetitive and I don’t know if I should try to grab more.  I was thinking of opening the day to anyone who wants to promote their book.  I’ve done it before with not much success, but maybe I’ll see if anybody is open to it come January.  It’s something that may help people out if they need it.

Nothing else to really say.  We’re seeing ‘Ghostbusters: Afterlife’ tomorrow as a family event.  S’mores and fun tonight with friends.  It’ll be a nice bit of fun before stepping into the 4 weeks without a day off.  Television viewing wasn’t that interesting with ‘Cowboy Bebop’ (definite yikes) and season 2 of ‘The Great’ (really good).  I think I finished ‘Food Wars’ as well, but I was dozing in and out of consciousness most nights.  That’s another reason I’m rewatching ‘Trigun’ and saving newer stuff for when I’m feeling better or the heat is fixed.

Got nothing exciting going on other than the book release.  It’s Hanukkah, so presents are wrapped and menorahs are taken out.  Potato latkes will be made next Saturday, which is a fun and greasy tradition.  Beyond that, I’ll be working, parenting, and seeing if I can get in any notebook time.  Wish me luck.

Goals of the week:

  1. Parenting
  2. Working
  3. Staying warm
  4. Releasing War of Nytefall: Eulogy
  5. Hydrating
  6. Notebook work
  7. Tinker with an outline if I develop any energy

Could it be depression doing this to me?  Probably should consider that’s a bigger factor than the cold and stress.

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7 Tips to Using Flight in Fiction

DC Characters

From the picture above, you can see how many ways there are to fly. Wings, flying mount, technology, wind, magic, simply going, and the list continues.  It’s probably one of, if not THE, most common and popular special ability in fiction.  So, what are some things to consider?

  1. You don’t really have to explain how the character flies if they simply have the ability to go up.  People will wonder, but you aren’t obligated to do so.  If you do then you may inadvertently limit the power or make it seem less plausible within the rules of the world.  For example, if the character can fly because they’re strong enough to resist gravity then everyone with super strength should be able to do so.  It also doesn’t explain how they can hover or move around like a plane.  Just be careful with your explanations and don’t think you really have to.
  2. Flight is more than soaring into the air and traveling.  Remember that the air is thinner and the temperature is colder.  A character who can only fly and has no protection from the elements won’t be able to go higher than birds.  The further away from the surface they go, the closer they are to the icy, suffocating grip of space.  That’s another thing to toss in here.  Eventually, they can hit a point where there’s no gravity or any forces that will normally help them return to Earth.
  3. Wings . . . They get in the way when in tight places.  If the character has them and can’t put them away then they need to operate accordingly.  Either they’re careful about moving around or they have a way to keep the wings restrained.  Yet, this would be like tying up your arms, so a character can demonstrate a discomfort with this necessary action.
  4. Flying with a passenger isn’t as easy as you think.  First, the character needs the strength to carry the person.  Flight doesn’t grant them the ability to lift a heavy person, so catching them will cause both to plummet.  At best, they can slow the descent to a safe speed, but this will also leave them open to attacks by any villains in the area.  So, think of ways that a flying character with normal strength can solve this problem before you throw them into it.  After all, they’ve probably considered the issue in their own world.
  5. If a flying character is knocked out while in the air, it doesn’t mean that they will survive the fall.  I’ve seen this a lot where a flyer is zapped, passes out, and falls from the height of the Empire Statue Building.  They’re not dead, which is weird since they don’t have enhanced durability.  A crash landing is the greatest threat for a character with this power, so either make it a threat or give a reason why they don’t have to worry about it.
  6. Wind in the eyes!  This is why some flyers have goggles, but people don’t usually remember this issue.  You have wind hitting your eyes between blinks, which can be painful and debilitating.  It’s just asking for the character to slam into an airplane by accident.  Think of ways they can avoid this problem since it’s one of the easiest to get around.
  7. If your characters flies using magic or technology then think about limits.  Is there a maximum amount of time before the spell or batteries wear off?  Once you figure this out, try to be consistent and don’t make it fail only when it’s dramatically appropriate.  This makes it feel like there’s no real limit and it’s only there to cause tension from time to time.  It’s easy to add this in too without making it a problem.  Just have the character charge the batteries while at home and doing something else.  It takes one sentence to recharge or recast here.
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