Goal Post: Made It To Winter Break!

The title really says it all.  This was a week of just making it to the break.  I didn’t get to work on Darwin & the Demon Game because I was too tired.  Work was crazy since we have a week off.  My son had a bunch of schoolwork, so we didn’t get to relax as much as I would have liked.  By Friday, I was just dragging myself to the laptop to write this post and then go work on a new puzzle.

That isn’t to say nothing interesting happened. I did finish this LEGO set:

The Mighty Bowser Lego Set

I’m waiting for the LEGO Rivendell to become available, which is going to be a summer build for me.  This one was fun and challenging though.  I’m surprised it came out as big as it did.  Made space in my son’s room for it since he wanted it there.  Rivendell will be my treat in the end.

The other big event was last Sunday:

Wicked

We went to see ‘Wicked’ on Broadway.  I’m not much of a play person, but I like the ones that connect to things I already know.  This one had more singing than I expected, which wasn’t bad.  The effects were good and there was a decent amount of humor.  Sassy humor at some points too, which appealed to me.  I liked how the story carried into ‘Wizard of Oz’ and brought an extra dimension to that story.  Overall, I can see why this show is so popular and lasted this long.  Not sure what the next one we’ll try is going to be.  Really depends on what my son wants to try and what’s available.

I wish I had more to talk about with this week, but it was lowkey out of necessity.  Most nights, I took my Ashwagandha and Zzzquil around 9:30.  I was out around 10/10:15 and slept about 6-7 hours.  This is a great step forward since I only had one panic attack at night, which was triggered by a specific event.  I’ve got a doctor appointment in 30 minutes to talk about this and explain why I’m not comfortable taking certain medications too.  I mean, most of the issue has passed and I’m getting it under control.  I’d like to at least wait and see if the trend continues.  Oh yeah, I have an eye exam too, which I realized I haven’t had done since 2019.  Guess this is appointment day.

Now, I know I should be making goals in regards to writing.  I’m nervous to do this because I always fall short.  I’ve got my son during the week, so I only have the weekends to work with.  I’d like to think I could finish Chapter 7 and 8 of Darwin & the Demon Game this weekend.  Part of it depends on if my eyes get dilated and how long it takes to recover from that.  My hope is 2 sections today and 3 tomorrow.  If I pull that off, I might be able to do chapters 9 and 10 the following weekend.  My son wants to work on some of his own projects, so I might even write during the week if that happens. No matter what, I’m expecting to come up 1 chapter shy of the 2/3 mark.  It really does appear that I can only write one book per school year.  At least until I regain some of my author stamina, which might be a winter issue.

The only other plans for the week is to spend time with my son.  We’ve mostly done schoolwork, so we want to have fun.  Zoo trip is definitely going to happen.  A local museum is setting up classic arcade games that you can play, so that’s going to be on the list too.  The cold weather means a lot of indoor stuff.  Going to do some cooking, which hasn’t happened that often.  Even going to try making baked ziti, but with vodka sauce instead of chunky marinara.  My son seems to prefer that type of sauce over the regular stuff.  Sounds like a scattershot of stuff, but the Winter Break is always flexible because of the weather.  Never know when it will get freezing or snow around here.

As far as television goes, I’ve just been watching anime.  Finished one last night and I haven’t decided on what I want to tackle next.  There aren’t any live-action shows that appeal to me right now.  Kind of going through the motions on most things these days, but we’ll see what I can find.  Maybe I’ll just put old sitcoms on as background noise while I tinker with a puzzle or a notebook.

Really need to give a thorough examination to the Phi Beta Files information because my brain is trying to rethink the whole thing.  I’ve already got 95% of the rival teams, all of the heroes, and all of the recurring villains set up.  I don’t know want to tear pages out of a notebook and can’t figure out where this thought process is going.  Part of it might be that I’m feeling old and limited in time, so I’m trying to junk as much a possible in an attempt to believe that I can write all my stories before I eventually die.  This is what my brain does when I start thinking about my own mortality.  Eh, I’ll have a 4 hour span on Monday where I can read and write . . . Unless certain people prove to be more of a headache than I expected.  If I can finish the last of the rival groups, I can do the allies and then dive into the 6 books with their short story explanations.

Anyway, what are the goals of the week?

  1. Write at least 2 chapters of Darwin & the Demon Game.
  2. Appointments!
  3. Make some progress on Phi Beta Files
  4. Read more Naruto since I promised a student I would do so.
  5. Spend time with my son when he’s here . . . This really is a given.
  6. Cooking.
  7. Zoo trip.
  8. ARCADE!
  9. Stay warm.
  10. Continue improving sleeping habits.
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Origins of Monsters

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Creating monsters for a fantasy world can be done in a variety of ways.  None of them are better than the others, so the author can use the one that suits them best.  It doesn’t even have to be one method and that’s all.  You can have monsters coming from all styles of creation, which is probably the best tactic.  Mixing it up creates a lush and deep world where there is familiarity and new.  Keeps the audience on their toes.

Now, what are the methods?

  1. Mythology/Folklore–  This is the simplest one to explain, but can be the hardest one to pull off.  You have to do research here.  Plenty of monsters have been created throughout human history, so there will inevitably be one that can fit what an author is looking for.  The trick is to get it right because these come with pre-existing expectations and knowledge.  You can only change these monsters so much before you’ve made something entirely new and piss off anyone who is a fan.  There’s also the issue of some monsters having multiple forms and versions, so you need to research the various aspects if you want to get it completely right.
  2. Mother Nature Frankenstein– Creating monsters this way will take some time and you may need to keep notes.  The basic concept is that you take pieces and abilities of real animals then mash them together.  This is probably how many mythological creatures came about like the Peryton (winged stag) and centaurs (human/horse combo).  Again, it seems simple, but there is a danger.  Some authors may get too into adding parts and creature too big of an amalgamation.  The best way to use this method is to have a reason for each part and keeping it at 1-2 solely for aesthetic reasons.  Everything else should serve a purpose.  This makes sense because real animals tend to evolve adaptations that are useful instead of simply looking cool.
  3. Straight from the Mental Depths–  There is no mythological or natural origin for what you’ve created.  It’s just a strange creature that you came up with.  These tend to be made up on the fly, which is why they can be so bizarre.  The author starts with a challenge and then designs the monster as soon as it appears.  Then, it is altered and changed as the scene is written.  Abilities are granted to counter the heroes until the fight has gone on long enough.  It’ll be redesigned at least once to accommodate any of these changes.  Think of this as being made entirely from clay, which will not dry until the final edits are complete.  Personally, I find this to be the most amount of fun and the most difficult out of the 3 methods.  You are a lot more likely to go overboard here because there’s no restriction of pre-existing information (mythology) or laws of nature (Mother Nature).

So, those are the 3 main ways that I can think of.  I’m sure there are more as well as some subcategories.  Still, you’re generally going to have these three because they each have different levels of reality/stability.  Mythology has the most since you’re working with creatures that have already been created.  Mother Nature is in the middle because you’re making something new, but using real beasts with a touch of magic at times.  SFTMD is pure imagination with nothing acting as a solid foundation until the author is done with the design.

The method that one chooses depends on entirely on what they want for the scene and your own comfort levels.  This means you can’t declare one method better than the others or shame people for taking what you see as the laziest path.  Everyone has their own way of doing things.  Some authors aren’t good at making monsters, so they’ll work solely with mythology.  Others are great at monsters, but aren’t good at other things.  We all have our own strengths and weaknesses, which monster creation can fall into.  As long as the beast works for the scene, one shouldn’t complain about its origin.

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Creating Character Voice

Hi, SEers. Welcome to another Mae Day on Story Empire. Thanks for joining me for a discussion on character voice.  As authors, we know the importance…

Creating Character Voice
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Poetry Day: Devil’s Advocate

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(Sometimes, I play devil’s advocate, but I try to do it with friendly debates.  Not when someone is talking about their dreams unless they ask me to do so.  The devil’s advocate role gets used by so many people to stop others from attempting anything that may come with a risk.  It blocks ambition and dreams under the guise of constructive criticism and wanting to help.  Hence, this poem.)

The hell is wrong with you?
You stand there
Tearing me down
Whenever I soar among the clouds
As if I have already failed
And you merely state the truth

 

The hell is wrong with you?
You sit there
Pushing me to rise
Whenever I embrace the abyss
Condemning my misery
As if I did this to myself

 

The hell is wrong with you?
My constant opposition
The dagger to my optimism
The dove to my pessimism
Both aided by your interference
Just pick a fucking side

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7 Tips to Creating Monsters

Young Frankenstein

Let’s be clear.  There really aren’t many solid rules to monster making.  At least when it comes to fiction.  In reality, you have to struggle with the ethics of creating a monster and hope it doesn’t kill you when it escapes.  Anyway, let’s dive into some general advice that can help you along.

  1. Have a reason for this creature existing.  Not just in terms of story, but of the world in general.  Monsters are basically the animals of another world.  Just like on Earth, they will have some kind of niche.  Maybe they’re an apex predator or they keep another creature’s population in check.  It doesn’t have to be that scientific, but figuring out their role can guide you in designing their abilities.
  2. Be careful altering established monsters.  You do have some leeway, but you have to retain some aspects of the original.  Otherwise, you’re slapping a known name on an unrelated creature.  This can come off as lazy or full-blown lying.  For example, you can have a dragon that is covered in feathers and doesn’t breathe fire as long as it still has the form of a dragon type.  You can’t slap feathers on a dragon and call it a roc.  It doesn’t work that way.
  3. Naming your monster doesn’t have to be right on the first try.  Many times, your initial name for a creature might be a placeholder.  You’ll write them in a scene and realize that the name doesn’t roll off the tongue.  Maybe it fails to capture the essence of what you have created.  Just go back and change it with a ‘find/replace’.
  4. Size isn’t everything!  Many authors think that they have to go big with monsters.  The thought of a giant beast barreling towards the heroes or crashing through a wall has a lot of appeal.  Yet, there is something to be said for smaller creatures.  Large monsters need a lot of room and they are huge targets, which are not known for speed.  The advantages of smaller ones is that they can be placed in small locations without sacrificing mobility.  One can believe that they will be faster, harder to hit, and maybe even harder to notice.  So, consider going tiny instead of huge.
  5. Not every monster has to be aggressive and a threat.  If you want to paint a vast world of magical creatures, you should consider those that are passive.  Consider how some real animals will runaway instead of attack, which can guide you to create these ‘window dressing’ beasts.  They might not be essential to the plot, but it shows that the world has more than dangerous monsters.  It shows that you have an actual ecosystem out there.
  6. If you’re going to use a real world animal for a base, try to keep the main form intact.  It isn’t a requirement, but you picked the initial animal for a reason.  If you change it so much that it isn’t even close, the monster might no longer work for what you initially intended.  For example, if you take a bear then it’s best to keep the animal stocky and strong.  If you change so much that it is now slender and agile with not much in the way of strength then there was no point in the bear starting point.  You’ve basically gone with a cat, but you don’t have that in your mind enough to give your monster the benefit of that form.
  7. Try to maintain a list of creatures you’ve created.  This is mostly for those who are going to do a series.  You never know when you’ll find a place where your monster will work out again.  This saves on time since you already have something to fit that niche and it makes the creature feel more widespread.  It’s no longer alive in that single area, but it has a range like any animal.
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There Are More Book to Movie Scams Out There – Be Careful

Photo by Tyson Moultrie on Unsplash Hi SEers. John is with you today. It is midweek, and hopefully, it is going well for you. Today I was going to …

There Are More Book to Movie Scams Out There – Be Careful
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Teaser Tuesday: A Race of Survivors

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

This teaser comes from Legends of Windemere: Path of the Traitors.  I really liked writing this book because it allowed me to focus on several secondary characters.  This book also helped get a bunch of non-champion characters in position for the final book.  So, it definitely holds an important position in the series.  You can pick it up for $2.99 as an eBook or $13.00 on paperback.  Enjoy.

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Is It Easy to Write Monsters?

Young Frankenstein

Fairly certain that I’ve tackled this topic before.  I felt like doing it again because the question still comes up.  Since fantasy authors are known for having strange creatures in their stories, people wonder how they design them.  Is there a trick?  Do you need a special kind of mentality for it?

I’m going to be doing a 7 Tips post tomorrow and going over the 3 big methods of creation on Friday.  What does that leave for today?  Not much beyond a basic introduction to the topic.  Sorry that this won’t be that deep a dive, but monster creation isn’t that easy to explain.

Audiences take it for granted and think it’s easy to toss in a few dragons here and there.  I’ve seen people complain about fantasy depending so much on monsters too.  Well, they are a staple of the genre just like horses and cows are commonly found in Westerns.  It is strange how often fantasy gets criticized for its monsters being there and torn up for being unrealistic when that’s the genre.  The amount of times I’ve seen people explain how a dragon cannot exist in our world is frustrating.  Especially since:

These stories don’t happen in our world!

This is a key point to monster creation.  You don’t have to follow real world laws of nature if you need your monster to do something.  If it needs to breathe fire or eat metal then you have it do so.  No explanation needs to be given either because they simply could have evolved to be like that or been magically created.  With magic being around, it would be rather strange that there aren’t any weird animals.  At least one person would have tried to create new species and ‘improve’ on ones that existed.  So, a key point is to not let reality and the criticism of those who can’t step out of reality drive you to avoid adding monsters at all.

Monster creation is a key aspect of world building in high fantasy.  You can get away with not doing it in a world that is low magic, but it’s hard to resist.  The moment you introduce a non-human character, an animal that has a fantasy ability, or a beast that doesn’t exist, you’re doing monster creation.  Yes, even elves, dwarves, gnomes, and orcs would fall under this category.  They aren’t real beings, so they need to be created from imagination, which requires using the same methods as one would use for wilder monsters.  So, you can see that it is very hard to avoid this aspect, especially if you don’t want your fantasy story to come off as fairly empty.  People who enjoy the genre tend to expect at least one fictional being.

Personally, I like creating monsters.  It’s one of the more interesting parts of writing fantasy for me.  I can’t even explain why.  There’s just something fun and exciting about building a beast that doesn’t exist.  You mold it to what you need and unleash it on your characters.  Sure, it will probably have to get killed off, but you can bring back another for a later story.  Once you create a monster, it’s yours to use whenever you need it.  There’s no rule that every monster has to be one-of-a-kind, so you can gradually build up your own bestiary.  This adds a great dimension to the world because now it has its own unique flora and fauna.

So, what do you think about monster creation?

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Narrative Choice, Part 2

by Stephen Geez In “Narrative Choice Part 1” I started with the basics in narrative choice—voice, tense, and identity. For Part 2 we’ll flex more of …

Narrative Choice, Part 2
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Super Bowl Memes . . . Because I’m Busy

It’s time for the Super Bowl, which I’m sure most people who read my blog don’t care about.  For those who don’t even know, it’s the last football game of the season between the two conference champions.  Most people watch it for the commercials.  My family usually has a party, which was more consistent before Covid.  This year, something else came up that I couldn’t resist.  You’ll see at the bottom.  Now for the funnies:

I’m a Giants fan, so this is understandable

I’ll still get to watch the game, but the party won’t be possible due to:

Wicked on Broadway

I’m not a major Broadway fan, but it’s an autism-friendly showing.  That means, my son can go without being overstimulated.  He enjoys these events when the shows are aimed at his interests.  This one has been on our list for years.  It’s worth skipping the party.

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