Nanowrimo – Redefining a Win

Greetings Storytellers. Diana here. With NaNoWriMo looming in the future, I’m taking a short intermission from my “tightening your prose” series to …

Nanowrimo – Redefining a Win
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Poetry Day: Fragile Muse

Muses

(This was a fun one dealing with times when you can’t get your imagination running correctly.)

Our spirit of inspiration
Gentle pixie on our shoulder
With her ink-stained wings
And body cloaked in paint
Flitting on the edge of thought
Heard just enough to guide our dreams

 

Her power is at our cores
Dwelling in our mind and heart
She balances upon a scale
Held aloft by our self-worth
Easily tipped to madness
And swallowed by despair

 

She is a fragile creature
That can break at any moment
Leaving us a twitching husk
Adrift in harsh reality
With no wings to help us soar
No voice to call us home

 

She cannot die for good
Unless we will it to be so
We can fight to bring her back
Absorb the pain that made her fall
Using it to forge new strength
And revive our fragile muse

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Monster Month: The Mapinguari

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This is a beast found around Brazil, Peru, and Venezuela and is supposedly at least seven feet tall.  So, it’s really big and appears to be similar to a Sasquatch and Yeti.  Really that’s only because it’s big and has a lot of fur.  It moves silently through the jungles too.  Makes it a really curious addition to the month.

Mapinguari descriptions can be all over the map.  It tends to be big with fur and a foul stench, but then descriptions go in various directions.  The more fantastical version gives them a single eye and a second mouth in their stomach, which either releases the bad smell or a terrifying roar.  More mundane various give them a monkey’s face, a burrow’s snout, anteater-like claws, backwards feet, humped backs, tortoise necks, and/or hairless chests.  They are also known to be arrow and bulletproof in some stories with the exception of the eyes, mouth, bellybutton, and the rest of the head.  This could mean that they have armored skin beneath the fur.

These animals can walk on four or two feet, but they aren’t very graceful as bipeds.  Then again, other stories have them as being agile.  Mapinguari tend to be nocturnal in the stories.  Their diets depend on where you hear about them though.  Some areas say they eat vegetation and use their claws to tear pieces off trees.  Others say they slaughter cows to eat their tongues.  I couldn’t find anything about them going after people, so I guess that’s a plus.

Of course, people said to have seen them and also killed them.  You know scientists got curious at one point and went searching.  They found nothing.  One theory is that people mistook some tracks of a real animal as a fictional one because they were disfigured for some reason.  Another theory is that there are giant sloths in the jungle even after all of these centuries.  That wouldn’t explain having one eye and a stomach mouth, but it would work with the less horrifying versions that eat plants.  A third possibility is people were scared by a spectacled bear, which wasn’t entirely in view, and went running before getting a clear look.

There is some folklore around the Mapinguari.  First, villages would move if they found the tracks or heard the roar of one.  They didn’t want to go near it.  Part of the reason may have been the smell, which resulted in the creature being surrounded by flies.  They were sometimes described as being followed by peccaries (wild pigs) and having a relationship with the animals.  This connects to a version that is a spirit who punishes hunters that kill more than they need to survive.  Makes sense because a lot of cultures have spirits and creatures designed to stop people from overhunting.

A possible origin story from Brazil says that the Mapinguari was a shaman who found the secret to immortality.  This was thousands of years ago.  Of course, he angered the gods and was turned into a monstrous beast.  He lived forever, but was cursed to do so as a this creature.  Poor guy.

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Finessing Dialogue Part 1

The next few posts from me will look at the nuances of properly writing compelling dialogue. Today’s Part 1 is in the form of a dialogue-heavy short …

Finessing Dialogue Part 1
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In which I am a little thick

I’m still trying to promote Goodbye Old Paint. There will be a few posts on alternate sites, but a few of these will post here, too. The publishing …

In which I am a little thick
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Guest Post – Dan Antion to introduce – Secrets Held Against Evil #newbook

It is a pleasure to have Dan Antion visit Fiction Favorites, as Dan and I have been following each other since November 2014. I think we all enjoy …

Guest Post – Dan Antion to introduce – Secrets Held Against Evil #newbook
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Revisiting Origins: Clyde

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

(Note: The core cast of War of Nytefall had their origin posts done prior to the release of the first book.  So, it’s kind of interesting to see how I pitched them.)

War of Nytefall is very much about Clyde because he was the first character I came up with and the adventure is based around him.  He is a vampiric thief whose execution by the Followers of the Sun is interrupted by the Great Cataclysm.  This event is when all all of the magic of Windemere went berserk and the entire world changed.  Clyde is one of the results of this event with him becoming the first Dawn Fang.  He is faster and stronger than other vampires, can retain his powers in the sun (‘true’ vampires require a night cloak when operating in the day), and other changes that you’ll learn about when you read the stories.  Because his evolution is a core part of the story, I won’t go much into his powers and secrets.

Like most of the characters, Clyde started as a Vampire: The Masquerade character.  He wasn’t my first one.  That would be a nameless one who was an artist that didn’t last long in a combat-oriented game.  Clyde was the first one I put effort into creating much like Luke Callindor with D&D.  Unfortunately, I still thought vampires should be monsters, so my test game went a little . . . there was the chainsaw . . . a watermelon . . . department store fire . . . car chase . . . lots of bodies . . . Let’s just say the guy running the game told me after the first session that I had to calm Clyde down or he’d take away all of my humanity points.  As it was, we had to drop it to 4 and that’s out of 10.  Clyde would go on to be become a violent force of nature due to my really lucky rolls and him turning out to be the only vampire in a group of Mages.  I didn’t want to switch over because I’d worked so hard, which almost made things difficult.

The solution to keeping him in the game was to make Clyde immune to the sun, which is unheard of in this system.  It came with a price too.  Vampires wanted to eat him because they thought he held the key to daywalking.  Werewolves thought he stole an artifact.  Mages considered him a walking exposure of the magic world, especially when he decided to become a Hollywood action star between adventures.  Men in Black wanted him for experiments.  A demon got pissed about being killed and banished by Clyde for 300 years, so that was going to be a problem.  In his defense there, it had one Hit Point left at Clyde hit it and then everyone else in the group missed.  Believe the finally blow was a halfhearted smack and a lot of cursing.  Still, all of this combined to create the book version that you’ll meet in a few months.

One of the biggest challenges with Clyde in the book is that he’s a ‘hero’ who is normally unstoppable.  He’s fairly similar to early version Wolverine in that he’s loyal to friends, but prone to bestial rampages when angry.  Though, Clyde might do this when bored too unless Mab convinces him to go on a heist.  Because of his power level, it’s hard to call him an underdog in a fight.  So, I had to give him other weaknesses.  This includes a strong desire for a challenge, which leads him to making the wrong decision on purpose.  He’ll let an enemy with potential go in the hopes of getting a better fight or even reduce his strength to their level in order to draw things out.

Perhaps the biggest flaw is that he possesses a powerful blood lust that is always on the verge of taking over.  One of the themes for Clyde is his loyalty and attachment to his gang, who help to keep him sane.  It’s a strange dynamic that I’m struggling to build where he’s a monstrous outsider even among the Dawn Fangs at times.  Yet, he needs social interactions and ‘human’ connections to retain what little humanity he has left.  It’s an issue he’s aware of too, so his arrogance will be covering his worries at points.  My hope is to use the inner turmoil to make him a multi-faceted character regardless of his physical superiority.

I will finish with a small story:  I couldn’t put this into the series, but there is a nod to a game incident.  Not going to say what it is, but I will tell the tale.  During the Vampire/Mage game, Clyde made friends with a child mage who he kept convincing to enchant his chainsaw.  It had unlimited fuel, fire blade, hurts ghosts, could be summoned, and fit in his pocket, which made it an insane artifact.  The guy running the game wanted to stop all the enchanting going on, so he was going to kill off or at least badly hurt the Mage character.  He first step was to make sure Clyde had no weapons to stop the M.I.B. agent sneaking up on the kid.  I still had a move though, so I asked what I had.  The only object in my pockets was an ear of corn I snatched as the characters drove through rural Kansas.  Well, Clyde pumped up his strength, rushed ahead, grabbed the man, and plunged the corn into his windpipe.  It was too glorious and unexpected for anybody to undo it, so the move stayed.  We still joke about it too because that scene seemed to cement Clyde’s personality.  Not declaring he’s a vampire in the middle of a werewolf holy site, killing the demon, punching a ghoul so hard that his arm with through its head, and other cool/comedic scenes.  The ear of corn is definitely an RPG highlight with him and a fun inside joke for something that shows up at times in the book.

2023 Addition–  Wow.  As I said, I wrote this origin piece on Clyde before Loyalty ever got released.  He hadn’t gone through any of what I had planned for him, so I was still seeing him as the unbreakable, monstrous hero of the Dawn Fangs.  My divorce was also exactly 10 months away, so his relationship with Mab was unchallenged too.  More on that next week when I revisit her origin post.  Anyway, Clyde certainly came out differently in that he had more doubts throughout the series.  He was questioning his humanity, his path, his dream, and his power at several points.  It wasn’t possible to have him be extremely doubtful due to him always being confident as well.  So, I ended up giving him private moments of weakness instead of public ones.  The monster showed fear and vulnerability when nobody was really looking.  If I had to change anything about what I did, I probably would have leaned into this part of his personality a bit more.  Not enough to alter the story and his actions, but to expose more of his humanity.  Then again, I was never entirely sure if Clyde retained a lot of that or was a monster faking it for the sake of his more human friends.

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Monster Month: Akhlut

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Starting off October’s monster theme, I’m going with a creature from the frozen north.  It is part of Inuit mythology and not the easiest thing to find a picture of.  To be honest, I got all of these monsters off a ‘Mythical World’ puzzle I did earlier in the year.  So, I went with as many obscure ones as I could, which made pictures and information difficult.  Still, I like a challenge and have rambled enough.

The Akhlut is from Inuit mythology and is considered a rather vicious beast.  As you can see, it has orca traits as well as four legs.  This is because this aggressive spirit takes the form of an orca, but transforms into a wolf in order to hunt on land.  You can tell one has been around when you find wolf tracks leading to or from the icy water.  This is pretty much it as far as physical traits since it is fairly elusive.  There are times where it is described as a hybrid of a wolf and orca like above.

There are many origin myths for the Akhlut, but this is the one I found most often.  A man became obsessed with the sea and wanted to stay there.  It reached the point where the people of his village could not recognize him, so they made him leave.  He ‘hungered for revenge’ and joined a pack of wolves to survive.  He may have worked with the wolves to attack villagers, but that wasn’t consistent.  Anyway, his love of the ocean returned after he fed and he dove in to transform into an orca.  Now, he remains in that form, but returns to land and becomes a wolf whenever he is ‘hungry for revenge’.  It does appear that this eventually evolved into hungry for food over time.

I tried to find more lore, but all I found was a possible origin.  Arctic wolves are able to swim in icy waters, which is why one would find tracks leading to and from the water’s edge.  Fishermen were attacked by mysterious creatures either while on their boat or resting near the shore.  Finding the tracks, people would assume it was a kind of wolf that also lived in the water.  Folklore has a lot of shape-shifting, so that led to the aggressive orca being combined with the wolf.

Another fact that can explain the Akhlut is that wolves and orca both hunt in packs.  They are also seen as dangerous, vengeful, and aggressive.  Orca are even called the wolves of the sea.  So, this could have led to the Inuit thinking that there is a mystical connection between them.  I mean, that does make some sense, especially if you find tracks that head into the water and see orca nearby.  This happening after an attack or disappearance would cement the possibility.

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When Is The End?

Greetings, SE’ers! Beem Weeks here with you again. Today, I’m going to talk about writing the end of the story. Writing entertaining stories and …

When Is The End?
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The Fabulous Foxes of Earth Part 1

There are 24 living species of foxes on this planet.  This is why I wasn’t sure where to go with them in regards to a nature post.  I knew I had to since people love foxes.  Still, it’s a lot to do factoids about all of them even if I split them apart.  Instead, I’m just going to post pictures with their conservation status.  Foxes that are endangered are in this state due to poaching, loss of habitat, invasive species, climate change, diseases, and use of some pesticides.  Some are also in trouble because their populations are so small that their gene pool is limited, which is similar to cheetahs.  Not a good situation.

I’m going to start with the smaller genus groups of Canis, Cerdocyon, Otocyon, and Urocyon.  That’s because the other two have 6 and 12 members.  Now, let’s get to the foxes:

Canis

Ethiopian Wolf- Endangered (Also called Simien Jackal or Simien Fox)

Cerdocyon

Crab-Eating Fox- Least Concern (Also called Forest Fox, Wood Fox, Bushdog, or Maikong)

Otocyon

Bat-Eared Fox- Least Concern (Ears are designed for thermoregulation.)

Urocyon

Gray Fox- Least Concern

Island Fox- Near Threatened (Upgraded from Endangered due to breeding programs.)

Cozumel Fox- Critically Endangered or Extinct (Not seen since 2001 and considered a dwarf version of Island Fox instead of its own species.)

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