Best of 2023 #1: 7 Tips to Writing Teenage Protagonists

(Originally posted on January 6, 2023. So, more than half the year, my posts were essentially duds.)

TMNT

This is going to be tougher than I expected.  After all, I haven’t been a teenager in decades, so I’m kind of out of touch.  Even at work, I realize that teenagers of today aren’t like the ones when I was growing up in the 90’s.  So, let’s get to it and see how lame these tips are going to be.

  1. If you are writing a story that takes place in modern days, you really should research teenagers.  The workaround of having your protagonist not be into the same stuff as their peers while loving ‘vintage’ things can only go so far.  It’s pretty lazy and can cause some story issues, especially if you don’t want them to be a social outcast.  Just try to find out what teenagers are into in terms of pop culture, clothing, and slang to make the character seem more real.
  2. Try very hard to avoid making your teenager as mature and wise as an adult.  We tend to forget this mistake when we get in the zone, especially at first.  Once the character is locked into our minds, we are less likely to have them act beyond their years.  Still, an author can forget that a teenager is prone to making bad decisions from time to time.  They are in a big learning stage of life here, so they shouldn’t be perfect.
  3. Not every teenager has an interest in romance.  Even if they want to be with someone, they won’t necessarily be making that a fixation.  Some teenagers are more interested in friends, a job, classes, and their future in general.  Hormones do play a factor, but it doesn’t mean every teenager is a lustful horndog.
  4. Emotions are not always stable or perfect for the situation.  Teenagers can get frustrated, excited, depressed, and other extremes more easily than most adults.  So, you can have them overreact to certain stimuli.  For example, they may get loud and celebratory when they achieve a goal that seems minor to an adult like getting a B+ or parallel parking successfully.  You have to think like a teenager and have them react accordingly.  Not all the time, but enough to make sure the reader doesn’t think they’re really reading about an adult who is lurking in a high school.
  5. If you are writing about teenagers in other historical eras, you need to do your research.  It’s the same as #1, but you can’t talk to a teenager from that period.  You need to read up on things.  They will always have different skills, world views, and experiences than modern teens.  After all, child labor and marrying young being legal weren’t as far in the past as we’d like to think.
  6. Teenagers in fictional worlds can be seen as more malleable than those of Earth.  You have to make everything from scratch there.  An author can even have them act more mature than one would expect from that age.  Maybe they’ve seen enough death and horrors to erase their innocence.  This does mean you’re working with a traumatized teenager though, so looking up mental health in that age range should be done.  One thing that is always true is that teenagers always have some level of immaturity even if it rarely turns up.
  7. GROWTH!  I saved the big one for last.  Teenagers are in a stage where they are rapidly growing.  Not only physically, but emotionally, socially, and mentally.  More so than adults, they need to change as the story progresses.  It can be in leaps and bounds or oozing ahead, but they cannot go back to their original form.  This is because people see teenage protagonists as symbols of maturation.  If they don’t grow then they failed and there goes the connection.
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Mindset: The Stubborn Elephant vs. Writer

If you missed the first post in this series, you can find it here. Writing a novel is a huge commitment. It takes time and consistency and …

Mindset: The Stubborn Elephant vs. Writer
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‘Do I Need to Use a Dragon?’ Available on Amazon!

Cover by Alison Hunt

This was the big and only release of last year.  Do I Need to Use a Dragon? was a challenge in that it wasn’t really fiction.  It was all about me trying to write a ‘how to’ book, which several people suggested.  Took me a few years to finish it since doubt kept rearing its head.  Pretty sure there are those who think I have no reason to write this book too, but time cannot be reversed.  This book is out there for people to peruse and see if it answers any of their writing questions.  Here’s an excerpt to end the promo month.

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Do I Have to Go Medieval?

The original question I was asked was ‘Do I have to use England’ and I was taken aback by it the first time. It never crossed my mind that most fantasy stories take place in a medieval Europe setting. Shows how aware of my literary surroundings I am. The real meaning of this question is about the classical setting of fantasy.

When you think of the genre, you imagine robed wizards, hills rolling into forests, towering castles, roaring dragons, and knights in disturbingly shiny armor. Seriously, what kind of polish do they have in some of these fictional worlds? This setting standard has been around for decades, if not centuries, and many people feel that this is the only way to write fantasy. Before you ask, urban settings get a pass by these gatekeepers as a subgenre, but many will turn up their nose at a non-Earth fantasy book that refuses to imitate Camelot at some point. Thankfully, they are a minority, but this brings up a secondary question:

WHAT IS FANTASY?

Hands down. You’re all wrong and you’re all right. Fantasy is a really wonky genre at times because there are so many varieties. Fans will grab their favorite version and act like that’s the epitome of the style. You have adventure, political, social commentary, urban, dark, romantic, magical technology, post-apocalyptic, and so many more subgenres that can cause some friction among fantasy readers. Every part of a story can be criticized depending on a reader’s personal definition and taste of the genre.

People who want a highly political fantasy adventure or one with minimal magic don’t like Legends of Windemere because my stories are adventures with magic everywhere. This doesn’t mean I wrote something terrible or they have no taste in stories. It simply means that while I am a fantasy author and they are a fantasy reader, we aren’t on the same subgenre wavelength. Nothing you can do about it because personal taste is filled with nuance and individuality. Just write your story, hope a reader gives you a fair chance, and prepare to get drawn into one of the many genre debates.

Over the years, I’ve run into many bizarre arguments where I haven’t always been civil because I can get passionate. We all have this issue, so it takes a lot of willpower to remain calm when discussing how a fantasy world works. I’ll be touching on the larger areas in detail throughout this section of the book, but we can do an overview here.

The important thing to realize is that fantasy is very fluid and may be one of the most imaginative genres because you don’t have to work with reality. Earth isn’t necessary. Humans aren’t necessary. Nothing from our world is necessary. You may need a few familiar objects for readers to connect to, but this can be done working under your own rules. The trick is to establish those rules early on because readers will need something to hook them and carry them to when the story really kicks off.

One could say that fantasy is run by guidelines once you step out of the writing mechanics area such as grammar and story structure. This is why you can stumble into a debate about if magic is required for a fantasy story or what level such a thing should be at. People argue over if ‘real’ fantasy has politics or quest-based adventures because the loose guidelines can work with both. I feel the genre is driven primarily by the setting and characters who carry whatever story you give them. Guess you could say this about any genre, but I always sense it’s more so for fantasy. People really take these stories so seriously that fandoms will feud and authors will get drawn into the middle at times. Best you can do is decide on your own definition and set a polite example. That or shout about how such puny mortal discussions are beneath the attention of a god who is in the middle of crafting more of his world. I’m sure that wouldn’t backfire.

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Happy National Puzzle Day

(Funny how this showed up after Lego Day.)  Since I like doing jigsaw puzzles in my free time, I thought it was a perfect holiday to do a post about.  Sadly, I don’t have any new puzzles to put up here.  The ones I have are still being worked on.  So, enjoy a long slideshow of past puzzles and some memes.

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Tightening our Prose: Too Much Information!

Greetings, Storytellers. Diana here today with a final tip on tightening our prose. The goal of tightening is to improve our stories’ pace and keep …

Tightening our Prose: Too Much Information!
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Happy International Lego Day

I couldn’t pass this one up.  While my son isn’t into Lego as much as he used to thanks to Pokemon becoming his big obsession, I still enjoy them.  I think I’m always going to try to buy one big set a year just for the challenge and fun.  Last year was the following:

I’ve done a few smaller ones since Lego Rivendell and I’ve heard that they’re releasing Sauron’s Tower this year.  I’m torn between that one the the Dungeons & Dragons 50 year anniversary set.  Maybe I’ll be able to get both if things work out around my birthday with gift cards.  Anyway, I’m still putting them together when I have the money and time to spend.  Does anyone else still do Lego sets or have one special set that would make them go back even just for the one?

Here’s a few other pictures.

The Mighty Bowser Lego Set

The Wall of Lego!

A Wall of Lego

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Goal Post: There Are Bad Weeks, Terrible Weeks, & Then This *$&#-Ing Week

I’m broken.  Just battered to the point of thinking my existence is entirely about pain and suffering.  Events of this week have made it that the foreseeable future will be almost constant agony.  I have no refuge or place to go to relax.  So, anyone who tries to be positive and hopeful in the comments better be ready for backlash.  I’m not in the mood or mindset to believe that my life can improve.  At least not for the rest of this year.

Yeah . . . That’s really it.  I got no real writing done.  Some editing and a few blog posts for March.  The rest of my week was dealing with the ‘life event’ and the ensuing aftermath of that ending.  Didn’t end in a way I fully agree with and I can already see that things are going to be messy going forward.  Honestly, I’m so tired of dealing with people who think only of themselves, use me like a tool, lash out at me if I assert any independent thought, and flat out lie to my face.  This goes for every facet of my life.  I feel like this entire week was a punishment for a crime I don’t remember committing.  Monday is going to be rough because I can already tell that I’m not shedding the anxiety and frustration.  It’s too much bad shit at once.

The goals for this week were so simple and lame, but that’s probably for the best.  I didn’t get to help my son study for most of his midterms due to scheduling, the ‘life event’, and other stuff.  Global and Algebra I were the only tests I got to help him with, which he got in the 90’s for.  Not sure how the other tests went.  Probably get the grades throughout next week, so fingers crossed.  As far as the other goals, I did have hot wings, finished ‘Flame of Recca’, and started ‘Highlander’.

Being unable to speak about specifics, I really don’t know where else to go.  Might be like this for a bit.  Next week is when some of the effects of this week kick in.  Not in a good way either.  Can’t even imagine trying to write or edit.  I have my son this weekend, so we’re going to do some fun stuff.  Pokemon Go, a few movies, pizza, and see what else we can do.  After the week, I think we both need a quiet, simple weekend to recover our senses and sanity.  Will it happen?  Not a clue.  I’m going to focus mostly on making sure my son has fun and gets through the changes coming.  Can’t see any way that I can make my own lot in life improve, so I might as well protect him from things.

Sorry that this is a bummer of a post.  I have nothing good to report.  If anything good happened, I don’t remember it because of the rest of the nightmare.  Taking me over an hour to write this because I keep crying.  Even had to stress puke once because I have no other release.  Writing this Friday night, so I don’t even know how well I’ll sleep. Probably have to take my anxiety meds along with a full Zzzquil dose.  I just wish I can gain some stability and positive events.  Don’t expect it from 2024, but I’d like for the actions, ideas, and desires of others to stop fucking me over.  I never get a say in the things that happen to me any more.

Goal of the week:

  1. Survive.
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Questions 3: Hopes for the Future

Professor Farnsworth

I know we’re a month into 2024, but that means we’ve had time to get a feel for how things might go.  So, let’s get to the questions and try to be positive.

  1. What do you hope to do in the future?
  2. Where would you like to go in the future?
  3. What would you like to see in the future?
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Can You Use AI in Fiction Writing?

My day job is that of content writer—or “content expert” as my official title is. As part of it, I spend hours daily researching topics I’m …

Can You Use AI in Fiction Writing?
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Poetry Day: Hoarder

Red Dragon Puzzle

(This was originally inspired by a commercial for the show ‘Hoarders’.  Now, I can think of it relating to another class of people.  It is funny how an animal that hoards things is studied as an abnormality, but humans aspire to such things.  I assume the comment sections of this poem will be so much fun.)

They amass all that they find.

Rarely parting with a trinket.

No matter others’ need.

Papers gather in the corners.

Where their ink will fade away.

Piles of metal and stones.

Lusted for and never held.

Figurines and photos.

Of people never met.

Their house holds so much.

They are always wanting more.

Too scared to give away.

Because it means they will have less.

We see it as foolish greed

While they see it as their right.

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