Teaser Tuesday: On the Run

Today, I’m putting up a special treat.  It’s also late because school is closed and the munchkin has finally decided to give me some time to work.  I have 15 minutes or so.  He can’t tell time yet, so he could just be counting to 15.  Anyway, here is the opening for my newest project, Crossing Bedlam.  Still not 100% certain I like calling this post-apocalyptic.  Maybe near-apocalyptic?  Downtrodden?  What’s a dystopia again?  (Or a topiary as my computer has suggested I called it.  *eye roll*)

Warning: There is a little swearing and some violence.

The Newsman from The Muppet Show

The Newsman from The Muppet Show

Her breathing ragged from running for so long, Cassidy wipes sweat from her scarred brow and flicks a long, blonde bang out of her chocolate eyes. The decade of unchecked growth has turned the park into a messy forest, which is harder to traverse than expected. Roots catch her booted feet and she bounces off thick tree trunks while focusing more on listening for her pursuers and companions. Crashing footsteps and disturbed squirrels come from every direction, so she chooses the one with the least amount of noise and prays that it brings her out of the wilderness. Cassidy is tempted to draw her gun and make a stand, but she knows the prison guards are only doing their job. More importantly, bullets are not cheap and she is the only member of group who is armed. At least as far as she knows since the seven prisoners could very well be hiding homemade weapons.

Glancing over her shoulder, Cassidy frowns at the bright orange jumpsuits of her panting companions. The six men and one woman stand out in the early morning forest, making it easy for the guards to see them through the trees. None of them have bothered to stop and remove the prison garb, which cost one of their former allies his life. It was a mistake that Cassidy still regrets since it happened when she ran off to distract the guards. Thanks to her stolen uniform, the blonde has managed to send several groups in the wrong direction, but it meant abandoning the others. Sadistic murderers and traitorous thieves though they may be, she broke them out for a reason and every death is lost money and time. She notices that two of the men in the back are still sporting the drying blood and brain matter from the deceased, neither of them caring about the gore.

Without them uttering a word, Cassidy is sure they are hoping the others are killed and act as a distraction. She is surprised none of them have attempted to betray the group and escape in the chaos, but she senses that her insurance is paying off. Strapped and locked to their right ankles, strange devices blink and occasional hum to remind the prisoners that they have to behave. Until they figure out where their unexpected savior has hidden the remote for the small bombs, the escapees have to be on their best behavior. From what Cassidy can tell, this takes a lot of effort for some of them and she can feel their stares boring into her back. Having survived the Shattered States of America for ten years, she has become used to the waves of mistrust and aggression, but these people are on a level that even makes her skin crawl.

Cassidy hears the snap of a branch to her right, drawing her attention to a trio of faint shadows in the distance. At first, she thinks it is a group of guards and is about to veer to the left when a foul smell hits her nose. The stench is sweat, urine, rotten food, and a feeble attempt to cover the other odors with a strong perfume. It is the last smell that gives Cassidy hope since real Wilders would never bother to use, much less trade, for artificial scents. Waving her arm and pointing toward where she prays is salvation, she charges ahead and breathes easier when the others match her pace. A high-pitched yelp is heard soon after she passes the huddled group and she peeks to see one of her companions has kicked a Wilder. His reward is a rusty fork to the thigh, which gives him a painful limp as he continues and grumbles about getting revenge on the smelly scavengers.

Within five minutes, Cassidy sees that they are sprinting over the remains of old baseball fields. Remembering the map she studied before infiltrating Rikers Island, she knows they are heading toward LaGuardia Airport. Once they cross the border, the only way the guards can follow is if they plan on losing the trade agreement they have with the owners. Even if the warden, who she imagines fuming in his office, makes a deal for their return, Cassidy and her new bodyguards will be long gone before they can find ink for the contract. The metallic ding of a bullet ricocheting off a vine-covered pole snaps her back to reality and she races ahead, barely noticing the remains of a fence.

Bursting from the forest, the group finds themselves heading for large containers that have been long abandoned. Bullets fly from the trees and hit the rusty remains of trucks, several of them showing signs of being used for housing. A ricochet strikes the injured prisoner in the chest and he stumbles for a few steps before crashing to the ground. Gasping for air, he tries to crawl after his companions, none of them stopping to help. He is surprised to hear scuffling from one of the nearby vehicles, shadowy faces watching him take his final breath. Attempting to stand and run, the man takes another bullet to the back of head and flops down dead. The guards are leaving the forest, but stop when the escapees make it across the distant street and into the LaGuardia territory. Cassidy waves back at the departing figures and tosses her identification card into a sewer, the expensive item no longer useful or salvageable.

Coming to a small booth outside a former rent-a-car building, the blonde shows the wrinkled man in a tuxedo her pass. The yellow, crinkled paper is taken by shaky hands that fumble to get a key off a hook. Not wanting to waste any time, Cassidy jogs through the building and sheds the top of her stolen uniform. Enjoying the touch of air conditioning on her bare arms, the yawning blonde tosses the shirt into a trashcan and is vaguely aware of the female prisoner snatching it up. The woman can have it since Cassidy has no intention of returning to Rikers Island and is still amazed her escape plan worked. Even more impressive is that she managed to get eight other people out of the prison and only two died after reaching the coast. As she hurries across a parking lot and climbs the stairs of a parked airplane, the tired woman wonders if anyone would believe she pulled off such a wild stunt.

Leaving the six prisoners in the cabin, Cassidy goes to finish changing in the cockpit and locks the door behind her. It is a welcomed luxury to put a barrier between herself and the primal aggression that wafts off the others. Having rented out the winged apartment beforehand, she finds her bag is still stashed behind the captain’s chair. Changing into her favorite pair of jeans and a black, sleeveless shirt, she pauses to put her weapons in all of their familiar places. A black handgun is tenderly caressed and strapped to her hip, a few experimental draws making sure it is in the perfect position. She dangles a dented, silver locket in front of her face before giving it a kiss and putting it around her neck. From the bottom of the patch-covered duffle bag, Cassidy pulls out a black pea coat and puts it on even though it is early summer. She adjusts it so that an old bullet hole is over her heart and fixes her hair, a mask of calm confidence coming over her face as she prepares to speak with her companions.

“What the fuck happened!?” Cassidy shouts as she opens the door and steps on a blood-oozing finger.

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New Release: Death before Daylight by Shannon A. Thompson

The time has come for The Timely Death Trilogy to come to an end.

Death before DaylightTwo eternities. One ending.

“Harmony would only come with destruction.”

The moment Eric and Jessica are reunited, they are torn apart. After the appearance of a new breed of shades and lights, the powers shift for the worse, and all three descendants find themselves face-to-face in the Light realm. When Darthon is in control, the last thing everyone expects is to finally hear the truth.

While Jessica learns the reason of her creation, Darthon’s identity is exposed to Eric—and only Eric—and Eric can no longer defend himself. With the eternities of the Light and the Dark resting on Jessica’s shoulders, she must choose who she will be—a light or a shade.

In the end, someone must die, and the end is near.

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This will take place on September 18th from 7-9 PM EST.  Prizes can be won and MINUTES BEFORE MIDNIGHT (Book 1) WILL BE FREE!

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#RRBC Back-To-School Book and Blog Block Party – Interview with John J. Cannon

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Welcome to Fiction Favorites! Today, I am thrilled to be participating in Rave Reviews Book Club’s Back-to-School Book and Blog Block Party from Port Aransas, Texas  USA You can visit the entire tour and locations by clicking HERE.

In addition to learning a bit more about me and my book My GRL while you’re visiting, I hope you will leave a comment. If you do, you will be entered into a drawing for a chance at a ten-dollar Amazon Gift Card.

All you have to do for a chance to win is leave a comment. There will be a drawing, and the winner will be selected at the end of the day on September 15th, and announced on September 16th! For more prize opportunities visit the RRBC website.

Interview with John J. Cannon

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Building Your Author Platform: The Purpose of Social Media

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Don't be this guy. Don’t be this guy.

Social media has become increasingly more important to all businesses. Consumers (in our case, readers) often look to brands’ (in our case, authors’) Facebook, Twitter, and even Instagram accounts before going to their actual websites.

Why do they do this? Numerous reasons.

Partially, it is much more convenient to do research on a site they are already on. At the same time, they are looking for social proof — How many likes does this business have? Do any of my friends like it? What are the ratings? What are people saying? And maybe, they could simply be searching for relevance. After all, if a company isn’t on social media, are they even really trying?

As an author, especially as an independent author, social media is an important part of your author platform. However, it is important to understand why you should be on social media…

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A Monster for a Hero?

Hulk and Thor from The Marvel Avengers

Hulk and Thor from The Marvel Avengers

There’s something about having a monster as a hero that’s fascinating.  I’m talking about a character who is monstrous in power and appearance.  Their actions are heroic and for a good cause, but first glance would make you think ‘dangerous beast’.  Hulk is easily the best example thanks to the movies.  Though we’ve also seen bad attempts at making Frankenstein’s Monster a good guy as well as hit and miss vampire heroes.  All of them have a scary appearance and power that was once reserved for villains.  So, how did they become heroes?

As I said, it’s entirely about their actions, thoughts, and motives.  Hulk once fought to be left alone, but he would step in to help the innocent.  He was an angry beast with a conscience that was looking for a place to settle down in peace.  That is relatable to anyone and can be seen as a human goal.  So you want to add some humanity to your monster because that is where the heroism and connection comes from.  A monster who acts like a monster is either a villain or a force of nature that other characters manipulate to do good deeds.  Yes, I have the newest Godzilla on . . . Guess I switched it to ‘The Expendables’ during a phone call.  Can we count Dolph Lundgren in this?

Getting back on track, it’s the inside of a character that makes him or her a hero.  One odd thing is that we find it easier to pick out a monster when the outside matches the inside.  Flip this topic to a monster who doesn’t look like one.  This is a normal, even attractive, character that does horrific things.  Loki would be the equivalent here and you’ll see that it’s equally as difficult as the heroic monster.  We’ve very quick to add humanity and a soft side to a character who looks ‘normal’.  Remove more of the monster while one like the Hulk has moments of getting the human parts removed.  Take Ultimate Hulk here:

Don't worry.  It's only Wolverine.

Don’t worry. It’s only Wolverine.

This version was extreme.  I remember him threatening, and possibly committing, cannibalism and his comments to Black Widow were disturbing.  This version was a true monster to the bone that had just enough rationale to occasionally be used as a good guy until he went angry again.  Still, my point here is that it comes off a lot easier to take a monstrous hero and push them into the darkness. You could even bat them back and forth if you feel like it.  This makes it a rather flexible character type, but an author needs to be careful not to abuse it.  With that variety comes the threat of having no solid foundation and people losing interest.

Now, I’m going to be attempting a Monster Hero at some point.  This is a vampire character who is a monster and does what is right by his people even though it tends to be violent.  After all, go too far hero and you might lose the monster side of things.  Personally, I do like there being the threat of toppling over the edge into pure beast because that puts something on the line.  You can’t hurt Hulk’s body, but you can damage his heart and soul.

So, do you have a favorite Monster Hero?  Do you think it’s a category that even needs to exist or are they just heroes?

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Conor Kelly’s Legends of Ireland, my latest book-baby flies the nest!

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FREE for 2 days only on Amazon ~ The Lore Anthology (expanded edition)

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Goals for a Short Week: Happy Rosh Hashanah (L’Shana Tova to keep some Jew Cred)

Heard this song several times on the radio and had no idea who sang it.  The whistling part was rather creepy, which caught my interest.  Not even sure of the lyrics.

This week will be chaotic and short.  The little guy has Monday and Tuesday off from school, so my Internet time will be limited.  Maybe.  He’s been having some massive tantrums, but mostly at night.  These are getting a little destructive too, so we’ve been trying to find ways around it.  He has no build up and he gets caught in a loop, but I don’t want to get into the details.  This might be due to exhaustion, the heat, or his schedule becoming very inconsistent.  It has removed nights from my work schedule too.  Makes setting up promos for the next day a headache and don’t even mention writing.

The book isn’t doing very hot, so I’m still hunting for marketing ideas that I can fit into the schedule.  Entered a contest that I heard about, so maybe I’ll get lucky there.  Not even sure what I’m looking for these days.  Interviews, blog tours, cover reveals, and guest posts seem to be getting done so often that I’m not sure it helps me stand out.  Also, as said in a deleted post, I feel like I’ve become part of the background.  The TWUBS chats were supposed to help, but I never got a big audience for that.  Current home issues would make that impossible too.

I’m making some headway with Crossing Bedlam and hope to put up a teaser on Tuesday if things go smoothly.  Heck, I’m hoping to get sleep if things go smoothly since this week has been rough.  The story is coming along in an different direction than I expected.  The serial killer quickly proved not to be as nutty as one would expect and the young woman proved to have a few screws loose herself.  As she states in one chapter, ‘All of us are broken here.’  That’s creating a different mentality for the serial killer.  I mean, he was the insane one in the ‘old world’ and that was his niche.  In the new one, a lot of people are insane and he’s starting to not feel so special any more.  To be honest, I like how that mentality is coming along.

4th wall breaking isn’t very easy and I gave myself a loophole.  The killer does speak about the audience, plot devices, the author, and acts like a character at times.  His reasoning is that him and a stranger are traveling across a desolate landscape to toss her mother’s ashes off the Golden Gate Bridge, which sounds like a story.  Most of what he says ends up being hints of comics, movies, and TV pop culture.  He can’t say more because he doesn’t want the author to get sued.  Anyway, that’s where we’re standing and I’m having fun with the craziness.  For example, I asked this on FB once:

“Where do you go after writing a scene where your main characters are in their underwear, armed only with a fire extinguisher, and running from two rhinos that are protected by a crazed sniper?”

Out of context that sounds stupid, but that actually makes a lot of sense in the story.  Trust me.

So what are this week’s goals?

  1. Merchant of Nevra Coil

    Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

  2. Wrangle kid for 2 days.
  3. Write more of Crossing Bedlam.
  4. Set up more October posts.
  5. Maybe a little notebook work
  6. Biking when I can.
  7. All other writing and work goals spontaneous due to change of situation.
  8. Eat ice cream.
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Monster Maker and Monster Poll Update

Monster Baby!

For those who remember, I’m doing Monster Month in October.  Last weekend I made a post about this and I’ll link it HERE!

So, what is this short post about?

Just a final request for Monster Maker ‘words’ and for people to vote in the poll.  The next few days won’t let me get book writing done, so I’m going to get a bunch of the October stuff prepped.  Might even put Raven’s Hold into position.  Anyway, I’m going to gather any more votes and comments to make sure I don’t leave anyone out.  This post is kind of slapdash because I’m already running around.  Sorry.

  1. Monster Maker rules are to submit 2-3 made up words that I’ll turn into creations on an October Friday post.
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Silver’s Book Reviews, “The Fallen,” by Melissa Barker-Simpson

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