The Origin of The Mercenary Prince

Teaser Tuesday is on a break for now while I drop some background info on The Mercenary Prince.  First, a preview of the cover:

Sketch by Jason Pedersen

Sketch by Jason Pedersen

Back at the beginning, Legends of Windemere was only 12 books long.  Then came Book 14, which has nothing to do with this.  The Merchant of Nevra Coil and The Mercenary Prince came about at the same time.  Oddly enough, it was the reasoning behind the latter that helped bring about the former.  While Merchant brings Yola Biggs the Chaos Goddess to the forefront and evolves her, The Mercenary Prince does the same for another character: Delvin Cunningham.

Prior to the creation of this book, Delvin never had a story to call his own and was simply the ‘stable’ character.  He grew, but I had him as solid and there wasn’t anything to challenge him besides his own temple.  Even that story focused a lot on his relationship with the others.  So poor Delvin was the odd man out since the others each had their own big story.  He didn’t even get his own book to do a solitary debut in since he shows up near the end of Family of the Tri-Rune.  This is something that I played into his character, which I’ll get into next Tuesday . . . or Thursday if I can’t think of any connected questions for the usual fun.

I never realized this was a problem until I was working on outlines for fun and noticed how often Delvin was in the background.  I tried giving him more in the other books, but I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was robbing him, and myself, of a fun character.  Then I was goofing off with a test scene and a phrase appeared:

The Mercenary Queen

Bet you thought I was going to say ‘Mercenary Prince’.  Well, the Queen came first and it was Tzefira at the time.  Then I realized that it would have been Selenia before her and my mind ran with the mercenary side of Windemere.  Given his connection to Selenia, Delvin was the obvious choice for the Prince.  The Princess shows up in the upcoming book and people can guess who the King is in the comments.  This all rolled into the idea of Delvin’s personal quest and venturing into his past, which has only been hinted at.  An entire section of Ralian came about because of this story too.  Yagervan Plains, Crysvale Tundra, and Pynofira Forest didn’t exist until this book came about.  I’m always surprised by what came from this story since it came late to the party.  Dawn Fangs, Darkmill, the mercenaries, and the Yagervan Tribes have all benefited from this.  In a way, it works as a test run for the next series.

With all of that, the focus is still on Delvin Cunningham and the past that has finally caught up with him.  Sort of.  Part of the story is how his future as a champion and past have converged.  Delvin is at a point in his adventure where he could fall off the path or leap forward.  Up until now, he hasn’t been tested to this level and the situation even has a sense of sacrifice in it.  He will have to lose some things before he can evolve, which is another reason I had to make this story.  Delvin truly needed to be on his own before he could return to the champions.  Otherwise, he’d fade away or be nothing more than a silhouette of a character.

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Christmas Grotto – The books of Bette A. Stevens

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Post Revisited: What Do You Want in Female Characters?

This post went live on July 18th, 2013.  It created a fun conversation.  Hope to have another, but let’s be civil.  Also I’m not sure what the original pictures were.  They seem to have disappeared from the original.

One of the big things about Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower is the introduction of Nyx and Trinity.  They are the female spellcasters for both sides of the conflict and I think they’re badasses.  Very powerful and very tough while still retaining their femininity.  I’m proud of how they turned out because they are the types of female characters that I love to read.  I will mention that I read mostly fantasy and action, so this is going to be a light combat-skewed.

I picked the Mr. & Mrs. Smith clip because it is one of my favorite fight scenes.  Not because of the banter and the flow of it.  Those are good, but I love how there is not a single point where Angelina Jolie’s character felt weak or overpowered.  This was done without making Brad Pitt’s character come off as weak.  They are even in terms of skill, physicality, and determination.  She gives as good as she gets and the movie wasn’t afraid to she her taking a shot.  I think female heroes shouldn’t be treated with kid gloves and should be shown taking a hit.  More importantly, taking a hit and fighting back.  I’m not talking about taking a hit, crying, and then doing a cheap shot.  That makes a female character cunning, but rather weak.

Xena: Warrior Princess

Xena: Warrior Princess

The third factor of a female character that makes me enjoy her is the retention of her female mentality while still being a badass.  I’m not talking beating people up while breast-feeding, which is a scene written by someone in college that I shall never cleanse from my mind.  I mean the character can be emotional in a tender, gentle way when the situation calls for it.  She doesn’t get confused when a guy hugs her after she’s killed a band of orcs.  She hugs him back and makes a joke about getting blood on him.  I say this should go for male characters too if you’re aiming for the sensitive hero.  Sensitivity does not equal weak, which is an assumption that has to stop.Focusing on the giving part of the equation, I love it when a female character can take out a male character without converting to a masculine version of herself.  Speed, agility, skill, and grace over power and brawn.  Even better if both characters are cunning because that makes either of their victory a lot sweeter.  It’s strange how people still do the weak female character or turn them into a tough, heartless bitch that will inevitably be thawed by the male lead.  I think I threw up a bit on that one.  Give me my Xena’s, Fiona from Burn Notice, and Buffy.  Still moments of sensitivity, but they will happily beat the crap out of someone that crosses them.

Finally, I love my female villains to be smart, but still able to fail and not whores.  I’ve noticed a trend with many female villains that they are one of two types.  They are either the seductive ho villain or they are so smart and perfect that you can’t believe they’re going to be defeated.  It’s like the writers are either misogynistic (that right?) or are terrified to make a female villain that is as bungling as some of the male villains.  I’m looking at you Gargamel and Skeletor.  I want my female villains to be as realistic as my male villains with the same amount of smarts, evil, confidence, and touch of ineptitude.  That might sound strange, but it makes me enjoy the character even more.

Heck, I like it when my female heroes have the same level of ineptitude of a male hero.

Wonder Woman

Wonder Woman

That’s why Nyx is about as flawed as Luke Callindor in terms of personality.  She might not have his ego and recklessness, but she has that nasty temper.

So, I like my female characters to be smart, flawed, able to take a hit, and able to go toe-to-toe with the male characters.  What do you look for in female characters?

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Christmas Grotto – Episode One, The Boy and the Shopkeeper: Delilah, Astral Investigator Infinity Series by Deborah A. Bowman

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A Sign of Things to Come and Volunteer Request

So I made a ‘I got nothing post’ and a few hours later I got this:

Sketch by Jason Pedersen

Sketch by Jason Pedersen

There’s more to the picture, but progress is being made.  Will The Mercenary Prince be ready for Christmas?  No idea, but I should probably start preparing for the possibility.  That means the final editing check, formatting, and getting my head together for a book is live post.  This is a long shot right now.

As usual, I’d be happy to have some volunteers for a simple ‘Book is Live!’ post.  Official blog tours require more people and time than I can muster these days, but we’ll see what happens.

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Stepping Back Into the Unknown

This is going up late because I won’t be around tomorrow until the night and I might have a special post in the morning.  Not that I have much to say.  People saw the ‘I got nothing’ post . . . though I might now have something.  You know, I really hate roller coasters in real life because I get motion sickness easily.  They aren’t much better in other arenas of life.  Wears on the nerves and I still can’t shake this fatigue.  It’s like I only have an hour of energy per day.

That isn’t to say I haven’t been idle this week.  Progress was made in terms of stuff.  Mostly I finished the outline, supporting characters, monsters, and a few pieces for one of my later books.  This is a big step because this is the series with every book having 4 acts that spread across multiple locations and involve a swashbuckling adventure similar to games like Final Fantasy and Illusion of Gaia.  Finishing this first book helps me get a feel for the tempo and refine what I was originally planning.  I’m becoming more compact in my writing as I progress through Legends of Windemere.  That will help when I come to this series, which won’t be for a while.  I still have Night War, Darwin, and a few others to do before then.  Always hard to balance Windemere since everything is connected and one series might hold a spoiler for another.  I’m hoping to dive into the second one with heroes and villains this week.  It appears that I can finish an ‘Act’ with supporting characters and monsters in a day.  So I might finish this before the kid starts his winter break.

One thing I’m trying to figure out is book hyping.  I realize that I should start on that for The Mercenary Prince, but December has been scheduled.  Not to mention I’m still not sure when the book will be out.  This also throws January into a small issue and writing posts on the day might not happen.  Mostly because there’s so much going on around here.  So I’m thinking of pausing Teaser Tuesday and Questions 3 for a bit in order to do posts about the books.  At least for this month and a bit of January.  I might keep Questions 3 and connect it to the books.  Not sure if it’s really possible to hype a book without a release date though.  Maybe it would be smarter to simply hold the course and just schedule a ton of stuff for January.  The post tomorrow may shed more light on why this issue is happening.

So, what is the plan for the week?

  1. Start making characters for Sin’s second book.
  2. Begin scheduling posts for January.
  3. That’s about it.
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Future of Windemere

I’ve been considering this post for a while, but it seems I have very little choice. I know this is one of the best times to release a book.  Especially if one has a series and things slowed down in November.   So . . .

I got nothing.

Until I hear otherwise, I’ve got no idea when I’ll release another book.  I don’t want to say when it could be or what I hope for.  Right now, I’m simply trying to figure out what to do about everything.  I might use January to hype The Mercenary Prince and Crossing Bedlams in tandem even though I don’t have any ideas on release dates.  The two books have very little . . . nothing in common.  Maybe one day will be fantasy and the other will be post-apocalyptic action buddy comedy.  Friday can just be one of the few other topics I have.

This also means I can’t plan a cover reveal or blog tour.  I might just do a ‘BOOK IS LIVE!’ post like before.  A problem that went wrong before with getting volunteers too early was that about 25% of the list forgot.  Still, I guess I have nothing to lose here:

  1. Any volunteers for future group posts for Crossing Bedlam and Mercenary Prince?
  2. Would it be stupid to release both books at the same time if the timing turns that way or should I delay one?

Trying to feel like I’m making progress, but it’s not easy or really possible.  Never fun being in stasis, especially when you see others releasing books and continuing on.  Hope everyone enjoys their weekend.  Not 100% certain I’ll be around.

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It’s Occasional Soulmates’ turn — 99 cents/3 days

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Occasional Soulmates and Godzilla

Today Occasional Soulmates is listed on EReader News Today, announcing the 99 cent sale that runs through 12/6. Again, if you’re inclined to pick up a copy, today would be perfect for trigger-pulling because it’ll help the book chart on Amazon. If you already own it, forward the link to friends n’ family, if you please.

In other news, do check out my reprise on Susan Toy’s Reading Recommendations blog. She’s kindly offered a spot now to help promote Town Father.

I’ve also learned that I now have a page on Book Gorilla. I’m not sure what that will do for me, but I am fond of books and of gorillas, so it’s a good thing all around.

Finally, to newsletter recipients: I see that very few list members have opened their emails, which leads me to think that most of them wound up in spam…

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Don’t Kill Over Stolen Milk

This is an old poem from long before I got serious about it.  It aimed more humor than any type of form.  A true story from college too.  Though the last line doesn’t really hold true.

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Stuck in class

Breakfast now long dead

I feel my stomach twist

Forcing me to stumble

As I traverse the snowy quads

I know I have to make it

Back to my simple room

Where salvation waits

Inside a holy carton

The last ration of my week

Until I make it to the store

I can almost taste it

The chocolate frothy drink

Giving me the strength

To live until the lunch bell

Imagine my despair

When the holy carton is no more

I find it drained

And crushed inside the trash

With the criminal still near

Licking his lips

As he reads a gamer mag

The faint smell of chocolate

Hovering on his breath

That I smell across the room

My rage tries to rise

To overcome my stomach

That saps me with every gurgle

A mild debate ensues

And the war begins

Continuing to this very day

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How about some free reading

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My friend, D. S. Nelson, is the author of the Blake Hetherington Mystery series. I’ve read one of these, and finished it in one session. She gets bonus points for that at my house. I really enjoyed it, and must return to the series soon.

She also has a great blog, and has recently been writing about making her own hat. Lisa the robot even visited her this year to talk about her hats. This is because Blake Hetherington is a milliner by trade.

Today she’s here to offer you a great jumping on point for her books, and it’s absolutely free.

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First of all I’d like to say a big thank you to Craig for having me over to tell you all about the new Blake Hetherington Mystery. It’s great to be here!

I’ve been writing murder mysteries for four years and the Blake Hetherington Mysteries began…

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