The City of Nyte: Greatest of the Vampire Cities?

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When creating War of Nytefall, I didn’t really think about the cities that would be vampire only.  In fact, I only considered that they would have castles, lairs, and live within the pre-existing mortal society.  That was kind of lazy of me since that’s how settings typically go in these stories.  Then, Mab turned up in Legends of Windemere: The Mercenary Prince and talked about the city of Nyte.  It was a passing comment about the vampire capital and I didn’t think much of it.  In fact, I nearly forgot about it and it took me a while to find it and confirm the spelling.  So, what did I come up with for this central location?

Honestly, I was very sparse in the description of a lot of Nyte.  It came to me that the vampires wouldn’t make a city that would scream undead bloodsuckers.  There is a central castle where a lot of the action takes place and a city has spread out around it.  Windows all have shutters for when daylight comes, but since the sun only saps strength, the vampires still move around the city during those times.  The marketplace had the most detail because I imagined the stores having unconscious mortals in cages to sell as ‘full kegs’ or tap to give citizens a variety.  It was similar to ducks in a Chinese restaurant window.  Overall, the city came off as having a mild personality instead of being out there like Gaia, Rodillen, and Haven.  Again, this made sense because vampires wouldn’t want to stand out and I couldn’t see them trading with mortals.

Nyte is tucked in the middle of a wilderness, but the Great Cataclysm has moved it closer to mortal settlements.  This is another reason why the vampires are under attack from the beginning.  With nobody knowing what caused the Great Cataclysm, certain groups have considered that the vampires did it in an attempt to increase their hunting grounds.  This isn’t even close to true, but a terrified world has turned Nyte into a beacon of fear for one side and hope for another.  In this way, the city acts more as a symbol than a location.  It’s extremely important to the traditional vampires because of its role as a stronghold that has survived the 50 years of assault from their natural enemies.  Many consider the fall of Nyte being equal to the fall of vampire society, which isn’t surprising.  It’s been maintaining the front line in terms of battles and culture for centuries.

One might wonder why the Duragians haven’t tried to raze the city to the ground since it’s a known location.  I’ve thought about this too and came up with two conclusions.  One is that there is a benefit for keeping Nyte around.  Not every vampire lives here and those that don’t are harder to keep track of.  Destroying the city means that more enemies escape into the wind and become wandering threats.  If the Duragians ever manage to destroy most of the solitaries and smaller civilizations then they would go after Nyte because the threat of thousands of hiding vampires wouldn’t be there.  Also, a failed siege could result in retaliation at a time when the temples’ numbers are too low.  Needless to say, this isn’t what every priest and paladin believes, so there are still attempts.  The other conclusion is that there are magical defenses around the territory that only mortals fall for.  This would be illusions that direct them away from the city or traps that are checked for fresh meat every few hours.

Most of my attention with Nyte went to the castle, so I imagined it starting out with that and developing a city around it.  So, much of the area revolves around the nobility surviving an attack.  There are thick fortifications and secret passages that connect all of the important rooms.  Oddly enough, I didn’t really imagine this place with the window shutters, which hints that those who live there try to maintain a slight connection to their mortal lives.  This might not be on purpose with the current leadership, but the castle has a sense of never being changed beyond decorations.  Still, the details of this place remained tame compared to my past creations.  This may go throughout the whole series since vampires are focused on staying in the shadows.

Then again, there are two more locations that are important to War of Nytefall and they sit at the extremes when compared to Nyte.

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Free Story: For The Last Time (My Thousandth Post)!

This was definitely one of my favorites from the collection. Mostly because time travel stories always seem difficult to pull off.

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Yes, this is my thousandth post on this blog!

To celebrate, I’ve decided to post here my short stories. Every couple of weeks, I’ll be posting one story from my celebrated Exciting Destinies series for you to enjoy. With over 30 stories so far, I hope you’ll have lots of fun in the coming months!

I kick off the new series with For The Last Time, one of my favorite stories from The Power of Six.

Click here to read some more free stories.

For The Last Time

Time travel | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's book Image: Pixabay

Truth be told, I have no idea who built the damned contraption. All I know is that, if they were standing in front of me, I would have some choice words for them. Not that I don’t appreciate the technical difficulties of a time machine, let alone one that can fit in a pocket. I’d…

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Mythology in the Shadows

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Centuries ago
The gods and goddesses played
Controlling nature
Answering mortal questions
And punishing at whims
A deity for every aspect
That life threw into the path
Lording over monsters and heroes
To teach lessons
The beloved fables of their day
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Now they are fodder
For fiction writers and dreams
Inspiring tales
And plastered as logos
With very little of their luster
Fallen from religion
To mythology
No more than a class
To get college credit
Which path will be the next to fall?

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Goal Post: Where Did The Week Go?

Honestly, I feel like this week was dedicated almost entirely to errands.  I remember driving a lot, weather being wacky, and a few really nasty anxiety attacks.  Good thing I didn’t try to edit or write during this period because it was taking all of my strength to come off as functional both on and off the computer.  I’m noticing that I put a lot of effort into hiding the times I’m having trouble, which is something I’m going to get into a little later.

Progress was gained in a few arenas.  I looked over the outline for War of Nytefall: Temptation, which I think I’ll start writing in May.  This means I won’t give myself time to write the final Raven story before summer, but I might be able to work on that a bit in July while my son has a half-day camp.  My next goal is editing Quest of the Broken-Hearted and then War of Nytefall: Lost.  I hope that editing the second book before writing the third will help me clear my head since I noted a few details I missed when I glanced through.  Things like Titus’s scars and Decker’s medal as well as putting a cameo in that was reserved for the third book.  Oops.  Still, the outline is good to go and I have a plan.  Nearly done with that Sin story outline too and should be completed by the end of the weekend.  Not much else to say on that one.

There was one stumble though.  I’m back to looking for a cover artist for Quest of the Broken-Hearted.  Alison who does War of Nytefall was going to do it, but had to bow out of the summer one.  Totally understandable given the situation and I’m glad she let me know with 2 months before release.  So, I’m going to be looking around again for someone who can do this and not wipe out my dwindling royalty account.  Due to the story being connected to Legends of Windemere, I can’t go for a generic and the overall theme hasn’t really made any of those things click.  That means I can’t go with 99designs either because very few people listen to character descriptions and this one kind of requires they be on there.  I have an idea about who I will contact once I get my act together since I always find it tough to make first contact.  My current bout of anxiety isn’t helping here, but I think I have a plan.

Guess I’ll get to the anxiety thing now.  I had a really bad attack on Wednesday that I was managing to keep hidden, which now strikes me as wrong.  It’s one that I woke up with and got steadily worse throughout the day.  So, I’m trying to think of a way to reveal what I’m going through since it affects me everywhere.  At the same time, I was looking for a new theme for Thursday because I only have one character bio to go before that day is opened up.  I’m thinking of writing about anxiety from my own perspective, but I will admit I’m a little hesitant for a few reasons:

  • This won’t help sell books, which some people will point out.
  • This could make me look weak, which some people have already pointed out when I bring up the topic.
  • It could set off an anxiety attack when I write it and when I reply to comments.
  • The people who read my blog and contact me in private might get set off here.  Not so much in a negative way, but in a way that makes me feel like I should have just kept my mouth shut.  It’s one of those ‘hearts in the right place’ things for some and ‘stop letting people know you’re broken’ thing for others.  This probably frightens me the most because I’ve gotten in trouble over here for being too honest on my blog.  That’s without me naming names too.

I’m going to take a little time this weekend to make a topic list to help me get my head wrapped around this idea.  I’ll be calling it my ‘Anxiety Journal’ and we’ll see how it goes.  If it gets too damaging then I’ll drop it.

Wanting to end on a good note, my schedule is changing up next week because my son is getting moved up to the next martial arts class level.  It’s a little early in terms of age, but he’s great at listening and focusing.  So, we’re going to see how this goes.  It means the class is later in the evening and one is on a Thursday instead of a Friday, but we’ll adjust as we move along.  My nights might get a little more rushed in terms of writing unless he has dinner before he goes.  He’s very happy and proud, but I think he’s a little sad that he won’t be with his friends.  He can still see them as they pass each other and the martial arts camps tend to be for everyone.  Still, this is a big step for him and I hope it boosts his confidence even more.

So, what are the plans for the week?

  1. Edit Quest of the Broken-Hearted
  2. Make list for Anxiety Journal and write first entry
  3. Adjust schedule for changes
  4. Biking, cooking, and the usual
  5. Finish writing the Sin outline
  6. Start reading ‘Ready Player One’
  7. Take son to see baby chicks (is that repetitive?) at the library before they’re gone.
  8. Play more Lego Indiana Jones
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Money Matters: A Brief History Of Currency

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E.L. Skip Knox recently published a great post on one of my favorite resources, Mythic Scribes, titled, History for Fantasy Writers: Money. Knox is the creator of the fantasy world called Altearth, a place where magic is real, monsters roam the land, and the Roman Empire never fell. He is also a retired medieval historian who is now engaged in deconstructing the Middle Ages into a fantasy setting, so he’s the perfect person to offer a brief description of currency through the ages.

Medieval money can be divided into two distinctly different types: the kind that existed and the kind that didn’t. Real money was currency, specifically coins of various qualities and weights. The other kind was called “money of account.” This was purely an accounting unit, used for large-scale transactions and never turned into a physical object. I’m sharing here Knox’s information on the former; you can read his post…

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Enemies of the Dawn Fangs: Not All Vampires Are Friendly

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Unlike most monsters, vampires have this strange habit of turning on each other.  It doesn’t happen in stories where you only have the one bloodsucker and maybe a few enslaved underlings.  This is when you get a society of vampires, which inevitably becomes riddled with classism, elitism, and a few other -isms.  Backstabbing and destroying each other is standard operating for these creatures, which can be a little disappointing.  On the other hand, predators tend to be territorial and have hierarchies, so maybe that’s where this comes from.

In many ways, vampires demonstrate human nature taken to an extreme.  They eat with no end to their appetite, lust for lovers with a supernatural libido, and demonstrate a destructive rage.  So, a society where they are one of the most dangerous things to their own kind seems to make sense.  Although, half the time I think they’re being used as a commentary on the elites of our world.  Very heavy-handed with the ego, vanity, and quick to kill those they see as inferior.  Makes me wonder why vampires bother making more if they treat so many of their kind with disdain.

That snobbery is something I tried to avoid when I designed the Dawn Fangs, but I did put it into the traditional vampire system.  Keep in mind that War of Nytefall is about the vampire civil war, so it makes sense that they are the most dangerous enemy out there.  It isn’t only the physical threat, but both societies are at risk if the Dawn Fangs are exposed to the world.  The revelation that there is a vampire species immune to sunlight and able to hide among mortals with ease would terrify the world.  Anything that is remotely fanged and not a serpent would be at risk.  So, this is a war that is being drawn out over years because it isn’t easy to have battles without being seen.

One of the things I enjoy about having vampires fight each other is that they’re on equal footing.  With hunters, you have a mortal underdog and holy warriors tend to have an advantage.  A battle between vampires isn’t as clear cut and you can have a different flavor to the event.  It isn’t always a one hit kill since they have the same resistance and healing ability, so you can make the fight really brutal.  This fits their monstrous persona.  You can demonstrate the resilience of the species by having them continue with wounds that would kill a mortal enemy.  Because of this, I think the vampire as enemy situation is very important to the genre.  Not to mention it creates the dynamic of them having the same range of good and evil as humans, which makes them relatable.

Right now, it’s hard to fully explain how much of a threat other vampires are to the Dawn Fangs.  There is a pretty big power gap between them and the traditionals, but they lose out when it comes to numbers.  This could change as the story progresses and you might see some Dawn Fangs turn into ambitious warlords.  Clyde is able to control a small gang, but an entire society is new to him.  There’s going to be some blips and he’ll have to figure out when to be a leader and when to be a monster.  I would go so far as to say the biggest risk to him from this enemy is toward his humanity instead of his mind or body.  Imagine being very powerful and trying to restrain yourself, but people keep rising up to put your world at risk.  You could get a little paranoid and possibly start inching towards preemptive actions that are extreme.  I’ve actually noticed with the second book that Clyde fights less and is spending more time thinking about his role in the world he is creating.  Having members of your own citizenry be enemies can really mess with his head. It’ll be interesting to see how it plays out since even I’m not sure where I’m going with this part of his evolution.

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The 2018 Author Interview Series Featuring Bette A. Stevens

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

It’s time for the next subject for my 2018 author interview series. Author interviews are posted every Friday throughout the year.

I am honored to continue this series with Maine author, artist Bette A. Stevens

You can catch up with all of my past author interviews (nearly 200) on my Author Directory page.

If you’re an author interested in being interviewed in this series, I still have limited spots available for 2018. You can email me at don@donmassenzio.com

Now, please enjoy this interview with Bette A. Stevens:


Bette Stevens author 2016Do you try more to be original or to deliver to readers what they want?

I’m a writer inspired by nature and human nature and tend to write stories and poems about those things that touch my heart and soul. You might say that I write initially for enjoyment and personal satisfaction. However, whether it comes to poetry, children’s books or adult fiction…

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Luther Grathan: Calm of Mind and Step

Abel Nightroad from Trinity Blood

The third member of the Vengeance Hounds is Luther Grathan who started from nearly nothing.  I was actually surprised how often I used him and where he was heading because I didn’t see much to him in the planning stages.  He filled the role of straight man to Bob’s antics, guarding Titus’s back, and handling part of the information gathering for Clyde’s gang.  Unlike Kai and next week’s character, Luther specialized in disguises and wandering the wilderness for news.  He certainly started as a more nature-based character, which is why he spent early versions as a rarity.  A few stories, he only had one scene to deliver a message and that was it.  Thankfully, that’s already started to change.

Like most of the cast, Luther was a game character and he came from the crew of Titus, Bob, and my dead author.  His name wasn’t Luther and I don’t remember the original since we were only in one session together.  Unlike the others, he was designed entirely on surviving and would go it alone a lot.  It wasn’t that he would leave everyone to die, but there was a big divide and meet up later mentality.  This guy was a master of that and wasn’t much for words.  His desire to NOT be killed meant he stayed away from the more destructive incidents.

This turned Luther into another blank slate character, but his initial build appeared fairly quickly.  I think the survivor mentality mixed perfectly with both adventure fantasy and vampires.  It became a clearer identity when I made him a forest tracker and gave him a few tricks to help with his spying.  He remained cautious and extended his desire to survive to those around him, which helped him be a foil to Titus and Bob.  He is the wisdom and clear words for Titus when things are getting personal.  He is the foil to Bob’s craziness and will join in at times to keep the elf in check.  Luther even got along with Kai who didn’t seem to be getting along with anyone.  Kind of proud of how far he’s come since his original creation.

Now, all of this came about in the actual writing instead of the profile.  In fact, one could say Luther is the most likable of the characters.  This is more by the other characters where only one person seemed to have issues with him.  It was situational too.  Even more surprising, Luther has connected with next week’s character.  I don’t want to spoil anything about her, but I can’t really call it a romance.  There’s this strange level of respect between them where they obviously have a soft spot for each other.  It came out of nowhere and I ran with it, so I’m looking forward to seeing where that goes.  Guess the main point of Luther is that he’s going to be an enigma for a while and will continue to surprise people.

I already mentioned Bob hurling a shopping cart at Luther in the game, but I have another story that I was told about.  It’s another Bob and Luther job where they ended up being on the run from the mafia.  How they got involved was not mentioned, but there was supposedly a helicopter involved.  Not them flying it, but falling from it while it was above the city.  Luther was hurt the most and had to be carried, which made things worse when they ended up trapped in an alley with a spiked fence in their path.  People might be realizing where this is going.  Luther healed himself enough to help with the tactic of Bob throwing him over . . . Well, it was supposed to be over.  Poor guy landed on the spikes and slid down as they were getting surrounded.  Bob still managed to get him off and the pair escaped to cause mayhem another day.  I think this is why I have the two characters interact so much in the books and take on a best friend relationship.

See more of Luther in War of Nytefall: Loyalty!

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War of Nytefall, on #LisaBurtonRadio

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Welcome all you night stalkers and day walkers. You’ve landed on Lisa Burton Radio. The only show that brings you characters from the books you love. We’re in for a real treat today, because my guest is the harbinger of a new race. Okay, it’s a race of vampires, but still evolution at work and all that. “Let’s give a big welcome to Clyde.”

“Thanks for having me. Though, it’s kind of strange having people outside of my gang giving me a warm welcome. Vampires aren’t really loved and neither are thieves, so the combination doesn’t make me many friends.”

“Glad to have you on. My notes say that you were once a regular vampire, but something happened during the Great Cataclysm. What can you tell me about that?”

“First, I’m going to admit up front that it wasn’t my finest moment. I wanted to really mess with the Duragians…

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