Roland Gauntlier and Hyde: Allies of Kira Grasdon

There might not be as much to say about these two as I’d hoped, which might be apparent since I put them together.  Both of them were added to Quest of the Brokenhearted once I decided to make it focus entirely on Lacarsis.  They serve simple purposes, which I wanted to expand, but I don’t know if I succeeded.  Rayne had the role of ‘sidekick’ and emotional connection, so these two couldn’t get in there.  Hyde was never supposed to be there in the first place, but Roland was intended to be a secondary connection.  So, where did they come from and did I go wrong?

Let’s start with the human, who readers of Beginning of a Hero might remember running into.  Roland Gauntlier was a fellow classmate of Luke Callindor and Kira Grasdon, which means he’s a proud graduate of Hamilton Military Academy.  He was a very minor character with two scenes and I didn’t think I would ever use him again.  I changed my mind when I considered that it might be interesting for Kira to run into a familiar face.  Roland challenged Lacarsis and failed, but was spared by the Shadow Earl because he surrendered in a rather humiliating way.  Since then, he’s been a local handyman and the occasional friend to challengers.  In a way, he would act as a reminder of Kira’s old life and a sign that there is an alternative to victory and death.  Although, she isn’t the type to choose servitude.

I quickly wrote myself into a corner with Roland because I wanted him to be an adviser to Kira.  This posed a big problem because he would have a lot of inside information on the champions.  If I wanted her to be surprised and the underdog then I couldn’t have her learn about her enemies.  This negated a big chunk of what I had intended for him, so he became more of a listening ear.  Being that he knows Kira and Luke, he is able to give her insight into her behavior and life.  Roland developed an odd bluntness at times too, which I think is something she needed.  Still, he definitely didn’t get to do as much as I planned, but it might be for the best.  Couldn’t have him fight alongside his friends because that’s no how the contest works.

Hyde is simpler since he’s a gremlin relic crafter, which means he’s the one who makes all of the enchanted gear for Kira.  He isn’t bestial or destructive, but comes off more as a monster version of gnomes.  Gremlins like building things after tearing them apart because they think things can always be improved.  They can also absorb magic and use that to help them create enchanted items.  Hyde’s personality quickly become very business-like and crotchety, which made sense since he was working for Kira and he was rather old.  He also solved a problem I had with Kira being able to recover between fights, which introduced the Healing Maidan.  Imagine being locked in a tight coffin that’s filled with healing potion and spending a few days in there to heal.  Not very comfortable, but it gets the job done.

As important as Hyde is to the story, I had a lot of trouble giving him a lot of scenes.  He wasn’t going to be much of an adviser and he really only wanted to do his job.  I hinted at a grudge against the Shadow Earl, but a gremlin isn’t going to be able to do much against a powerful demon.  There was an attempt to make him a mentor/father figure that fell incredibly flat too.  In the end, this might have worked out best.  With Hyde, little is more because he had only one focus.  There are only so many times I could have him work on a relic with Kira hanging around or showing up to fix something.  He turned up when he was needed, which I hope makes him a stronger presence.

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This Week in Indie Publishing

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Write, Market, Repeat: An Indie Success Story

Author Susan Wittig Albert has some straightforward advice for aspiring writers: “Write. Write a book. Write another, and another after that. Writing is a craft. It has to be learned. It can only be learned with practice.”

The author of more than 100 books, Albert still makes time for raising cattle, sheep, geese, ducks, dogs, cats, and chickens (not to mention gardening and fiber crafting) on her 31-acre farm in the Texas Hill Country. She writes five or six days per week, handling publishing and marketing chores in the mornings before turning to her works in progress: “[I take] breaks for lunch, laundry, and for sweeping up Molly’s fur bunnies.” (That would be Molly Maguire, Albert’s elderly heeler.)

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A Heaven for Toasters cover | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksMy latest book now has an official release date–August 13!

Called A Heaven For Toasters, it kicks off what will hopefully turn into a fun new series:

A science fiction crime adventure with plenty of humor and romance, set in the near future

A souvlaki and some sun. That is all Detective Mika Pensive wanted from her fun weekend away on the Greek island of Hydra. Instead, she finds herself caught up in a sinister plot, hatched by a reclusive billionaire with a penchant for illegal genetic engineering. As if that wasn’t bad enough, she has to put up with her new partner, Leo. Leo is an android—or toaster, as people scornfully call his kind. The only thing that could make things even worse would be for the headstrong Mika to fall for Leo. But people don’t fall for toasters—do they?

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Teaser Tuesday: Freybug (Last Day to Get ‘Quest of the Brokenhearted’ for #99cents) #fantasy

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This is the last official day of the 99 cent sale for Quest of the Brokenhearted!  First thing tomorrow morning, I’m ‘republishing’ to have the price go up to the usual $2.99.  So, this is the time to grab this book for less than a dollar.  To celebrate a decent month of sales, I’m showcasing one of my favorite monster champions from the book: Freybug.

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Rayne: Raised Among the Monsters

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I really haven’t gone into any of the supporting cast of Quest of the Brokenhearted, so now feels like the time.  There really wasn’t much outside of the champions, Kira Grasdon, and the Shadow Earl.  A few characters turned up to show more personality than I expected, but there isn’t much to say about them.  It’s really only 4 characters who fill out the detailed cast, which is a little strange for this book.  Since I wanted to focus mostly on Kira, I didn’t need a big group and each one was designed to have an effect on the hero’s journey.  Well . . . There was one who was going to be a standout.

Rayne

This is the young elf who is assigned to Kira as an attendant and ‘smells good’ to the monsters of Lacarsis.  Now, an elf isn’t a monster, so she has an interesting backstory that explains her personality.  Her parents stumbled into the city when she was an infant and quickly gave her up in exchange for their lives, which were promptly taken because of their cowardice.  The Shadow Earl had his people raise Rayne, so she’s an elf who grew up among monsters.  She knows nothing of the outside world and is quick to offer herself up for punishments.  It’s her relationship with Kira that causes the most amount of growth for both characters.  Both are damaged in different ways, but they receive some healing from their partnership.

Here’s the funny thing: Rayne has actually been around longer than Kira Grasdon.  Back in college, I ran a Dungeons & Dragons game where a player was Rayne.  This was an older version that was on an adventure, so Quest of the Brokenhearted is going to be giving her an origin.  Part of this is because there’s always been a secret connection between Rayne and the champions even though she wasn’t active until long after their adventures finished.  Not going to say what, but she is going to become a major player in Windemere’s Age of Heroes.  Probably easy to figure that out since I’ve made it known that my old D&D game is going to be another series in the future.

That isn’t to say working with Rayne was early.  In the game, she was an Elven thief with amnesia and a fear of ice that she couldn’t understand.  It was the player’s first character, so we worked on creating an origin as we went.  Sadly, it was one that I couldn’t use in the books because of how I designed Windemere.  That’s what made me start figuring out a way to give her a background and I kept her at hand in case something came up.  It didn’t work out for a few years since I was always thinking she would have to take the lead, but that routinely failed.  Part of her big adventure was gaining the strength to stand on her own legs and be able to fight alongside the greater heroes of Windemere.  I couldn’t have her start that way, so an origin came to mind.  That’s when I looked at what she was going to become and spent a week brainstorming.  To be fair, I was working the return desk at a Home Depot at the time and a mental break from the brutality was appreciated.

My decision came around the third attempt to outline Quest of the Brokenhearted where I added Rayne in as a friend of Kira.  She just turned up in one version and then was adopted as a ward when the story was Kira being a vigilante.  That didn’t work out and I even made them lovers at one point to see if that got the characters anywhere.  Obviously, it didn’t and I nearly cut Rayne entirely until I streamlined the concept.  She became the awkward servant with no knowledge of the outside world and that struck me as an incredible way to start this character off.  I plan on her making an appearance in another series as well to help move her into position for her big series, which makes Rayne fairly unique in Windemere.  She’ll be the only character to play a big role in four stories/series instead of having one big one and then various cameos.

As it stand right now, I’m not 100% certain where her growth will go.  Normally, I would tell a funny story from the game version of the character, but that might reveal too much about the future.  I do have an explanation for Rayne’s pet though, which is a gelatinous swine called a Gooie Pig.  The player started her own game in her own world, which included a creature named a Guey Pig.  I don’t remember the spelling, but it was pronounced Gweh.  Not knowing this, I called it a Gooie Pig and she made the mistake of reacting rather dramatically to my error.  Of course, I had to do it a few more times just to be a pain.  I don’t even know what the thing looked like or did because I don’t think we ran into it.  All I pictured was a very slimy pig and I had to put that into the story once I put Rayne in Lacarsis.  Honestly, I’m kind of sad I made it a unique creature because I’d love to have it show up more often for comedy.

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Opening the Floor: Future Teasers and October

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As I said yesterday, today is my son’s birthday party, which means I’m not going to be around until the late afternoon.  Well, what’s left of me will be back and we’ll see where things go from there.  I do have a few things that I wanted to figure out by presenting them to the blog.  Yeah, the summer isn’t a great time to do this since there isn’t much activity, but it’ll be a first step.

Teaser Tuesday

This coming Tuesday will be the last day for the Quest of the Brokenhearted 99 cent sale and that makes me wonder if I should do any more teasers for it.  I would have about 5 weeks before the release of War of Nytefall: Lost to do teasers for that book.  That’s a difficult one because that will reveal stuff about War of Nytefall: Loyalty, but that might be inevitable.  I have to promote the new book and that means showing who chose which side in the civil war.  I could do teasers from the first book or even grab one from a Legends of Windemere volume.  So, I was wondering what people think.  Stick to the published works or start hyping the upcoming new release?

October

With Raven’s Wrath written and scheduled, I need to figure out what else to do for that month.  I always do more than the story since it leads up to Halloween and it won’t be long after War of Nytefall: Lost debuts.  I’ve come up with the following ideas:

  1. Monster Maker either the traditional way or have Lost host it.
  2. Run a poll next weekend with War of Nytefall characters to see if people would want an interactive interview.  These are very hit and miss because it depends entirely on audience interactions.  Unless I make another post for people to leave questions.
  3. Open some days for guest authors to promote horror books.  I don’t know many horror authors, so I don’t know how viable this one is.  Definitely need to have a number prior to agreeing to this one.
  4. All three with Interview on Monday, Guest Post on Wednesday, and Monster Maker on Friday.
  5. Something else entirely that people might want to see on this blog.  I’ve done a lot over the years, so maybe there’s an old type of post that would work for Halloween and promoting the new book.

So, that’s what I’m hoping to get some answers for.  I’m seeing flaws and risks with all of this, which is why I can’t wrap my head around it.  Anyway, I’ll get back to comments as soon as I can.  Probably won’t be for a while, but thanks in advance.

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Smooth Sailing . . . What Do You Mean We Lost the Engine?

The week started out so well.  I finished writing Raven’s Wrath and scheduled it for October, which means I’m only doing editing and idea tinkering for the rest of the summer.  That’s if I get around to it though because my son finished camp this week, so he’s home all day.  He got his second blue stripe in martial arts and they said he can go up a level in gymnastics when we sign him up in the Fall.  A lot of progress there and he’s getting better at multiplication and division, which is something that we were having a lot of trouble with a month ago.

I’m trying to delay that ‘bad news’ slide here, so I’m trying to think of all the good stuff that happened.  They’re doing a fun ‘Young Scientist’ series at the children’s museum, so we went to their second program.  The first was creating a compost box with worms, which hasn’t been going well.  We’re trying to keep them alive, but they’re having a really hard time with the humidity and mold growing over the food.  The instructions didn’t give us any ideas with the second issue.  At least the project this week is just a build and hang around the yard thing.  It’s a place for hive-less bees to lay their eggs, which is really a bunch of bamboo strapped together.  Fingers crossed that this one will work.  There are two more sessions, which are a cow eye dissection (I’m guessing computer instead of handing kids a scalpel) and a owl pellet dissection.  The little guy wants to go to both, which is fine by me.

We’ll end on a good note about the future, so let me get to the other stuff.  Time to add humor:

  • The eczema on my shins started growing, but I got to a dermatologist right away.  It’s probably been affected by  stress and humidity.  Joy!
  • To be safe, they did a skin biopsy.  Now, I have two ugly stitches on my shin and a vacation coming up.  Joyous of joys!  Plus side here, I didn’t feel a damn thing after the numbing shot.  Probably could have stabbed me . . . Well, they kind of did, but it was more of a coring.  It is so strange seeing that be done along with stitches, know you should feel something, and not feel anything.  I go back in two weeks to get the stitches out, learn the results, and figure out what to do.
  • I got my permanent crown in and it took maybe 10 minutes at most.  My ride disappeared during this point, but only because he thought I would be in for 15 minutes.  Means the root canal saga is over . . . and replaced by the issue of my sleep apnea mouthpiece no longer fitting.  I get an adjustment in two weeks, which means I can’t use it until then.  Honestly, I saw this coming, but it’s still a little annoying.
  • Why did I need a ride?  On the way to my second anxiety therapy session and on the same day as the biopsy, my check engine light went off.  I dropped the car off the next day, but the mechanic was packed and couldn’t get to it until Friday.  So, I had to get a ride.  Plus side here is that they said it was a lean code, which they cleared.  I drive around and wait to see if the light comes back.  Then I bring it back.  No charge, which is a nice change of pace from things.

Maybe that wasn’t as comical as I’d hoped, but it gets the mess out of the way.  Today is my son’s 9th birthday, so we’re celebrating a little because tomorrow is the party.  Just going to unleash him and his friends on a spray park then get pizza brought in.  Here’s where more insanity turns up:  This party is much bigger than we expected.  It went from 5 pizza estimate to an 8 pizza set up and now it’s a 10 pizza finale.  I’m one step away from imitating Daffy Duck when he loses his mind and we haven’t even reached the event.  If there’s one day this month that I’m going to end with a drink, it’ll be that one.  I expect there to be fun for the kids and hard work for me, but it’ll be worth it as long as the little guy is happy.  He’s already had fun helping me make the favors, helping mommy make his sign, and telling the pizzeria that he can eat 4 slices in one sitting.  They got a good laugh at me immediately saying “You share your birthday pizza because you need room for cake.”

Next weekend is going to be a quiet one because it’s a long overdue vacation for me.  I will still be handling tweets and schedule stuff for the blog, but I will mostly be active in the early morning and at night.  The laptop might be coming with me in case the kid wants to watch some Battlebots before bed.  I’m still deciding on if I want to do a goal post or just hang a sign that I’m out for the day.  Probably do a small one and then try to figure out what to leave up on Sunday.  Tomorrow is about October posts and Teaser Tuesdays, so maybe I’ll make the poll if enough people like the connected idea.  I don’t mind too much since summer has been fairly slow and the most active posts lately have been my Anxiety Journal.  Wow, this post is getting big.  Let’s wrap this up.

Goals of the week:

  1. Son’s birthday party.
  2. Build Lego sets.
  3. If any money or gift cards gained then go to toy stores.
  4. Build more Lego sets.
  5. Pack and prepare for the trip.
  6. Build more Lego sets.
  7. Possibly start editing Derailing Bedlam
  8. Maybe tinker with the superhero stuff.
  9. Put Quest of the Brokenhearted up to $2.99 on Wednesday.  Only a few days left for the sale.
  10. Schedule a few posts for next week to take the edge off after vacation.

Final note on this hefty post, I do feel a little sad about writing the final adventure for Dawn Addison.  This is the ‘monster’ for The Raven Series and she’s now being filed in the same ‘complete’ folder as Legends of Windemere.  Unlike the champions, she probably won’t be making any cameos since she was in her own pocket world.  So, October will be a final good-bye for her.  Kind of sad even though she was only on the blog and didn’t get as much love as my other ideas.

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Designing a Fighting Style for Your Character

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Last year, I wrote a trio of posts that gave tips on three categories of fighting styles.  This was just a general overview of Strength, Agility/Speed, and Counters/Thinkers, which most styles can be fit into.  Of course, this is boiling things down to their essence and ignoring the nuance.  In Quest of the Brokenhearted, Kira is definitely a fighter who depends primarily on Agility and Speed.  Yet, she will repeatedly use tactics that depend on brute force and aggression, which leans towards Strength.  Due to the tricks in the battles, she also needs to Think a lot.  So, it is probably better to say that every character has different levels in these three fields with one being primarily and the others being secondary.

Creating a fighting style for your characters can be difficult because of this issue.  If you make them solely one category then they can become two-dimensional and have no adaptability.  A character built entirely on strength can be defeated by a more well-rounded opponent as well as a full thinker.  You can get away with give them a primal instinct that helps them avoid traps, but this still falls into that third category.  Again, we’re looking at nuance here and that means layers.

Since there are so many ways to go with a character, I’m going to step away from the long-winded explanation and doing something else.  When I make my characters, I ask myself a variety of questions.  Not always intentionally or clearly, but my mind goes to certain aspects when deciding on fighting style.  So, I’m going to share and maybe this will help people out.

  1. Is the character going to be a combat one?
  2. Do they have any experience with fighting?
  3. What is their weapon?
  4. What is their body type and state of physical health?
  5. What is their personality like?  Aggressive or passive?  Arrogant or team player?
  6. Do they wear armor?
  7. Are they willing to kill?
  8. How easily do they deal with pain?
  9. What are the chances of them losing their temper?
  10. Are they observant enough to figure out patterns while on the move or are they a little dense when fighting?
  11. Is there a history of warriors in their family?
  12. Are their goals in combat typically to survive, help others, claim victory, get loot, or fun?

The list can keep going and changes depending on the characters.  For example, I would go further with questions of family history with Luke Callindor and focus a lot on level of restraint with Clyde.  This actually makes #5 a very important question that can lead to others.  In fact, it probably should be #1 in terms of priority.

So, are there any questions you consider with action characters?

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The 2018 Author Interview Series Featuring Dr. Rich Meyrick

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Quest of the Brokenhearted, on #LisaBurtonRadio

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Welcome all you disillusioned, disenfranchised, and faithless warriors. If you’ve ever suffered loss, you may be able to relate to my special guest, Kira Grasdon. “Welcome to the show, Kira.”

“Thank you for having me. It’s kind of surreal being here after hearing so much about the experience.”

“My bio says you were a successful business woman. What can you tell us about the Grasdon Merchant House?”

“To be fair, I wasn’t as successful as people think. My father built up the family business and made it an international trading power. We dealt in goods from every continent, which not many merchants could claim. My brothers and I were the successors, but I was the only one left after we were targeted by my fiancée’s enemies. That left me in charge and I didn’t do half bad considering everything else. Being trained as a warrior and more traveled than most…

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