When an Idea Twists in Real Time

War of Nytefall: Eradication had something fairly unique among all of my published stories.  There was a big plan, but a key component of the story was trapped in a bizarre state of uncertainty.  I knew there would be a secret and who it entailed, but I couldn’t figure out what it was.  The major points of my books are typically known to me and I use them as guidelines.  It wasn’t the case here for a few reasons:

  1. I was writing the book in the midst of the divorce.  Yeah, I keep mentioning this, but it was an emotional and mental influence.  My mood wasn’t as consistent as it used to be and that made me rather fickle.
  2. There were major gaps in writing times.  I went weeks without writing at times, which meant I didn’t have the previous material clear in my head.  Tiny details weren’t remembered because they were spur of the moment at the time.  I tried to read through it all, but found that it would absorb all of my writing time and then I’d have to wait longer before I got back into it.
  3. My notes weren’t very clear on this one.  I’d tinkered with this story a lot right up to the first draft time.  So, I had pieces of various plot points in regards to this major event, but they didn’t always match.

I’m probably harder on this book than I should be since I did very careful editing to make things match the reveal I actually picked.  The memory of the ‘twisting idea’ is still fresh because I’m seeing it happen again with War of Nytefall: Ravenous.  It’s a lesser extent, but I can already tell that I have to change course on something and rethink the next volume.  This is definitely more pantser than plotter, but I’d be in terrible shape if I stayed exclusive to one school.  Creating a style that has aspects of both helps to get me over this kind of hurdle.  It only leaves me with a level of doubt and worry, but when am I not like that.  Can’t say more because it’s a big spoiler.

When it comes to twisting ideas that repeatedly jump off the rails, I think you need to step back a bit and examine.  There’s the belief that your subconscious knows better and you should follow the new path.  Yet, this is the same part of your mind that can birth paranoia and ask you what bedbugs were called before beds were invented as you try to sleep.  Not the most reliable guide.  You can take a lot from the detour because it stems from the original story, but you have to make sure that you don’t deviate so far away that everything falls apart.  The twisting idea is fun and exciting in the moment, which doesn’t always translate when a person is reading it.  They could easily wonder what you’re trying to do because they don’t see the connections.  Absorbing some of it and refining the overall combination with editing is my personal choice.

So, what do you do when an idea gets twisted from the beginning?

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Character Archetypes: The Trickster

Also, a fun one to read about. Tough one to write though.

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Hi gang, Craig with you today. This is post number five in the character archetypes series. In the Hero’s Journey, there are some common characters that are likely to show up in all stories. This doesn’t mean each archetype shows up in every story, and aside from the hero, the rest are kind of optional. Almost every story will have an assortment of them.

This series is to introduce you to them. Once you’re aware of them, you can decide if they can benefit the story you’re writing.

I have to say, this is the most maddening one to write about so far. Almost seems poetic when you consider it’s about The Trickster. There are as many different opinions about this archetype as there are websites, so I’m going to reject their reality and substitute my own. This is all in an attempt to offer some help, which is what…

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How Ya’ll Doin’?

Honestly, that’s really it.  This has been a crazy week and the next one isn’t looking to be any better.  I told my story yesterday.  Curious to know how all my blog peeps are holding up in the face of a global pandemic and life changing as we know it.  At least for the foreseeable future.

So, how’s everyone doing?

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Week 1 of Containment: I Really Hope this is Saturday

Seriously, all of the days have blurred together with everything that happened.  I don’t have to tell all of you about what’s going on.  We’ve all been affected.  I’m still nervous because every map I look at has me sitting in a big red zone.  In New York, the worst areas are NYC, Westchester, and Long Island.  Hello from, Long Island!

I’ve been texting with coworkers to keep up-to-date on various situations and see if we can still help our students.  This has been fairly easier than everything else.  Nothing to even report on there because it’s private.  I’m fighting to stay optimistic that they’ll be fine and we’ll all be back in our classroom by April 1st.  Is it weird that April Fools Day is when we’re aiming to head back to school?  Betting some short-sighted person is going to pull a prank about having the coronavirus.

Let’s get to the main event here . . . My son.  He’s basically being homeschooled by me and that’s rather difficult.  Most of the week was doing worksheets and exercises then he played with the neighbor kids.  The real stuff kicked in on Thursday and Friday . . . which is when the fighting started.  Not with him, but my ex-wife was sent home as well.  So, we had to split the week, but we both had different ideas and thoughts on the situation.  The fight was pretty nasty for a bit and I’ll admit that I’m still stung on a few things that were said in my direction.  This is probably venting more than I should, but it isn’t like her or anyone she knows checks my blog.  The two of us are stubborn and don’t see eye-to-eye, which is why these battles happen.  Guess our hearts are in the right place while our egos and minds aren’t.  In the end, my son and I came up with a fair split.

To be honest, it is really hard to have him somewhere else during this time.  I worry about him all the time.  Eh, this is probably not a good topic.

In the writing front, I did manage to get somewhere.  Surprisingly, I should be finishing War of Nytefall: Ravenous by the end of today.  Just got the closing chapter to do after yesterday’s chase and battles. Tomorrow will be working on the outline for War of Nytefall: Savagery and I’m going to start it next Friday.  I might as well take advantage of the home stuff.  If my son goes out to play with the kids then I may even get the fantasy tip book information finished up.  Was there a title for that one?  So, You Wanna Write Fantasy? That one really does seem too aggressive and patronizing, which doesn’t work for me.  Ugh, I hate this stumbling block.  Anybody got a muse I can borrow?

In other arenas, I’ve been catching up on some anime.  I finished ‘Castlevania’ Season 3 and loved it.  Definitely a bridge season, but I liked the suspense and twists.  Didn’t enjoy Alucard’s story, but it was fairly minor.  I got through Season 4 of ‘Hunter x Hunter’ as well, which means I’ve watched more than I’ve read.  Began working my way through ‘Overlord’, which is an odd one.  The protagonists are overpowered, so there isn’t much of a risk of them losing.  I’m going to see it through to the end because it’s got good world-building.  After that, I’m either going to jump to ‘Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure’ Season 2 or ‘Ranma 1/2’.  I’m enjoying the manga for the latter.  Yeah, I’m watching more anime than anything else.  Just in that kind of mood for a while.

I wish I had more to report.  Though, I will say:

War of Nytefall: Eradication
Still available on Amazon!

Only the free book is moving.  No sales.  I see authors trying to use the quarantine to their advantage on social media.  Not feeling that because of what’s going on with my own containment.  I know I’d be annoyed by such marketing, so why bother doing it to other people?

Full disclosure:  I’ve been drinking while writing this.  So, I’m going to call it a night and go back to my anime.

Goals for the week?

  1. Finish War of Nytefall: Ravenous
  2. Homeschool my son.
  3. Play time with my son.
  4. Keep up with work events.
  5. Outline and begin War of Nytefall: Savagery.
  6. Tinker with fantasy tip book.
  7. Toss up a few June blog posts.
  8. Watch more ‘Overlord’.
  9. Get pizza at some point because I miss it so.
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Types of Spying in War of Nytefall

D&D Spy?  (That’s what the site said anyway)

Now, this may be a better topic for War of Nytefall: Ravenous, but I felt like I couldn’t risk forgetting it.  Spying and gathering intelligence is still very important in Eradication, especially when you see one of the big moves that Leo Kandrel makes.  In fact, the Dawn Fangs and their enemies have come to see that gathering information is more important than battles.  This is where the real struggle comes from since many events come down to who knows what and who learns of things first.  The side that pinpoints the location of the Fist of Durag could very well turn the tide of the slow-moving war.

Now, I’ve noticed about 6 types of spying that goes on in War of Nytefall.  It’s actually 3 to each side.  There is a 7th that I can’t talk about though because of spoilers.  Let’s leave that one alone and dive right into the methods.

Nyte: Kai Stavros the Spymaster

I would say that Kai is a more traditional spy as long as we’re not talking about the kind that blow up half a city before lunch.  He oversees a global network of agents and contacts that he communicates with through various methods.  Some are magical like portals while others are mundane like messenger birds.  He’s had centuries to hone his skills to the point where there is very little that he doesn’t know.  Kai is the type of spy who tries to stay out of the action and will only get involved if he doesn’t have a choice.  He’s more likely to report what happens than change the ensuing events.  Kai also manipulates others to get the results that he feels are best for his master, Lord Tempest.  For example, he gets the vampire hunters involved in the hunt for Leo Kandrel in order to hide the fact that Nyte was on the move while the truce was still in play.  Everything about him is low key and subtle.

Nytefall: Chastity Sullivan the Gatherer

Chastity is similar to Kai in that she is responsible for a global network, but it is more contacts than agents.  While he operates for a political group (Lord and Lady of Nyte), Chastity created her system to be used by criminals.  Her operation was started when Clyde ran his gang and long before the Great Cataclysm.  She uses her businesses to help spread her influence and make contacts that she can get information from along with supplies.  The biggest difference between her and Kai is that she gets involved with her seduction and manipulations.  She would be more of a femme fatale than a figure lurking int he shadows of a room.  Her charm magic is what makes this possible as well as her lack of inhibitions.

Nyte: Stephanie Talon the Ritualist

Here we start in on the more intrusive and magical methods of spying in War of Nytefall.  Stephanie can get information that Kai is unable to find by using her blood rituals to scry.  This has both advantages and disadvantages.  It is a one-person operation, which means fewer ears and mouths are passing things on.  Scrying can be done from the safety of a castle instead of getting close to the target.  You don’t have to worry about getting attacked too.  Unfortunately, Stephanie does have to be careful about wards, backlash spells, and other magical methods of defense.  People know scrying is possible, so they defend themselves if they are doing something in secret.  Scrying can also be less reliable in that you may only get visual or sound, but not both if the distance or ritual is imprecise.  There’s a time issue too because Stephanie’s method may show here what is about to happen or what has already come to pass, but she won’t be sure of which situation it is.  This is why she usually works best alongside Kai’s network.

Nytefall: Lost the Psychic

Not much to really say here because we can all figure this one out.  Lost has telepathy and the ability to mindjack others.  This means, she can take over a guard in the room to spy on a meeting.  She can also read thoughts from far distances, but this has the problem of her not always knowing who she is spying on.  Without a visual of the person, she might not know what they look like unless they happen to have a mirror nearby.  This type of spying gets you the best purity of information, but it is highly intrusive and going too deep will reveal that you’ve been there.  Unlike the previous methods, this one can inadvertently cause a target to become aware of the spy and they’ll change plans.  Lost wouldn’t know that her information is already obsolete in this situation.

Nyte: Lady Sylvan’s Swarm

I can use Xavier Tempest too since he can change his shape, but I find this one to be a little more interesting.  As a swarm, Nadia can be in an area and observe things.  She doesn’t do this often because she’s a noble, but it is an option.  Even if someone sees the swarm, they won’t think much of it since she can spread out or keep most of them hidden nearby.  If discovered or attacked, she can still survive with all of the information because only one bug needs to live for her to make it out.  Another advantage of this method is that it’s fairly unique to Lady Sylvan . . . Much like the final spying method.

Nytefall: Mab the Dark Mistress

Seriously, she can move through shadows and has learned to put only part of herself in or out of the void.  All Mab has to do is locate the person or place that she wants to spy on and then stick her ear into the area.  This does mean that she won’t be able to see much because of how she has to turn her head.  A risk is if someone sees the phantom body part since it would be pretty obvious what is going on.  Especially if they try to kick it and find that it’s still attached to something in the shadows.

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Immortal Wars: The Summoning Part 11 #fiction #throwback

(Previously on Immortal Wars.)

Disclaimer: Immortal Wars was the book I came up with and wrote in high school.  I hadn’t even hit college by the time I wrote the first two books.  That means I hadn’t developed my style yet, wasn’t good at self-editing, and the story was fairly basic. So, you’ve been warned that this is the ultimate author throwback segment for my blog and will show my author origins.  FYI-  I put the first book (The Summoning) through a Print-on-Demand publisher and the second one (Light, Blood, & Tears) never saw the light of day.  Enjoy!

In the central hall there are several bright, turquoise lights in the ceiling, but there aren’t any windows.  Weird alien symbols, written in olive paint, cover the murky brown walls and black ceiling.  The villains’ hovering chairs are set around a rectangular table in the middle of the central hall and at the head of the steel table is a hovering, pure ebony throne.  The throne’s thick arms are shaped like the necks and gaping mouths of ferocious dragons.  Currently, six of the evil immortals are seated when their seductive and voluptuous leader, Adriana arrives along with the resident moron, Hellax.

Hellax is a tall, muscular man, whose bright red eyes make him resemble a slightly terrifying monster.  His brown hair is slicked back because he claims that it gets into his eyes, even though it only reaches the middle of his forehead.  He wears a suit of golden armor along with red, clawed gloves that are always on him since he has trouble figuring out how to get the suit of armor off.  Strapped to his back is a heavy battle-axe with crimson edges on the axe-head and glistening, oval jewels all over the wooden handle.  Hellax is almost as strong and fast as Draveon, but Hellax’s intelligence is so low that he has forgotten his entire past and occasionally forgets his own name.

The true leader of this vile band is the conniving Adriana.  Unlike her small-minded ally, she clearly remembers that she came from a village outside of Athens.  Before she had discovered her immortality, Adriana lived an easy and carefree lifestyle.  Her father was a rich merchant and her mother had died during childbirth.  One of the first lessons Adriana had learned was how to use her beauty to get what she wanted from men.  Adriana’s birthright power, to seduce any man she wants, had helped her get everything she had ever desired.  Her braided, blond hair and enchanting, emerald eyes make the opposite sex stop before her, even without the aid of her birthright powers.  She only uses her powers in case of emergencies, so Adriana depends on her intelligence and cunning instincts to maintain her position.  The evil leader’s outfit of dark pink, skin-tight fabric and a tiny, red tiara allow her to rely on her natural beauty if everything else somehow fails.  As always, in her right hand is a strange four-foot staff that silently radiates a blue light.

“Since all of you are probably wondering where Mindtrigger is, I will tell you.  He is . . . He’s. . .Um.  Where is he, Adriana?” stutters Hellax as he walks over to his chair.  All of the villains stay silent and some of them shake their heads in disbelief, except for Kilanus who starts giggling at the fool’s mental lapse.

“Ahem.  Stop laughing, Kilanus.  What Hellax is trying to say is that Mindtrigger is currently studying the potential problem that we could encounter when our plans finally reach fruition,” explains Adriana as she sits on her throne and turns away from the team’s blundering idiot.  He is still trying to remember where their absent friend is and a sudden look of intense pain shows up on his dull-witted face.

“What is this problem that you say we will encounter?  Is it what all of us have feared since we returned to this galaxy?” says Startrix, who has a truly magnificent weapon with her.  In front of her, on the smooth table, is an elegant silver longbow with a thin black string.  But from what one can see, Startrix does not seem to have any arrows, or even a quiver, with her.

“Yes.  I had hoped that we succeeded in preventing their appearance.  Actually, it is too soon to find out if they are going to be either a real problem or just a minor headache in our future.  You see we have discovered four of the new planet guardians on Earth.  Need I remind you of the 1985 trip we took to Earth in order to dispose of the second generation of guardians before they matured?  We exterminated four of the new guardians before they could get to Solix and develop their powers.  But it seems that four others have survived and Solix has made contact with them.  Now we kind of know why these problems have come up, but there are still some mysteries.  For some reason these four did not show any signs of their guardian potential until now.  Thankfully the fifth one has not shown up yet nor is there any indication of one appearing any time soon.”

“Hold on, Adriana.  What’s the point that you’re trying to make?  We slaughtered the original guardians centuries ago without breaking a sweat.  None of us can possibly be scared of these four amateurs.  They should be pushovers!” exclaims Tegam as he sits on the cold table instead of his chair.  Attached to his green, turning orange, belt is a six-foot long whip that he occasionally pets like a cat.  The simple weapon is made out of a copper rope, which could only have been forged by a being of pure, raw magic.

“You should be severely embarrassed, Tegam.  That is exactly what Hellax said before we walked in.  But these new guardians are definitely more powerful than their predecessors were.  These new immortals are not experimental creations from a test tube like the originals.  They are natural immortals just like most of us here, which makes them a lot more powerful than the ones we killed.  They could even be as strong as we were when we had just started out.  Without enough training they can’t possibly get any stronger,” responds Adriana while she stretches her arms over her head.

“You forget that we are a lot stronger and much deadlier than we were before,” argues Psylon.

“So?  Not to steal Tegam’s cliché, but what’s your point?  We still don’t have any idea of what these fledgling immortals’ birthright powers are.  The information we have is only based on their dormant fighting abilities.  Even that data is somewhat lacking in the very important details.  Mindtrigger has not been able to do a full gene scan.  He’s working on it as we speak, but something is disrupting the scanners.  As our leader, I see no reason to assume that these infants are incapable of defeating us.”  Adriana hops off of her throne and slowly begins to circle the large table like a cunning lioness.

“Regrettably, I am forced to agree with Adriana’s concerns.  No matter what any of you think, we were very lucky to defeat the original guardians.  We were even luckier to survive the full power of the Solstar medallion.  At least most of us were lucky in that respect.  May I remind all of you that my body took the brunt of that attack.  Anyway, we might not be so lucky this time around,” says Cybro.

“Don’t forget about Solix.  The sun guardian is still alive.  I can just feel his presence in my blood,” mentions Draveon.

“Every offense to my old teacher, but who cares about that weakling?  He’s probably too weak to use the Solstar medallion at full power again without bringing extremely serious harm to himself.  And by extremely serious harm, I mean total oblivion.  The end of his miserable, despair-filled life will come to pass,” replies Adriana with a small, half-hearted laugh.

“What do you mean by he’s too weak?  He didn’t have any trouble, or get hurt, the last time he used it at full strength,” says Tegam.

“That is because he was much stronger back then.  Mindtrigger has discovered that the sun weapon draws the extra life energy from the person that uses it.  Centuries of mourning for his dead friends and moping around have turned Solix into a weak and senile, old man.  He doesn’t possess the internal power that he used to have.  He’ll be shooting blanks like every other being whose time is up,” explains Adriana when she stops behind her daughter’s chair.  She flips onto the back of the hovering chair and crouches on the top like a cat, so that everyone can see her.  The silence that follows lets all of the words Adriana has spoken slowly sink into everyone’s mind.

“Who are the guardians?” asks Kilanus.

“What?  We have gone over this before.  They are the people who guard this particular solar system from people like us.  That is why we must destroy them,” answers Cybro as he moves next to Kilanus’ chair.  Adriana swiftly kicks the cyborg in his head from her perch.  His head goes flying across the room and the rest of his body gets up to reattach it.

“I still don’t understand.”

“Just ignore Cybro.  He must have another one of his short circuits.  Mindtrigger must really look into that.  You see, the guardians are the creatures who unfairly exiled us from our home.  We may have done something that was slightly wrong.  But we didn’t deserve the pain of losing contact with our families and never being able to see our home again,” states Adriana as she pats her daughter’s head.

“Now I get it.  They’re the bad guys.”

“I can’t fool you, little angel.  Now, I think we have said enough about our past, current, and future problems.  All of you can go about your business until I have to call for you again.  Which, if I’m lucky, won’t be for a very long time,” orders Adriana.

Everyone slowly leaves the central hall one by one and goes about their business.  Some of them wander about the warship and look out at the galaxy that they want to conquer.  Others begin to prepare themselves for the violent war on the darkening horizon.

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Putting Cliffhangers in a Series

This came up in conversation and I thought about while coming to the end of War of Nytefall: Eradication.  When writing a series, you tend to have 3 types of books:

  1. The opener, which introduces at least some characters, begins world building, and may hint at the main plot.
  2. The finale, which closes up all or most of the plot lines.
  3. Everything in the middle, which I tend to call ‘Bridge Books’.  They have their own internal adventure while carrying what was established in the previous books into the next one.  You don’t always bring all of the subplots and characters through a bridge book, but you do enough that the main plot can continue.

What does this have to do with the topic at hand?  Well, that 3rd category (and the 1st as well) needs an ending that brings some closure, but also has the audience ready for the next volume.  One of the best ways to do this is by creating a cliffhanger.  Compare it to TV series that do a mid-season finale or have a multi-episode story arc.  Enough is made clear to leave the audience with a good idea of the events, but you end it in a way where they won’t know what is happening next.  That’s basically what a cliffhanger is because it’s intended to carry on to more story.

Of course, people have become very twitchy about cliffhangers and you can’t really blame them for wanting to avoid such things.  How many times have we been given a suspenseful season finale or bridge book only for the series to die?  That’s not the fault of the author since they never intended for it to end that way.  At least, one would hope not.  Still, there is a fear that a finale with no closure is doomed to leave things open forever because the next volume will be blocked.  This is why cliffhangers require two important things for them to be truly effective:

  • The audience must trust the author that they will continue the story.  Faith can make or break a cliffhanger.
  • The author must be dedicated to the story or at least have some way to transmit the closure in a worst case scenario.  Maybe it isn’t an episode or a book, but at least be able to tell the audience what would have happened.

That last part isn’t really pretty and it’s a nightmarish backup plan because we always want to see our projects to the end.  If not then that’s fairly sadistic because you’re gathering a following and then crushing their spirits.  Doesn’t really make for a follow up series if you plan to keep going.

Anyway, cliffhangers should be utilized very carefully and with a sense of foreshadowing.  You don’t have to know exactly what is going to happen next, but the threads you weave have to go somewhere.  It would cause a lot of damage to the overall series if you create a ‘bridge book’ that destroys or ignores all of the previous stuff.  It would be like rebooting the series and creating no true closure.  Then, you have a problem with the next volume because you either have to start fresh, work with the new, or try to phase out the ‘bridge book’ to continue the original plan.  Honestly, all of these have problems because people will notice the choppiness of the story.  Safest bet is to work with the new and try to gradually show how the original stuff continues or factors in.  This may extend your series longer than intended, but it saves you from destroying everything with a terrible or ignored cliffhanger.

So, what do you think about using cliffhangers?  Are they overdone, a high risk, or a necessary part of writing a series/episodic story?

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How to Publish with KDP: Part Six B

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Hello SErs. Harmony here. As promised earlier, here is the second part of the sixth installment in the post series dedicated to taking a step-by-step look at how to get your finished manuscript from your computer and on sale on Amazon in both ebook and paperback.

If you’d like to take a look back at the previous posts in this series, please click on the links below:

Outline: https://wp.me/p7OGru-29c

Part 1 (Software for Writing) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-29t

Part 2 (General Formatting Necessities) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-29J

Part 3 (Ebook Conversion) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2ah

Part 4 (Paperback Formatting) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2eS

Part 5 (Image Software for Making Book Covers) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2gi

Part 6 (Using Amazon’s Cover Creator Tool for eBook) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2gQ

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Teaser Tuesday: The Past or the Present? #vampires #fantasy

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Got a little weirdness coming in from War of Nytefall: Eradication.  Nothing much I can say about this since it might be a wee bit out of context.  Still hope it’s fun and mysterious to read.

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Infographic: Selling your Business with Ebooks

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Did you know that a great way to promote a business is through an ebook?

As regular readers of this blog know, I have been focusing on freelance writing this past couple of years. So, this is a tip that may be of particular interest to non-fiction writers and anyone else who is looking to make a living through their writing.

Good content has become the brute force that drives a majority of the marketing strategies on the internet today.

Indeed, that is why writers are as popular as ever – it is a golden era for content marketing (although things are still hard for fiction writers). Whether it is explainer videos, blog posts, or infographics, every form of online marketing requires high-quality content that attracts more clicks and revenue.

So, say a company has hired you to write an ebook for them. How can you use it to promote…

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