Why do people skip to the end of the book?

Posted by Joy York This isn’t a very scientific subject, but one I have found myself pondering. I personally read a lot of books. Although I read and…

Why do people skip to the end of the book?
Posted in Uncategorized | Leave a comment

Revisit: What Do You Look For In A Funny Villain?

Zim!

(Originally posted on August 16, 2013.  This is different than a standard villain question and I guess this gears more towards stories aimed at children.  Kind of a shame because I think adults deserve more comical bad guys.)

Now, we’ve seen villains with a sense of humor in comics (Joker), cartoons (Hades), and comedies (Dark Helmet).  You can obviously have a villain with a sense of humor that is goofy, sarcastic, or twisted.  They can still be effective too depending on the genre.  Not all comedic villains are bumbling idiots that would fail even if the heroes hadn’t gotten involved.  I always got that sense that He-Man didn’t really have to work hard to thwart Skeletor at times.  Don’t even get me started on Cobra Commander in the cartoon.

Effectiveness is a major challenge if you’re writing a villain that is funny.  Looking that three examples, you can see what some of the choices are:

  1. Dark Helmet–  From Spaceballs, Dark Helmet is powerful, but he’s rather accident prone and a goof.  You lose a lot of effectiveness with him because funny stuff happens to him without his intent.  This works in a comedy, but outside of a comedy, it makes for a weak main villain.  A secondary villain could get away with it, but the main villain does need have some semblance of control.
  2. Hades–  Cunning and in control of the situation, this type of villain is like an evil Grouch Marx.  Many times this is the egotistical planner that is manipulating everyone around him or her.  The humor comes from his wit and sarcasm, which is difficult to write.  Not everyone has this ability, so you really need to get feedback on this kind of villain or watch sarcastic comments.  This type of humor can improve the character’s effectiveness because it is a sign of intelligence.
  3. Joker– While Joker can be a catch-all at times, he is a twisted humor character.  Victims with his smile, crazy traps, wild laugh, and murderous plots that you laugh at for some bizarre reason.  It’s a delicate balance between crazy and effective here.  Go too far and you have a raving psychotic that is merely disturbing.  Don’t go far enough and you have a mildly humorous villain that seems to be phoning it in.

Personally, I like humorous villains that are effective.  The goofy villain is great in comedies, but only comedies for me.  A series story should have a seriously dangerous villain, but you can give them a sense of humor.  Most people have that in some form and villains are people too.  Unless they’re robots, aliens, animals, ghosts, zombies, possessed farm equipment, haunted house, lawyers, shparkly vampires, politicians, or a bio-engineered disease.

Posted in Thoughts | Tagged , , , , , , , , | 11 Comments

Sea Otter Awareness Week

We’re heading into sea otter awareness week!  So, what are some things about these guys?

  • There are three subspecies: Northern Sea, Southern Sea, and Asian.
    • Asian sea otter is the largest with a wider skull and short nasal bones.
    • Northern sea otter has the longest mandibles.
    • Southern sea otter have smallest teeth and longest snout.
  • From the mustelid family (weasels), it is the only member without anal glands, no den, and spends its entire life in the water.
  • They can hold their breath for up to 5 minutes, but their dives for food tend to be between 1-4 minutes.
  • Unlike other marine mammals, it catches fish with its paws instead of its teeth.
  • Sea otters live within and around kelp forests of the Pacific Ocean.
  • They eat the animals, like sea urchins, that destroy kelp forests, so they are considered keystone species.
  • They have the densest fur in the animal kingdom with two layers that have one million hairs per square inch.
  • Another way to stay warm is they have a high metabolism, which requires a lot of food.
  • 90% of the sea otter population live around Alaska.
  • Southern sea otters can breed at any time while Northern sea otters are born in the spring.
  • Otter pup fur is too dense for it to dive.  So, it floats on the surface until its adult fur comes in, which takes about 6 months.
  • They use tools to break open shelled prey.  Usually a rock, which they keep in a loose patch of skin under their arm.
  • A group of otters floating on the surface is called a raft.

Pictures and videos!

Posted in Animal Posts | Tagged , , , , , , | 19 Comments

Goal Post: Allergies Won’t Stop This Auth . . . Seamstress?

I feel a little foolish here.  After going on about how I was going to get chapter 3 of Darwin & the Joy Path done this weekend, I realized on Thursday that I should probably focus on something else.  I’m also writing this post on Thursday, so I have no idea what befell me on Friday.  My allergies have been killing me and ‘colds’ have been flying through the school, so I could have been home sick for all I know at this point.  It really doesn’t matter.

My focus for the weekend is going to be my son’s Halloween costume.  All of the parts, except for the smile stickers, are here.  I might need to get more yellow card stock and find pink fluff, but that shouldn’t be an issue.  It’s entirely possible for me to finish the whole thing this weekend even with 1-2 Pokemon Go outings.  This means I will have to sacrifice a weekend of writing, but I think it’s worth it.  The alternative would be to attempt both and risk not having the costume ready.  I can’t work in my room like last year too because this isn’t sewing.  It’s iron on vinyl, spray paint, gorilla glue, and hot glue to put this thing together.  Oh, I need some white fabric to make a decal and I can color it in using the fabric markers.  Busy, busy, busy.

For anyone who thinks this is silly, I did a lot of thinking about this situation.  My son is 16 and this could be the last Halloween costume he asks me to make.  At the very least, next year will be that, which means I won’t be able to do this much longer.  It was always fun and I loved seeing him show off his costume on Halloween and at the local anime convention in the spring.  This whole thing is a reminder that he’s going to be grown up and not needing me as much in only a few years.  I’ll have more time to do my own thing, but there will be a sense of loss for a bit.  Parents need to let go to some extent, so I’m bracing myself.

I think I need a weekend away from a screen and doing something new too.  This week was a lot of work and resting in front of the TV since my pollen allergies were killing me.  I had to start every day with Claritin, nasal spray, Dayquil, and a hot shower to get my head to functional levels.  Even then, I usually didn’t feel human until mid-afternoon and was exhausted soon after that.  Kind of typical for this time of year, but I will admit this week was exceptionally brutal.  Barely did any Pokemon due to appointments too, so that couldn’t have made it worse.  Staying in the house and being productive after such a week will be good for my mental health.

Next week is going to be a little wild too.  We have off on Tuesday and Wednesday for Rosh Hashana, so school will go quickly.  I have my son for it and family is coming over, so I won’t be able to use any of that time for writing.  That’s fine.  Same goes for next weekend since I have my son, but I will probably have a little finishing work on the costume.  That means, I will be able to confidently do more writing in 2 weeks.  I might be able to squeeze a little in on Wednesday night after my son goes with his mom or even Thursday if I don’t feel like taking a walk after work.  Playing it by ear, especially since work is going to be getting busier around the same time.

Without going into details, work has been different this year.  The days will start going by faster when we are back at community work sites, but the vibe in the room is different as well.  Each student is being faced with a new challenge and we’re assisting them all at the same time.  Some days, I feel like I’m being a combo TA, cheerleader, teacher, therapist, butler, stress ball, and I’m sure there are other things.  Somebody asked me how I stay calm when things are crazy and . . . I had no answer.  Just kind of happens now with a few hiccups since I have my personal life stress keeping me at a mild boil at all times.  Yeah, that arena isn’t improving.

I did come close to figuring out that thief guild story.  I was leaning towards the ‘enemy’ group really being one person who summons other beings that they’ve tricked into contracts.  The ‘hero’ side are the ones who got screwed over since they refused the contracts.  I still want them to race each other for the legendary treasure vault, but I might add that there is a relic with the power to undo all of the contracts.  I think I’m going to be going with 8 heroes with a 9th appearing in the second book/short story collection.  I could drop one of the 8 into a supporting role as well.  7-9 heroes each with their one essential role sounds like it would work without much cluttering.  War of Nytefall had around that amount and worked out.

Goals of the week:

  1. Made major progress or complete Halloween costume.
  2. Rest to recover from allergies.
  3. Buy more Claritin.
  4. Legos when I need a break.
  5. Work on December blog posts.
  6. Movie with son during holiday.
  7. Try to write one section of Darwin & the Joy Path.
  8. Notebook work!
  9. Sleep more for extra recovery.
Posted in Goal Posts | Tagged , , , , , , , , | 12 Comments

Revisit: What Do You Look For in a Third Book of a Series?

Yahoo Image Search

(Originally posted December 3, 2013.  Couldn’t resist putting this one after the one about a sequel.  This post had more meat to it since I was promoting Allure of the Gypsies for it’s debut.)

So, here I am sitting around during the first week of my book’s debut thinking about what to write.  Yesterday, was the big debut and rushing around to submit to all my listed marketing sites.  Then it struck me that a question I asked during Prodigy of Rainbow Towers debut was never asked:

What do you look for in the third book of a series?

Some people might not realize how a third book differs from a second book or the finale of a trilogy.  Obviously, you can’t give full closure like the ending of a trilogy, so that answers that difference.  The trick comes in when comparing it to a sequel.

To be honest, part two can be cleaner than the third book.  You have direct plotlines and foreshadowing to work off of.  The world is still being explored and you can move out from the initial setting, so there’s still a freshness for the author to depend on.  Same goes for the characters.  They’re still in early development and the second book is where you can throw in a good amount of shake ups.  Betrayals, deaths, failures, victories, and the whole bag of tricks to make that sequel even bigger than the first . . . then what?

Here’s where the third book will find a problem.  It has two books to live up to while forging its own niche in the series.  You can pull out some of the tricks from the second book, but too many and you doom the entire series.  There’s a lot riding on this third book and it could easily end up larger than the previous ones.  At this point, you may find some subplots are running their course and need to come to a conclusion.  Introducing a new character and removing an old one can be helpful too.  You need shock events without making them seem strained.

You also need to think more about the future of the series on this one.  Think of the reader dating your series:

  1. First book is the blind date where you’re getting to know each other.  Might not be smooth, but you can put on a good enough show for a return.
  2. Second book is the big second date where you give it your best and try to give the reader more of what they liked during the first book.  Also, add stuff that they hinted they wanted.
  3. Third book is the nerve-wracking date where you consider putting out.  By ‘putting out’, I mean revealing the big story and grabbing hold of the reader for the true roller coaster.

I hope that analogy makes sense.  So, what do people think about the third book of an on-going series?

Posted in Thoughts | Tagged , , , , , , , , , , | 7 Comments

Poetry Day: Society of Absent Parents

(This one hits home since I work in a school.  I know there are parents who simply don’t try to be there for their kids.  Yet, I feel like the majority are those who wish they could be there, but can’t for a variety of reasons.  I know older generations will say ‘make time’ or ‘you need to try harder’.  It’s a different world than even when I was raised.  Both parents may need to work more to make ends meet, so the age of the stay-at-home is no longer upon us.  There are so many errands and chores that need to get done because everyone is busy during the day.  Kids have homework, so they might be too busy.  That’s if there isn’t a divorce with custody schedule involved, which can, at best, halve a parent’s time.  My point is that there are times where I feel like we built a society where we want people to have kids, but not to spend time raising them.  Then, we shame parents when their kids act out and they have no idea what’s going on when the reality is that they are fighting to provide food and shelter for that child.)

How do we raise a child

When we are never there

Slaves to a society of unending need

Forced to toil and exhaust

Sacrificing time as family

Away from our progeny

Who spend most days with strangers

Unaware of the reasons

Only aware of the absence

Growing up without true guidance

From those that love them most

We wonder how so many stray

To the darkness of our world

How would they know any different

When their guides are forced away

Posted in Poems | Tagged , , , , , , , , , , , | 13 Comments

Revisit: What Do You Look For in a Sequel?

Yahoo Image Search

(Originally posted July 30, 2013.  I really wasn’t giving any breaks between posts back then, which is a shame.  I should have spread these out.  It looks like I did these posts to promote Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  So, they’re geared primarily towards that.)

So this is the big question that actually started my idea for these types of posts.  Since Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower is a sequel, I’m really curious to see what people say.

Personally, I like consistency and growth.  The characters from the earlier books have to act like they did before, but change as the story progresses.  A sudden change of personality between books is jarring to me and makes the early book feel unconnected.  It’s essential to make sure your books feel connected if they hold the same characters and places.

I also look for continuity and it’s something I worry about a lot in my own books.  For example, I switched Luke Callindor’s eye color in the second book and it took me 3 editing runs to realize it.  He has green eyes and I made him blue.  Though, I’m looking into a way to change that since I realized two other champions have green.  Can’t do it until the sixth when something happens to him.  That’s a story for next year if things keep going smoothly.

The third thing I like in a sequel are new characters and locations.  Staying in the same place gets boring and you need fresh voices.  Without these things, you’re probably going to rehash the first story.  For locations, it can make sense to stay in the same place if the plot is about defending a central location.  Still, show different areas of that place or have a small excursion to the surrounding region.  Otherwise, it feels like the author has no depth to the world.

So, what do you look for in a sequel?  What’s the best and worst sequel you’ve ever seen or read?

Posted in Thoughts | Tagged , , , , , , , , , , | 14 Comments

Teaser Tuesday: Irritating Pest

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

(A small part of the final battle, which shows the Baron in some type of action.  I really didn’t use a lot of teasers with him fighting.  Read the rest of Warlord of the Forgotten Age for 99 cents!)

A shadow passes over the Baron as he jumps over a street and gently lands on the side of a building. The immortal watches the griffin and Dariana swing back around, the pair picking up speed to ram him. Drawing an icy cutlass from behind his back, he prepares to meet the reckless charge. When he senses something is wrong, the Baron leaps up to the roof and watches the beast crash through a window. He whirls around to slash at Dariana, the telepath having been waiting above the whole time. The goading smile fades from the warlord’s face when he sees that his daughter is blocking his arm with her own regenerated limb. She throws a punch that he moves to slash with a second cutlass, but the limb circles around the blade and strikes him in the face. Pushing his daughter back, the Baron gets away from the edge and receives several more blows to the face before he gets out of range. He hears a faint thud behind him and turns enough to parry Luke’s sabers, the weapons dripping with pink energy.

“Both of you must be proud to have me cornered like this,” the Baron says while kicking the half-elf away. He yanks his leg back to avoid losing it, but the movement leaves him open for a punch that knocks him onto another rooftop. “I am curious to learn how you recovered your arms so quickly. Your brother had his time magic and I was once a god, but you have never had the ability to heal such injuries without help. Did that mercenary live long enough to use his power on you?”

“He’s still alive and will face you again soon enough,” Dariana replies as she rushes forward. Ducking under the cutlasses, she elbows her father in the stomach and sends him skidding back. “All of us know that this is our final battle. We’re not happy about dying, but we’re prepared for it. As long as you die with us.”

“I’d much rather kill him and live a lot longer,” Luke chimes in with a smirk. The cutlasses and his sabers rapidly clang together, neither swordsman giving ground. “You’re not that tough without your favorite sword and armor. Honestly, I’m starting to wonder what all of the fuss was about. The only reason you’re lasting so long is because we keep getting separated, which is bound to change at some point. At least your son made us afraid when we fought him. Then again, he was active in Windemere instead of playing with demons and twiddling his thumbs for centuries.”

“Again, trying to anger me will-” the Baron starts to say before he receives another shot to the mouth. Spitting out a tooth, he knocks Luke’s sabers aside and kicks with enough force to knock the champion across the street. “All you have are distractions and tricks. I look one way and get attacked from another. This is why I toy with you. I want this battle to last until you stop coming at me with childish games.”

Dariana strikes her father from behind, the flying tackle sending both immortals off the rooftop. She flips in midair and drives the Baron into the pavement with her feet before leaping away from his quick slashes. Rising out of the rubble and wiping stone chips off his shirt, the warlord watches his daughter come at him again. Her punch passes through his cutlasses to strike his chin and knock him through a store window. Instead of returning to the fight, the Baron blasts the rear wall with a fireball and retreats down the other street. He waves over his shoulder as Dariana and Luke give chase, the two champions sticking to the rooftops. Throwing daggers and crossbow bolts repeatedly fly from his hands, the conjured projectiles keeping his pursuers at bay. It is only when he comes to a large intersection that the warlord stops and calmly uses an enchanted comb get some dirt out of his beard.

The instant the champions land on the ground, the Baron appears behind them and slams the pair together. With a flick of his wrist, he hurls Luke into a building that collapses on top of the forest tracker. Focusing on his daughter, the warlord uses a staff to jab at her stomach and block her attacks with wild spins. Thrusting the weapon at her face, he fights to ignore her incoming fists and turns his attack into a sweep. Breaking her telepathic control, the Baron watches her arms vanish and swings his staff to knock her kick away. Without her illusionary limbs, Dariana is easier to handle, but she is still able to land a few echoing blows that leaving her father’s torso heavily bruised. Transforming his weapon into a halberd, he charges and comes dangerously close to gutting his daughter. Her incredible reflexes and centuries of training help her rapidly kick the long blade away while backing up, but she is eventually cornered against an overturned cart.

“That was an excellent strategy,” the Baron declares before stabbing backwards. He frowns at how Luke blocks the heavy weapon, but the half-elf is unable to defend against the street turning to mud beneath his feet. “You have become a true nuisance. What will it take to make you stay down?”

Posted in Legends of Windemere, Teaser Tuesday, Warlord of the Forgotten Age | Tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , | 6 Comments

An Oft Overlooked Research Technique

by Pat Spencer This post is for new writers, experienced writers, and folks who wonder how authors create stories that transport readers back to the …

An Oft Overlooked Research Technique
Posted in Uncategorized | Leave a comment

Revisit: What Do You Look For in Demons?

Demon Slayer

(Originally posted on July 26, 2013.  Pretty much self-explanatory since I played with demons all the time in my stories.)

Traditionally, demons are the bad guys.  The monsters and eaters of human.  There has been a slight change with characters like Inuyasha and Etrigan where circumstances have made the demon a hero.  Typically, this is done with half-breeds and those that are bound to a heroic human.  I’m talking fictional literary demon and not the religious type of demon.

Demons turn up a few times in Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.  Not just the Hellfire Elf, but several different types.  You get a sense of demon society through one of them.  That’s something came out randomly that I kept.  Demons are always these monstrous, evil beings with nothing really behind them.  You get the occasional world-domination or birth my child demons, but most of them are mindless creatures of destruction. Here the demons have a society that I plan on exploring as my various series progress.  Will I make a demonic hero?  I have a few planned including one or two that are full-blooded demons that make the conscious decision to fight for good.  Demons can have honor too.

This has led to me getting easily bored with demons in stories.  I don’t like the pure evil creature path that they’re given.  It lacks depth and means they’re only useful for sudden fights or possession scenes.  Only so much you can do with an exorcism scene.  I hate to say that I don’t like demons in stories.  Probably closer to say that I want them to get more depth and versatility.  After all, I’ve read and seen stories where angels are the bad guys and fall from grace.  Why can’t a demon rise to heroism?

So, what do you look for in your fictional demons?  If you don’t typically read such books, what would you want to see when such creatures are used?

Posted in Thoughts | Tagged , , , , , , , , , | 16 Comments