
Last week, Teagan Geneviene posted a delightful challenge, which was to have a character post a diary entry. The reason for the entry was to develop …
Wednesday – A Prompt from Teagan Geneviene- Diary

Last week, Teagan Geneviene posted a delightful challenge, which was to have a character post a diary entry. The reason for the entry was to develop …
Wednesday – A Prompt from Teagan Geneviene- Diary

Ciao, SEers! Tomorrow is a holiday in the US. To give you (and our contributors) time with family, we’re closing comments today. But before we go, we…
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By Kayla Matt
Aedyn began like Fritz and Nimby as another player’s character in the game. There was a big difference between him and them. The guy playing Aedyn was more into the mechanics of the game than the character. So, Aedyn wasn’t much of a personality or factor. He was the half-elven priest who healed us when we were in trouble. His name was also Aiden Quinn, which is also the name of an actor. Obviously that had to change because I didn’t want to anger the actor or run into any problems. It’s rather symbolic too because Aedyn had the biggest overhaul of any character. If he was a car, I’d have to gut him and build him back up from scratch. After all, he joined the group in a way that doesn’t work with a book. Nimby debuted by stealing Luke’s dagger in a crowded cafeteria and Fritz debuted by creating an illusionary sheep in the cafeteria. Aedyn just happened to sit next to Luke and grunt a hello, but that was it. It began a series of events where Aedyn just happened to be there when we were doing something. By the third game session, Nimby got fed up and flat out recruited him, which the player took in stride. Still, it meant that I had a character who didn’t do much beyond magic and combat. Fine for a game, but a headache for a writer.
This is what led to the current incarnation of Aedyn Karwyn, which ran to a depth that I didn’t see coming. He became the calm within the storm of Fritz’s womanizing, Nimby’s thief antics, and Luke’s overall recklessness. The stoic straight man that was the voice of reason, which was typically ignored. Truthfully, Aedyn wasn’t supposed to grow beyond this role because (as I’ve said far too many times) he left the game at the same time as Nimby and Fritz. I had no idea what to do with him, but he had an idea of what to do with himself. He influenced a change in the other characters, which tempered there more volatile natures. At the same time, he was becoming more open and friendly until he was joking and drinking with Luke in a tavern. It was rather fascinating to see him grow on the page into a person that I would love to spend time with. The oddest thing was that while Luke and Nimby were becoming best friends, Aedyn and Fritz started to bond in a similar fashion. They became a Laurel & Hardy type of pairing, but they really helped to influence each others’ growth.
It was also through Aedyn that the religions and pantheon of Windemere came to be. He was the first priest of the books, so he set the tone. I had to answer so many questions through him. How do priests get their powers? How influential are the gods? Why do they need mortal champions? How do the pantheons work? I developed the system of having a less knowing character ask these questions, so that Aedyn could answer them. This trait would be adopted by Fritz who was better at it because Aedyn was very concise with his explanations. Though, the answers changed a little when the priest changed because a follower of the sun would think differently than a follower of destruction. Still, some of the nuanced rivalries between followers came out from Aedyn along with the foci of each religion. Maybe this is why Aedyn and Fritz connected so well. Both of them became the archetypes for two of the biggest groups in Windemere.
2023 Thoughts– Not sure what else I can add here. Aedyn did go for a longer distance and evolve more than I expected. To this day, I’m not sure how I came up with his path. It really was that he would die, but I came up with something better. Took a few editing runs of Beginning of a Hero to get him right too. Would I change anything? I probably would like to give him a stronger personality on some level. Not sure if that would work though because Luke, Nimby, and Fritz had really big ones. Aedyn being the mellow and calm member worked and opened the door for Timoran Wrath taking on that role in later books.

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The ability to see spirits is fairly common in fantasy and horror. Though, each genre uses such a power for different effects. Horror is almost exclusively creepy and eerie while fantasy can have it be information gathering or simply a casual power. Either way, it’s one that doesn’t get much delving into. So, I’m going to try to look more into it.
I am saying ‘see spirits’, but it might be better to say interacting with them now. Typically, the first level of spiritual interaction is simply seeing them. That does allow a character to notice what is going on beyond their normal senses and avoid any dangerous ones, but nothing more. Speaking to the spirits is the next level followed by physically interacting with them. In most stories, this is being done by a psychic, seer, witch, holy cleric, or some person with mystical powers/training. There are times you get a natural, which tends to be an opener to have fun with trauma since they won’t know what to do. In the end, it’s all the same type of power and that is to see/interact with spirits.
Of course, the definition of spirits is another variable. I’m betting most people thought about spirits of the dead when they saw the title. Authors do tend to skew towards making this power exclusively about ghosts. Yet, spirits can also cover the categories of demons and natural entities depending on the lore. It might be best to think of ‘see spirits’ as being able to spot the invisible, incorporeal beings that exist in the world. This becomes easier to understand if one believes that everything has a spirit, including the wind, sun, water, and earth. Perhaps you can call it energy that has congealed into a being with some level of sentience. That gives you a broader area to work with when giving a character this type of power.
All this rambling and I really can’t say what the best way to use this power would be. You have exorcists, fortune tellers, holy adventurers, psychics, traumatized protagonists, and any number of examples with this power. Some were horrified by their abilities while others reveled in it. Some attempted to do good and others evil. So, I would say that the use of this power depends entirely on the character. If they are seeing spirits of the dead then they might want to bring them closure. If they are seeing nature spirits, they might want to control them for personal gain. This means that, as with any power, there is no right or wrong way to utilize ‘seeing spirits’.
Origins are another factor here. Is this a natural ability like in ‘The Sixth Sense’ (I had to mention it.) or a spell like in D&D? You might not think this is important, but it can influence the amount of control and calm the user has. If a person uses a spell to ‘see spirits’ then they are voluntarily giving themselves this power. They are ready for the effects and know what they are getting into, which means they can control it. Someone who gets it naturally will have an early period of fear and confusion. They are never given the option to have this power or not, so they will start off having very little control and understanding. How they handle their power will be what initially defines them and the rest of their story will be influenced by how they evolve with this ability.
I’m really making this sound like a complicated power to utilize in a story. It might not be that way though. I’m simply talking about using it to give your characters and story more dimensions. Many authors give this power or spell to a character without any repercussions or difficulty. They simply do it or have been doing it longer than the readers have known them. It’s very easy to do this with older characters who were born with the ability to ‘see spirits’. One can assume they went through training either with a mentor or on their own to wrest control of their powers. A few lines of dialog about how they had trouble as a youth covers the origin pretty well. This is one of those powers that readers won’t entirely question when it’s being used by an adult. Not sure why, but it could be that we assume children are too immature to handle the spiritual ramifications of this power while adults can wrap their heads around it.
So, what do you think about the ability to ‘see spirits’?

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Finessing Dialogue, Part 2
My original plan was to talk about how I can’t figure out what to do with Tuesdays after the new year. Then, I remembered scheduling a post for that in late December and figured I should leave that as is. So, I went looking for a holiday to quickly put something here . . . I bring to you ‘World Toilet Day’. Apparently, this was made to bring attention to sanitation systems, but they thought ‘toilet’ would be more relatable. Either way, enjoy the funnies and flush carefully.

Not sure why I expected this week to be smooth sailing. It was a crazy double-header of 1) the first full week of the second quarter of school and 2) the last full week before Thanksgiving. This meant my time as a TA and as the father of a high school student took priority. Man, did it every take priority.
As you can tell, most of my time this week was spent helping my son with homework. We got a few Pokemon Go outings in, but it was mostly homework and, if he was with me at night, some cartoons. He was more amped up than usual, so getting him to bed took extra time. This meant, I only had 30 minutes to get myself ready for bed and pass out in order to use my CPAP machine for a good amount of time. Some mild nocturnal anxiety attacks turned up because of certain negative encounters too. All of that combined to leave me fairly exhausted by Wednesday.
Actually, the busy time at work was another factor. Can’t really explain why it was so busy though. The days were kind of normal, but there was this odd energy and speed to the whole week. I mean, it felt like time was going slow even though I also felt like I was rushing everywhere. Yesterday was a big field trip too, which always saps the last of my strength. Not as bad as when I wasn’t sleeping well, but it was enough to have me crawling into the weekend.
Can’t report much on the writing front. Darwin & the Beast Collector is 1.33 chapters away from being finished. Strange number, but a few obstacles cropped up last Saturday and I didn’t get to use the full day to my advantage. So, I came one chapter section short of my goal. It’s for the best though because I kind of wrote myself into a position where the penultimate chapter can’t end the way I planned. Things aren’t fitting into place like I expected, so I took time to reimagine the scene. This resulted in Darwin asking questions and suggesting a path that I didn’t think about. So, it will probably take next week for me to tinker enough to make it work. Not a problem since I’ll have 3 days to finish the book next weekend, so it’s as good as done.
This brings me to the Amazon publishing change I stumbled into this week. Apparently, they made it so that books now get 3 category tags and that’s it. This supposedly stops people from gaming the system and putting their books in unassociated categories because the system checks. Not sure I believe that, but I ended up doing it for Do I Need to Use a Dragon? and Bestiary of Blatherhorn Vale. The latter came up as needing a new price and that’s where I discovered the change. Decided to try it for my newest release since I was curious. Now, do I take time one weekend to go through all of my books to make these changes? Has anybody else tinkered with this new system?
This coming week is going to be rather crazy. There’s a lot going on for the first three days and then Thanksgiving. I don’t think I’ll get any writing done until Friday afternoon. So, I’m going to be focused mostly on maintaining my energy and strength. The CPAP machine requires that I go to bed around 10:15 the latest to make sure I use it for long enough on school nights. I’ll have to make sure I do that, which means I might only be able to do the last of the January blog posts. That’s an easy month since most of it is putting up stuff I already wrote. Speaking of posts, tomorrow is going to be . . . really strange, but I couldn’t resist.
Honestly, 2023 decided to hit the gas for some reason. Next week has so much packed into 3 days and the following week looks to be just as hectic. Hanukkah starts the week after that too. This is why I don’t plan on starting Darwin & the Joy Path until Christmas time or after the 31st. Leaning towards the latter or a combo. Depends on what I do with the December weekends. Maybe I’ll be able to finish off the ‘Phi Beta Files’ outlines after I rewrite the one for Darwin’s next adventure, which is oddly more linear than his usual antics. Wonder if that would be easier or harder for him since he tends to wander away from plans, but doesn’t like being surprised. Guess I’ll figure it out during the outlining stage.
So, what are the goals of the week?

Hi SEers. John is with you today. Today is Fri-Yay, and I hope you are looking forward to a super weekend. Before we get into the subject, I want you…
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Legend of Zelda Ending
(Pretty easy to figure out. Always bittersweet when a game ends.)
The game is done.
The hero has won.
Now what are we to do
Since our adventure is through?