Goal Post: Made a Little Progress

I’ll dive into the writing part of the week, which didn’t go beyond last Sunday.  I did manage to get one chapter of Darwin & the Beast Collector written.  Not a glorious victory because I merged 2 of the 4 sections. Due to errands and our regularly scheduled Saturday rain giving me sinus issues, I couldn’t write for very long before I started to lose focus.  To be fair, I expected this to happen, so I met my low target.  Just means 4 chapters or 14 sections left for this book.  Maybe late November will be the finish and I spend the rest of 2023 fiddling with my Phi Beta notebook.

Really wish I had more excitement to report.  The section I wrote was the beginning of ‘Act 3’ where everything went haywire.  Not only within the story, but I stumbled onto a bunch of plot holes.  This adventure has so many strange mysteries that keep popping up out of nowhere.  For example, an important item in the most recent chapter that was never mentioned prior to its appearance.  That might be another reason why I took so long because I kept having to stop and think.  There’s supposed to be a lot of things that don’t make any sense, but Darwin isn’t paying enough attention to see it like the readers.  So, there’s no way to know what’s going on until the final confrontation.  Editing Darwin & the Beast Collector is going to be a pain.

Once the week started, I had to go into parenting and TA mode.  My school had a special event on Thursday where people sign up for events to help the community.  I ended up having to leave early though because my son got his lower braces on, which meant chocolate shakes and Pokemon Go to distract.  Scattered about the week was the usual homework, quizzes, tests, and the life event.  This is why I couldn’t fit any biking in and had to depend entirely on Pokemon Go outings for exercise.  That’s going to be the same this weekend and I hope to stop the slight gaining of weight I’m seeing.  Why does it always happen around this time of year?

Of course, there was the big event of the week, which was the CPAP machine.  I’ve been on it for a week and it’s been interesting.  I’m starting to get used to sleeping with the full face mask, which is connected to a tube.  That took some time because I fiddled with the settings the following ways:

  • Second night I took the machine off auto and manually upped the humidity to avoid dry mouth.  Even one level higher and I ended up getting water in the mask.
  • Fourth night, I thought the mask was too loose because it leaked a little.  Ended up making it leak a lot and spent 15 minutes fighting to adjust it during the test function, which basically blasts you in the face with air.

Those were the big ones, but the really challenge is that the CPAP machine records and transmits my numbers.  Insurance uses these to gauge if I’m using it often enough to get free replacement parts or something.  So, I have to use it at least 4 hours a night and 21 nights a month.  Not sure why anyone would do less or even that amount when it should be a nightly thing.  They record the time you slept, mask leak level, times you take the mask off, and sleep apnea events per hour.  It results in a grade from 1-100 and you even get video game like achievements . . . This might be why I tinkered with the thing in the hopes of improving my numbers.  Stupid part is I was already in the 98-100 range after the first night.  Apnea events went from 199/hour to 0.8/hour.

The real question here is how do I feel.  Well, sinus issues and head cold weren’t doing me any favors.  It was a few days into using it when I noticed that I wasn’t feeling as gross in the morning as I used to.  My energy still fades fairly quickly at the end of the day, but it doesn’t feel as severe.  I used to feel like I was coming down with something and freaking myself out.  Now, I can tell that I’m just regular tired.  Things can only get better as long as I use the machine.  Morning maintenance on school days is a bit of a pain, but I got some special wipes to make it go faster.

This coming week is set to be a normal one.  I have no holidays, appointments, or other events beyond the usual.  The ‘life event’ may still take a few swings at me, especially as certain dates come closer.  It might not be enough to lay me out though. It’s even possible that the CPAP will give me the energy to do some writing during the week.  I won’t hold my breath there though.  The next few chapters of Darwin & the Beast Collector are complicated with a lot of strings to tie together.  I might use the time to finish December blog posts, which clears my path for the last 2 months.  I don’t know if I’ll be writing much next weekend either because I might have to get involved in a few things.  Not being a career author means I can’t say ‘I need to write’ and expect people to give me the time and space.  It’s back to being a hobby that nobody takes seriously.  Actually, it’s even worse these days since I don’t have anyone to discuss story ideas with any more.  All alone with my thoughts now.

Goals of the week?

  1. Continue using the CPAP machine and getting used to it.
  2. Time with son.
  3. Write Darwin & the Beast Collector when time permits.
  4. Exercise.
  5. Grumble about how it keeps raining on the weekends.
  6. December blog posts.
  7. Make penne with vodka sauce tomorrow.
  8. Remember the other goals after this post goes live.
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Monster Month: Grootslang

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So . . . The Grootslang is a thing.  It’s definitely . . . A sight to behold.  Also, I’m fairly certain at least one person’s mind went to a talking alien tree that I think talks about the power of family or something?  I don’t know.  Let’s move on.

The Grootslang supposedly lives in a deep cave in South Africa.  This creature is primordial, which means it has been around for as long as the world has existed.  It was one of the gods’ earliest creations when they were still learning their trade.  So, they made this guy by accident and have regretted it ever since.  The Grootslang is strong, cunning, smart, and vicious.  To fix this mistake, they split all of the Grootslang in half to create the first elephant and first snake.  Of course, one managed to escape and managed to reproduce enough that it’s still a threat.

As you can tell, the Grootslang is a combination of an elephant and a serpent.  Although, I also found sites saying it was originally just a giant, cow-eating snake with diamonds in its eye sockets.  The elephant features were added later when getting mixed up with other local legends.  Another legend had it as a hippo instead of an elephant, but I only ran into that one once.  It was typically a black-scaled giant snake or a black-scaled elephant/snake hybrid.  Choose whichever one you want at this point.  Both seem to be terrifying and enjoying swallowing large animals (cows and elephants) whole.

Now, the Grootslang lives in a cave called the ‘Wonder Hole’ or ‘Bottomless Pit’.  This lair was connected to the distant ocean, which allowed the creature to escape for food.  It even went into rivers at times.  The cave was also filled with diamonds, which connects to the various that has the gems for eyes.  Of course, this added to some legends where the Grootslang loves gems so much that they can be bargained with.  Not that people have diamonds in their pocket all the time, but it’s a nice escape if you can swing it.

Direct stories didn’t really turn up.  There was one about an English businessman disappearing after his group got attacked by lions.  People said the Grootslang got him instead of the lions.  The second had a prospector going into the ‘Wonder Hole’ until he reached a ledge.  He saw all these tunnels, smelled sulfur or pure evil, and then scrambled back up the winch when bats caused him to drop his lantern.  Not sure about that one since the Grootslang didn’t actually make an appearance.

In terms of real-world origins, the simplest explanation is the local fauna.  Pythons in the area could grow to 25 feet long, so a person running into one might be frightened enough to exaggerate it in their mind.  The elephant part could have been added through repeating the story and making it scarier.  Although, I do like the origin tale where they were split into the two separate animals.  Really had an odd ‘Just So Stories’ by Kipling vibe to it.

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Ciao, SEers! We’ve been discussing styles and descriptions. If you need to catch up, follow these links: In my last post, I said in passing that the …

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Poetry Day: Friends

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(A positive poem from me?  Wow.  Surprised myself too.)

Friends make up your life
The true ones are always there

 

To raise your spirits
And decimate your ego

 

To lend a shoulder during pain
And a drink to toast your joy

 

To join you in your schemes
And help put up the bail money

 

To smack you for your stupidity
And cheer you for your genius

 

To tell you what they think
And hold nothing back when said

 

Be thankful for your friends
And be sure to keep them close

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Monster Month: Kurage-No-Hinotama

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I debated giving a day to this monster, but I really liked the concept.  Unfortunately, I couldn’t find much in the way of lore.  It definitely stems from Japanese mythology and seems to be a yokai.  Yet, I found more about it being used in anime, manga, and video games than the actual legend.

So, what is a Kurage-No-Hinotama?  Aside from a pain to write, it is also called a fire jellyfish.  That’s because it’s a large jellyfish made of flames.  This creature floats in the air on seashores and stings anyone who gets to close.  It also can be described as an oddly shaped ball of light, which is why many think it is a Japanese version of a Will-o-Wisp.  It falls under a category called an Onibi, which is a mysterious and unexplainable floating ball of flame.

The Kurage-No-Hinotama gets mentioned in a collection of strange stories called the Sanshu Kidan.  These tales first started being shared in 1764, which was during the Edo Period.  I think this collection is most notable for including a forest demon called a Tengu, which is very popular in some veins of fiction.  It could be the use of these stories as fiction fodder that resulted in the Kurage-No-Hinotama showing up enough that it gets slightly remembered.

I managed to find one story with this creature.  It appearing in Ishikawa Prefecture as a samurai was walking at night.  He encountered a flying fireball, which he slashed since it was coming at him.  It broke into two and a red creature appeared in its place.  It stuck to the samurai’s face like it was made of glue or pine resin before opening its eyes.  Being a jellyfish, its body was transparent, so the man could see through its skin.  When asked about it, he called it a ‘sea moon’, which is another phrase for jellyfish.

As I said, I couldn’t find a lot on this weird creature.  I simply found the idea of a fiery jellyfish floating through the air rather interesting.  While it could attack people who got too close, it seems to be more of a roaming phantom.  Not that there are tons of stories out there beyond those made from modern day.

Anybody else ever hear about the Kurage-No-Hinotama or have better luck researching it?

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Expansion Pack: The Contagonist

Hi, gang. Craig with you once more with something that made me think. Maybe it will do the same for you. I started posting these expansion packs some…

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Revisiting Origins: Xavier Tempest

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This was a character who joined War of Nytefall later than many of the others, but has risen pretty high up the ranks. In the book, Xavier Tempest is a nobleman that would hire Clyde to help him and has now asked him to help with the war.  He is on the vampire council and protects one of the capital cities.  You learn that he’s been working with the survivors of Clyde’s gang too.  Being a noble, he doesn’t get involved in the messy adventures, so he would be seen as a benefactor.  NONE of this existed when I was playing him in another Vampire game.  All he retained was the silver hair and old nobleman clothes . . . Just like in the picture above.

I never had the intention of putting Xavier into Clyde’s stories because I created him as a gaming experiment.  In Vampire: The Masquerade, you have clans to choose from, but you can make a non-clan vampire for a collection of powers.  I never tried it and wanted to do it for once.  My favorite game at the time was Castlevania: Symphony of the Night where you play as Alucard the Son of Dracula.  I went so far as to name the character Alucard Tepes (surname from Vlad the Impaler) and give him powers that mimicked stuff you could do in the game.  He had amnesia too because I needed to take a big flaw to earn enough points for fire powers.  This put his origin in the hands of the guy running the game.  You wouldn’t believe what that was too.

Not that I know because poor Alucard’s storyline went down in flames.  We had captured a vampire that had some info, but another player wouldn’t let me near him.  This guy was a soldier and didn’t get along with Alucard, so we butted heads.  All within character, but it ended with the prisoner being executed before I could ask questions.  The rest of the game had Alucard simply there because he couldn’t find any more clues and it was difficult to rationalize him sticking around when he felt like his allies just betrayed him.  Eventually, the game ended because the players who were the main plots movers left college and I was given an opportunity to join another game as Clyde.

In retrospect, this was for the best because it meant Alucard was a blank slate and I could transform him pretty easily into Xavier.  No more amnesia and I gave him a lot of magic, which made him different from the more physical Clyde.  He’s one of the few vampires in this series who utilizes attack spells like mortal casters.  This might be a spoiler, but I’m thinking of hinting that Xavier is a channeler turned vampire.  Since the series is prior to Nyx’s adventures, nobody will realize this because channelers are still thought to be extinct during this period.  Just another fun twist for this character who I’ll admit I find it difficult to write at times.

One of the issues I have with Xavier is that he operates with more refinement and tact than most of the other characters.  To switch from Clyde to him and back again proved to be a challenge since I played both characters in the past.  It’s almost like talking to myself, but needing to use two different voices.  Doesn’t help that two more of the main cast are my former game creations.  Although, those two are further down the importance scale as you’ll see when I get to them.  Xavier and Clyde are certainly higher profile with more scenes and evolution.  It might take a little more practice to get these two perfect, but I might be too hard on myself.  Mostly, my writing speed when it’s their interactions is rather slow because I have to keep checking to make sure I’m not mixing up their habits and voice patterns.

Keeping up the funny story with characters, I have one that isn’t as much fun as the previous entries.  Alucard was fairly serious and straight-laced to make him different from my more emotive characters like Clyde and Luke Callindor.  Because of this, he tended to fall into the background a lot.  This led to me being allowed to put him aside for one game session and bring Clyde in.  I believe this was an apology for my plot line getting destroyed in the previous session.  Now, this was a fully-powered, day walking Clyde and that caused a small problem.  He was his mouthy and arrogant self, which caused a confrontation with the group werewolf and the soldier.  It was getting heated and then something happened, which resulted in the cops showing up to the vampire haven.  Things were destroyed, cop cars were stolen, and Alucard was brought back immediately with nobody speaking of the incident again.  Guess the game was better off with the bland pre-Xavier character than wild and violent Clyde.

2023 Addition– I feel sorry for Xavier.  He was set up to be the biggest of the baddies in War of Nytefall.  Yet, he was constantly on the fence or overshadowed.  Nadia Sylvan actually had more villainy in her body than her husband, which I didn’t realize until I was outlining Savagery (Book 6).  Xavier was doing well in the first two books.  Then, he was kidnapped alongside Clyde and Titus in Rivalry.  This resulted in Xavier and Clyde turning towards a mutual respect, but still hating each other.  Rules for their shadowy war appeared and it didn’t have the same bite as it used to.  That wasn’t a big problem because much of the series had 3rd party villains appearing to cause trouble.  Jewelz, Leo Kandrel, Desirae Duvall, and Alastyre were the central villains for books 3-6.  That’s half the series where Xavier isn’t the central mastermind and books 2 and 7 didn’t have him in the driver’s seat much too.  What does this mean?  I really don’t know.  He was always supposed to be the polar opposite of Clyde.  He used magic instead of physical force, was a noble instead of a commoner, was colorful instead of wearing black, and restrained in emotions instead of unstable.  Maybe him being rather cowardly or unconfident is another aspect of that.  It sure makes their final battle when they’ve delivered the ultimate emotional blows rather interesting.  Would I change Xavier if I had to write the series again?  Yeah, I would definitely have him be more pro-active or at least make it clear from the start that he’s not sure about the war.  It’s hinted in later books that Nadia is the one pulling the strings, so I’d probably go that route.

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Check This Out: The Race for the Ruby Turtle

With me on the blog today is Steve Bramucci, one of my awesome VCFA comrades. He’s here to discuss his latest middle grade adventure novel, The Race …

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Check This Out: The Race for the Ruby Turtle

With me on the blog today is Steve Bramucci, one of my awesome VCFA comrades. He’s here to discuss his latest middle grade adventure novel, The Race …

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Monster Month: Kawuso

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This creature comes from Japan and it is what they call river otters.  These fall into the category of yokai, which are Japanese demons.  Known to be tricksters, they are similar in habits to kitsune (foxes) and tanuki (coming on another day).  Of course, these means they are shape-shifters.

So, what does a Kawauso look like?  It’s about a meter long and very furry.  They have webbed extremities and cute whiskers.  A decent-sized tail helps them with balance and swimming.  They have a very playful nature and make high-pitched noises that are easily identified.  Still, they can be shy at times.  In fact, they look like:

Otters

Yeah, the Kawauso normally looks like a regular otter.  At best, you may find it drinking sake (rice wine), but that is only in its human form.  They only change their shape when they go in search of alcohol or want to pull a prank.  Kawauso love their pranks, which are mischievous and rarely dangerous.  Their ability to imitate other sounds, including human voices, makes them even better at these tricks.  Although, some tales have them only able to repeat what was said to them, which gives them away.  A lot of this stems from the otter’s playful nature.

If you’re wondering why a demon would stay in the form of an otter then you’re going in the wrong direction.  A Kawauso is an otter that has grown old enough to gain magical powers.  Japanese folklore has a lot of creatures that were a normal animal or inanimate object until they reached a certain age.  They are also rather stealthy since they can quickly put out a lantern at night.  This is done to leave travelers wandering in the dark, which isn’t dangerous, but definitely scary.

The Kawauso has different stories attached to it:

  • They will turn into a young beggar wearing a straw hat in the hopes of getting alcohol.
  • They will turn into a beautiful woman to seduce men and then run away laughing after they succeed.  Other versions from the Edo period have them killing the men that they seduce.
  • Another deadly tale talks about a Kawauso in Ishikawa Prefecture that lives in the castle moat.  Again, it would transform into a woman, invite men over, and then eat them.
  • In the area of Hiroshima, they will turn into a monk and wait for travelers.  If someone approaches and looks up, they would grow in height until they were a gigantic monk towering over the person.
  • The Aomori Prefecture talks of people being possessed by Kawauso and losing their stamina.  These yokai would also transform into severed heads and get tangled in fishing nets.
  • One folktale has a monster otter (not sure if it was called a Kawauso) that turns into a human and tries to kidnap girls to make into its wife.
  • Finally, there are tales that have these creatures involved with sumo.  One version is that they trick people into doing sumo with a rock or tree.  Another has the Kawauso as a water demon that does sumo with otters.

Contrary to the list, Kawauso are rarely violent.  Most of their tales and encounters involve the pranks.  Either the young beggar trying to get alcohol or the young woman seducing men only to run away.  Putting out lanterns and calling out names at night to confuse people are fairly common too.  Lets hope that is the real story just in case one runs into a Kawauso.

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