Outlining Finesse, Part 4

By Stephen Geez This is the final installment of my 4-part Outlining Finesse series. Here are the links to the earlier installments in case you need …

Outlining Finesse, Part 4
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Poetry Day: Idea Barrage

Gomez Addams

(This is pretty easy to figure out.  I wrote it back when my imagination was a lot stronger and less controlled.  So, ideas would come to me all of the time and I’d struggle to make sure I got them written down in some form.  Kind of miss having that happen to me.  Time and stress does a number on the imagination since the brain is focused on so many other things.)

They come at me at once

A horde of thoughts and dreams

Each wanting to be heard

An evolution of an older plot

Pushing newer ones aside

Clashes of warriors

That will never meet in ink

Monsters slither from all corners

Some born of darkest magic

Others from the vilest science

I try to sort them all

Weaving order from the chaos

Pulling merging forms apart

So that they do not spoil

Only some will survive the day

As I struggle to find time and pen

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7 Tips to Making a Reboot

Hellboy

The temptation to use an existing concept for yourself can be big.  At least, it seems to be these days.  Even retellings and adaptations of public domain things might fall under this umbrella.  So, what are some things you can do if you really want to create a reboot of something that wasn’t originally yours?  Yes, I know many people will claim they have no interest and I agree.  Just roll with the post.

  1. If you must do this, research the source material and figure out what made people enjoy it.  This isn’t to make an identical copy, but to discern what earned the story its fandom.  There has to be some reason people will go to a reboot beyond it simply having the name.  Unless it’s a blatant cash grab and cry for attention.  In that case . . . Just don’t touch other people’s things.
  2. Don’t start bashing the original within the context of the reboot.  You’re trying to attract new fans while retaining the old.  Insulting those who have supported the story prior to the reboot will cause an uproar.  Guess this is a tactic for gaining free publicity and get some people to watch the movie out of spite.  Could be spite for the haters, spite for the original story, or even the chance to knowledgably declare your spite on the Internet.
  3. There’s no reason that you can’t change things around, but there could be a limit.  If you leave nothing resembling the original then you will have people wondering why you didn’t just make your own story.  The point of a reboot was supposed to be that you revive a dying, dead, or sleeper franchise.  This means you saw something in the original that you thought could work.  Changing the whole thing around and keeping only the name is going to cause confusion.
  4. Rebooting a story that did terribly gives you more flexibility.  Still, you need to have some of the original left.  Maybe the characters or the world depending on if they worked out.  Really depends on why the original failed.  If it’s an issue of overall story then you’d need a big rewrite.  If it failed due to a handful of characters that didn’t click them rework those.  A bad story is one you’re trying to repair with a reboot because you see something worth your time.
  5. Be careful about how you talk about the original.  You will have people expecting you to be a fan, which is where research can come into play.  Saying you despise it will make your reboot come off as a project of hate.  In general, audiences react better when they know the person behind the reboot loves what they are working on.  Why take on a project that involves a story you hate instead of one you love?
  6. Make a list of stuff you want to keep.  Make a list of stuff you want to get rid of.  Make a list of what you need.  Just make lists to organize your thoughts because going pantser on a pre-existing story could lead to trouble.  At least, starting off that way.
  7. Maybe just don’t do a reboot and make an original story even if you’re using public domain stuff?
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MANAGING TWO AUTHOR PROFILES

Hello everyone, it’s Robbie here today and I’m discussing the pros and cons of two author profiles. I have two completely separate author profiles: …

MANAGING TWO AUTHOR PROFILES
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Happy National Unicorn Day!

I couldn’t resist a post about unicorns since April 9th is apparently National Unicorn Day.  I’m definitely more of a griffin person, but I can appreciate an animal that comes with a built-in stabbing device.  Enjoy!

Oh, it’s also my 44th birthday, so I guess I’ll put up a few things about that too.

This one is because there is an after-school meeting on my birthday, but it’s not about me

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Welcome Sue Coletta

Sue and I have been friends for ages. She recently became one of our partners over at Story Empire. She also has a new book to tell us about. I’ve …

Welcome Sue Coletta
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The Dreaded or Beloved Reboot

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I’m sure many people are sick and tired of reboots.  You see them of movies, tv shows, comics, video games, and even books being rewritten from another perspective.  I’d like to say a reboot was something special, but I can’t remember those days.  Did those days ever exist?

They probably did when reboots were made of very old franchises that were beloved and there was a call for them to come back.  These shows managed to keep the heart and much of the lore of the original, but add some modern takes on it.  You didn’t see a mangling of the source material or a blatant attempt to push a different story under a popular name.  Sure, they could have all been cash grabs, but there was a time when it felt less obvious and there was at least some effort put into it.  Now, it’s a reboot solely to make money and hope the original fans will accept anything while new fans are drawn in.  This is part of the reason fandoms splinter these days.  No balance.

Movies seem to be where this is extremely egregious.  I recently read that they’re rebooting the ‘Naked Gun’ franchise.  Liam Neeson is going to play Frank Drebin, who was originally played by Leslie Nielson.  This is a legendary comedy movie for anyone born in the 80’s and 90’s, so it’s rough thinking that it gets a reboot.  Makes one wonder why or is it really all about money.  You can make a good argument about the creative bankruptcy of modern culture with stuff like this too.  I’d put some of the blame on audiences still buying the half-assed reboots even when complaining too.  Money talks more than words when it comes to these industries.

Perhaps one of the biggest issues with modern reboot trends is that they’re coming in fast and mediocre.  We’re already seeing reboots of franchises from barely a decade ago or even less.  This doesn’t make any sense to me.  Not enough time has passed for people to really cool off on the originals.  In fact, it seems to increase the chances of fans being upset because now the version they like could be considered obsolete.  If you wait at least 20 years, you have a better chance of the older fans being okay with a new version since the one they started on has been firmly established in history.  Then again, the people behind these things don’t really care about the current fans and seem to be more interested in having their own, personal slice of the fandom pie.

Sometimes, these reboots are hidden as prequels too.  You can tell the difference if the added stuff honors and builds on the originals or if it creates tons of plot holes for both storylines.  I’m sure people know exactly, which reboot disguised as a prequel I’m thinking of.  This tactic gets my blood boiling a bit.

The only time I think a reboot could really, really help is when it’s being done with a bad movie.  I’ve seen this suggested on forums a bunch and I agree.  A story that was good, but done poorly should have a chance at a reboot.  Fans would like to see their story get the treatment they feel it deserves and newer people will be interested.  You give new life to a story that simply had bad luck with writers, actors, directors, etc.  Of course, this could backfire if people think it’s a good idea to push the bad version out before the new one, which would turn new fans off.  I say this because I remember the newer Judge Dredd movie with Carl Urban got hurt by the Sylvester Stallone one being shown all over TV before it’s release.  Many of my friends said they weren’t going to try the new movie because they felt it would be the same.  It wasn’t and I really liked it.  Guess everything can be undone by bad decisions.

Anyway, what do other people think of reboots?  Tired of them or love them?

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Tips for Writing a Multi-Author Series – Part II

Greetings, Storytellers. Diana here again with the second post of tips for writing a Multi-Author Series. Through a set of three posts, we hope to …

Tips for Writing a Multi-Author Series – Part II
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A Fun, Little Flower Show

So, I went to a flower show at a local nursery a month ago.  Held off on putting the pictures up in case they added more and gave me a reason to go back.  Kind of fun with a scavenger hunt that I inadvertently did before seeing the form.  My son was okay with it, but the display wasn’t huge.  Took maybe 15 minutes of walking around to see it all.  Kind of crowded with a lot of kids getting into the flowers too.  Got plenty of pictures, so I’ll post my favorite one and the rest will be in the slideshow to save on space:

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Goal Post: Heading Into a Pre-Birthday Weekend

This was a crazy week even though I only had 4 day so work.  Don’t even know where to start, but I’ll do my best.

Parenting

I only had my son on Monday in regards to the Easter break.  It was really cold, so we didn’t get a lot of Pokemon Go in.  Bunch of homework too.  The rest of the week was kind of the same.  He went on a field trip to see ‘Hamilton’ on Broadway, which he says was fun even though it was pouring.  Got to take a boat around the harbor too.  Beyond that, he had a lot of tests and assignments.  Most of it happened after my time with him and now I have him for the weekend.  Pokemon Go and a birthday brunch is all I’ve really got planned now.  (Birthday is next week.)

Work

Lots of stuff was going on, including an earthquake on Friday that I didn’t feel.  The rest was fairly normal for what goes on in for me.  Biggest change was that our Life Skills students started Unified Basketball.  This is a team with Gen Ed and Special Ed students playing.  I’m helping with the practices by being TA support for the special education students.  Not an easy gig since they spread out through the gym to do different things, so I have to run among them at times.  I’m with another TA and one of the coaches helps, but I’m on the move a lot.  They’re all having fun, which is the important part.  Looking forward to the games, which start later this month.

Writing/Editing

For those who only care about this, I don’t have much to report.  I didn’t edit as much as I had hoped last weekend, but it wasn’t too bad.  Had to stop halfway through chapter 9 of Darwin & the Halfling Hunt.  That leaves 9.5 to go and I’m hoping to tackle that half this weekend.  Not sure if that’s possible since I have my son and we want to do a bunch with the decent weather.  Won’t panic too much since I think I can still get this book done before a father/son road trip at the end of the month.  Aiming to print Darwin & the Angry Elf in time for that.  Gives me something to work on while my son does some art during our downtimes.  If not, I’ll go back to working ‘Phi Beta Files’.  Wish I had more writing time in general, but this year hasn’t been friendly towards my imagination.

Future

We have the solar eclipse on Monday, which my son gets out of school early for.  I’m out regular time, but will get home for it.  Hoping to do some Pokemon Go after homework and the eclipse.  Then, we have my birthday on Tuesday, which won’t be a really big event since we’re doing a family thing this weekend.  Wednesday is off for Eid, so my son and I will get to do a little extra Pokemon Go.  Gives me time to get my car checked out for the trip too.  After that, it’s just work and editing with some biking thrown in.  At least, that’s the overview.

I keep thinking there’s more going on, but probably not.  I’m really just pushing ahead to make it to Spring Break.  Watching ‘Brooklyn Nine Nine’ is the excitement.  Really think I’m forgetting something beyond work, parenting, eclipse, and basketball practice.  I get the feeling that this entire year is going to be a brutal slog to the end where I don’t produce anything new.  Editing will be it.  Maybe I’ll get lucky and finish all of that over the summer then dive into writing Darwin & the Joy Path in September.  It’s entirely possible.

Goals of the week?

  1. Celebrate birthday . . . Meh.
  2. Parenting.
  3. Working.
  4. Sleeping.
  5. Biking.
  6. Crying at times.
  7. Maybe some puzzle work.
  8. Work on May blog posts.
  9. Do absolutely nothing unique and special because I barely have the time to decompress much less enjoy life.
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