Family of the Tri-Rune Blog Tour Day 3

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Here are today’s volunteers for the Family of the Tri-Rune blog tour!

First, we have the great blogger behind the L. Palmer Chronicles.  Reviews, whimsical thoughts, and a wide variety of post types can be found here.  Just proof that there is a very creative mind behind the words.

Thank you to Laura Palmer!

The second volunteer is another author whose latest book can be found by clicking on the picture below.  Sue Vincent of the Daily Echo is always a pleasure to interact with and following her blog can give you a good ‘pick up’ for your day.  Simply a positive force who is always there to support other authors and bloggers.

Thank you to Sue Vincent!

Giants Dance: Rhyme and Reason by Sue Vincent

Giants Dance: Rhyme and Reason by Sue Vincent & Stuart France

It began with a walk over the bracken covered hillsides of Derbyshire to a lonely stone circle, almost forgotten. It was just a walk…until the hawk flew from the tree and once again the visions began.
Plunged into a realm beyond reality, further than history, deeper than time, Don and Wen begin to unravel the hidden messages hidden in plain sight, concealed by habit and acceptance, and extraordinary magic framed within the small things of ordinary life.
Follow a journey across the Heart of Albion and become an Initiate of the mysterious verity of verse.
Illustrated in Full Colour throughout.

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The Mentor aka Guy with White Facial Hair

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It does seem like the majority of mentors are old guys with white facial hair or no hair at all.  There are a few that don’t fit that description like Halt from Ranger’s Apprentice and Phil from Disney’s Hercules.  You have a few women too like Professor McGonagall, but there is a severe lack of female mentors in literature.  So, why is it typically the old man that is either wise or strange?

The Mentor is one of the oldest character archetypes in existence.  You see them in mythology alongside the main heroes.  In fact, I think the term comes from a Greek myth character named Mentor.  He was a caretaker of Odysseus’s son Telemachus and Athena took his form to convince the kid to fight his mother’s suitors.  He’s actually the old guy in the top left picture above.  Anyway, this is how it started and it’s changed very little over the years.

The point of a Mentor is to impart wisdom and skills to the hero before either being left behind or killed.  For example, Obi Wan taught Luke Skywalker the ways of the Force before dying.  Then Yoda did a better job of it.  So, you can go from one mentor to another in some stories.  This isn’t unheard of and makes sense because in real life, we need more than one teacher for a variety of skills and better depth.  This requires that your Mentor be experienced, which where the old age comes from.  It’s hard to believe that a Mentor will be a character who is only 5 years older than the hero.

I’m circling the big issue here, which is female Mentors.  Again, there aren’t many of them and most are rather modern.  Part of the reason might be because the Mentor concept stemmed from the wise advisor to the ‘hero’.  It’s really only recently that female characters are being drawn out of the damsel in distress.  Yet, they always seem to be anomalies and trained by a guy.  Looking at my bookshelf, I see very little with female heroes and mentors.  The closest thing I see from where I sit is Buffy, but she had Rupert Giles as a mentor.  I hate to say it, but the Mentor is a role that women have yet to crack into.  Personally, I really hope they do it in a way that isn’t a simple gender-switch of the old male mentor.

So, what do people think of the Mentor role that appears in stories, especially fantasy?  Any opinions on the miniscule amount of female Mentor roles?  Am I opening a can of worms that I’ll regret?

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Quest of the Broken-Hearted Part 2

First, I’m not going to do any real spoilers here.  I’m also going to remind people that this is a possibility and it’s turning out to be the one that needs some prep work if I’m going to use it.  Still not even hinting of how the whole thing comes about.

So, I’ve been working on the outline for Book 8, which has been a little rough because the team gets split up.  I’m being careful with placement to make sure characters aren’t left alone for too long.  Not easy and making it that a few chapters will turn out like short stories.  My brain has needed a rest from the chaos and it’s seemed to latch onto the idea of a Kira Grasdon solo story.  Again, this is if she survives all of her trials and doesn’t get the happy ending.

Anyway, the original plan has kind of changed, which shows how fluid ideas are until you get them on paper.  Various details of the opening life and the ending have changed as I analyze the Kira that exists at the end of Book 7.  That sounds rather ominous.  The challenge I’m finding is to give her a sense of ‘broken’ while keeping her compassionate.  It shouldn’t be too hard, but I’m placing her in a dark place where she’s either going to rise above it or revel in it.  This is really about rising from the ashes.

Again, that’s if she makes it out of the current series and has a reason to go.  I spent part of yesterday making a backup character in case Kira gets the good ending because it wouldn’t be right to take that away from her.  The backup character I might slip into a later book of Legends of Windemere as a teaser or maybe he/she is already around.  Lacarsis tends to attract the foolhardy adventurer and those who want to go out with a bang.  It’s a city of monsters that nobody gets out of alive.  It’s already been mentioned in Beginning of a Hero, but people don’t talk about it much.  Ignore it, stay away from it, and maybe it will leave you alone.  Did I mention the city moves around?  This is going to be a fun place to explore when I’m done with it even if it’s with the new character.

Anyway, this is a big addition to the project list and one that I can probably finish in a day or two once Book 8 is outlined.  Next week will be the other projects.  Also, I’ll be doing the Blog Tour Thanks posts later in the day.  This way I make sure people see it and it isn’t lost in the email or reader shuffle.

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Blog tour volunteers wanted

Pamela Beckford's avatarPoetry by Pamela

Kirsten and I would like to do a short blog tour for our Voices of Nature poetry book. If you would be willing to post a file that we provide you one day the week of April 21, please leave a comment below.

We really appreciate our friends helping spread the word on our book.

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Benefits of Using a School Setting

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Ever find it strange when a character seems to instinctively know how to do things?  It can really throw a reader off because it comes off as the author desperately getting out of a jam.  That coincidental knowledge can be helpful if done correctly, but it’s not often the case.  As an author, you can only get away with it so many times and so early in a series before it’s useless.  This is very important in Fantasy because skills and knowledge define characters in these societies where one assumes the average citizen is uneducated.  Many quests tend to require combat training and some level of lore knowledge too.  So, what does one do in regards to education and how can it be utilized in a character?

First, let’s get one thing out of the way.  It’s very difficult to work a main character who can’t read, write, or speak.  You can go with bizarre slang or sloppy penmanship or only a vague idea of symbols, but removing any of these three to show ‘low education’ is something you have to think about.  In college, I remember a person wrote a story where the main character was an illiterate barbarian.  Yet, he was still able to read city names on a map and road signs because the author forgot that these would be difficult if not impossible for such a hero.  Communication is essential in a story, so these three regions are crucial and should be treated like one of the 5 senses if removed.

The biggest focus of a character’s education and schooling should be making it helpful to their ‘goal’.  Why would the master swordsman be learning flower arrangement?  It could be a quirk, but then you only mention it in passing.  There shouldn’t be an entire chapter dedicated to the class.  In fantasy, you really need to focus on the useful information and skills that a character learns.  This is more for if part of the story takes place in the school setting.  If it is outside of this location then you have to establish rather quickly that this character has been trained.  For example, Luke Callindor mentions previous training within his first appearance.  So, when he shows prowess in combat and tracking, it isn’t out of nowhere.  Yet, he isn’t perfect, which gives him room for growth and that’s very important for a pre-trained character.

Buffy Cast

Buffy Cast

Now, there is an aspect of education that I’ve seen some fellow authors and readers overlook.  School is more about what you learn.  It’s about who you meet.  Best friends, rivals, bullies, confidants, boyfriends, girlfriends, exes, and the list keeps going for a while.  Buffy the Vampire Slayer is a great example of this.  You see several characters in the main, supporting, and single episode cast that fits into a social group.  One of my favorite episodes involves a girl who nobody ever paid attention to, so she becomes invisible.  Also, the hyena pack one that I thought really captured the concept of teenagers functioning in such a mentality.  The entire point here is that your hero should take connections out of a school setting.  If he or she doesn’t then they are either anti-social, mean, or the author missed a golden opportunity.

Overall, I think you can get a lot out of a school setting.  Skills, character development, knowledge, flushing out various cultures, rivalries, allies, and whatever else you can find there in real life.

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Voices of Nature Review

Voices of Nature by Pamela Beckford and Kirsten A

Voices of Nature by Pamela Beckford and Kirsten A

Pamela Beckford of Poetry by Pamela and Year Round Thanksgiving has put together a new poetry book and she’s not alone.  Kirsten A of Kirsten Uninterrupted is in on this project too. This is Pamela’s second time into publishing and Kirsten’s first, so give them some love and support because it’s scary out there.

Since Pamela is part of the Family of the Tri-Rune blog tour, I’m doing my thank you with a review.  Read the book last night and worth every cent:

The sheer variety of styles in this poetry book is amazing.  Haiku, triple haiku, acrostic, rondeau, and so many others.  Even better is that they explain the poems in the back, which is a great service to the curious reader.

Each poem is clear and paints a perfect picture of nature.  Though, I have an odd feeling that both poets were tired of winter since that had the most amount of poems out of the season sections.  It’s hard to pick a favorite, but I did love the ‘Thunder and Lightning’ acrostic for the imagery and ‘New Day’ for the complicated style and bringing an odd sense of serene closure to the book.

I would highly recommend this poetry book.  Even if you’re not into poetry, the pieces for every season will probably have you going ‘I thought the same thing.’

Click Here for Voices of Nature!

And don’t forget Pamela’s first poetry book: Dreams of Love!

Dreams of Love by Pamela Beckford

Dreams of Love by Pamela Beckford

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Family of the Tri-Rune Day 2 (Part 1)

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Capybara

First of today’s volunteers is a book-lover and secret poet.  A mysterious man with no discernible pattern, so it’s best to follow his blog and await the surprise.  Will it be a review?  Maybe a poem?  Considering his tag line is ‘Life, Literature, and Lewd Comments’ you never know what you’ll get.

Thank You to Julian Froment!

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Family of the Tri-Rune Blog Tour Day 1

Crashing Back Down by Kristen Hope Mazzola

Crashing Back Down by Kristen Hope Mazzola

The first volunteer of the Legends of Windemere: Family of the Tri-Rune blog tour is a great romance author.  She is incredibly supportive of other indie authors through her blog Just One Indie’s Opinion.  Click on the picture for her Goodreads Page and show her some support.

Thank You to Kristen Hope Mazzola

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5 ARC Copies of BEYOND EVENTIDE: BOUND Up for Grabs

Free ARC copies of Beyond Eventide. Hurry!

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BEYOND EVENTIDE: BOUND (The House of Crimson and Clover Book 2.5), follow-up to THE ILLUSIONS of EVENTIDE, is coming in April! I have offered a limited number of ARC/review copies to readers who meet certain criteria. I currently have FIVE left, so if you meet the criteria (listed in the sign-up), and are interested, feel free to sign-up here: https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1nIR-VdE-QO3zZXL21cFGksJGNsN8KilbMHgCAbCc8Kc/viewform

BEYOND EVENTIDE: BOUND on Goodreads

Finnegan St. Andrews has lost everything. His perspective on the world is forever changed. 

Anasofiya Deschanel no longer knows who she is…or what. She longs both for what she has, and all she has left behind.

Aidrik the Wise has vowed to do anything for his evigbond. As he watches her life force slowly ebb, he begins to understand the sacrifice he must make to save her.

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Future of the Blog (Brewing Rant)

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Me

This is an off-the-cuff post after rearranging a few of the posts on Education in Fiction.  The poem was too preachy anyway.  So the reason for this is that I’ve been doing some thinking the last few days.  I’ve run into a snag with this blog and its initial purpose.  I didn’t realize this would be an issue, but it comes with writing a series.

This blog was originally created for me to discuss writing and the Legends of Windemere series.  The first part still holds, but the second part has an issue.  The dreaded ‘Spoilers’ make it impossible for me to talk about what I’m writing.  My post about ‘Quest of the Broken-Hearted’ is proof of that because of the backlash I got.  Keep in mind this was a possibility and it’s already changing a bit from what I originally planned.  In fact, the title can be for a Luke, Sari, or Kira book if I go with certain situations.  Yet, I feel like any posts I make where I mention Windemere get passed over.  That’s a bulk of what I write about and this includes future series.  If I can’t talk about it beyond ‘Coming in a Few Days’ promos then I’m not really sure what to do here.

Here’s another issue that I’ve seen since the infamous Saturday post and some people might get annoyed: I can’t even post teasers.  If you know at least 1 of 3 characters will die then that’s not really a spoiler.  It’s what you would hear in a ‘Next Episode’ thing and authors hint at characters dying or something big happening all the time.  Taking the information from Saturday the ONLY thing you can know for sure is that someone will die.  In fact, it’s even mentioned in one of the books that Gabriel has planned for at least 1 person to die in the final battle and he’s not telling.  This adds suspense to the reader because you have no idea the who or the how, which are the important parts.  I can rattle off so many scenarios for each character dying in the final battle.  There are big events that I keep secret, but I would like to rely on teasers to stir up interest.

Right now I’m leaning toward continuing with these types of posts and putting ‘Spoiler Warning’ in the title even if they’re teasers.  It means less traffic and feedback, but the alternative is to keep my mouth shut.  I won’t do the Character Interviews or Sneak Peeks any more because I had too many complaints.  In fact, I sometimes had nothing but complaints.  The truth is that I would love to share what I have planned for my books and if you’ve read any of my books you know that even if I give you a basic idea of the plot, you’ll still be surprised.

Anyway, this was my rant and needed to get it off my chest.

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