Elements in Fiction

Ultimate Fantastic Four

Ultimate Fantastic Four

It actually took me years to realize that the Fantastic Four were based on the four elements.  In my defense, I was into Spider-Man and the X-Men, so I barely paid attention to the FF unless they made a cameo.  This got me thinking long ago about elements being used as a power base.  I do it a lot with some characters (Nyx/fire) more obvious than others (Timoran/earth).  There are various elemental systems too like the Godai (5 elements of Japan) and the Wu Xing (5 elements of China).  I’m going to pay more attention to the 4 element system that I tend to use.  Feel free to tell more about the others or mention different groups in the comments.

One issue with using elements is that it’s been done a lot.  Fantastic Four, Captain Planet, Avatar: The Last Airbender, mythological beings, etc.  It’s a tradition/cliche/trope in fantasy and this typically makes up the basis of most magic systems.  You’ll notice that the majority of spells are fire, lightning, ice, and wind.  I think part of the reason for this is because pure energy blasts can only be so varied.  Nyx fires a blue beam and Trinity fires a purple beam?  Doesn’t really make a big difference or an exciting fight.  Nyx coming in with giant fists of fire while Trinity kicks to unleash a wave of tornado-level winds is a lot more exciting.  So you have the elements as a power base, which still has plenty of variation.  After all, Mr. Fantastic is ‘water’ in the way that he moves and shifts.  The connection is more for the author to get a handle of a character’s abilities than for the reader to know exactly what the connection is.

Even if you don’t go with exact powers, you can use elements to help explain or plan a character’s personality.  Flighty or easygoing can be air-based.  Defiant or temperamental could be fire-based.  Stubborn for earth and fluid-minded for water.  That’s just a base to be used, so I wouldn’t recommend sticking solely to that trait.  Jump off that to evolve your character into a more well-rounded person.  Take in a little stoic earth to temper the fiery hero or have them become easygoing water in certain situations.  It’s a lot of mind and term stretching here.  Again this is more for the author side of the coin.  Readers may jump to their own conclusions or simply not care if their favorite character is connected to wind or water.  Most people start singing the Captain Planet theme anyway.

I’ve heard a lot of people call the use of elements as cliche and they try to avoid it.  Yet I’m sure they factor in such things without thinking.  Going beyond the characters, you have environments that assimilate the elements to come to life.  You might not be paying attention specifically to that aspect of the world, but you it is there.  Each area has a different balance of the elements even in the real world.  Why do you think they’ve been acknowledged and used since ancient times?  This goes for monsters too, but not every genre has those.

Maybe I’ll put together a list post for Monday since this is a fun topic.  For now, I’ll simply open the floor to the audience.  What do you think of using elements in stories?  Have you ever done it before?  Do you think you’ve done it unintentionally?

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Guest Post by Charles E. Yallowitz: What I’ve Learned

A fun and, hopefully, informative guest post of mine. Aiming more for fun than anything else.

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You probably remember author Charles E. Yallowitz, who’s become a regular visitor to this blog and fast friend. He graciously agreed to a guest post on the things he has learned since self-publishing his first book of his Legends of Windemere series. Take it, Charles!

Stuff I’ve learned since publishing my first book

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So, Nicholas and I were talking a while back and I said something that caught his attention. It was a simple comment about stuff I learned since I published my first book of Legends of Windemere back in February of 2013.

I’m gearing up for the 7th book of the series, Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue, and Nicholas suggested I write about what I’ve learned over the last two years — that happen to feel like a decade.

Though I’ve learned a lot…

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Kickstarter Help! Sidekicks Issues #2-4

A friend of mine is running a Kickstarter to help publish the next 3 books in his comic series.

ABOUT SIDEKICKS

In a world where Super-Heroes are celebrities, egos rampage out of control. Five of Chicago’s most dependable Sidekicks are faced with the reality that despite their dedication, they will invariably be disrespected by the Heroes they work with and the citizens they protect. Taken for granted by society and ignored by the media, how much can the Sidekicks endure before they decide they’ve had enough?

Sidekicks #1 Cover by Miguel Mendonça

Sidekicks #1 Cover by Miguel Mendonça

I also received the following message from my friend:

I’m also running a special promotion. If we can reach $6000 by 11:59 PM EST on Sunday, March 22, then one random backer will win a page of original art from Issue #1.

This is a really fun and ingenious idea, so every little bit helps.  Even spreading the word will be appreciated.

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Sidekicks #1 - Page 11

Sidekicks #1 – Page 11

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Reminder and Call for Volunteers

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Yola Biggs by Kayla Matt

WINDEMERE TWUBS CHAT ON SATURDAY, MARCH 21 8-11 PM EST.
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There we go.  That gets the reminder out of the way.

Now for the volunteer part.  I’m going to be releasing LEGENDS OF WINDEMERE: SLEEPER OF THE WILDWOOD FUGUE in a few weeks.  So I’m preparing for a Cover Reveal to be done soon after I get the finished cover.  All I can say about what’s coming is: Bor’daruk.  Really that’s all I know because Jason is working hard on a lot of a projects and that’s what he asked for information on.  So I’ll be finding out maybe a day or two before everyone else.

Anyway, I’m hoping to get some volunteers to assist with the Cover Reveal.  I don’t have a date for it because I don’t know the exact date of delivery.  So it might be another ‘send the day before I do it’.  As usual, I’m fine with somebody posting the cover reveal a day or two late.  So don’t let the tight timetable scare you off.  Really that will only be the earliest day it can be posted.  Not saying you should wait until 2017 to do it when the final book of the series is coming out.  But this is just an easygoing thing.

So, let me know if you’re interested in lending a hand and I’ll put your email on the list.  Thanks in advance.

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Sari by Kayla Matt

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Guest Post – Wendy Janes – Musings on proofreading fiction and non-fiction

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Cover Reveal: Minutes Before Sunset by Shannon A. Thompson

Minutes Before Sunset by Shannon A. Thompson

Minutes Before Sunset by Shannon A. Thompson

Minutes Before Sunset, book 1 of The Timely Death Trilogy

Awarded Goodreads’ Book of the Month in July 2012

Releases July 28, 2015 – Second edition by Clean Teen Publishing, new cover and new interior!

Current Rating on Goodreads: 146 ratings, 4.3 stars

Summary:

Two destines. One death.

“Her kiss could kill us, and my consent signed our death certificates.”

Eric Welborn isn’t completely human, but he isn’t the only shade in the small Midwest town of Hayworth. With one year left before his eighteenth birthday, Eric is destined to win a long-raging war for his kind. But then she happens. In the middle of the night, Eric meets a nameless shade, and she’s powerful—too powerful—and his beliefs are altered. The Dark has lied to him, and he’s determined to figure out exactly what lies were told, even if the secrets protect his survival.

Jessica Taylor moves to Hayworth, and her only goal is to find more information on her deceased biological family. Her adoptive parents agree to help on one condition: perfect grades. And Jessica is distraught when she’s assigned as Eric’s class partner. He won’t help, let alone talk to her, but she’s determined to change him—even if it means revealing everything he’s strived to hide.

Join the Dark:

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Reviews:

  • “A magical, if slightly dark, tale.” – The Reader’s Review
  • “Wonderfully unnerving.” – Coffee Shop Reader
  • “This is a story of forbidden love, hidden love, and a war of love.” – Endless Reading
  • “This book was brilliant, original and romantic. This is a timeless love story with incredible character growth, action and twists of fate.” – Note to Selph Book Reviews
  • “Miss. Thompson twisted the concept of Light and Dark, reversing the well-known roles, changing the time-old dance and making it her own. Brilliant and true, “Minutes Before Sunset” is thought-provoking, bringing real-life lessons and morals from a world of the supernatural.” – Live. Laugh. Read
Shannon A. Thompson

Shannon A. Thompson

About the Author:

Shannon A. Thompson is a 23-year-old author, avid reader, and habitual chatterbox. She was merely 16 when she was first published, and a lot has happened since then. Thompson’s work has appeared in numerous poetry collections and anthologies, and her first installment of The Timely Death Trilogy became Goodreads Book of the Month. She is currently represented by Clean Teen Publishing, and Minutes Before Sunset releases on July 28, 2015.

As a novelist, poet, and blogger, Thompson spends her free time writing and sharing ideas with her black cat named after her favorite actor, Humphrey Bogart. Between writing and befriending cats, she graduated from the University of Kansas with a bachelor’s degree in English, and she travels whenever the road calls her.

Visit her blog for writers and readers at www.ShannonAThompson.com.

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Throwback Post- Present Vs. Past Tense: A Curious History

Originally posted on April 10, 2013.  This has been unaltered.  In fact, I didn’t even re-read it, so I’m going to keep myself in the dark.  (I did notice that it ends with me talking about my 4th book. You can ignore that.)

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I’m sure people are sick of me talking about this, but I’ve been discussing this topic with a few friends since my last outburst.  Now, I’ve found that some of my friends who read my book and support me are still against the present tense usage.  It’s uncomfortable, confusing, difficult, blah blah blah blah.  I’m going to say here that this thought post isn’t going to be a bash.  At least I hope not.  It’s just some things I figured out during my musings. This is all observation and thoughts from a person who loves puzzles and mysteries.

I was told that past tense has been the standard since the time of cavemen, which I originally rolled my eyes at.  Then, I realized that this is right, but it isn’t because past tense is better.  It’s because the first things written were history and religion (or what we call mythology today).  The invention of fiction is definitely more recent compared to non-fiction, so it’s no wonder that fiction began as past tense.  Look at Homer’s Iliad and The Odyssey.  They are written to inform about ‘actual’ events that included gods getting involved.  At the time, the people who could read only knew historical stories, so original fiction had to fit that mold.  So, past tense was set as the standard.

As time went on, fiction became more outlandish and was no longer being confused for events that actually happened.  It’s the natural evolution of the beast because it’s starting to drop the pretense of being ‘history’.  This began with the inclusion of magic and an open admittance that these things never really happened.  So begins the reader having to suspend disbelief to get through a story.  Maybe we’re at the next stage where present tense begins to get used and forces an even bigger suspension of disbelief or even a mental allowance to be absorbed into the story.  This isn’t to say that present tense will replace past tense, but will find it’s own niche and prove to be just another way to read.

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Yesterday, I heard an interesting story that got me thinking about why so many people are against present tense.  I’ve stated that Hunger Games are written in present tense.  Well, my friend and his wife listened to the audiobook and loved it.  They never read the actual book.  They decided to read my book and she stated that there was something off and then realized the present tense.  She didn’t like it while my friend, who has been reading my work since high school, said ‘That’s just how Charlie writes’.  Interesting.

This makes me think that we are used to hearing in present tense, but reading in past tense.  We are conditioned to read in past tense, but it’s such a fragile conditioning.  If a person spends time enjoying mediums that involve present tense (comics, movies, television) then it might actually create the ability to read present tense without having a problem.  The previous example demonstrates that my friend doesn’t even realize when he’s reading present tense because I’ve been subjecting it to him for years.  Another friend has read so many comics and books of various tenses that he didn’t even stumble when reading Hunger Games or my book.  My wife is another example of someone who has been submerged in my present tense world and no longer notices the difference.  Funny thing here is that getting used to reading present tense doesn’t take away from the ability to read past tense and once your mind gets used to present tense, the comfort doesn’t diminish.

I’m sure at some point, a few people said ‘I’m too smart to be conditioned’.  Well, I have some bad news for you.  You’re human and all humans can be conditioned. From the idiot that licks a power transformer to Pavlov, humans can be trained even when they don’t realize it.  Don’t believe me?  Go for a drive down a main road.  I’ll wait for you to come back.  *leans back and twiddles thumbs*  Back?  So, did you stop on red and go on green?  Didn’t take more than color recognition.  You certainly didn’t have to think about what to do.  Small things that we do in our lives result from conditioning.  Soup is eaten with a spoon and not a fork.  Word recognition.  Parents reacting to their child crying.  Hell, my dad had me trained to react to a bell to come downstairs for dinner.  I still jump or yell ‘What!?’ when that specific bell tone is heard.  We are trained for so many things in our lives and how we read is one of those things that we don’t even realize we’re being Pavlov-ed about.  After all, the classics we read in school and most of the books we grab for casual reading are past tense.

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My point of all this: Past tense and present tense does not make a book.  One is not better than the other and shouldn’t take away from the story.  It may take time to get used to the rising style of present tense, but maybe it’s for the best.  After all, if you can get yourself used to a new writing style then doesn’t that open a bigger world of books to you?

There got all that off my chest.  Now to get back to my editing and pray I can still finish book 4 by the end of the week.

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Cold Coffee Cafe – A Cafe for Authors and Avid Readers

So I just joined a new author site for free.  It’s called Cold Coffee Cafe and it’s a social media sight for authors.  I’m still exploring when I’m not writing/editing/faking sleep, but it is a very large site.  Feel free to wander around.  I haven’t checked any of the paid services yet, which have reviews and some promotional options.  Possibly try those out with my next book once it goes live.

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Three Ghosts is now on sale!

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What do you do when the decisions you’ve made come back to haunt you? How do you make them right? Can you, when one wrong move will mean lives lost?

Deirdre O’Brien, an American political-activist living in Dublin, married the wrong man – and had to kill him to save the lives of thousands. Fifteen years later, he’s back from the dead, with a horrific plan to destroy the tenuous peace between Belfast, Dublin and London. To stop him, Dee will throw herself at a seedy underworld, where nothing is what it seems, and trust is a commodity too short in supply.

She only has three days – three days, and three ghosts. She will confront them, or risk becoming one herself.

The Race is On!

I first presented Three Ghosts as a serialized short story here at the blog, but as the story…

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Sticky Post: Twubs Chat on Saturday March 21st 8-11 PM EST

The Title Says It All!

Join me at any point during the 8-11 PM EST period and have some fun.  Chat about writing, ask me about the books, ask my characters any questions, and just have some fun on Twitter.

Instructions will be posted Saturday, so keep an eye out.  It’s really easy and keep an eye out for the #windemerespeaks hashtag.

Hope to see people there!

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