Cover Art Teaser for ‘Tribe of the Snow Tiger’

The title really says it all.  Hoping to get the book out around June 1st.  It’s on a Wednesday, which might be a tough debut day.  Feel free to volunteer for the ‘Book is Live’ post.  Also give an opinion on the best day of the week to put out a new book because I’m scratching my head while leaning toward a Friday.

Anyway, here’s the teaser, which is more of a progress report:

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Tuesday Teaser: Fun in Bedlam (Crossing Bedlam Available for #99cents)

Not too long ago, I wrote and published a story called Crossing Bedlam.  Well, here is an excerpt from that and a reminder that you can grab the whole story for 99 cents.  Just click on the cover below.

Crossing Bedlam by Jon Hunsinger

Crossing Bedlam by Jon Hunsinger

“We don’t mean you any harm! Seriously, we come in peace!” Lloyd announces over the megaphone from the zoo parking lot. Standing on top of a truck cab, he continues shouting while waving his paintball gun in the air. “Again, I have been asked to put your minds at ease. Please come to the front of the zoo, preferably on a rooftop, and listen to what I have to say. Best that you leave the guns behind because they can be a distraction. So, where was I? That’s right. We come in peace and don’t mean you any harm! Scouts honor. Though not the kind you’re thinking of. More of the kind that transforms with twirling and comes from space. They didn’t have many cartoon choices in Rikers.”

With dawn having only recently broken, most of the Guardians are groggy and confused thanks to the rude awakening. Those who were on the night watch are more aware of the situation, but remain quiet and quietly go back to their tents. As far as they are concerned, Lloyd is a harmless man with a megaphone that wants nothing more than attention. Nobody knows where Amur is hiding or if he knows about the disruption, his tigers having been roaring since the obnoxious noise began. Due to Lloyd firing paintballs around their feet, the animals that spent the night in the parking lot have run back into the zoo. The only living thing that he has managed to hit is one of the guards, the woman succumbing to the itching powder and ipecac combination within minutes.

The Guardians are beginning to lose interest in Lloyd when the roaring of an engine erupts from the eastern side of the zoo. Monkeys screech from their island while the remaining rhino charges toward the zebras and giraffes. Birds fill the sky as the reinforced fence is taken down by a heavily armored van. A pack of motorcycles and sports cars follow the larger vehicle through the wreckage, all of them honking horns to scare animals out of their path. Bullets ping off metal as the Guardians scramble to defend their territory, but they only manage to take down one of the bikers down before the invaders split into smaller groups. None of the defenders are sure what to do without their leader and they are not entirely dedicated to killing the Metal Minstrels. As the vehicles move further into the zoo, the gunshots become fewer and only one other gang member is struck through her car’s windshield. It is only a shoulder wound, which one of her passengers tends to with a bandana while the others continue firing into the air.

Moving without an escort, the van careens toward the entrance pavilion with the intention of bringing Lloyd into the fight. Tyler clambers onto the roof of the vehicle, knocking on the driver’s side window to let Rose know he is in position. The gang leader leaps onto the pavilion and rolls to avoid slipping into the falling rubble created by the van smashing through the structure. Four of the guards remain at their posts and are slow to react, only one of them fully clothed and ready for a fight. Tyler shoulder rushes the slowest of the Guardians and knocks the woman off the roof before she can react to his presence. The agile man whirls around to slam the butt of his shotgun into the face of another enemy, who crumples into a groaning heap. Cocking the weapon, Tyler hopes the noise scares off the other two enemies, but one of them raises their rifle. The boom of the pink shotgun echoes across the zoo and the blast has enough force to send the dead man toppling into the wreckage. The final Guardian drops his weapon and attempts to retreat, but the van returns to collapse the pavilion section his is standing on. Tyler leaps back onto the vehicle while the entire building crashes to the ground, those inside or on top trapped in the ruins.

“That was awesome!” Lloyd shouts while he hangs out of the sliding door.

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My Permafree Experience: a Guest Post by M T McGuire

If you read the cool comments under my posts, you may remember a dialogue I had with author M T McGuire, where I offered her a guest post spot if she’d share her experience making her book, F…

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Five Star Treatment – Conflicted Hearts – Memoir – D.G. Kaye – FREE

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Heroes Divided: The Headaches of Diverging Plot Lines

Scooby and Shaggy

Scooby and Shaggy

In Tribe of the Snow Tiger, the champions are divided into two groups.  One goes with Timoran to his homeland and a smaller one goes to the southern jungle.  Anyone who finished reading The Mercenary Prince knows the situation.  Needless to say, it’s a bit of a mess and headache . . . for the author.

I’ve had to do balancing acts between characters before, but this one was a bit different.  The smaller adventure will lead into events for Book 11 instead of closing up with the main story.  Not the nicest thing to do to readers, but it was the only way to get both stories told without squishing and rushing.  There was always a question about if I should hamper one tale to salvage the other or injure both.  A ridiculous question that I thankfully answered with none of the above. I had to develop a few tricks that might come in handy for other authors that find themselves in a similar situation.

  1. Choose one of the stories to be the focal point.  This one will take the lion’s share of the book while the other is used for a ‘break’.  It helps to make this decision before writing or you risk blurring the two stories.  Yes, that is very much a plotter/planner concept, but it’s really just a ‘this is the real tale’.  Keep in mind that this is only when the two stories won’t intersect until the very, very end.
  2. The smaller story can be used to create tension in the main story and portray time passing.  For example, you have a chapter of the big story end with a badly wounded hero trying to limp to a healer.  Then you have a chapter of the smaller tale show what the other heroes are doing.  It allows you to return to the injured character after they’ve mostly recovered or woken up from the injury.  You also leave the smaller story with tension, so it’s a lot like a ping pong game.
  3. While the bigger story has plenty of time to move along, the smaller one will probably need to be condensed.  If you switch tales every chapter then you run the risk of hampering the flow of both.  By having the smaller one come up every couple of chapters, you maintain the flow of both.  One thing that helps is to have the smaller story chapters have a beginning, middle, pseudo-end each time.  They have an obstacle and get over it to the next one at a realistic, but faster rate than those in the main story who have more time.
  4. Have the heroes mention each other even if they aren’t together.  With some stories, you can have them talk, but you don’t need to make it this obvious.  Simply revealing that they are concerned about each other can go a long way.  It retains the idea that things will come together again and the heroes aren’t separated forever.
  5. Keep in mind that the smaller tale can end on a cliffhanger because it will lead to something bigger.  While the main story is the one that you’re pushing to full closure, the smaller one doesn’t need to go that far.  Part of it is to lead into another big adventure for the heroes.

Now, I know this is a dangerous thing to do because there is a current hatred toward cliffhangers.  Seems a lot of people don’t want to be left in suspense when it comes to stories.  At least a vocal minority.  That’s the risk an author has to take in a series when facing a situation like this.  The alternative is to cripple one tale and clog the other or simply leave out the smaller story entirely.  Personally, I’d find that second option to be awkward when you reach the events the smaller one was aiming for.  You have to explain everything that happened off-camera, which can result in info dumps.  In the end, a risk will be taken no matter what.  Guess all I can really do is brace myself and hope the adventures are gripping.

I did really enjoy creating the Judges.

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Goals, Life, & Too Tired or Lazy to Make a Witty Title

Yesterday was a big family day in that I had to go to New Jersey for a birthday party and then it was back to New York for more family time.  Needless to say, I’m exhausted, which seems to work since this was the last big family event for a while.  April and May are peppered with birthdays, so getting a new project done is rarely possible.  I didn’t even try, which isn’t entirely true.  I was going to start Book 14 in May and that never happened because of the Tribe of the Snow Tiger stuff.  Should be finishing the final edits this weekend and then just need the cover art.

Life is going to be getting even odder around here.  Both parents have retired, which means they’re going to be home all day.  Unless they do a spontaneous trip and I have to scramble for a dinner idea.  Might stock up on ‘dinner for 2’ stuff in case of emergencies like they head out and I get lazy.  Good to hear that they are going to be remaining active though.  Always a worry for the retiree and those around them in that regards.  Need to stay physically and mentally engaged to stay healthy.

That brings us to my health and I’ve only got one doctor left to go.  That cardiologist visit keeps running into roadblocks.  I should have it done by this week along with a haircut.  Not at the same time unless that’s a service I stumble into.  The heart is okay aside from a tiny thing, but better safe than sorry.  Another organ is going to need some TLC, but no diabetes, obscene cholesterol levels, or growths.  Exercise and making the diet healthier are already underway.  I sense that I’ve opened myself to suggestions.  Excuse me while I grab a wiffle bat in preparation.  Waffle bat, autocorrect?

One of the things I have to do is start looking for a new Legends of Windemere cover artist to see if I can still release Book 11 in late August/early September.  The cardiologist thing might alter my timing on that because that takes precedence and my Tuesday has already been consumed.  Aiming to do a phone call or email on Wednesday to the first suggestion.  To say I’m nervous is an understatement.  I think it’s more that I know people are going to pounce when the change happens.  Something that gets forgotten is that it isn’t easy changing a cover.  That takes time and means the release is delayed, especially if the person helping has a main job and the art is a side one.  So the nerves are a little twitchy on this one.  I’d like for the new ones not to be compared to the old, but that might be unavoidable.  Big thing is for me to happy with it though.  Fingers crossed that everything goes smoothly.

I’m really hoping to start a simple project instead of a novel while the family transitions into the new norm.  Probably means Book 14 is pushed back to June.  That or I’ll tackle the next Bedlam book around that time.  Depends on my mood because Legends of Windemere has gotten heavy as it nears the end, but Bedlam will always have a level of humor that makes me smile.  Like Lloyd asking a bald guy if the carpet matches the drapes or Cassidy developing her own sense of humor to counter Lloyd.  She’s going to be more of a reactionary quipster than a crazy joke/reference flinger.

Anyway, I think I’ll use my current dark mood to my advantage.  Dawn Addison will be returning in a new story come October.  I know it’s odd to put a 31 part book on a blog, but I’m simply not confident enough in the genre to charge money.  Maybe far down the road, I’ll take the Raven books off the blog and sell them as a bundle.  Think the most I can do with this series is 4, but it will always feel like an experiment to me.  Not the best endorsement from the author, but I have so many high pressure projects that making Dawn and Ichabod more laid back might be better for my health.  Both could end up getting compilations in a few years, but that’s a bridge I haven’t built yet.  Right now, Dawn can claim October and Ichabod can show up whenever I have a story for him.

So, what’s the plan for the week?

  1. Finish editing Family of the Tri-Rune.
  2. Cook dinners.
  3. Get haircut.
  4. Start writing Raven’s Game.
  5. Finishing outlining Chasing Bedlam.
  6. Contact new cover artist with fingers crossed.
  7. Exercising and eating better.
  8. Poke at sale report to see if it does anything.
  9. Keep listening an anime station on Pandora.
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Last Chance

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

It’s the Last Day of this Giveaway

I am giving away eBook copies of my short story collection, Random Tales, on Amazon. You can pick up a copy by clicking HERE.

Crazy you say? Well maybe. I wanted to give potential readers a way to sample my writing without a huge investment. The cover for the collection is clickable and is shown below:

Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000038_00054]Here is a description of each of the stories:

  • Heal Thyself – A man who is in a terrible accident wakes up to find that his life has changed forever in a very unexpected way.

The short story, Heal Thyself, holds a special place in my heart. It was the result of my first serious attempt at writing. It was the first short story that I completed and had published. I remember when I heard back from ‘Down In The Dirt’ magazine that they wanted to publish my…

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The Saturday Round Up- Planes and Trains, Farewell Natalie Cole and on the radio.

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The Southern Jungles of Ralian

Skull Island from King Kong

Skull Island from King Kong

Surprisingly, I’ve never had the champions go to the jungle region of Ralian.  This biome is more common in the Cerascent region, but there is a big one on the southwestern section of Ralian.  It has the desert on one border, the forest on another, and the oceans on the others.  To be honest, this place will be more important in Book 11, but some heroes will be exploring in Tribe of the Snow Tiger.  I’ll get more into how to write divided groups of heroes in the next post.  This is all about the jungles.

Trading happens along the coast, which is difficult to penetrate due to the dense trees and the river mouths being too narrow for large ships.  So there are coastal towns for this as well as locals that will take their small boats out to the traders.  It’s never for money, but supplies that they can’t find in the jungle.  A lot of the local economy involves fishing and tropical fruits, but there are a few tribes that barter in furs and meat.  The food from the jungle is considered a delicacy and tends to be reserved for nobles.

There is no cohesive government in the southern jungle because it is divided up by several tribes.  Scent markers, warning signs, and other clear markers are arranged around the borders.  Some tribes have treaties and will cross over to do business or share in a holiday to solidify the peace.  Others are always trying to find ways to take over the region, but they rarely take action beyond a few border raids.  A big reason for this is that there are various beings that step in whenever one group gets too strong.  Some people believe they are fairies while others think they are ghosts.  Either way, it makes the tribes rein in their ambition and settle for a few steps here and there.  Scattered temples to these guardians and neutral towns have been established to retain some level of civility.

Beyond the tribe system, there isn’t much else to tell about the southern jungle.  It’s humid, filled with dangerous beasts, hides a network of rivers, and tends to be isolated from most global events.  The big wars have passed it by as well as any advances in technology and magic.  Only the borders have been influenced slightly by outsiders, but not enough to change the society.  The locals simply have no interest in changing because of their environment.  To them, a gnome-made machine will damage the trees or get stuck in the vines and heavy armor would be useless in the year-long humidity.  Perhaps the only thing they indulge in are foreign foods, drinks, and jewelry.  Beyond that, the tribes are content to live their simple lives.

You may have noticed that this region is simply called the southern jungle.  Since the region isn’t claimed by a kingdom or single tribe, it doesn’t have a solid name.  Most of the tribes will call the jungle by their name or some version of ‘home’.  They are more concerned with territory than the overall region and outsiders have taken to simply calling it ‘the southern jungle’.  Not an original name since it’s the only jungle region on Ralian and it’s in the south.  Still, not many have bothered to change it.  Those that have were conquering warlords who discovered that the local wildlife aren’t friendly to the blindly ambitious.

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Free for Three more days.

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

Only Three More Days

I am giving away eBook copies of my short story collection, Random Tales, on Amazon. You can pick up a copy by clicking HERE.

Crazy you say? Well maybe. I wanted to give potential readers a way to sample my writing without a huge investment. The cover for the collection is clickable and is shown below:

Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000038_00054]Here is a description of each of the stories:

  • Heal Thyself – A man who is in a terrible accident wakes up to find that his life has changed forever in a very unexpected way.

The short story, Heal Thyself, holds a special place in my heart. It was the result of my first serious attempt at writing. It was the first short story that I completed and had published. I remember when I heard back from ‘Down In The Dirt’ magazine that they wanted to publish my story. I received no money…

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