Nearing the End of Summer

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Well, here we are again.  I’m leery about bringing up the grad school drama again because that seems to be what everybody reads then jumps to the comments.  All I will say is that it isn’t over like I thought because of outside interference.  Not really in my favor either, but next week will see what comes of it.  Honestly, I’m having such a difficult time trying to balance everything else that I know I shouldn’t go near it.  I’ve established that though, so no reason to repeat myself.  I only do that with book-based frustrations since this is predominantly an author blog.

I had my son this week, so that was where all of my time and energy went.  There might have been only one day where he went to bed before 9 PM.  Not sure if that’s a good thing since we need to get him onto a school schedule.  I think.  We’re still trying to figure all of that out.  The main part was having fun, which much was had:

  • Monday was a trip to the Bronx Zoo.  Even with all indoor exhibits closed, we were there most of the day.  Got to see the dholes too.  These are rare Indian wild dogs and we almost missed them.  We tried earlier in the visit, but they had just gone into their den.  Second try later in the day was the same result.  On a whim, I suggested we try one more time even though it was only 10 minutes from the last attempt.  My son said it wouldn’t work, but we went and it looked like he was right.  People moved away, but then the three dholes came out to run around for a while.  We didn’t leave until they went back to their den.
  • Tuesday was clothes shopping in the morning and then a Yugioh duel in the afternoon. It was raining a lot.
  • Wednesday was Barnes & Noble trip and then an afternoon of Lego Harry Potter Years 5-7 on the Switch.  This went south rather quickly.  The camera jerked around so much that I got motion sickness.  It resulted in me bowing out of the game and giving directions while lying down on the bed.  We finally stopped when my son started succumbing to the effects.
  • Thursday was a trip to a local preserve to see their dinosaur exhibit, live animals including an emu and golden pheasants, and then walk the trails.  I always forget that my son wears down eventually on these types of walks.  That and he gets fixated on mosquito bites, but finding 4 frogs in the wild was enough to keep him going.  Did some drawing in the afternoon.
  • Friday was another trip to a preserve with a geology museum and much bigger trails that included the shoreline.  We weren’t as lucky with animals here.  Spooked a bunny and saw a woodpecker.  Just bummed around for the rest of the day.

The rest of the time with my son is going to be relaxing and getting his school supplies.  I promised him more drawing since we did Articuno and Moltres, so we’re only missing Zapdos, Lugia, and Ho-oh for the legendary birds in Pokemon.  He’s talked about switching to anime characters at some point too.  This love of drawing is going to be very helpful when the weather gets cold and I want to keep him away from video games.  Winters are always the toughest with entertaining him because you can’t go outside without getting cold.

Well, that’s what happened this week.  The upcoming week is going to be a little less exciting.  I’m aiming to start War of Nytefall: Eulogy, which is the final book of the series.  I might be able to get 7 of the chapters done before school starts in September, which would be nice.  Once this is done, I can switch to Do I Need to Use a Dragon? (Fantasy Writing Tips) for writing time and begin crafting the outlines for Tales of the Slumberlord.  I think tomorrow involves that third series, which I have to really think about.  I might make another Sunday post that reveals the titles.  Sure, I have 4 more books to release about Clyde and the Dawn Fangs, but it doesn’t hurt to present the future and get people to realize that I’m not out of ideas yet.

Speaking of outlines, I finally finished the plot breakdowns for The Ether Thief series.  I have to do the same for two off-shoots though.  This is a long series that overlaps with a few others.  I might have to stop Sin’s adventures for a year to do another 4-part series that explains an event that changes the world.  He isn’t involved in the event, which makes me wonder how I can pull this off without losing momentum for him.  I could always do the Elysium Saga first and then The Ether Thief.  The real concern is that Sin interacts with characters and places from the other series at one point in a later book, which is a spoiler issue.  Tough decisions.

Speaking of tough decisions, I’m trying to figure out what to do with the release of War of Nytefall: Ravenous on Labor Day weekend.  Seems nothing I do can get a book to move unless it’s the free one.  I’ve been wondering if I should drop all of my book prices to 99 cents, but I feel like I could never bring the price back to $2.99 if I do that.  I wonder if this would increase sales too.  I’d lose the 70% royalties and make only .33 cents or so from every sale.  So, I’d be sacrificing royalty money for the possibility of a person buying and reviewing the book.  By the way, I mean everything in Legends of Windemere and War of Nytefall would drop to 99 cents.  Maybe I should do this in December since I don’t know if I want to debut a book at that price.  Times like this, I wish I was rich and could afford all the pricey promos that I see or not be concerned about the money side of things.

Goals of the week?

  1. Start writing War of Nytefall: Eulogy
  2. Watch ‘Lucifer Season 5 Part 1’ when relaxing.
  3. Prepare for school the following week.
  4. Put that grad school thing to bed.
  5. Finish getting War of Nytefall: Ravenous ready for debut.
  6. Biking once my legs stop hurting from all of this week’s walking.
  7. Maybe get pizza one day when I’m on my own for food.
  8. Try not to stress too much.  (First time for everything.)
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Renald the Enforcer of Desirae’s Domain

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This might be a shorter post than intended, but I always introduce my new characters.  I can’t leave Renald out for how I made him.  War of Nytefall: Ravenous wouldn’t work without him.  Sure, his scenes are limited and the way Desirae does business means he is highly restrained.  There’s really only one part where he gets to cut loose and it’s the favorite one I’ve written for him.  All that being said, he can be an interesting figure if you do a comparison.

Renald is a Dawn Fang created by Desirae Duvall to be her bodyguard, enforcer, hitman, and manual labor source.  His powers aren’t essential to the overall plot like Desirae’s, so I can explain them.  They differ in usefulness.  He can turn his mind over to pure instinct, which makes it hard for telepaths to sense him.  He can turn his skin into stone, which he doesn’t do very often because it can slow him down.  The big one is that he can create 2-3 doubles that can travel far away from him and he gains their experiences when he reabsorbs them.  The big thing with him is that he’s a highly skilled fighter, so he depends more on his combat ability than his powers.  You get the sense that he doesn’t even acknowledge that he’s a Dawn Fang.  At least, you could if he showed any emotion, which is why he is a challenge to write about and use.

I went with the cold, stoic killer with Renald, which means he is simply there a lot of the times.  He reveals a presence when intimidating or fighting, but many of his scenes are him being talked to by Desirae.  With her being highly emotive and vivid, he probably pales in comparison and fades further into the background than I realized.  I tried to improve on this, but giving him emotions didn’t feel right.  So, I stuck with him being almost robotic and to the point.  This doesn’t really allow for a character to be the focus of a scene, but I found a few good uses for him.  Beyond the fighting enforcer that trounces several other characters.  Guess there are just some character personalities that work for the story, but the downside is limited exposure.  Then again, he’s a sidekick/minion type, which means he won’t be around as much as Desirae.  Personality of a cinder-block definitely functions better for him in this capacity.

It’s similar to Dean Pendrac in War of Nytefall: Rivalry.  Renald and Dean are both sidekicks to the main villain, but there is certainly more of a story for the latter.  Dean was ostracized from vampire society and joined with Jewelz to teach her about their society, but she went in another direction.  He has stayed with her out of loyalty and tried to redirect her when he can.  There’s some independence with him.  Renald follows orders and occasionally counters Desirae.  It isn’t even that he has no personal thoughts, but he doesn’t care.  He got his position by winning a tournament of death matches and does come off that he’s happy to kill even if he doesn’t show it.  That’s why an alternate name I used for him is the ‘killer’ or ‘serial killer’.  Renald picks his targets carefully and sees murder as a job, but I do sense that he enjoys it.  Similar to Archillious, but Renald knows now to display his glee.  So, one could say he’s a combo of Archillious and Dean, but that doesn’t fully work.

Get the sense that I’m not painting Renald with the best brush.  It’s because he’s really hard to explain since he’s always been a secondary character.  Usually, I had him working for Desirae or he’d be a one story agent hired by Xaiver.  His purpose was always to be a killer that squared off against one Clyde’s friends instead of the main hero himself.  I could never get him to rise higher than that without losing something.  There were a few times when I retired him, but I always brought him back when I needed a physical threat that didn’t eat away the time with dialogue.  Sometimes, you just need a fighter type to be used by the higher ranked villains.  Doesn’t make them any less important than characters like Titus Winthrop, Luther Grathan, and Bob.

Thinking about it, the influence of Renald might be another part of the issue.  The same friend who played Kenneth Decker designed an assassin in ‘Vampire: The Masquerade’ to use later.  I wasn’t in the game for long, but I remember the character started very cold and emotionless like Renald is.  Then, he began acting like a soldier (Decker) and the original concept wasn’t really assassin-like.  I had to leave the game right around that time, so I never got a feel for the original.  All I remember is that having a vampiric killer with no emotion would be an interesting concept.  Just never got the hook that I did with other characters.  Oh well.  Renald does what I need him to do.  That’s really all we can expect from some of the voices in our head.

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#NewRelease: HMS Lanternfish by C.S. Boyack #fantasy #pirates

Who here is a fan of root monsters?  Haven’t heard of them?  I have good news for both groups.  First, they’re back.  Second, if you haven’t had the …

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How to Publish with KDP: Part Fourteen

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Hello SErs. Harmony here.  As promised, here is  part fourteen in the post series dedicated to taking a step-by-step look at how to get your finished manuscript from your computer and on sale on Amazon in both ebook and paperback.

If you’d like to take a look back at the previous posts in this series, please click on the links at the end of this post.

So, here’s Part Fourteen: How to Review and Preview your Paperback.

From your KDP dashboard, click on ‘Edit Paperback Contents’, if you’re not in that screen already.

With your interior and cover uploaded, you can now use the online previewer. This will show you your front cover as well as the book’s content. It will show you the guides so that you can enure that no essential images or text fall outside the trim line.

Ensure no text or images…

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Immortal Wars: The Summoning Part 32 #fiction #throwback

(Previously on Immortal Wars.)

(Again, we shall revel in my teenage originality.  Everyone groan in unison.)

Disclaimer: Immortal Wars was the book I came up with and wrote in high school.  I hadn’t even hit college by the time I wrote the first two books.  That means I hadn’t developed my style yet, wasn’t good at self-editing, and the story was fairly basic. So, you’ve been warned that this is the ultimate author throwback segment for my blog and will show my author origins.  FYI-  I put the first book (The Summoning) through a Print-on-Demand publisher and the second one (Light, Blood, & Tears) never saw the light of day.  Enjoy!

“Impressive.  So, how tall is this thing and which of the ship weapons do you plan to put on it?” asks Adriana as she looks up at the half-finished tower.  Most of the slick, black walls have not been attached yet, so the super structure can still be seen.  Parked behind the tower is the warship where several aliens are unhooking laser cannons, missile launchers, and other long-range weapons.  From the back of the warship, the other immortals are unloading their personal belongings.

“The tower is about one hundred feet tall as of right now.  I may want to add some more floors on later, so there are structures on the top in order to make extra connections.  As for weapons, I will just attach some of the warship’s launchers, lasers, and bombers.  It isn’t like they can do much against immortals.  And nothing else would be insane enough to attack us.  But you really disappoint me, Adriana,” Mindtrigger replies while continuing to draw more details on the tower schematics.   He is leaning on a solid metal table, which has several dents in it that resemble fist marks.

“I disappoint you?  How?”

“With your reaction.  You stand in the dark shadow of one of the greatest constructs in this entire galaxy and all you can say is impressive.  There is no way to use a single word to possibly come close to describing such an evil masterpiece as the Black Tower.  Your lack of words just wounds me, Adriana.”

“Shrink your ego, old man.  You’ll get a better compliment on your building once the Black Tower is fully completed and operational.  Right now it looks like a children’s building set.  But this project will have to wait for a little time.  I have something for you to do that is much more urgent.  I need something that will keep most of the guardians out of commission while I play with the others.  I want a cage of some kind to keep them around, but out of my hair.  Finish it and then return to the Black Tower.”  She walks over to a large drilling machine and sits down on the tread.  Mindtrigger simply leans against the table while scratching his head and rising an eyebrow.

“Now, I’m confused.  What do you mean by play and keep?  I assumed that we were just going to kill them off in a huge battle.  Everyone has been thinking that would happen since we decided to build the Black Tower and stay on Pluto.  Psylon has been drooling from dreams of the battle all week.  My janitor robot has taken to following her around to clean the drool up.  So, what exactly do you have planned for our enemies?  You can’t be considering keeping them as prisoners.  They are much too dangerous.”

“Calm down.  We will kill them like I promised.  Eventually.  I just want to have some fun and torture them for a few days.  I’d really prefer to avoid a massacre like everyone is expecting.  Those things are long, boring, tiring, and usually ends with my clothes getting dirty and ripped in important places.  And that’s just unacceptable.”

“I see.  Now, we wouldn’t want that.  Your clothes are so much more important than destroying our enemies.  And we all know how modest you are when it comes to people seeing the more enticing parts of your anatomy.”  Mindtrigger rolls his eyes and just give Adriana a smug smirk before going back to work on the schematic.

“Don’t take that tone with me.  I want to keep Solix alive for as long as possible and make sure he sees his new recruits get destroyed.  After that, he will be of no consequence and I’ll just cut him in half,” explains Adriana.

“So, it’s vengeance.  You still don’t like the fact that he tried to destroy the person that he considered his favored student.  What happened between you two that made you so bitter and angry at him?”

“I don’t want to get into it.”  Adriana turns to walk away from the frail man, but he jumps in her way.  She glowers at him and tries to push past him.  Instead, Mindtrigger grabs her arm and tosses her into a nearby chair.

“Let’s make a deal.  I’ll make you a cage to contain Solix and any other guardians if you tell me what happened between you and the Sun guardian.  Did he give you a bad grade or just his sunny disposition?” asks Mindtrigger.  He sits on top of the table as Adriana gets out of the crude chair.

“You know what happened.”  She looks like she is about to either cry or rip something apart with her bare hands.

“Nope.  Sorry.  I must have missed that briefing.  The gossip never gets into my laboratory, so I’m left out of the loop.”

“We became close.  Student and teacher relationship started out fine.  I learned how to use my powers and everything else about the universe.  By doing my own private study, I discovered how to destroy another immortal.  Solix and SEAS never found my data because I wrote it down instead of putting it on the computer.  Then . . . .”

“Then what?”

“Solix has a habit of tricking his proteges into showing their full potential.  A nasty situation that forces them to push their limits and then he uses what they accomplished against them.  Unfortunately, he ignores how their feelings will be affected by his actions.  That’s what he did to me.  He tricked me into using my powers the way he expected me to and used me because of it.  Understand?”

“Not at all.  How did he trick you?”

“Simple.  He made me think that I had him under my control and then betrayed me.  He pretended that my powers had worked on him.  Being young, I thought they had malfunctioned because I never aimed them at him.  He assumed that I tried it on everybody.  I actually had feelings for that old fossil and he used them against me.  That’s why I planned the attack on the original guardians.  Well that and I wanted to rule the universe.  But that is why I left Solix to be tortured.  I didn’t think he would use the Solstar against us.  Now will you make me something in order to contain the guardians.”

“No need,” replies Mindtrigger with a smile.

“What!” exclaims Adriana before she leaps at Mindtrigger and picks up the scientist by his nostrils, “You made me tell you one of my secrets and you aren’t going to go through with your part of the deal?  You better have a good reason because I’ll kill you if you don’t!”  She tosses him into the drilling machine, but his nose gets torn off in her hand.

“Because I already have a machine that can do it.  It’s been ready for months and it only has to be attached to a cage.  I really get bored in that stuffy lab, so I make little anti-immortal weaponry that should only be used if necessary.  Most of them fail, but this one shows a lot of promise.”  Mindtrigger wipes the blood off his face as his nose grows back into place.  Behind him he hears a loud crash and he turns around to see Hellax on his face with broken china all around him.  The immortal cleans it all up and puts it back into the box before running back into the warship.

“Well, he’s in trouble.  Psylon loved that china collection.  So, what does this new toy do when it is attached to a cage?” asks Adriana.  A sizzling sound is heard from the warship, which is followed by Hellax yelping in pain.  A large ball of fire runs out of the warship and starts running around in circles.

“I’ll have to be brief in order to go help Hellax get out of his armor.  Basically, I have do not remember what this invention does.  I’ll have to look into it.  I promise to talk to you later about this.”  Mindtrigger walks off toward the area that Hellax is running around with fire all over his armor.  Adriana starts laughing as she walks back into the warship.

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#bookreviews of HMS LANTERNFISH and I WOULDN’T BE SURPRISED

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Ciao, amici! It’s been a while since I posted any book reviews. Mostly because it’s been a while since I had a chance to read for pleasure. I know, I know… an author who doesn’t read? Blasphemy!

Believe me, I feel the same way. It’s just been crazy. But that’s no excuse, and I’ve started to carve out some “me” time to get lost in books again.

Today, I want to share my thoughts about my two most recent reads, HMS Lanternfish by C.S. Boyack and I Wouldn’t Be Surprised by D.L. Finn.


My review:

★★★★★ I I I I ! The root monsters are back! And the rest of the gang, too.

When I read the first book in the series, Voyage of the Lanternfish, I fell hard for the root monsters. They’re like the Minions, but on the ocean and a lot funnier. And who doesn’t love humorous…

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Upping the Sex in a Series

I’m going to tackle this one right off the bat.  There’s a reason that this weighs heavy on my mind with War of Nytefall: Ravenous.  Actually, it’s a few reasons:

  1. Desirae Duvall’s main business hub is a brothel.
  2. Desirae Duvall is a very sexually open character.
  3. She seduces and it is implied that she sleeps with several established characters.
  4. She tends to steal a scene, so people will notice the upping of sex.

Of course, there isn’t any actual sex in my books.  For anyone who paid attention in Legends of Windemere, I don’t go the erotica route.  There isn’t a point in it for my stories because the sex isn’t a focal point.  The emotions leading up to and the ones that linger after are of interest to me.  Events leading up to it and the repercussions are where the plot thrives in my mind.  So, I’ll have innuendo, kissing, embracing, lustful looks, pillow talk, and the usual stuff that can happen after sex.  Once we get to the point where hands and mouths will touch certain parts of the anatomy, I fade to black.  I mean, a reader can fill in that blank on their own.  I’d probably be giggling and blushing too much to get through it.  Sex scenes can come off fairly ridiculous too, especially when you’re trying to name the parts.  Half of them sound clinical and the others are either crude or silly.  I mean, I’ve seen authors use pastry names . . . I think I’m losing the point of this post.

All that being said, Desirae brings a higher level of sex by having blatant innuendo.  I don’t even think I can call it that.  She openly tells characters to go to her room because she needs to have fun.  She talks about spending the night with others and there’s one scene that is clearly the morning after an orgy.  Again, you don’t see any of those events happen, but you know that they did.  It’s part of her character being a seductress and it’s very much like a less inhibited Chastity.  This means that readers who are very sensitive to sex are going to feel like they’ve been hit by a sledgehammer.  I considered making it more subtle, but Desirae lost a lot from doing that.  She isn’t timid in this arena and the way she talks and acts needs to show that.  Still, do you really think people will be concerned after seeing Chastity flirt, hear Mab talk about Chastity’s promiscuity, and see the heavy make-out session between Mab and Clyde in Rivalry?

From past experience, I can guarantee that there will be some people who will be shocked and appalled at this turn.  I’ve learned over the years that readers can miss the subtle and tame stuff pretty easily.  Then, they hit a blatant mention of sex and they act like they’ve just been subjected to porn.  I remember when people complained about all the sex in a mid-book of Legends of Windemere.  There wasn’t an actual sex scene, but I believe an early chapter had Luke Callindor and Sari naked in bed.  It was after sex and they were talking.  This came after we already knew they were sleeping together, multiple kissing scenes, one really heavy make-out scene, and multiple scenes with stated nudity.  It was this that sent some readers into a tizzy.  Keep in mind that I don’t mention the naughty bits and don’t harp on the nudity.  I point it out to set the scene or use it for comedic effect, but that’s it.  So, you never know when a sexy scene will stir the sensitivities of a reader, which is another reason I’m bringing this up.

Personally, I don’t think I upped the sex in Ravenous to a point that makes it erotica or horribly corruptive of delicate morality.  Desirae doesn’t talk dirty or greedily lust after people like a wild animal.  She seduces and is clearly the one in charge of any sexual encounter that she initiates.  I stuck to my guns with not having actual sex scenes and leaving the genitalia descriptions to the imagination.  I’d like to think this is enough to keep things clean-ish, but I know better.  With any luck, people will find the character to be a breath of fresh air since everyone else tends to be rather stuffy and nervous in this arena.  As always, I enjoy hearing that people like my characters.  They are the ones who carry the plot, so I try very hard to make them enjoyable or, in one case, impactful to some extent.  Desirae is no exception.  I want people to walk away from Ravenous remembering her for everything she does and not only the sexuality.  It’s another reason I don’t do sex scenes, I guess.  Those are what people may remember the character for instead of their personalities.

So, what do you think?  Not even sure about the topic I’m asking about here anymore.

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Teaser Tuesday: Solo Heist #fantasy #vampires

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I noticed that I’m taking larger chunks of story for the War of Nytefall: Ravenous teasers.  One reason is because a lot of the scenes don’t have clean break areas like previous books.  There’s a lot of depth and context.  This is an all action scene too, so I had to find a good cliffhanger.  I was going to do the set up scene today, but realized I’d have to alter it to clear out a lot more spoilers than I’m comfortable with now.

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Binge-Worthy Book Festival Week 3!

Hope everyone has been checking out the festival and enjoying it.  Life & Times of Ichabod Brooks is making an appearance there today.  The teasers for this fantasy short story collection are always enjoyed, so see how they all end.  That’s just me though.  You have plenty of literary choices every day of the week.  Dive into the fun and make your ‘To Read’ pile grow large enough to build a book castle out of it.  Though, I wouldn’t recommend that because you could accidentally dog-ear a page.

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Time to Meet Desirae Duvall

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And here we start the promos that will hopefully whet the appetite for War of Nytefall: Ravenous.  The plan is to release it next month and I’m been trying to figure out how I should start.  Well, I’m going to begin this with a bang.  This is the newest Dawn Fang to step into Windemere and she’s possibly one of my favorite characters to write.  In fact, Desirae Duvall is the reason I had to rewrite the outlines for the volumes that came afterwards.

So, who is she?

Desirae is a type of character that I never tried to write before.  She has some really cool powers that I won’t get into here because you need a reason to read the book.  They are at the core of the overall problem, but so is her personality.  That is what had me enjoy writing Deisrae so much.  She isn’t a fighter and actively avoids confrontations whenever she can.  To do so, she comes up with plans and thinks on her feet in order to get away from a situation.  One would call her conniving and they’d be right.  Many times, I felt like I was writing a more troublesome, less moral version of Chastity Sullivan.  That character is already pretty loose, so Desirae was downright open for business.  She just jumped off the page with her antics and pretty obvious innuendos.  Yup, the sexual vampire has entered the arena.

Let’s be clear though.  I don’t write sex scenes or detail any nudity if there is any.  It is clear that Desirae enjoys sex and uses it to both relax, expand her business, and focus some of her powers. The hub of her business is also a secret brothel called the Pleasure Shadow, which is how she began creating her empire.  She seduces men and women with no hesitation.  People might already be turning off to this, but there are a few reasons why this makes her a very dangerous opponent.  Not that she can charm Clyde, but seduction works off charisma and being able to read a person instantly.  He’s never faced someone like this and she could easily be the smartest Dawn Fang in the entire series.  After all, she created a globe-spanning empire that the information networks of Kai Stavros (spymaster) and Chastity Sullivan (information broker extraordinaire) didn’t even know about.  Much of this ability comes from her ability to get in close to people and she uses it for seduction when it’s ramped up to its full power.

Now, this isn’t to say that Desirae is perfect or always in control.  In fact, much of the story revolves around some of her actions going off the rails.  She is desperately trying to bring everything back to what it was before, which brings in the attention of those that she’s been hoping to avoid.  Namely, Nytefall and Nyte.  For all of her confidence and charisma, Desirae is able to screw up and she does it hard.  That’s another reason why I liked writing her because she rarely took disaster with panic.  She has the calm and rational mind that I wish I had in real life.  Something goes wrong?  Well, back to the drawing board and toss this out to keep the hounds at bay.  Need to manipulate a few more people to buy some time? Not a problem.  Whatever she needs to do, she’ll do it as long as it doesn’t involve getting herself killed.

A funny thing about Desirae is that she began as a big player in ‘Realm of the Night’, which was the original series title for War of Nytefall.  Then, I reduced her to a minor role, forgot about her for a few years, moved her to another series, forgot about her again, and eventually placed her in another minor role.  It was probably only recently that I sat down and flushed her out to be the major antagonist that she is now.  If I decide to bring her back then she might make some cameos in other series, but a lot depends on how people take to her.  She’s kind of a hard sell because of the open sexuality.  It was to the point when even her origin gets a little shaky.

As with all the Dawn Fangs, I’m going to end this with how she started.  Desirae started in a ‘Vampire: The Masquerade’ game and was played by the ex-wife.  It was a challenge for her to play a character that wasn’t combat oriented.  We convinced to go very far off her usual path by making a vampire prostitute who gathered information for blackmail and the local nobles.  Aside from getting annoyed at one of the male players and showing that she could do the seduction thing, there wasn’t really much to Desirae.  She was there and didn’t do a lot because fights would break out all the time.  Since the character wasn’t a heavy hitter, she didn’t really get involved.  I don’t remember how long she lasted and I don’t think the ex-wife enjoyed the experience.  There was even a point where she hated that I had Desirae listed as a book character.  To get out of this trouble, I did a massive redesign of her to the point where really only the name and connection to prostitution remains.  I even made her an elf.  Pretty happy with how the whole thing turned out too.

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