
“We Used to Live Here” by Marcus Kliewer “We Used to Live Here” by Marcus Kliewer is a masterful addition to the horror genre, and I find it to be …
We Used to Live Here by Marcus Kliewer

“We Used to Live Here” by Marcus Kliewer “We Used to Live Here” by Marcus Kliewer is a masterful addition to the horror genre, and I find it to be …
We Used to Live Here by Marcus Kliewer

Greetings to one and all. Beem Weeks here with you again. Today, I thought I’d share my thoughts on cuss words in fiction. Some years ago, I had a …
To Cuss or Not to Cuss? Swear Words in Fiction.

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The exploration of a new land is kind of a staple in fantasy adventures. We don’t really pay much attention to it unless it’s the main plot of the story. It’s usually seen as a shift to a new location where the plot continues. For the author, it can be so much more behind the scenes.
First, I want to explain that I am talking about wilderness and not heroes entering a new city. I was going to go that way, but it’s all about culture shock. This is when the heroes enter a new environment that the know nothing or very little about. No locals to warn them about things. Those they might find could be hostile. All the characters can do is walk forward and hope they survive long enough to leave. This isn’t always the main plot too, so a reader might not consciously notice the challenge.
One thing I love about having characters enter new regions where they don’t know the dangers is that it creates tension. I get to play on the senses with smells, sounds, and sights. People know what a city is like, so I find it harder to create the same level of tension. The unspoiled wilderness can evoke primal senses of fear for the characters if I push the right buttons. Nature isn’t all noise and chaos, so I write calming sections to describe the beauty of the area. I have the characters revel in what they see even while there are hints that things can go wrong. Then, nature shows its fangs with a beast or a local weather event or anything that puts the heroes at risk. To me, this feels very realistic because you never know when things can turn in the wild, especially if you have never been to the area before.
Another part of this that I enjoy is simply creating the world. After doing cities, academies, and whatever the characters start in for a while, I like changing things up and throwing in new terrain. It gives me a chance to research a few things, take flora and fauna inspiration from other areas, and add set pieces that you can’t do in the previous locations. You really get to expand the world and make it feel more like an actual planet than a setting. This is what I think of when I say that I treat Windemere like a character because the addition of a new setting is like character development.
There are challenges with doing this besides having to create the world. You need to avoid depending on terrain cliches like waterfalls, quicksand, etc. Using them at times when it seems believable and appropriate is fine. Having the characters deal with the same danger every chapter without making it a constant threat is going to be tedious. People do this with lightning a lot. Many authors will have this be a danger and give it disturbing amounts of precision. I’m probably guilty of this too. In order to make this work, you need to make it clear that this threat is bigger than it would normally be and be a hallmark of the new region.
Anyway, what does everyone else think about characters entering new wilderness regions? Not as important as one would think?

Mae is one of my oldest author friends, and she always writes a great story. Let’s all make her feel welcome, and if you can’t pre-order her newest, …
Let’s all welcome Mae Clair

Hi, gang. Craig with you again today to discuss a serious topic that seems to have been rendered less serious these days. This was sparked by a …
I’ll take Death for $1000, Alex

So, I was going to do a specific animal post. Not sure which animal, but I was going to take one off my list. Then, I noticed that it was World Wildlife Day. Why focus on one animal when I can show pictures of some of my favorites? There are so many animals out there and I’m sure there are some I’ve never heard. So, share your favorite animals in the comments.

Binturong (Smells like popcorn)

Tiger (Loved them since I was a kid)

Capybara (Seen them once in person and want to see them again one day)

Otters ( I think I took this shot)

Wolf (Always drawn to this one)

Humpback Whale Breaching (Didn’t get a good shot of this when I saw them over the summer)

Parrot (Any parrot since they’re fun to watch)

Frilled Running Lizard (Another childhood favorite)
I took a day off from work on Thursday because my body was so battered that chronic conditions were rising up. That should tell you how the rest of the week went in regards to work and life. Going to be a long year since none of this mess is showing any signs of calming down. Be nice if I could go into details here, but I’ll just say that body parts hurt and my mind is shaky.
I managed to get a little more of the Darwin & the Fate Bracelet edits added in, but I still have 6 chapters to go. I should be able to get that done by the end of the weekend then I’ll start in on Darwin & the Halfling Hunt. Might not get to start in on that until later in the week, but we’ll see. The sequel is going to be a bigger challenge since I haven’t edited it before. So, I’m expecting a longer, more difficult editing process. Then again, I’ve been rather meticulous during the initial writing with a lot of pauses to check stuff for continuity. That might be a reason I’m a slower writer since I’ll pause after a page or two to think about it all, check it, and see if it flows. Maybe it’ll work out for me.
Last week was the end of February break, which I got to spend with my son. It was two days of Pokemon Go outings because they had a big event. Walked about 9 miles on Saturday and 12 on Sunday, which was rough and fun. Got a movie and some cartoons in as well. Nice ending before he returned to school and I went back to work. Those stressors came back hard for both of us, so it was nice to get the most out of our break. I hope things settle next week though.
Geez, I really can’t think of anything else that I’ve done. Finished watching ‘The Dresden Files’ on Thursday while I rested. Realized I wasn’t ready for another series with hour long episodes, so I’m doing an anime first. ‘The Tsubasa Reservoir’ is one that I tried to watch many times and lost interest. Figure I’ll get it off the list while I rest and edit. Then, I’ll try ‘Resident Alien’ when I feel more invested in television instead of needing background noise while I work.
You know, the work schedule and everything threw off my meals too. So, I’m going to be happy to get back to chopped salads and rice bowls. Tried to only do rice bowls and I grew tired of it really fast. I say this as I plan to get a fancy rice bowl for dinner tonight since I’m on my own. Maybe it’ll give me some ideas of what I can add to my own since I only have tofu/roasted corn and tofu/edamame combos. Tried pickled baby corn this week, so we’ll see how that goes. Pickled ginger is always added too. Considered doing pineapple, so that might be in another week. Still not losing weight, but the gaining back is slow. I might be able to get it pushed back down once the weather warms up and I can go walking for several hours again. Maybe I’ll push the bike up to 7 or 8 miles instead 5 too. Used to be able to do 10 in 30 minutes, but that was long ago.
So, how was everyone else’s week since I’m coming up short this time?
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Jacqui here at Story Empire with the March edition of “What’s happening in the literary world?” Writing used to be simple: Get an idea. Write (or …
What’s Happening in the Writer’s World–March