Villain Teaser Excerpt: Trinity, the Chaos Elf Queen

Queen Trinity of the chaos elves is the powerful rival and playmate of Nyx.  They have a very interesting relationships and I love it when they can fight each other.  Trinity debuted in the prologue of Prodigy of Rainbow Tower, which is available for 99 cents.  Possible minor spoilers for the ending of book 1.

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By Kayla Matt

“I swear that I will defeat him during our next encounter,” the Hellfire Elf responds with a wide grin. “If I fail then it will be by my destruction in battle. I swear on the tongues of the Demon Lords.”

The grin is short-lived as a volley of metal spears erupts from the trees, impaling themselves into the ground to form a cage around the Hellfire Elf. Several cloaked forms silently appear around the cave with glinting crossbows trained on the monster. Another form materializes within arm’s reach of the demon and stares at it with a face covered in shadows. Three eyes of violet are all that the demon can see beneath this person’s deep cowl.

“Who dares intrude upon my realm?” demands the Lich.

“Shut up, Lich. I’ve been ordered to give you and your pet some support,” says the cloaked figure, the voice unmistakably female. “I’m also under orders to act as your hands until you regenerate new ones. A very sweet deal for me since it means any screw-ups will be placed entirely on your shoulders instead of mine. I’m tempted to make a mistake on purpose just to see what the master does to you.”

“And who are you?” the Hellfire Elf asks.

The figure removes the cloak to reveal a slender, elven frame covered in tight leather armor, which is obviously more for seduction and easy movement than protection. Her pristine, cobalt skin glimmers in the moonlight as she turns toward her men. The remaining cloaked figures pull back their hoods to reveal pointed ears and cobalt skin like their leader. All of these elves bow their heads in an act of respect for this stunning woman. She nods to each of them before she turns back to the demon. The glowing orb that the demonic assassin previously mistook for a third eye is nothing more than a violet gemstone embedded in the woman’s forehead. A graceful hand passes through her ebony hair as she silently walks past the Hellfire Elf. The chaos elf stops mere inches from the cave entrance and leans inside without hesitation.

“A good host should make the introductions,” she declares with an impish smile. “Especially when a lady is in their presence.”

“Very well, your highness,” the Lich venomously says. “May I introduce one of my colleagues, servant. This woman is none other than the High Queen of the chaos elves. Your power and cunning is much appreciated, Queen Trinity. I hope this means I’m forgiven by our master.”

“Not in the least,” Trinity snaps with a pleasant giggle. “It means he does not trust you and would rather trust a person like me. As I said, my job is to be your hands since your body is still mending. I have very little independence on this job. I should mention that I do this under protest. I might be tempted to avenge one of my people who you sacrificed for that pathetic demon. Garna was one of my most loyal spies and her only failure was in your service. The fact that you had the audacity to sacrifice her for a Hellfire Elf instead of sending her back to me is grounds for me to turn on you at my earliest convenience.”

Trinity pauses to swallow her growing rage before speaking again. “That is if I wasn’t under orders to work with you and leave dear Garna in the past. Our master wants us to work together due to your . . . current disability. I’m not in any position to argue.”

“We do not need a woman,” the Hellfire Elf growls.

Trinity turns with a mischievous gleam in her eyes and aims her palms at the proud, caged demon. Just like her forehead, a violet gemstone is embedded in each of her palms. They glow brightly as a silent spell is cast. The Hellfire Elf’s face erupts in confusion and fury when it feels its body begin to transform. Without its permission, the demon turns into a red-streaked bunny.

Trinity swiftly grabs the bunny by the ears and turns it to her face. “I may be a woman, but that should make you even more cautious. My gender can be a lot crueler than you give us credit for, especially a female chaos elf. Please try to work with me, little demon. I would hate to waste more magic on you than I already have. Do we have an understanding or should I skin and cook you for my men?”

CONTINUED IN PRODIGY OF RAINBOW TOWER!

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Twas the night before Chri…..the Book Review Challenge!

Title says it all. Fun challenge! Free books! Totally worth it.

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Villain Teaser Excerpt: The Lich and His Loyal Hellfire Elf

Kicking off this week of villain excerpts with the two that started it all.  The Lich and the Hellfire Elf debuted in Beginning of a Hero, which is available on Amazon for 99 cents.

“You have failed me, Garna,” hisses an eerie voice. “You claimed you could stop the messenger and now he is in the wild. We can no longer stop him from reaching the Paladin.”

The elf feels the hair on the back of her neck stand up. “I am sorry, sir. I will try my best to track the messenger and eliminate him. I will even eliminate the Paladin if given the opportunity. I swear this on the suffering of my people and the honor of my queen.”

Garna bows toward a shadowy figure who steps out of a billowing cloud of smoke. Layers of black and gray robes cover the taut-skinned body of the Lich. He flexes his hands and Garna can see several gaudy rings adorning his gnarled fingers. His boney feet appear briefly as he sits in the solitary chair, adjusting his moldy robes. She cannot stop herself from staring at the red eyes, flickering with unbridled greed from underneath his dusty hood.

“Why should I believe you will accomplish your goals when you wasted your time with a pair of dwarves?” the Lich coldly asks.

Garna stands at attention to show some respect to this decaying abomination. “They attacked me and I needed to defend myself. I still bleed and get hurt like other living things. Taking an axe to the spine would have made it difficult for me to eliminate the messenger. Besides, they did not delay me too long and I saw where the messenger went. If you had not teleported me away, I could have caught up with him and this conversation wouldn’t be happening.” She stops once she realizes her blunder. “Uh, what I meant was . . .”

“You dare to place blame on my head!”

Garna sucks in a deep, nervous breath. “No, sir, I merely ask that you give me more time. Taking me away before I have time to reverse my mistakes does not prove I am a worthless agent.”

“You and your ilk are invaluable agents, Garna,” the Lich agrees, folding his hands on his lap. “Chaos elves have been loyal to the darkness for a very long time. Garna, can you tell me why your people are so good at what they do? Please refresh my dusty memory.”

Garna cautiously walks around the circular room, her attention never wandering away from the Lich. She stops on the far side of the room and takes out a dagger to twirl in her hand. She can tell he is up to something, but she knows too little about the creature to predict him. All she remembers is that her queen warned her that a wrong move would land her in this position. The thought of her queen and how she may have failed her brings tears to Garna’s eyes.

The chaos elf clears her drying throat and stops spinning her dagger. “My people are the stealthiest warriors in the world. We thrive in the shadows while improving our . . . unique survival techniques. There are no better spies in all of Windemere and we are the best assassins in the Post Cataclysm era. Does that answer your question, sir?”

“Full of pride and arrogance as I expected,” the Lich declares with an echoing laugh. “Chaos elves always see themselves as the greatest race in all of Windemere. Personally, I don’t believe you are as talented as you think. Do you agree?”

“I swear I will do better next time. I promi-” Garna begins. Her voice is cut off by a quick spell from the Lich, who rises to his feet. His crimson eyes bore into her and she can see a vague, skeletal sneer beneath his hood. An eerie chill creeps up Garna’s spine, taking root in the back of her skull.

A raspy cough passes through the air as the Lich circles the room. “You have had your chance to prove yourself. Trinity told me you could do this job and you have failed me. Now, I must bring in something more powerful and dangerous. I need an assassin who can finish this job and serve me without failure until all my goals have been achieved.” The Lich stops walking and faces Garna, his boney fingers weaving in the air. “To be honest, I agree with you that chaos elves are the best mortal assassins, but I need a demon. You are dismissed.”

Thick chains lance out of the shadows, wrapping around Garna’s legs and dragging her across the floor. Several of the arcane symbols light up as she is pulled toward the middle of what she now realizes is a demon-summoning circle. She struggles against the chains, but small bursts of electricity pulse through her body with every twist. All she can do is panic, feeling her strength get rapidly sapped by the chains. Out of desperation, Garna digs her fingernails into the space between two stone tiles. The chains violently yank her with enough force to break off a few nails, hurling her into the center of the circle. As she stands, the chains wrap around her entire body, leaving only her left eye uncovered. Terror fills the single orb as its pupil frantically moves in every direction, hoping to see a way out.

“As you know, a sacrifice is necessary when calling forth a minion from the Chaos Void,” the Lich says, running his hand over a faded symbol on the wall. “You may have failed me as an assassin, but you will make a perfect offering. Wouldn’t you agree, vermin?”

Garna cries as the Lich chants the incantation, the bleeding symbols pulsating with crimson light. Her scream echoes throughout the chamber as a spiral of blood-like magic curls up from beneath her. The chains around Garna transform into a suit of gothic platemail as she grows taller and more muscular. The sickening bursting of skin fills the air, her body becoming too large for her cobalt flesh. Her ears gain sharper points and red streaks form in her ebony hair. A final surge of magic ends her agony, leaving a green-skinned, elf-like figure standing in her place. All that is left of Garna are bloody shreds of cobalt skin strewn around the fire-eyed demon’s feet.

“Excellent,” hisses the grinning Lich.

“What are your commands, master?” the demonic assassin asks in a low, predatory voice.

CONTINUED IN BEGINNING OF A HERO!

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‘My GRL’ by John W. Howell (Review)

I recently finished reading My GRL by John W. Howell.  CLICK ON THE COVER FOR THE AMAZON PAGE!

My Grl by John W. Howell

MY GRL by John W. Howell

This was my first time reading a mystery/thriller and I expected there to be tons of action and intrigue.  Instead, I found a lot of suspense and colorful characters that kept me wanting to read more.  The pacing is fast at most points and there’s very little lingering on scenes.  A plot point is hit, suspicions are raised, twists occur, and then off to the next leg of the adventure.

I know from that description it sounds like I’m saying this is rushed, but it’s the opposite.  The speed of the story is one that tickles your nerves because you’re always wondering what something means.  A few times you even wonder if there’s a hidden significance to an event, so your mind keeps going back to it for reference.  Thankfully, My GRL is written in a way that you tend to remember everything.

One thing that took a little getting used to is the author’s habit of going into extreme descriptive detail.  His knowledge of boats, cars, and several other things is extensive and he lets you know that.  There are also points where it is a play-by-play of events.  It is a little jarring at first, but the first person narrative helped me adapt.  I figured the main character is a nervous talker and he sure has a lot to be nervous about in this story.  A few chapters in, I barely noticed because I got the feeling that every word could hold a clue as to what would happen.  It also managed to extend the suspense because I never knew when the description would lead to an ‘ah-ha!’ moment.

One of the only issue I had with the book was that the main character was overshadowed by most of the several characters.  I can’t really go into detail without spoilers, but John Cannon seems like a fish out of water for most of the book.  He is routinely overwhelmed even though he shows signs that he could probably talk or smile his way out of trouble.  It’s just that he never really pushes this ability to an effective level, so the more capable and skilled characters appear to be doing most of the legwork.  I really enjoyed Police Chief Ned and a later character that helps John.  In fact, I’d love to see them get their own books because I found them more interesting.  Maybe a sequel will occur since there is a good set up for the characters that make it to the end.

The other issue I had is more of a personal pet peeve.  One of the main villains had a really bizarre reason for getting John involved.  I kind of understand the rationale (or insanity), but I really couldn’t connect with it after having characters with such depth.  The other main villains came off as more dangerous and cunning.  This guy was intimidating and gave off a sense of being powerful, but his reasoning for hating John made him oddly petty and out of place among the terrorist villains.  Then again, he did set up a few impressive scenarios, so maybe it’s simply a case of the man behind the curtain should have stayed there.

Overall, I loved this story and hope the author has another planned.  This is his debut novel and it’s very impressive with high levels of suspense, which is what I think a thriller should have.  I highly recommend this book.  Also, I ask the author if we could get a Ned book.  I really liked Ned.

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Most Valuable Marketing Tools for Self-Published Authors

A great site for marketing self-published books.

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1 Word of Mouth

What it can do for you:

  • It can generate sales even when you’ve had a couple of recent unfavorable reviews. What a reader’s buddy tells them about your book carries more weight than what some random stranger writes on your Amazon product page.
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Post-First Draft Goals (Finally!)

Well, the laptop is rebuilt with a new virus and malware checker.  I’m also using ‘Dropbox’ to back up my work on a Cloud-like system.  Using this I rewrote the final chapters of ‘Merchant of Nevra Coil’.  I noticed that I got more done and was more relaxed working on a desktop, but I think it was because I felt like I was in an office.  There was also extra support around here since I was fixing a disaster instead of doing something fresh.

My ‘vacation’ starts this week, but it’s really me waiting for the edits on ‘The Compass Key’.  That gets done and then I format, write the blurbs, and wait for the cover art.  I’ll even set everything up early on Amazon Kindle, so I don’t have to worry about it in the last second.  Aiming for early August release like August 1st, which is doable.  Once all that gets done, I’m going to tackle edits on Books 6-8 if no other reason than to get the stories locked more in my head.

The toddler has Friday and the following Monday off, so I’m not going to be leaping into any projects.  Then we have July 4th and family visiting for a few days.  I might not tackle the editing project until after all that.  So, what will I do?  Read, flush out some future ideas, blog, and relax.  There are a lot of small things that I can get done and not feeling rushed helps. I know a lot of these things sound like work, but I love designing characters and stories.  It’s what kept me sane for so many years while I worked in retail and office jobs.

BIG REMINDER!  This week is the ‘Villain Teaser Excerpts’.  The first appearances of the several villains that culminates in the BLOG DEBUT of the Big Baddie!  As usual, I’ve tried my best to edit down the scene to be more of a teaser than a spoiler.  Enjoy and I’ll do my post to crawl out of bed to reply to comments.  Seriously, I have nothing really on my plate this week and can be a slacker.

Charles’s Version of Slacker Goals:

  1. Check out the new supermarket down the road.
  2. Continue reading ‘My GRL’ by John W. Howell.  If I finish it then I’ll start Ranger’s Apprentice #10.
  3. Create characters, locations, and plot overviews for ‘The Elysium Saga’.
  4. Jot down notes for new Clyde book and new Darwin book to add to series when I finish #3.
  5. Watch more of Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood.
  6. Keep watching World Cup Soccer.
  7. Entertain toddler on Friday with playground, Barnes & Noble, and maybe some frozen yogurt for lunch.
  8. Set up my interview for Readfulthings before I sleep tonight.
  9. Watch ‘The Wolverine’.
  10. Buy more seltzer.
  11. Do stuff that I didn’t think of while writing this list.
  12. Rewrite the outline for Book 9 if I go through Legends of Windemere withdrawal.
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Tiara Wars & The Sword of Bone

Aragorn and Arwen (Lord of the Rings)

Aragorn and Arwen (Lord of the Rings)

Given the theme of the week, I looked through my future projects for one that had married characters.  Apparently, I don’t really have anything like that unless I want to go for heavy spoilers.  Instead, I’ll mention these two ideas that are still in the note stage.

Long ago, I created Windemere and started putting various governments in there.  Ralian had the Serab kingdom and then the various wilderness regions.  Shayd had the Chaos Elves and Canst’s Fields had isolated villages with no central government.  Then there’s Cerascent, the island region.  I threw in so many kingdoms that it struck me as odd that there were so many of them.  Then ‘Tiara War’ and ‘Sword of Bone’ came to mind to explain it all.

There was a central government of Cerascent, but it only works if there is a King and Queen.  There hasn’t been a King in centuries and the Queens have been mentally unstable because of their initiation.  So they’ve been rather ineffective and ignored by the island kingdoms.  It doesn’t help that the advisers, knights, and every royal employee spend most of their time keeping the castle together.  It has been this way every since an assassination took out the entire royal line.

‘Tiara War’ was influenced by watching a bit of Battle Royale and hearing from friends about Hunger Games.  Basically, the Queen is chosen when the Princess’s of the small kingdoms go to an island for a battle to the death.  This is all volunteer and the main character is a lesser known Princess who wants to win to rule with her childhood friend.  We’ll get to him in a bit.  I haven’t thought much more than this because of the close association with Battle Royale/Hunger Games.  Free for all death matches have become popular and it may take some major thinking to retain the essence with a different tactic here.  Figured the ‘volunteer’ thing would work since they are willingly entering this competition.

‘Sword of Bone’ started as a poem about a mountain island of bones that had a magic sword at the top.  Whoever claimed the sword would become King and they don’t have to be royalty.  I saw how it would work with ‘Tiara War’ pretty quickly and noted a few more about the idea.  The mountain grows with every death because it absorbs its victims’ bones.  Nasty creatures and traps are found here, which the main character sets off to defeat.  I was thinking of making him a caster instead of a warrior or thief.  I thought this would make him more of a thinker than a sword swinger.

Aside from the mentioned problems, I’m not sure how to pull this off exactly. ‘Sword of Bone’ might be too short for its own book.  So these might end up being combined where each chapter switches between their stories.  Either that or make it a two-pack novel.  It’s still in the note stage and I’ve already dropped the short story collection that showed the recruitment of the knights.  Each one was going to be a different were-creature, but I couldn’t get it to work.  At least not yet, so it might return.

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Mirror Interviews: Authors Wanted

Accept the challenge and volunteer to interview yourself.

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So, I’ve been thinking about doing a Wednesday feature here on Readful again as I haven’t done one in a while. Usually the Wednesday feature is a guest blog, and I’d like to keep that tradition running…sort of.

See, there’s two things. First thing: I was talking to an author the other day who pointed out that all author interviews seem to ask the same questions over and over. Not a lot of people pay attention to them, and it gets rather monotonous answering the same boring things all the time.

second thing: I’m lazy.

So, here is my solution:

I am looking for a handful of authors who want to to a blog interview. The catch is, I’m looking for a handful of authors who want to interview–themselves. Yep. I won’t send you any boring, already answered questions. I won’t ask you boxers or briefs or who would play…

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So You Want to Have Married Characters in Fiction?

Parn and Deedlit (Lodoss War)

Parn and Deedlit (Lodoss War)

Even though it isn’t very common, it isn’t that hard to make a believable married couple the central focus of a non-romance story.  I’m not talking about having their relationship be the focus.  That tends to run into the inevitable ‘cheating’ storyline, which is not something I’m going to get into.  We all know how that one works anyway.  This is to create a stable, believable married couple who are also on an adventure.

  1. Please try to avoid the stereotype of one being smart and the other being an idiot.  I’m starting with this because it’s a pet peeve of mine.  Make them equals even if they work differently.  A reader would wonder why they stay together if one keeps have to bail the other out and gets nothing in return.  Even Homer Simpson has his positive aspects in that he tries to be sweet at times.
  2. Don’t be afraid to have them fight every now and then.  I’m not talking a relationship ending screaming match, but an argument.  They are in a stressful situation and things happen.  Almost every couple argues or disagrees.  At least those that are an equal relationships.  If the marriages is established as one spouse being the dominant and the other being a constant submissive in the decision-making then you can skip the fights.  I will say that doing that will make the submissive appear weak and you may want to work on building them up.
  3. Don’t shy away from kisses, hugs, and sweet nothings when the characters are in private.  They’re married and while they might not do public displays of affection, you should show that there is some kind of emotional and physical spark.  Seriously, even a peck on the cheek or holding hands would work here.
  4. Give the characters an identity beyond the marriage.  We’ve all seen characters whose entire role is being romantically linked to another.  They can have individual hobbies, dreams, and thoughts while remaining married.  For example, the husband might be into fishing and dreams of own his own boat.  Meanwhile, the wife is an expert swordswoman and dreams of running a combat school.  Two different interests and goals within the same relationship.  Of course, have them support each other.
  5. Never be afraid to have the married characters be physically separated.  Many authors think that all solid married couples are permanently in the newlywed stage where they are attached at the hip . . . or hip-adjacent region. There is no reason they can’t go in different directions to get things done.  This can connect to a mutual trust that they will be reunited and the reader sees them as individuals instead of one entity.
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