Lacarsis the City of Evil: The Myths

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Most of the action in Quest of the Brokenhearted takes place in the city of Lacarsis, which has been a slight mystery in the Windemere books.  It’s been mentioned a handful of times in other books, but only as a place of monsters and evil.  This story is where readers get to see what’s actually inside.  To be honest, the journey from single word to in-depth city is rather simple.

At the beginning, I was heavily influenced by ‘Castlevania’ and was playing ‘Symphony of the Night’ almost religiously.  I still do since my Super NES died long ago and I can’t play ‘Super Castlevania’ anymore.  Honestly, this video game series has been a favorite of mine since childhood, so it shouldn’t be a surprise that I did a book that acts like an homage to the concept.  I think I mentioned in another post that Kira’s whip-like weapon made her the perfect choice for this, but now I’m getting off topic.  I changed it from a castle to a large city, but the whole monster thing came from this.  A difference I was determined to do was that the city moves around the continent, so people can wake up one day and find it sitting a few miles away from their home.  Not sure why, but I always found this part fairly amusing.

I don’t remember the earlier names beyond calling it ‘The City of Evil’, which was a placeholder.  Thankfully, I figured something out in a way that probably would have had me put in a straight-jacket if done in public.  With an image in my head, I just began blabbing the phrase ‘Welcome to’ and inserted whatever odd name turned up.  Took a few days of randomly doing this until I blurted out Lacarsis and it stuck.  At least, it did for about three years before I wondered if I was having trouble because of the name and tossed it away for a few months.  Nothing else turned up, but I didn’t feel rushed because I didn’t have a story yet.  Once Quest of the Brokenhearted came up, I went back to the old name again.

One of the hardest things in explaining Lacarsis is that exploring it is a big part of the overall adventure.  At least on a physical level because Kira’s battles span the entire region.  Something that always remained the same throughout the incarnations is that it is vast and filled with monsters.  The creatures aren’t seen from outside and a few times I considered having them venture out to cause havoc, which draws people to investigate.  I changed it to retain the mystery, so that when Kira steps inside, she is met with this giant realm that the outside world never understood.  This mystery really grew on me because it meant I could do more than have the hero go through rooms.  Now, there was more variety in settings and the overall landscape grew to something unique in Windemere.

I never really came up with a reason for Lacarsis existing that survived the various incarnations.  At one point, it was where all monsters were born, but that didn’t make much sense.  Baby monsters wouldn’t be found outside of the city and it meant that everything would have to be around this area instead of across the globe.  The answer could have been making all of the inhabitants unique, but then I wouldn’t be able to flush out a few species that I had my eye on.  Eventually, I left the reason Lacarsis is there as a mystery that I’m not sure I every truly answer.  To be honest, I’m not even clear that it’s necessary since the other cities don’t require such an explanation.  Someone/thing wanted to build a city for monsters and that’s what happened.

A question I do keep asking myself here is if Lacarsis will appear in other stories.  That’s as long as it isn’t destroyed by Kira, but there could always be a new version.  Monsters will always need a place to live and evil will always band together.  The future of Lacarsis could very well go beyond this adventure to give other heroes a chance to see what’s inside.  After all, this is a rather fluid place at times and there’s no telling what it will turn into when it’s pitted against a different person.  I say this because one aspect that I began realizing as I edited was that Lacarsis kind of mirrors and accommodates the hero who challenges it.  In a way, Kira gets something she wanted from the competition within the City of Evil and that’s a place where she’s accepted.  So, maybe another hero will meet something else that fills a void.  Makes one wonder how much of what you see in Quest of the Brokenhearted is even real or part of Kira’s subconscious influence.  Just another mystery in this city that I hope will continue to grow.

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Fairies, Myths, and Magic – all for 99¢

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Colleen Chesebro has a new book out. Check out the promo, then check out the book.

Step into a world where fairies, dragons, and other magical beings converge in a collection of poetry and short stories inspired by the celebration of Litha, the Summer Solstice.

Meet Drac, a dragon cursed by his own poisonous deeds, and two pixies who help an old man remember a lost love. You’ll meet a pair of fairies with a sense of humor, and a young girl who fulfills her destiny after being struck by lightning. Learn what happens when a modern witch’s spell goes terribly wrong. Meet the Sisters of the Fey, a group of Slavic Witches who sign a pact with the Rusalki Fey to preserve their magic for the good of all.

Atmospheric and haunting, the prose and poetry, will rewrite the mythologies of the past bringing them into the future.

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New On Amazon: Quest of the Brokenhearted for #99cents #fantasy

A battered soul faces a city of monsters in
Quest of the Brokenhearted!

Cover Art by Sean Harrington

As Windemere moves forward, a broken spirit falls into the shadows.

Two years have passed since Luke Callindor was lost during the champions’ battle against Baron Kernaghan. Many mourn the loss, but none have been hurt more than the fiancée he left behind, Kira Grasdon. Plagued by grief and determined to prove he is alive, she has sacrificed her business, her reputation, and her hope. Surviving on the streets of Gaia, she has become an emotional husk of her former self. It is only by chance that Kira crosses paths with an old friend and learns of a path, which will either end her suffering or revive her shattered soul. As the rumors state, hundreds of adventurers have flocked to Lacarsis and none have returned.

Will Kira meet her death in the City of Evil or will she thrive among the monsters?

*****

Book Excerpt: The Farm

The blast of warm air hits and swirls around the area to make all those in metal armor feel like they are about to faint. As the wind billows out, it carries the fog away to reveal broken fences and an abandoned farmhouse. The porch is partially collapsed with a swing sitting in the mud, its chains still connected to the fallen roof. The front door is closed, but a large hole is in the middle as if something tried to punch its way inside. Rusty pots and tools are scattered about the ground, some of them having been plunged into the ground. Not far away is a large barn, which shows no sign of damage beyond peeling paint and cobwebs dangling from the eaves. A crooked weathervane sits above the hay loft, the bat-shaped object spinning wildly even though the wind has died. Wilted crops stand in the fields among those that have already rotted into mush. Piles of hay dot the landscape, each one having turned black and become surrounded by swarms of thumb-sized flies. When the last of the fog clears, the entire area is bathed in a sickly orange light that causes the adventurers’ skin to crawl.

An animal call erupts from a nearby pasture, the grass a light brown and showing signs of being repeatedly trampled. In response, the sounds of chickens drift from the farmhouse and they are soon joined by other familiar noises. The ear-wrenching symphony continues to grow as the adventurers spread out across the road and into the fields. Most are focused on the farmhouse door, so they are caught off-guard when the attack begins. Zombified pigs, horses, goats, and sheep burst out of the barn to charge the nearest warriors. With acidic foam flying from their mouths, the undead livestock crash into the armored figures and rip into whatever flesh they can reach. The goats and pigs cause the most damage, their teeth breaking through metal and bone while the horses do more harm with their hooves. Flapping wings from the farmhouse are a slight warning before a flock of chickens and ducks explode from the windows. Lacking teeth, they have a harder time killing their prey, who swing wildly and blindly cast spells that miss half of the time. Chaos is consuming the crowd when the first animal call erupts from the right and four knights are sent hurtling through the air. Flesh dangling from its horns and blood splattered across its rotting face, the zombified bull barrels into the adventurers. The grunting beast tramples everything in its path as it crashes into one of the fields and sends a broken cart rolling away. Turning around, the animal ignores the arrows that stick into its hindquarters and charges back into the crowd.

While the others try to retreat, Kira swings her sickle at the bull’s side and gets the weapon stuck between the exposed ribs. She holds on while she is dragged and uses the blunt end to swat chickens out of the air. As she passes a stallion, she swings her kusari-gama to get the chain wrapped around its hind legs. With the horse galloping away from the bull, Kira plants her feet and pulls hard on her weapon. Her strength combined with that of the zombified steed allows her to shatter the larger animal’s ribs. Spinning around, she whips the sickle into the side of the stallion’s head and uncoils the chain as it crashes to the ground. Without turning back, the adventurer dives to the side and narrowly avoids getting gored by the bull. The moment she hits the ground, she pounces to grab the jagged hole in its body and pulls herself close enough to punch inside with the blunt end of her weapon. Kira continues striking the rotting heart until the confused animal rears back and exposes its stomach for a pair of spearmen to impale it. They are unable to support its weight and are promptly crushed while the young woman flips up to slam her sickle into the base of its skull. Hanging onto the bucking bull, she violently twists the blade until the zombie finally falls over and rapid decays. The others are about to cheer when the call of another bull bursts from the pasture.

“They just keep coming,” Kira mutters as she watches more animals pour out of the buildings.

Grab your copy on Amazon for 99 cents throughout the month of July!

*****

Interested in more Windemere?  Then don’t forget to check out Charles E. Yallowitz’s first series: Legends of Windemere

All Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Or more interested vampires? Then check out War of Nytefall: Loyalty:

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

About the Author:

Charles Yallowitz was born and raised on Long Island, NY, but he has spent most of his life wandering his own imagination in a blissful haze. Occasionally, he would return from this world for the necessities such as food, showers, and Saturday morning cartoons. One day he returned from his imagination and decided he would share his stories with the world. After his wife decided that she was tired of hearing the same stories repeatedly, she convinced him that it would make more sense to follow his dream of being a fantasy author. So, locked within the house under orders to shut up and get to work, Charles brings you Legends of Windemere. He looks forward to sharing all of his stories with you, and his wife is happy he finally has someone else to play with.

Blog: www.legendsofwindemere.com
Twitter: @cyallowitz
Facebook: Charles Yallowitz
Website: www.charleseyallowitz.com

LET THE TOURNAMENT OF LACARSIS BEGIN!

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Interview with author Karen Oberlaender

Marcia Carrington's avatarMarcia's Book Talk

I have the great pleasure today of interviewing Karen Oberlaender, author of the short story collection, IN A SMALL COMPASS, and flash fiction series NEIGHBORS, on Marcia’s Book Talk.

Karen Oberlaender, author photograph

Welcome, Karen, it is lovely to have you here!

Thank you very much, Marcia, it is a pleasure to be here.

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Q: For how long have you been writing?

A: I started writing ‘songs’ for myself when I was about elevenish. Throughout school I did not write much as we were forced to write what the ministry of education deemed necessary. At university, things changed; the topics were more interesting, and regained my love for writing. I kept writing non-fiction texts until I started my first blog, “My train of thoughts on…”, in December 2012. It took me until April 2013 to gather the courage to hit the publish button for my first short story, “Nightmare,”…

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7 Most Useful Legal Tips for Writers

Nicholas C. Rossis's avatarNicholas C. Rossis

When I started my Indie career, I realized one of my most useful skills was my experience with Internet marketing. But I constantly wished I was experienced in legal matters, too. Which is why I was so excited to meet Lucy Taylor, a legal expert at LY Lawyers. Luckily for us, Lucy is also an avid blogger who enjoys sharing her tips and suggestions with her online readers. Lucy often helps people dealing with legal problems, addictions, and crime. Today, Lucy will share with us some useful tips for writers.

7 Most Useful Legal Tips for Writers

Legal tips for writers | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's bookWhether you’re writing a blog post or the next great novel, there’s a responsibility that comes with publishing any creative work. Many people don’t realize it, but there’s quite a bit of legal navigation that comes with being a writer, both in protecting your own work and respecting the rights of others. Here are…

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July Literary Giveaway – Books Galore

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Goal Post: Out of Office. Please Send Pizza.

(Addition: So, I gained a review on ‘War of Nytefall‘, but lost one on ‘Beginning of a Hero‘.  I’m really coming to the end of my rope with this shit.  What the hell is going on with Amazon when I gain nothing on a book for months and then I suddenly lose one that looks it’d been there for years?)

I’m writing this pretty far ahead of schedule only because I’m away for the weekend.  This isn’t to say I’ll be quiet the whole time.  My laptop will be with me even if I can only use it very sparingly.  Got the phone too, so I can try to keep up with emails, twitter, and blog posts.  I’ll be pretty slow to respond though.  Last thing I want is to get accused of being antisocial.  The manga I’ve stuffed into my backpack might be more easily accessible than the notebook.  Not like I can write or read on the plane since even Dramamine doesn’t get the entire job done.

The main reason the laptop is coming with me is because I hope to hit publish on Quest of the Brokenhearted tomorrow morning before I head home.  Everything has been uploaded and set up already.  This means I can do the bits of promo at night, which will include sending out the HTML files to those who offered to help.  Feel free to volunteer in the comments if you haven’t already.  This clears my week, which will be a little crazy with the start of a summer camp and July 4th.  Hard to get into projects when you have so much going on, which is why I decimated myself in the first half of the year.  Pushing Ichabod Brooks back a year takes even more of the edge off, so I can dive into outlining and editing once Raven’s Wrath is done.  That’s the October story, which I already started.

With it being summer, I don’t really know what else to talk about.  The week was preparing for the trip and entertaining the kid.  Probably let him play video games a bit too much, but some of them were designed to help him with math.  I was given a cursive packet for him to finish over the summer too.  We’ve made decent progress and he’s good at writing them with a guide.  Memory isn’t there yet.  The big event was seeing ‘Incredibles 2’, which was a lot of fun.  My son liked it so much that he wanted the junior novelization and will be reading that for his summer reading program.  He got a novelization of ‘Hotel Transylvania 3’ too.  We’re seeing that he will read chapter books if they’re on topics he already loves like Pokemon, superheroes, or various movies.  That’s good to know for the future since it’s still a challenge.

I feel a little bad that I can’t deliver a lot of big news here.  Focused more on parenting than writing, which isn’t something I can really talk about.  For example, I found a package of 100 water balloons in the basement.  So, I bought a plastic bat and filled them all up for ‘Water Balloon Baseball’.  I only pitched while my son swung.  Those balloons were tougher than we expected, so they would bounce off the bat and explode on the ground.  It worked better with a brick wall behind him.  As much fun as this sounds, you really had to be there for the full effect.  I didn’t take any pictures because I was busy throwing water balloons and having fun myself.  My wife is the parent who loves taking pictures of everything.  She was at work, so all I had was a picture of a drenched kid standing amid the ruins of 100 broken water balloons.

Maybe writing this so early in the week is making things tough.  The trip is on my mind and I’m starting to get a little anxiety about everything in general.  Had a few bad attacks that were stirred by dreams since I woke up feeling like I was on a medieval torture rack.  No idea what I was dreaming of though.  Something I’m going to do next week is contact a therapist to talk about this.  I wanted to stick with what I had, but I’ve been urged to see someone.  I’ll admit that my concern here is money since my wife, son, and I seem to have almost 10 doctors for various things.  I probably won’t talk much about this outside of the Anxiety Journal.  That segment is going well, but I assume it’ll cool off a bit with the summer starting.  People really don’t like talking about such problems during a time when we’re supposed to be having fun.

So, goals of the week?

  1. Survive trip.
  2. Publish and promote Quest of the Brokenhearted.  (Anybody know any free promo sites?)
  3. Bring the son to his morning camp.
  4. Continue working on Raven’s Wrath.  Maybe get some extra writing time in on July 4th.
  5. Read more ‘Bleach’ and get more ‘Marchen Awakens Romance’.
  6. Work on the cursive packet.
  7. Surrender dinner plans to someone else.
  8. Contact therapist.
  9. Ponder questions about the state of humanity.
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Tears of a Battered Hero

Sakura from Naruto

Symbol of courage
Expected to bend
Yet never break
Ignoring the human side
That all heroes should possess
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A limit has been reached
Tears flow
Down cheeks marred with dirt
And blood friend and foe
A heroic spirit crumbles
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Pushing on ahead
The adventure must continue
Death is considered
Both a relief and a fear
How much more to sacrifice?
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Many can connect
To a hero that carries on
Wounded on the inside
Yet unable to stop
Because life refuses to slow down


I was originally going to do a long post about writing a ‘sad’ character, but it wasn’t coming out well.  Instead, this poem came to mind.  It’s a challenge to write a hero who isn’t full of positive energy and optimism.  You don’t want to bring the reader down, but you need to retain a level of depression even with the character moving forward.  The funny thing is that while we don’t like seeing characters like this, it’s a very common mentality in reality.  How often have we or someone we known continued pushing forward after a great loss instead of letting it drag us down completely?  It’s never an immediate leap back to being positive, so our fictional heroes shouldn’t be able to recover that quickly either.  With Kira Grasdon, she might even be one of the people who never gets back to her original level of happiness.  Hate to say it, but there are those out there who simply can’t emotionally stand fully erect any more.  (Yeah, I’m probably talking about myself there.)

What do you think about heroes who are suffering from depression, anxiety, or have become negative due to life events?

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Television and the Craft of Writing Fiction

Joan Hall's avatarStory Empire

Hi, SEers. This is one of those months with a fifth Friday. You know what that means… time for another group post! This time, we thought we’d address the subject of what fiction authors can learn about craft from television series. (We’ll try to keep it short because there are six of us.)

The Spin-off (Stargate Atlantis)

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Ciao. Staci here. I chose to look at spin-offs because I’m currently writing a spin-off (the Nightforce Security Series, spun off from theMedici Protectorate Series) and wanted to explore what makes a spin-off successful. I choseStargate Atlantis because it’s a brilliant spin-off ofStargate SG1. Each series was strong in its own right and solidified theStargate franchise as a force to be reckoned with in the sci-fi world.

So, what’s to be learned from Stargate Atlantis

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Novy’s Son, on #LisaBurtonRadio

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Lisa Burton

Welcome all you abandoned children and lost boys, you forgotten souls of every stripe. You’ve landed on Lisa Burton Radio, the only show that brings you interviews with characters from the books you love. My guest today is Michael St. Germain. “Welcome to the show, Michael.”

“Good evening, Ms. Burton.”

“You have a bit of an unusual heritage. Can you tell our listeners about that, please?”

“Certainly. I am very proud of my heritage though my dad was not. My grandfather

was Augustus Saint-Gaudens, the most famous sculptor in the 19th and early 20th century here

in America. Do you know the name Augustus Saint-Gaudens?”

“No, I don’t. But you see I do not know anything about art and sculptures, except the Mona Lisa with her pretty smile and the statue of David, which is so sexy.”

“Yes, those are two beautiful pieces of art. But, getting back to my…

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