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Lisa Burton

Our Secret Lives

All of us have things in our lives we never discuss. Despite the age of the selfie, we might go somewhere, or do something, we don’t want to be judged for. When it comes to dreams, the sky’s the limit.

We never really remember our dreams. Bits and pieces, of course, but that’s a side of life we never understand fully. What if some of our nocturnal activities were real? What if we just didn’t remember after we awoke? Studies of sleep walkers and others show this is possible too.

Then there is the case of Lauren. Thirty-one years old, left wing liberal, vegetarian. She’s been married to her wife Tina for the last five years, lives in a quiet little house with solar panels on the roof. Tina is an international flight attendant, complete with insurance and benefits. Lauren owns an old nursery. Together they make…

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Raven’s Wrath Part 2 #horror #thriller #Halloween

(Off to a wild start yesterday.)

A Truly Terrifying Seeting

“Dallas is the only part of Texas remaining.”

“I have a report about China being raised three thousand feet into the air.”

“Half of Earth’s island have been swallowed by the sea.”

“The people of Canada are missing.”

“Each incident notes the appearance of a man and woman.”

“Wasn’t it two women?”

“The red-haired one was ripped in half over Rome.”

“All animals in Africa have grown to five times their natural size!”

Pinning each report to the wall, Jon Barclay lets out a slow breath and takes a step back from the mess. He has long since stopped trying to connect the incidents to figure out a pattern, the ball of red yarn now acting as mindless distraction. Tossing it from one hand to another, the exhausted reporter lets his eyes wander over the papers in the hope that his subconscious will lock in on a clue. After a few minutes, he returns his attention to the three pictures that are in the middle of the mess. The one of Gemma Cooke has been crossed out, but the photos of Dawn Addison and Ian Connors remain intact. Jon shivers when the expressions on their faces turn from smiles to ugly sneers. He sighs at the familiar changes, which happen before every major event that has befallen humanity during the last three months.

“There’s a hole in Australia and New Zealand has been put in it . . . vertically,” his assistant says when she enters the room a few minutes later. Annie Drayder holds out the page and gasps for air, her legs aching from charging up two flights of stairs. “Those two were seen fighting in the sky again. Are you sure we shouldn’t release their names to the public? I know the government said not to, but it’s going to happen eventually. Might as well be us. What’s the worst that can happen?”

“One of those monsters doesn’t want the world to know the truth,” Jon replies while adding the new report to his collection. He taps on an article about how thousands of people were devoured by their computers. “One person tried to share the information on the Internet and all who read it were killed. I thought you were aware of that incident, but it happened within the first week. You might have still been on vacation during that time. The last few months have blurred into a mess.”

“No sense killing yourself over something you can’t report on,” Annie states while pouring two cups of coffee. Gazing out the window, she shudders at the sight of a raven flying backwards over the city. “I mean, we can tell everyone what’s going on without saying those two are involved. By the way, I finally got through to my friend in D.C. and she sent over the files Gemma Cooke made on Dawn Addison. They’re a jumbled mess, but I think I can fix it on the computer. The information on Ian Connors was easier to get, but there isn’t much there. He lived an uneventful lift until he vanished.”

The reporter takes a sip of his drink and picks up a paper that is slipped under the door. “It looks like every leader of South America has been turned into either a sloth or a jaguar. The llamas are talking about a revolution and all of their water has been turned into molasses. I can’t tell if those two are fighting each other or humanity. Unless their powers are being thrown about so haphazardly that we’re nothing more than collateral damage. Makes you wonder how much more of this the planet can take.”

“All the garbage in the ocean was turned into a tower in the Bermuda Triangle.”

“Is that a good or bad thing?”

“Nobody knows.”

“Looks like the President is about to say something.”

“Wondered when this would happen.”

“Guessing they finally got the underground bunker set up.”

Jon turns up the volume on the television until he can hear the President of the United States spoke. The picture is fuzzy, but the sound comes through in alternating shouts and whispers. A smack to the machine causes it to sprout an arm and punch the reporter in the stomach. Falling to his knees, Jon mutters an apology and nods his head when the television shows a clear shot of the President in his bunker. The man’s suit is neatly pressed, but his face is haggard, which matches the expressions of his family and cabinet. Not wanting to speak, Annie jots down a note about how half of the people they expected to see are missing and passes it to her boss. He can only shrug and go back to listening to a speech that is more bluster than plan. Catching his assistant’s groan of dismay, he writes his own message about how there is nothing else the man can say given the situation. Hearing the mention of nuclear weapons causing Jon to freeze and he stares at the screen in horror.

“Would that do anything?” Annie asks, her voice quivering with fear.

“I doubt it considering what those two are doing by accident,” he replies as he watches the President pull a key out of his pocket. A woman to his right pulls out her own key, which the reporter finds strange since he does not recognize her. “This could make things a lot worse. If Dawn and Ian feel like we’re a threat then they’ll wipe us out before finishing their personal battle. I really hope that-”

“All nuclear powers are launching at the same time!” a voice screams from the hallway.

Annie and Jon can only watch as the keys are put in place on a machine that is off-camera and turned. The television hiccups and shows multiple screens of nuclear missiles being activated around the world. All of the images combine to show the weapons converging on two figures that are hovering over the Atlantic Ocean. The explosion shakes the entire world and the fiery blast can be seen by everyone as it spreads across the sky. With a low groan, the nuclear explosion pauses and begins to churn like a slow whirlpool. Nine flaming twisters emerge from the maelstrom and streak out towards the countries that have attacked the two reality-bending beings. The television goes back to the Presidential bunker in time to show everyone panicking an instant before their voices turn into screams of agony. A melting body staggers briefly into view before the connection is lost and the only thing being played is an old video game made to imitate tennis.

“And this is how humanity ends,” Jon sighs as he looks out the window.

As if his senses have been enhanced, he can see all of the destructive funnels travel across the world on a collision course. It takes the reporter a few minutes to realize that they are in the path of the nuclear twister that took out the President. Screams from outside tell him that others have figured out the truth, but he can only bring himself to sit down. Glancing at Annie, he nods at a box of donuts and pats the chair next to him. Fighting the temptation to join the chaos outside, she brings the pastries to the table and claims one filled with chocolate cream. She laughs with her mouth full when Jon pulls a bottle of bourbon out from under the table. Not having any glasses, he takes a swig and hands it to his assistant.

“Sobriety and diets be damned, huh?” she asks with a smirk.

“Might as well since it looks like Hell is about to come to Earth,” Jon replies as the wall in front of them is melted by the approaching twister.

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Chastity Sullivan Answers Your Questions! #vampires #fantasy

Vampirella

Here’s our first War of Nytefall interview of the month.  Say hello to Chastity Sullivan, who will be happy to continue answering questions in the comments.  She’s left the Vengeance Hounds in charge of the Scrumptious Siren and is all yours for the rest of the day.  Let’s get right into it.

Victoria Zigler and Deby Fredericks both asked:  Why hummingbirds? (Context: Chastity uses vampirized hummingbirds to protect the Scrumptious Siren.)

Chastity–  A very good question because that tends to throw people off.  That’s actually part of my reasoning.  Vampires tend to use large, scary animals in order to create intimidation, but that isn’t what I was looking for.  I needed creatures that could act as enforcers and defend my establishment from the outside without drawing unnecessary attention.  Hummingbirds were the perfect choice.  They are fast and agile even without being vampires.  The beaks of my pets are like enchanted syringes too.  Make them have a taste for blood and they make mosquitoes look like Vegans.  I’ve trained them to drain vampires as well in case some of my clients break my ‘no hunting’ rule.  A final note is that they’re so pretty to look at.

C.S. Boyack asked: Of all the various businesses, why a bakery along with everything else?

Because everybody loves sweets.  The aroma draws people in and the business is a fairly wholesome one.  It stands in contrast to everything else I do.  Besides, I’ve always loved coming up with fun recipes even though I wasn’t a very good cook.  Felt like a natural addition and a decent cover for all of my other activities.

L. Marie asked:

  1. What goals, if any, do you have for your business (like expansion)?
  2. Where do you get your recipes?
  3. What do you appreciate about Luther?
  4. Who, if anyone, is your closest female friend? Why?

An interesting list of questions with one that I’m not going to fall for.

  1. That’s a tough one because I have to be careful about expansion.  Mortals can get touchy and territorial, which can lead to messiness.  I can always charm and seduce my way to victory, but that still causes bad blood.  Building upon the Scrumptious Siren is better even though I have limited space.  I recently added a hot spring that is connected to the building through a special tunnel.  This could lead to a spa if I can find a way to do so without harming the trees.  The tough thing with asking an immortal about goals is that we have eternity, so we take things slow.  Survival is key and I’ll keep an eye out for opportunities.
  2. I get my recipes from a variety of sources.  Many are designed by either myself or the goblins, who are surprisingly creative.  This is a big reason why I haven’t turned them into mindless slaves.  Other times, a guest will come up with an idea that actually works and doesn’t cause food poisoning.  Apparently, Dawn Fangs can still get sick from bad food.  It isn’t violently ill, but you get all groggy and growl a lot.  While I shouldn’t say this out loud, I do occasionally steal recipes from visiting competitors.  In my defense, they show up looking to poach my ideas, so it’s part of the game.
  3. Luther is a good friend and very talented when it comes to gathering information in the wilderness.  Nothing else I have to say about that.
  4. This is a tough one because I don’t have a lot of female friends.  I don’t really get along with my own gender for unspoken reasons.  That being said, I’d like to think that Mab and I are close friends.  We had a falling out due to a misunderstanding, but we’ve gotten closer ever since we became Dawn Fangs.  I think opposites attract when it comes to us.  I’m stylish, lustful, charming, and love being in the open while Mab is drab, standoffish, and prefers the shadows.  We make a good pair when we have to work together.
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Raven’s Wrath Part 1 #horror #thriller #Halloween

Skyscraper from Ghostbusters

(This starts the special horror story that will run all month.  I will mention that I only did a quick read over for editing.  This is part 4 of what I’m calling the ‘Raven Series’, which includes Raven’s HoldRaven’s Game, and Raven’s Dawn.  Hopefully the finale entertains.)

With a yawn that dislocates her jaw, Dawn Addison sits up in her cloud-shaped bed and floats onto a nearby balcony. The sun glints off her golden eyepatch while she runs her hands through her brown hair to pull out the knots. A gentle breeze takes the severed tresses from her hair and adds them to a tapestry that depicts an island in the middle of a lake. She stares at the city that surrounds her five-hundred story hotel called Heaven’s Nest, which she has moved around the world for the last year. The young woman remembers going to bed in Los Angeles, but she can see Mount Kilimanjaro in the distance as well as the Parthenon. Realizing that she must have moved them in her sleep, Dawn waves her hand to whisk the landmarks back to where they belong. She pauses with her arm stretched out and watches the glitter on her skin sparkle until she gets bored. A storm erupts from overhead and unleashes a downpour that washes her clean, a chorus of shouts from below bringing a smile to her face. Tearing off her skin, she reveals a pair of jeans and a long-sleeved shirt with her own face beneath. Frowning at the casual look of her outfit, she changes the clothes into a black, short-sleeved top and a crimson poodle skirt.

Grabbing a parasol from an open drawer, she skips across her rooftop apartment and steps off the edge. A flock of ravens rise to meet her as she plummets towards the ground, the birds cawing in her face. Hearing a blood-curdling scream from above, Dawn opens her lacey umbrella and stops in midair. The animals land on the side of the building and anxiously peck at the windows, which begin to bleed from the frame. Floating closer to the hotel, the woman frowns at how she cannot see into her own domain. Mournful cries erupt from the same location as the scream, so she rides a sudden breeze back to the roof. A spiral staircase has already appeared in the floor by the time she lands and snaps her fingers to have the ravens move to the eaves. Their feathered bodies remain close and they stand on top of each other to create four ebony gargoyles that watch the bustling streets below.

A cold wind meets Dawn as she walks down the steps, which are lit by candles that are on the verge of going out. Frustrated by the flickering shadows, she calls of the flames to her golden eyepatch and has it glow like a torch. Another scream shakes the building and draws her attention to a door that is marked with runes that she found in a book. The ritual chamber of her loyal cultists has been quiet for weeks with all of them spending more time among the thousands of potential victims and recruits that frequent the hotel. Dawn wonders if they were in the middle of a nighttime ceremony when she moved Heaven’s Nest. Not wanting to be rude, she knocks on the wall and waits for a response. A series of gurgles slips from a vent, but the noise is abruptly cut off as a person is pushed through the slats. The cultist’s eyes continue to blink as they are carried by the oozing gore towards a drain that appears in the floor. A disembodied mouth cries as it falls over the lip and plunges into the shadows below. Watching the last of her follower disappear, Dawn sticks a finger in her ear to feel around her brain and see if there is a piece that is loose. Not finding any evidence that she is behind the strange incident, she shrugs and plunges her hand into the door.

Flipping the entire wall like she is opening a garage, she turns her eyepatch into wraparound sunglasses to protect herself from the unexpected light. There are crackling bonfires around the large room, each one holding one of her cultists. The men and women are still alive even though their skin has been seared to the point of flaking off. Horrified faces are merged with the ceiling, their eyes dripping magma that has created holes in the floor. A couple that Dawn remembers joining soon after her resurrection have been placed on top of a raven-shaped alter. Their bodies have been merged so that they are on the verge of kissing. Seeing that their noses have been sealed and their lips are sticky, she can only guess that contact will start a slow suffocation for the weeping pair. Without moving, Dawn lets the bonfires consume her people and has the ceiling open to let the corpses inside fall to the floor. The bodies turn to dust as she approaches the couple and reaches out to transform them into something that she hopes will make them happy.

“Has the monster gained a soul?” a voice asks from a shadowy corner. A blue-eyed man steps into view and wipes the soot off his bare chest. “I thought you would appreciate the horrific fates of your people. After all, it was only a matter of time before you killed them. I’m very proud of these two. They defended your honor the most, which is why I granted them a scrap of hope. So, tell me what you think. Is this fun? It isn’t normal, so it must be fun. That is what you always said, right?”

“I don’t think we’ve met,” Dawn answers as her eyepatch returns to its normal form. She turns the couple into a cherry tree, but they are immediately turned into a bleeding pile of logs by the young man. “There’s no style to what you’re doing. Fueled by rage and nothing more. You came here to hurt me . . . My long buried puppy dug himself up. Are you here to be friends or enemies?”

“You already know why I’m here,” Ian growls, his teeth sharpening into those of a dog. He howls with enough power to launch the top floor off Heaven’s Nest and expose the chamber to the blazing sun. “Part of you sensed that an enemy had returned with you. That’s why you kept moving your hotel. How could you not know that I was back? I share your power and I’m going to use it to destroy you. Reality can only survive having one monster pulling at its threads and you aren’t worthy to survive.”

Dawn casually wipes some blood off her skirt and plants her parasol into the floor to use as a chair. “That sounds boring. Revenge and anger are so . . . normal. There’s never any fun in that type of stuff. I prefer to toy with people like I always do. If you want to go on a rampage and terrorizing humanity then I won’t stop you, puppy. All I ask is that you leave enough for me to enjoy my games.”

“Are you an idiot? I’m here to kill you.”

“But you’re too new to defeat me.”

“I have something that you lack.”

“Well, I could always give myself those if I wanted.”

Confused by the response, Ian leaves himself open to a foot that explodes from the floor and rockets him into the sky. Dawn watches as he grows a hole in his chest and falls back down with the stretching limb passing through his body. She relaxes at the sight of her ravens coming out of the clouds to attack the man, but the flock is abruptly snared by spiderwebs that come out of the sun. The birds are yanked into the distance orb and the smell of burning feathers overs the Earth as Ian lands in front of Dawn. Sprouting the drab clothes he used to wear when a patient at Raven’s Hold, he shoves the woman to put her in the same outfit. With a scream, she falls to her knees and scratches at her metal eyepatch, which is turning around the socket. She pulls it out of her flesh to reveal the empty hole beneath and plunges a finger inside to extract a squirming optic nerve that is fanged at the end.

“You will never defeat me,” Ian declares as Heaven’s Nest shudders. The guests and employees scream as the building begins to implode, the bottom floors collapsing to prevent an easy escape. “All you want to do, Addison, is have fun with your powers. That means you aren’t focused and lack the dedication to killing. Sure, you enjoy it, but I crave it. My rage drives me to break everything that has been created. I can’t accomplish this unless you’re gone. Otherwise, you might think it’s fun to undo my work. Now, put up the best fight you can, but I guarantee that you will lose.”

“Never any fun in normal,” Dawn mutters while her arms turn into golden claws. She is about to attack when her metallic limbs become tarnished and are on the verge of falling apart at the joints. “No fair messing with my own body. It took me many years and a handful of college students to get this back. Now, be a good puppy and go back to your house. Don’t make mommy take away your-”

The blow to Dawn’s face is too fast for her to know what hit her, but she retains enough of her senses to turn the wall into a vertical pool. Transforming her shirt and skirt into a silver bikini, she swims away from Heaven’s Nest to stretch the water. When she cannot go any further, she turns around and launches herself at Ian. The surrounding liquid gathers around her body and is beginning to turn to ice when a wall of flames appears in her path. The pool evaporates and Dawn is left plummeting towards the ground until a red-haired woman leaps through a crack in the wall. Turning in midair, Gemma pulls two pistols out of her pockets and fires at Ian to prevent him from leaving the roof. To the man’s surprise, a bullet skims his cheek and leaves a burning cut on his flesh. The brunette wraps her legs around her trusted bodyguard’s waist and turns himself into a jetpack. Leaving a rainbow in their wake, the two women escape as Heaven’s Nest is sucked into itself and then explodes out to level the entire city.

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Leave a Question for Bob the Horse-Obsessed Vampire

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Bob entered into a three-way tie with Clyde and Nadia.  At least it was when I was working on this.  So, I’m going to do the interviews on Mondays (Chastity tomorrow) around noon, which gives me 5 days.  All of this to help promote War of Nytefall: Lost, which is available now.  Let’s try to learn more about Bob.

He’s definitely a supporting character, but he’s proven to be popular.  Much like Lost, Archillious, Lloyd Tenay, and Yola the Chaos Goddess, Bob is a ‘crazy’ character.  He will say or do things that feed an issue such as his obsession with horses or getting a rise out of Luther Grathan.  That doesn’t make him stupid or trapped solely as comic relief since he has many strengths.  There are times when Bob will abruptly come up with an idea or voice some insight that helps a conversation.  He is also very friendly and kind, which makes him more approachable than some of his friends.  This can go too far like when he insisted on during a funeral for a stable full of dead horses instead of helping his companions such for Clyde and Mab.

There isn’t much about Bob’s life before becoming a vampire.  You do learn about his origin in War of Nytefall: Lost, which I can sum up.  He was born into a family of horse breeders and a vampire was stalking the herd.  He fended her off a few times, but she attacked while he was away and killed everyone.  Impressed by Bob, she turned him into a vampire and taught him how to be sneaky and cunning.  They ended up running into a very angry paladin at one point, which resulted in his maker getting killed and him being tortured.  Titus Winthrop happened upon the scene in time to save Bob, but the trauma left the vampiric elf fairly crazed.  He has been a member of the Vengeance Hounds and Clyde’s gang ever since.

I don’t really know what else to mention about Bob.  He is designed to be both comic relief and loyal member of Clyde’s crew.  I made sure that the humor never reached a point where he was seen as too foolish to be taken seriously.  With his invisibility powers and unpredictable nature, he is a force to be reckoned with.  It is interesting how I gave him the power to hide along with the more complicated hair design.  Half of it is blond and the other half is black, which I’ll admit is rather hard to describe briefly.  Not sure that can lead to any questions though.

I know it might be a tough one and it’s so soon after the previous request, but leave your questions in the comments.  Bob will be taking the last Monday of October.  Have a fun month.

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The Creative Writing Process: Editing Your Novel – by Rachel Poli…

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Ah, editing your novel.

This is the moment some people live for and other people dread.

After you revise your novel, it’s time to write the next draft.

Compile it all together again so it looks nice and pretty.

Then you can tear it a part again!

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A Week of Victories and . . . Nothing Went Totally Wrong

Let’s start with the great news:

Passed the Teaching Assistant Test!

I also finished the workshops and got fingerprinted, so now I only have to wait for the certification paperwork to get processed by Albany.  I submitted to a bunch of TA jobs even though I don’t have the certificate yet, so I’m hoping to get a few callbacks and get an interview before that’s done.  Doesn’t look possible, but you never know.  At least I finished all the requirements and now I can focus on getting into an actual TA position, which is probably the harder part.

The completion of the TA path and some personal stuff did result in me hitting a slight wall.  I’d been pushing myself really hard with the studying and I think I built up too much anxiety.  So, I ended the week with a few bad attacks.  All at night, which is the norm.  I should be fine by tomorrow since I’m taking it easy.  I’m noticing that I don’t notice my stress when I’m excited.  Might have a little cough, but everything else is manageable because I’m focused on something positive.  Even searching for TA jobs and working on a cover letter was enjoyable.  Still, there might be another reason that my stress tends to rise up from time to time.

With the certification requirements met and only job hunting to do, one would think I have time to write.  At the very least, I should be able to edit Derailing Bedlam, which will start up on my blog in November.  You’d be right in this assumption . . . Yet, I can’t muster the imagination or mojo.  Ever since certain things happened in my life that only a handful of followers have been told in private, I can’t write.  Anxiety sets in and my focus vanishes if I edit.  My characters’ voices aren’t coming through if I try to write.  It’s almost like a piece of my soul has been sloppily removed.  There are traces of the urge, but I can’t get my brain to settle into the old patterns.  It feels way worse than writer’s block because this is spanning all of my ideas.

Pretty sure this is where people will start leaving comments of support, but I have to admit those cause a little bit of pain.  Part of it is because I’m still being told by those who caused this crumbling that they still support me.  (Don’t worry. I don’t think they read this blog, so there won’t be any drama below.)  In fact, I even get yelled at when I bring up this issue.  I’m lectured about how nobody wanted me to quit, which means my hand was forced without a clear idea of what it would do to me.  Don’t get me wrong.  I want to go into teaching to some extent like I was planning before my son was born and I had to move back to New York.  Heck, I tried to get a Masters right after I graduated from college, but my GPA was .04 points shy of the cut off and I was only an English Writing Arts major.  I’m saying that I will enjoy and thrive in a school.  Maybe it will soften the blow of my lost mojo, which I’m terrified will never come back.

You see, I’ve never had a point in my life when it was this hard to get into the mental mindset.  There were periods where I didn’t have the time, so I jotted down notes and outlines in notebooks.  That was different because the creativity was still there and easily accessible.  Now, it’s either buried or missing.  For someone who has been writing like a man possessed for so long, it’s very disorienting.  This is where the pain from well wishes comes from too.  To me, they sometimes feel like people are saying stuff at a funeral for part of me.  Is that dark and dramatic?  Yes, but that’s the best I could come up with.

Anyway, this is becoming too much of a sad rant.  I’m going to try to edit Derailing Bedlam if I have time to see if I can jog the senses.  I have War of Nytefall: Rivalry too, so editing might help me out for a bit.  Though, there are some aspects of that second one that hit too close to home.  So, let’s get to the goals:

  1. Follow up on jobs.
  2. Submit to any new jobs that turn up.
  3. Study for the Clerk-Laborer exam.  Yeah, I would rather be a TA, but I paid for the test and might as well try to ace it.  It’s all about pride now.
  4. Continue reading ‘Bleach’ (manga) and watching some ‘Blue Exorcist’.
  5. If energy and mojo are mustered: Edit Derailing Bedlam
  6. If not mustered:  Schedule December posts . . . Wait . . . I forgot something . . . OH!

Monday starts the finale of my ‘Raven Series’.  It’s Raven’s Wrath and will last the entire month with each post going live at midnight.  Join me and see what kind of send of Dawn Addison will get.

Also, it’s never too late to submit a guest post.

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When One Stands in the Past and the Other in the Future

The Matrix

I realized something as I wrote War of Nytefall: Lost, but I wasn’t able to really flush it out because of the story.  I tried to investigate this a bit in a few scenes and it was on the border of Clyde’s growth arc.  Yet, I couldn’t really get this small fact drawn out into the open as much as I wanted:

Mab looks to the past and Clyde looks to the future.

This does come up a bit, but I felt like I could have done better if the story wasn’t so focused on Lost.  It could be in my favor since things heat up in War of Nytefall: Rivalry though.  Part of the issue could be that the characters themselves weren’t entirely aware of this fact.  They butted heads unless there was a present problem to tackle.  So, they get distracted from this problem once the womb-born, Lost, and the Uttukku make trouble.  Yet, it does linger in the darkness and stems from a fight where the characters want different things.

  • Mab wishes for things to go back to the way they were before the Great Cataclysm.  She is a thief at heart and that’s the life she wants to hold onto.  Ruling Nytefall or being a soldier don’t appeal to her.  If her friends weren’t involved, she would have gone off on her own already.  You can even see that she’s the only member of the gang who has gone back to her roots.  Mab takes every opportunity to pull a heist, which is why her four-story house is filled with more treasure than most royal vaults.  Seriously, I realized at one point that Mab actually be one of the richest people in Windemere and nobody knows it.  This is her pride and joy too, but it revolves around returning to their past life.
  • Clyde is all about the future.  In his mind, the past can’t be reclaimed because he isn’t that man anymore.  As the first Dawn Fang, he has all of the others to think about, so he has to change from being the leader of a gang to the ruler of a kingdom.  Even more daunting, Nytefall’s influence is steadily going global.  Clyde would love to focus on heists and is even a little jealous of Mab, but he knows that he’s responsible for everything that’s happened.  Not to mention, he fears losing his humanity, which takes on a similar view as a mortal would when thinking about death.  In fact, Clyde is almost certain he’ll lose control one day and that will be it.

So, you have two people who have strong feelings for one another, but are focused on different time periods.  Mab wants to return to their roots while Clyde wants to forge a new life with what they have.  This is something that will have to be worked out over the course of the series if they’re going to have anything more than a friendship.  This is at the core of their fighting too because Clyde has broken promises about going out on heists with Mab.  It’s to the point where she doesn’t really believe him when he talks about joining her.

The biggest challenge here is how to make them find common ground.  It can’t be done without sacrifice.  Preferably, this would have to be done on both sides.  Maybe Mab can reduce her heists to spend more time with Clyde who lets her be more influential over Nytefall.  The two things stopping this is Mab’s pride and Clyde’s desire to not force her into anything.  He’s actually still uncomfortable about dragging his friends into the war and ruling a kingdom.  Of course, the two don’t really bring this up to each other.  I have to admit that I haven’t figured out why that is just yet.  For some reason, I can’t get the characters to talk about it.

What does the future hold?  Well, that is spoiler territory, but the Mab/Clyde relationships is a key part of their evolution.  Considering War of Nytefall: Loyalty begins with her sneaking into enemy territory to break him out of prison, it’s clear that this isn’t going to be a low level subplot.  The biggest challenge is going to be finding that middle ground because they can’t focus on two different two periods for eternity.  Not without having to go their separate ways and that would be a disaster.

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