Immortal Wars: The Summoning Part 9 #fiction #throwback

(Previously on Immortal Wars.)

Disclaimer: Immortal Wars was the book I came up with and wrote in high school.  I hadn’t even hit college by the time I wrote the first two books.  That means I hadn’t developed my style yet, wasn’t good at self-editing, and the story was fairly basic. So, you’ve been warned that this is the ultimate author throwback segment for my blog and will show my author origins.  FYI-  I put the first book (The Summoning) through a Print-on-Demand publisher and the second one (Light, Blood, & Tears) never saw the light of day.  Enjoy!

In a room that is lit with blood red lights and the walls are painted black, live two of the most dangerous villains on the warship.  The bare-chested man stands about as high as the seven-foot ceiling and he has huge, well-tanned muscles that make it nearly impossible for him to walk through narrow passageways.  His thick, black hair rolls down to his broad shoulders and his crimson eyes glow in the dim light like fiery embers.  This monster’s name is Draveon and he has also been dubbed the ultimate genetic weapon.  This massive man carries a glowing sword, which is hooked onto his belt at all times.  The gorgeous sword looks very plain and normal, except it has a flawless ruby in the middle of the ebony hilt and a yellow diamond is embedded in the base of the pommel.

Draveon’s wife is one of the few people who can appreciate the ultimate killer’s path of murder and mayhem.  The only reason they are married is because they both crave the primal thrill and psychic rush of violent murder.  However, Draveon is a little more stable and methodical than his insane wife.  Draveon’s wife, known as Psylon, is still very dangerous, even though she is not as physically menacing as her husband.  Her entire body is permanently covered in ash and it has a dark, grimy hue to it.  Psylon, who looks much more like an ugly, redheaded man than a woman, is the general of the villains’ immense army of brainwashed aliens and the holder of a magical morning star.  The mystical weapon that she always carries, is made of an Alicoran gold handle and an enchanted steel chain.  The spiked ball that is attached to the chain is a hand-molded Medicean diamond, which makes it virtually unbreakable and extremely deadly.

“Shouldn’t we go look for her?  This is a very big warship and Kilanus probably got lost like she always does.  Last time she almost stepped out into deep space,” says Draveon when he puts down a huge chalice of some vile-smelling liquid.

“I can’t believe you actually like children of any kind.  Even adults that act like children and should just be put out of their misery.  Some ultimate weapon of mass destruction you are.  And don’t even attempt to use that born in a test tube and never had a real childhood excuse anymore.  I’m sick of hearing about it.  Of course, the little blond-haired insect will be okay.  No matter what happens, she always manages to find whatever she’s looking for or come out of trouble without a scratch.  What do you expect from her anyway?  She woke up from a twelve-year coma four months ago and she’s dumber than whatever this thing I have here,” explains Psylon with hungry, brown eyes as she sticks seven-inch long needles into a small, fuzzy creature.  With every needle, the large-eyed creature screeches in agony and bright blood spurts onto Psylon’s black and red body armor.

“Uncle Draveon!  Aunt Psylon!  I thought you were going to take me to the star room this morning,” says Kilanus when she barges into the room.  Psylon quickly moves to block the mess from Kilanus’s sight.  If there is anything that the child’s mother hates, it is when Kilanus is upset by anything.

“Of course we were.  You just had to show up at our room and not go to meet us at the star room.  But you don’t have to worry about your innocent mistake.  We’ll go there right away,” responds Psylon in a nice voice.  She represses the sudden urge to scream at the top of her lungs and throw up from all this warm, polite talk.

“Then let’s go.  Come on.  Come on!” shouts Kilanus enthusiastically.  She starts to pull on Draveon’s massive right arm.  The small teenager actually manages to pull Draveon a few inches before he lifts her off the ground with one arm.  Kilanus just dangles there and calmly waits to be put down.

“I’ll meet you and your Uncle Draveon there.  I have some business to finish up before I leave.”  Psylon gives a threatening look toward her husband.  Draveon had started to open his mouth in order to argue with his wife, but Psylon’s face took the fight out of him.  He knows he can’t possibly win the argument, even if he wanted to, and starts walking down the dismal hallway toward the star room.

“That girl is far too nice and innocent for my liking.  If only Adriana could see her as the major threat that she poses to our plans.  But that blond-haired bimbo is starting to allow her feelings to get in the way of her judgement because of that blue-eyed runt.  Some evil leader we have.  Still, I am a very patient immortal.  Especially when it comes to Adriana.  My time as leader will come soon enough,” whispers Psylon to the fuzzy creature that she has been torturing with the needles.

With an evil laugh, she grabs her morning star and smashes the furry alien until it becomes a bloody spot on the table.  She walks out the door with a cunning smile on her face and black blood covering her strong hands.  Psylon simply licks the warm blood off her gloved fingers and then licks her lips.

“Hmm.  A little sour, but delicious nonetheless,” she says as she disappears into the shadows.

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The Evolution of Blogging

This is an awesome trip through blogging history. Don’t think I ever really considered the platform’s origins.

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I have been online since 1985. I was one of the first members of the BBS (Bulletin Board) scene in Greece back when we connected to a server using landline modems. I still remember my thrill when I finally got my hands on a 9600 bps modem and could download pictures as well as texts.

In 1995, I developed my first website. Even then, I had identified a need for regularly updated content. While some pages were meant to be static, there were news and events to share. Web developers usually met this need by introducing a News page and placing there any related items. As the new millennium approached, we started placing some of these on the home page, too.

Out of these News pages came blogging. Nowadays, 25 years after I developed my first website, most of my living comes through freelance writing for company blogs.

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The Fist of Durag: Dawn Fang Slayer?

Palantir from LOTR

For the longest time, I really only had an idea that this weapon was going to be a magical orb.  I needed it to be something that didn’t look like a weapon and could operate at range because Clyde has the advantage when an enemy is within reach.  Funny thing is that it took writing the second to last outline for me to put pieces together.

Orb was originally a place marker for when I thought up the real weapon, but I eventually kept it as such.  Nobody would look twice at someone carrying an orb because it doesn’t look dangerous until fully activated.  Even then, it glows brightly and does nothing else until it’s fired.  There’s no telling what the beam, blast, or whatever is emitted will do as well since they all have the same coloration.  I found that having the Fist of Durag be an orb gave it more versatility, which is how the variation came about.  You can fire over your shoulder without having to aim as long as you do a wide blast.  It isn’t like this thing has a front to it.  This was marked down with odd words like beam, blast, wave, ball, and whatever else I could do to note a different type of attack.  Rarely did I write down what it did outside of ‘kill’ or ‘depower’.

Not really sure how I got the idea of making it depower Dawn Fangs either.  It was going to be only killing, but I needed a survivor at one point.  They needed to be badly injured, which doesn’t happen with a god-blessed weapon that only kills.  So, I gave it levels of effect on Dawn Fangs where Leo Kandrel could revert them back to old-world vampires to make them suffer.  They would be infused with sun magic here, so they would lose all of their strength and gradually die if he didn’t slaughter them first.  This helped to create more fear among the previously unfazed Dawn Fangs, including making Clyde fairly nervous.  You know it’s bad when a character who dominates fights and goes to anger before fear gets nervous.  That actually helped me with the origin.

Honestly, it took me far too long to find an answer to why this orb could have the power to hurt Clyde.  With Durag not 100% behind the eradication of the Dawn Fangs, it had to come from somewhere older or mortal.  That’s when I remembered what Clyde was stealing when he was buried alive during the Great Cataclysm.  It was a holy orb of Durag that the main temple had heavily protected and booby-trapped.  Nobody knew where it went, but it had to be somewhere.  This led to the confusion within the story about what happened while Clyde was buried, which was a part of the story that I never expected to tell.  Until I began writing War of Nytefall: Eradication, I assumed he was biding his time and starting to go mad down there.  Now, I had more activity between him and the surviving Duragians.  It gives us a look into what he was doing and how he may have been transformed into a Dawn Fang.

I would say more, but the origin and abilities of the Fist of Durag is a major point of the story.  The overall mystery and evolution is what prevents Clyde from charging in with his fangs out.  Much of its abilities were made on the fly because my notes weren’t helping as much as they could.  Heck, I didn’t even have Fist of Durag written on it for a while and switched it in after writing a few chapters.  Why?  Because I kept jumping between ‘Fist of Durag’ and ‘Heart of Durag’.  This is what happens when you write a novel with large breaks between sessions and a chaotic life.  This experience and weapon helped me figure out what my new limitations were, so I guess it wasn’t a bad thing to leave it up in the air for a while.

One last thing I would say is about using orbs as weapons.  You have to remember that they don’t have handles and tend to be smooth.  This increases the chance of the character dropping it, especially if it can’t be gripped completely in a fist.  I solved this by having it return to Leo’s hand on its own (I think I kept that) and being able to fly to where it is needed.  Fusing it to the body is another why to make sure this slippery weapon doesn’t take a tumble during a high action scene.  People might not consider this when reading, but you never know when it might click that the orb is never in danger of being dropped regardless of the action’s intensity.

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Teaser Tuesday: The Amazing Archillious vs the Dastardly Duragians #fantasy #vampires

War of Nytefall (CLICK ON IMAGE FOR AMAZON SITE)

This excerpt from War of Nytefall: Eradication is a little on the long side, but I couldn’t find a good place to chop it down.  I really wanted to showcase Archillious and Leo Kandrel, so this uses both characters.  Good cliffhanger too.

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Smorgasbord Cafe and Bookstore – New Book on the Shelves – #Fantasy – Eradication (War of Nytefall Book 4) by Charles E. Yallowitz

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5 Reasons Why Audiobook Usage Is Up Among Students

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Frank Hamilton | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksI have been writing about audiobooks a lot lately, as audiobooks are a growing trend in publishing. Now, Frank Hamilton is pointing out another trend: audiobooks used by students. Interestingly enough, some of his reasons, such as accessibility, also apply to eBooks.

Frank is a blogger and translator from Manchester. He is a professional writing expert in such topics as blogging, digital marketing, and self-education. He also loves traveling and speaks Spanish, French, German and English.

I hope you find his guest post as interesting as I did!

5 Reasons Why Audiobook Usage Is Up Among Students

Audiobook | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's books

Every student’s fantasy is to read a textbook once and have it stick to their memory.

Technology may not have gotten there just yet. Nevertheless, more students are now exposed to tools such as audiobooks to help improve reading skills and comprehension.

Previously, audiobooks were more commonly used by persons with learning…

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5 Reasons Why Audiobook Usage Is Up Among Students

Nicholas C. Rossis's avatarNicholas C. Rossis

Frank Hamilton | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksI have been writing about audiobooks a lot lately, as audiobooks are a growing trend in publishing. Now, Frank Hamilton is pointing out another trend: audiobooks used by students. Interestingly enough, some of his reasons, such as accessibility, also apply to eBooks.

Frank is a blogger and translator from Manchester. He is a professional writing expert in such topics as blogging, digital marketing, and self-education. He also loves traveling and speaks Spanish, French, German and English.

I hope you find his guest post as interesting as I did!

5 Reasons Why Audiobook Usage Is Up Among Students

Audiobook | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's books

Every student’s fantasy is to read a textbook once and have it stick to their memory.

Technology may not have gotten there just yet. Nevertheless, more students are now exposed to tools such as audiobooks to help improve reading skills and comprehension.

Previously, audiobooks were more commonly used by persons with learning…

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The Challenge of Balancing a Large Cast

Avengers Cast

The biggest challenge with War of Nytefall is that I’m working with a really large cast of main and constant secondary characters.  Clyde may be the main one, but all of his friends and enemies make appearances in every book.  At least as long as they aren’t killed in the previous volume.  This means I have 15 characters to juggle PLUS any who are specific to the book.  It isn’t easy and has been a headache because I never know if I’m getting the balance right.  So, I’ve been depending a lot on these tricks:

  1. Some sedentary villains like what I did with Baron Kernaghan in Legends of Windemere.  Since the story follows the heroes, I limit the use of various villains depending on the story.  Xavier and Nadia are nobles, so they staying in Nyte makes a lot of sense.  They only take physical action when their agents aren’t able to get the job done.  Lou stays by Nadia’s side, which makes 3.  Archillious, Kai Stavros, Stephanie Talon, and Kenneth Decker are the more active ones.  They tend to move in a group or pairs too.  Kai and Stephanie are a spy and seer respectively, which also means they can be left behind or in the shadows without a problem.
  2. Splitting up the heroes and alternating chapters allows for multiple paths to be shown at the same time.  War of Nytefall is a little more globetrotting than my previous series, so the heroes have to go in opposite directions at times.  They have designated groups as well even if they mix it up at times.  The Vengeance Hounds tend to be sent to the more action/warrior paths while Chastity and Lost are the information gatherers.  Lost is also an honorary Vengeance Hound, so she might go with them while Chastity works with Mab and Clyde.  Those two go off on their own a lot as long as one hasn’t been kidnapped.  This allows for all of the characters to get moments to shine without the others being imagined sitting on the sidelines.  It still isn’t easy and some get less exciting bits than others.
  3. Accept that some heroes may have to be benched or limited for a volume.  This is one that I realized in War of Nytefall: Rivalry.  Gregorio is usually staying in his lair and getting a few scenes, but I was finding that others were getting similar treatment even when they were around.  Bob, Lost, Chastity, and Luther had very little to do since Titus was captured and the focus was really on Mab.  I used them to be around for when she was doing things and acting as a sounding board, but I don’t think any of those four had any massive solo scene.  This is in contrast to previous and this book where they all get a lot to do, but a long series means this happens at times.
  4. Conversations are a pain in the butt, but they’re necessary.  Unlike with the champions, I have a lot of strong personalities in the same room.  All of the Dawn Fangs are big on making their opinions known with the possible exception of Luther.  He tends to be calm and fine with listening.  Everyone else will jockey for attention in my head and it can have them yelling over each other.  When it comes to revealing information or posing questions through dialogue, I can’t just run along.  I need to stop and think of who would be most likely to say what I need them to say.  This results in a lot of ‘everyone gets a turn to speak at least once’ scenes with a little jumbling thrown in to avoid a dull pattern.  There’s always the 1-3 that get the lion’s share of the talking too while the others interject thoughts to move things along.

Those are the big tips, but it’s still a heavy juggling act here.  There are days when I feel like I made a mistake and didn’t pay enough attention to a character.  Other days I feel like I was all over the place.  I will say that having this be an 8 book series takes the edge off because it means I have time to give everyone a chance to shine.  Will I ever tackle a cast this big again?  I don’t know, but at least I’ve got experience in it.  That’s all we really can say about our paths as author.

So, what do you think about writing series with really large casts?

Don’t forget to check out War of Nytefall: Eradication on Amazon for $2.99!

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Keys of Eden . . . The Basics

Pokemon

Probably not the best idea to use that picture, but people are going to jump to the comparison anyway.  Keys of Eden is the story/series where the main character is going to be collecting 100 unique monsters.  Wow.  It’s really trippy that the picture above looks like it keeps moving to the left.  Where was I?

Oh, yes.  This is the story where . . . I’m actually still toying with the overall plot.  The first idea was to have a prince going around a kingdom (putting it in the Cerascent Archipelago of Windemere) to gather the 100 royal spirits.  They were spread around the kingdom due to an accident and only the one who finds them all can claim the throne.  Maybe other princes will be on the hunt, but I’m leaning more towards him having been trained for this since youth.  Maybe his father being assassinated and the castle being destroyed is what caused the disaster and he was the only survivor.  He would be aided by a few friends and learn to use the creatures as summons to . . . do something?  I really don’t think a big climactic battle would work here unless I put a final threat that requires such power to defeat.  Maybe an evil dragon since I haven’t really used one of those in Windemere yet and there has to be one or two roaming around.

Anyway, another issue I have is that I’m not sure I want a prince alone.  Part of me considered having him with a female partner and both of them gather the spirits with each one gaining the favor of 50.  This could mean that each of the creatures has an opposite, so they’re always in pairs.  Do I have them be found in pairs or are those separated too?  Maybe it can differ?  This will be a bunch of short stories, so I don’t even know how many creatures should be found in each one.  100 stories could mean 5-10 books depending on how many I put in each volume.  I could switch it up with some found in groups, but will it get boring if I always have them gain a creature?  Once they miss one, it’s all over, but is that even possible?  I’m aiming more for kids here, so maybe the repetition is necessary when compared to an adult series.  I really don’t know.

Characters are another issue since I currently only have:

  1. A prince who seeks the 100 creatures.
  2. A female companion/betrothed who helps him.  Maybe have them raised together to skip the ‘get to meet you’ stuff.
  3. A third companion that may or may not be human, but will not be gaining spirits.
  4. Some kind of rival . . . villain . . . I need a group that they run into.
  5. Perhaps someone who wants to steal the prince or female companion from the other?
  6. Some recurring characters.

I’m also wondering if I should pilfer the Monster Maker posts for creatures.  Really not sure about this for two reasons.  First, I didn’t come up with the names and I don’t like the idea of suddenly using them when that wasn’t the original idea.  Second, they were never made with the intention of being used in a story.  So, they really don’t have a lot of what I need, which would be a unique power or significance.

Sudden idea:  What if the prince and female companion need to work together to gain the spirits who travel in pairs?  They can only gain them as a team.  Perhaps the big thing at the end is a 101st spirit, which is a solitary.  This could drop the short story amount to a minimum of 52 (1 opener, 1 finale, and 50 monster quests), but I still need to think of couple themes here.  I’ll run out of elements fairly quickly.  Maybe there’s a magical significance of 50 that I can find for help.  We’ll see.

How does all of this sound?

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Goal Post: Total Overhaul for the Infamous GRE

I thought I didn’t get anywhere with the goals I made last week, but then I realized that I made them very vague.  War of Nytefall: Eradication was released and I’ve sold a whopping 2 copies.  Although, around 10 have told me they bought copies, so I don’t know what’s going on anymore.  Maybe I’m more successful than I realize, but Amazon doesn’t want me to know.  Whatever.  Right now, I’m so drained that I barely have the energy to write this up Friday night.  By the time it goes live, I might just getting out of one of the sources of exhaustion.  What could that be?  I need a list to keep my head straight.

THE GRE

For those who don’t know, this stands for the Graduate Record Examinations.  It is a 6-7 section test with 30 minutes for each one.  Two are essays, two are math, and two more are verbal with the last being a randomly chosen research one that doesn’t count.  You aren’t told what the last one will be, but it’s either a third math or verbal.  The questions are designed to confuse and trick the tester even though the information it looks for is middle and high school level.  Kind of like being asked what ‘2 + 2’ is, but in a foreign language that you have to decipher.  Verbal is even worse with obscure words being pulled out that you don’t see outside of the test, a crossword puzzle, or somebody trying to appear smart on an Internet forum.  In other words, this test is a beast and I need it to get into a Masters Degree program in the Fall.

I was studying for a few weeks and decided not to put off the test, so I signed up to do it this morning.  My son is with his mom, so I had the luxury.  Meant no writing Friday night and probably not later today when I’m destressing with Castlevania Season 2.  Fun part is that I was asked to show up even earlier because a lot of people signed up for the exam, so I get less sleep and easing into the day time.  Needless to say, I’m tense and the only sections I’m confident on are the essays, which look to be the same design as how I do blog posts.  Opener, 3-4 body paragraphs, and a closer coming in at around 500-600 words.  I’m already at 397 here.  Fingers crossed on this thing.

It’s Official!

Yeah . . . The divorce was finalized this week.  Some people who I told gave me congratulations.  Most asked how I felt and admitted that they didn’t know what to say because congrats seems insensitive.  Apologies isn’t much better for some because they know how sour things went in the last year.  There were other issues that added to me feeling the bittersweet taste of it all.  I’m single again and . . . what does that actually mean to me?  People tell me to start dating again, but I have no interest.  Focusing more on my job, books, and son.  Get all of that in order and I can do something about the loneliness that is still plaguing me.  Honestly, this really is a rough week to get hit by this since I have that test.

Writing

Nothing happened in this arena.  Didn’t even tackle the May blog posts because I was studying every night.  I thought about a few things.  Mostly ‘So, You Want to Be a Fantasy Author?’ (too arrogant a title?) and how to write the entries.  Really want to keep it casual with little to no jargon.  Each entry would be similar to blog posts, so part of me wondered if I should do a collection of ‘7 lists’.  Problem with that is it really limits how much I can talk about things.  Some subjects have a lot while others have a little.  Maybe I should just make them look like what I’m doing now.  Entry, 3-6 body paragraphs, and a closure.  It would be an essay collection for those that want basic info and tips about the overall genre.

The Future

Don’t have a plan for this week because I don’t know how the test will go.  Gotta hunt down two reference letters and figure out how to write a personal statement.  I can craft worlds from nothing and paint verbal pictures of heroes battling monsters and villains with ease.  Write about myself?  I don’t even know where to start because I find myself boring.  Saying ‘I want be teacher.  I need degree.  Let me earn degree.’ probably wouldn’t get me very far.  I went looking up examples of personal statements, but they’re all right out of high school and I haven’t been at that age in 21 years.  They don’t even ask questions like in the past.  Anyway, I’ll have to think about that once this other challenge is taken care of.

Goals of the week?

  1. Make it through GRE.
  2. Have lunch and eventually dinner.
  3. Laundry
  4. Put backings on more puzzles.  Only 30 more to go.
  5. Watch Castlevania Season 2.
  6. Have a celebratory drink . . . Not sure what I’ll be toasting.
  7. Return books to library.
  8. Go to bed because all of that is Saturday and I’m not thinking beyond that.
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