This Ain’t Spring!

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Some rules to help people know if it’s really Spring or not:

  1. If there’s still snow in the forecast that is more than ‘flurries’, it’s NOT Spring.
  2. If you’re shivering under thermals and two blankets, it’s NOT Spring.
  3. If road plows and sanders are being kept ready for an emergency, it’s NOT Spring.
  4. If you can see your breath even at noon, it’s NOT Spring.
  5. If a hot shower is nothing more than temporary relief from the body aching cold, it’s NOT Spring.
  6. If flowers bloom one day and die a freezing death overnight, it’s NOT Spring.
  7. If weathermen and newscasters mention the ‘first day of Spring’ with a doubtful or highly amused tone, it’s NOT Spring.
  8. If you can still get away with keeping up Christmas decorations, it’s NOT Spring.

Anybody got any others?

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The Dean’z Doodlez Store is OPEN!

Opening of a new on-line art store.

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Goals to be Interrupted

First, a look at how Family of the Tri-Rune has done in the first week:

Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #4,414 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)

Sadly the other three books aren’t doing very well.  Prodigy of Rainbow Tower is especially bad in the 100,000 area, which is a shame because that’s my favorite one.  One thing I’ve realized is that it isn’t so much amount of sales, but rate of sales. They kind of go hand-in-hand, but rate appears to be the more important part.  A book that is slow for a while and gets a surge will leap up the rankings.  The problem is that this creates a rather big fall because the bigger the surge, the harder it is to maintain.  At least for us Indie Authors.  Since book 5 shows up in late July/early August, I’m going to be working really hard to keep some momentum.

Family of the Tri-Rune is on Goodreads even though I’m not the one who set it up there.

So, the goals of the week since nothing else really happened:

  1. Continue writing Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue and hope to finish it by middle of following week.  Unless I pull off a few 3 section days, it won’t happen by next Saturday.
  2. Parent/teacher meeting on Tuesday.
  3. Outline more of Elysium Saga, but this will probably be the ‘between books’ project to get me through my birthday and the beginning of Passover.  No sense in starting the new book with those events looming.
  4. Redo the outline for Book 8 because it’s a little muddled.  Though I’m better about the action figures.
  5. Sleep, eat, and shower to retain human appearance and heartbeat.
  6. Duck and cover because I have a few posts this week about the difference between author and reader perceptions.  Just because you write it one way, doesn’t mean the reader will see it that way.
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Family of the Tri-Rune by Charles Yallowitz – A Legends of Windemere Novel

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Strange Plot with Major Repercussions: Allowed or Not?

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So I’m nearing the end of writing Book 7 of Legends of Windemere.  After that a break for birthday and Passover with future series outlining.  Then I either jump into Book 8 or start editing Book 5.  This post is about Book 8 because the plot has me worried.

First of all, I like this idea and I think it pushes a lot of events forward.  It brings some supporting characters into the spotlight for a bit and develops characters.  The core of the story is that the child of a previous character has started up a business selling figurines (action figures) of the main heroes.  They find out and visit the place because this shows signs of something changing that I can’t get into detail due to spoilers.  One of the villains is the Goddess of Chaos who has been exiled by the other gods for breaking their one rule and she’s been in hiding.  She’s also insane and childish, so she gets upset when there’s no figure of her. So, she attacks and merges several of the heroes with figurines that are shipped to Gaia.  This leaves the newest one and a few supporting characters to retrieve the possessed figures and revive them before someone can destroy their bodies.

Now this is rather silly and lighthearted, especially after the psychological destruction I threw down in Book 7.  Yet here are the lasting effects:

  • Yola Biggs evolves as a character.
  • Nyx and Trinity are caught in the transformation spell, but are driven insane instead. They spend much of the book in a Caster Asylum being told that their previous lives were vivid delusions.
  • Newest hero has to fight on her own for the first time.
  • Introduction of a new supporting character and an old one get to save the day.
  • Events that cause another hero to leave and get a big adventure in Book 9 occur.
  • Fizzle’s view of the world changes.

All of this stems from them being combined with action figures that they can move around like possessed dolls.  That’s what scares me here.  Fantasy readers seem to be very serious about their stories and I’m not sure how this would go over.  The surface idea sounds childish even though I’ll be using some heavy themes in the book.  Again, I like this idea because it will be fun before the storm of heavy hits that the rest of the series is going to have.  That’s just me though.  I know one should write what they love, but I’m unsure about this.  Worse part is that I have no idea how to get all of those important points into a book without the action figure thing.  Do I have them get put into something else like paintings or statues?  I could but that doesn’t fit the new supporting character and she’s not that kind of artist.  Also, it’s easier for a character to sneak around as a tiny figure than big statues.

Anyway, I’d love to have some input on this.  Is a ‘silly’ setting for a mid-series book good to recover from a heavy installment and push some character development?

*Edit after writing this and being too lazy to change it all: Seems I have to fix up the outline anyway to implement a few relationship changes and foreshadowing.  Still the main ideas of Yola’s evolution, crazy spell, and the asylum are remaining for now.*

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Beyond Eventide: Bound- “Anne” (Promo 2 of 6)

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Beyond Eventide: Bound

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Anne bit back her frustration. It was irrational for her to begrudge him the desires of his heart. But nothing felt rational standing in this abandoned, neglected mansion, miles and miles from home.

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Who Can Use Magic? Depends on the World

There’s an odd debate within the fantasy circles.  Okay, another odd debate.  Let’s face it, people. Fantasy readers and authors will go to war over how a world should work, the use of elves, rate of character death, and whatever else you got.  This one is about magic and the characters that use it.  I’m not counting holy magic that comes from gods because that is already designated to priests.  This is all about arcane casting.

It’s hard to get into this topic because there are so many facets of it.  The truth is that nobody is really wrong too.  It all depends on the world and how the author designs the magic system.  You might disagree with their decisions, but it doesn’t make the world wrong.  Here are the more common battles on this subject:

  1. Man Versus Woman–  Somewhere along the line, people began creating systems where magic was only done by women.  A male spellcaster was designated to villain corrupted by his power, a freak of nature, or totally inept.  I think part of this stems from how female characters grew out of the ‘damsel’ role.  Magic gave them power without changing their physical limitations, which slowly evolved into it being their new role while men held onto the warrior status.  I don’t like either thing because I prefer magic (and combat training) to be open to all genders.  It’s rarely made clear why only women do magic in books, so I would recommend giving an explanation if you decide to go this route.

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  2. No Humans!–  Most stories have a human as the main hero. Some authors have taken the approach of letting them keep this role and sacrificing the use of magic.  Elves and various creatures get to cast spells while humans are designated the more ‘primitive’ race with their weapons.  As with a male wizard in a ‘female magic only’ world, a human with magic in one of these worlds gets the role of villain or heroic freak.  Many times the existence of magic is at risk or it’s going to return to humans.  That’s one of the issues with very restrictive magic systems.  They tend to take a chunk of the plot in order to justify or explain them.  If not then the magic is more of a novelty for a supporting character and/or villain.  Again, just my opinion.
  3. Lineage Systems–  Another method of spellcasting in fantasy is the lineage.  In these worlds, magic is handed down through specific bloodlines.  The origins of these can be anything from ancient deals with gods to they come from a time where magic was common.  Of course that magic is probably what caused the world to become less magical.  Anyway, you can put a character like this in any role because lineage doesn’t always mean skilled.  You can have the embarrassment to the family, the evil child, and the heroic last of the bloodline.  Authors use this system to limit the magic and reserve it for special characters/situations.  It’s a safe system too because it’s easily built into the world and a reader will accept it.  After all, you either have it in your blood or you don’t.  Can’t argue with that.
  4. Who Can Use Magic Items?– Now, I have it that anybody can use a magic item if they know how.  Some have activation words or rituals or specific situations while others require that you touch them.  Those that are easy to use tend to be simple like enchanted pots for cooking or a simple dagger of force.  Yet, there are worlds where only specific people can use the items.  There are varying degrees from only those who have the knowledge to people from a specific bloodline.  One type that I never understood is when all magic items can only be used by wizards who already have their own magic.  I tend to see magic items as a way of giving non-spellcasters a chance to combat a wizard.  A knight is doomed in a world of fireball flingers if he’s not allowed to use the Shield of Fire Immunity.  Why would a spellcaster need magic weapons if they have spells anyway?  I guess a world where everything is immune to magic, but that kind of negates the usefulness of magic in the first place.  I’m ranting here.  Again, it can make sense for the world and a reader (like me) has to suck up and deal with it.

As usual, that’s the big thing with fantasy.  The author has the final say on how the world works and has to hope it translates to the reader.  Magic systems and fantasy cultures are ripe for issues.  Honestly, you can’t control a person’s perception and you’ll drive yourself insane by trying.  Change it for one and then you’ll have another angry at the new version.  Basically, choose your magic system and stick to your guns.

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It’s LIVE!!!

Big debut from Danielle Taylor! Where the Streets Have No Name is LIVE!

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From the Vault: Man of Verse or Volume

(This was written when I was considering turning Legends of Windemere into a poetry series.  Basically, telling the story through poems with each main character having their own style.  A poetic ‘Peter and the Wolf’ so to speak.)

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The great novel
Aspiration of my youth
My golden goal
For all these years
A want I never doubted
Until I woke at thirty

I have my plans
That I still hold very dear
Outlines and notes
Carefully constructed
Like children of my mind
That may never get to play

I stroke the bindings
Of my two ‘victories’
Both pushed to print
Which supporters call successes
Proud of my achievements
Yet I sense them lacking

The truth is harsh
I could not push
The way I needed to
My support faltered
Handing me chores
When I asked for more than words

Still there is the lacking
That both novels have at heart
I have been scared
To voice my thoughts
Going against my dream
A strange turn I did not see

I have a rhythm
That I keep raw
It comes out in the verse
And strangles in the prose
My poetry is a flow
That my prose can never match

So I wonder
If I have chosen poorly
That my true path
Was slightly to my right
Hidden by my pride
Upon writing a great novel

My characters have soared
Their adventures shined
Among my worlds of depth
Born anew
By a simple verse
Done with unsteady hands

So I stand
On an edge I fear
Because of time I wasted
To restart my mind
As a man of verse
And not a man of volume

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