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So I’m nearing the end of writing Book 7 of Legends of Windemere. After that a break for birthday and Passover with future series outlining. Then I either jump into Book 8 or start editing Book 5. This post is about Book 8 because the plot has me worried.
First of all, I like this idea and I think it pushes a lot of events forward. It brings some supporting characters into the spotlight for a bit and develops characters. The core of the story is that the child of a previous character has started up a business selling figurines (action figures) of the main heroes. They find out and visit the place because this shows signs of something changing that I can’t get into detail due to spoilers. One of the villains is the Goddess of Chaos who has been exiled by the other gods for breaking their one rule and she’s been in hiding. She’s also insane and childish, so she gets upset when there’s no figure of her. So, she attacks and merges several of the heroes with figurines that are shipped to Gaia. This leaves the newest one and a few supporting characters to retrieve the possessed figures and revive them before someone can destroy their bodies.
Now this is rather silly and lighthearted, especially after the psychological destruction I threw down in Book 7. Yet here are the lasting effects:
- Yola Biggs evolves as a character.
- Nyx and Trinity are caught in the transformation spell, but are driven insane instead. They spend much of the book in a Caster Asylum being told that their previous lives were vivid delusions.
- Newest hero has to fight on her own for the first time.
- Introduction of a new supporting character and an old one get to save the day.
- Events that cause another hero to leave and get a big adventure in Book 9 occur.
- Fizzle’s view of the world changes.
All of this stems from them being combined with action figures that they can move around like possessed dolls. That’s what scares me here. Fantasy readers seem to be very serious about their stories and I’m not sure how this would go over. The surface idea sounds childish even though I’ll be using some heavy themes in the book. Again, I like this idea because it will be fun before the storm of heavy hits that the rest of the series is going to have. That’s just me though. I know one should write what they love, but I’m unsure about this. Worse part is that I have no idea how to get all of those important points into a book without the action figure thing. Do I have them get put into something else like paintings or statues? I could but that doesn’t fit the new supporting character and she’s not that kind of artist. Also, it’s easier for a character to sneak around as a tiny figure than big statues.
Anyway, I’d love to have some input on this. Is a ‘silly’ setting for a mid-series book good to recover from a heavy installment and push some character development?
*Edit after writing this and being too lazy to change it all: Seems I have to fix up the outline anyway to implement a few relationship changes and foreshadowing. Still the main ideas of Yola’s evolution, crazy spell, and the asylum are remaining for now.*