Excerpt from SLEEPER OF THE WILDWOOD FUGUE: The Return of Kira Grasdon

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With a frown, Wayland nods to Asher and the warrior stands to make sure he has everyone’s attention. “The Helgardians have targeted the Grasdon family. We don’t know why they are attacking us with these creatures, but the city has decided to use their forces only to defend. This means they go about their business until a beast appears. By that time, our family has already suffered losses. They claim that this is to make sure the situation does not escalate and they lose their remaining trade pacts with the Helgardians. What you see here is all that remains of the Grasdon lineage. Every attack has taken at least one of our kin.”

“You four are all that remain?” Luke asks, talking for the first time. Feathers ruffle under his collar and his eyes shimmer gold as his panic rises. “What happened to Kira?”

“Afraid that you’ll be stuck with a simple gypsy?” Wayland Grasdon retorts, polishing a ruby ring on his left hand. He grins at the anguish on the young warrior’s face. “Maybe you’re scared that my only daughter is still alive, but crippled. If you reject her in such a state it would make you look like a monster. Then again, you probably hope she’s one of the dead, so you don’t have to make a decision.”

“Tell me where Kira is, sir.”

Asher leans over to his father to speak, but a quick hand is placed against his lips. The younger man settles back down and sighs, settling for enjoying a pear. He refuses to look at his father or Luke, his attention finding an unimportant spot on the ceiling to ponder on. Timbre and Quill exchange nervous glances and follow their elder kinsman’s example.

“I don’t know what she sees in you,” the patriarch admits, popping a grape into his mouth and squishing it between his white teeth. “I told her to test your relationship or I would publicly stand against it. What does my daughter do? Picks a claimed man who has left our city behind and uses him as public proof that she is upholding the traditions. Meanwhile, I know he wasn’t a challenge to what you two have. I’d be fine with that if I didn’t start hearing about you and this gypsy.”

“Kira told me to uphold the traditions of your people,” the forest tracker argues, letting the griffin spirit sink back into his subconscious. He can still feel Stiletto at the fringe of his mind, the dog’s influence enough to sharpen his teeth. “I was honoring her request and I thought she was doing the same. Sari and I toned it down months ago because we want to sit down and talk to your daughter. Now, where is she?”

“You don’t understand our traditions.”

“Then punish me and teach me.”

“It isn’t my place to do so.”

“Then stay out of it!”

“On my beloved wife’s spirit, I will not let my daughter destroy her life for someone like you,” Wayland coldly says. A spearman breaks ranks to whisper in the man’s ear and swiftly moves back into position. “It appears this meeting is done. My butlers and maids will show you all to your rooms. If you’ll excuse me, I have somewhere to be.”

Grunts and shouts are heard coming down the hallway as Wayland gets to his feet and freezes. The sound of a body hitting the door echoes throughout the room, the sound repeating a few more times as if someone is trying to bash their way in. Asher and Timbre are on their feet with weapons drawn, the younger brother revealing a pair of long-handled sickles that he keeps hidden beneath the tail of his shirt. A lightly armored guard is hurled through the doors, the man landing on his back and rolling out of the way. Kira Grasdon storms into the room with her chain and sickle weapon drawn and a calico maid nervously following behind her. The black-haired woman is wearing leather armor and a furious glint is in her emerald eyes. She marches over to the table and slams the blade of her weapon into the polished surface, missing her father’s hand by an inch.

“This is why you sent me to check on the defenses,” she hisses in a voice that threatens to erupt into a scream. Her slender frame quivers from her anger mixing with the grief of recently losing so many loved ones. “You brought my fiancée and his friends here without telling me. I assume you were less than cordial in asking for their help.”

“I refuse to argue in front of our welcomed guests,” Wayland states, gesturing for his sons to stand down. The merchant rolls his eyes when Kira makes a wordless yell of rage in his chubby face. “This isn’t the time for you to get involved in this mess. We both know this relationship is nothing more than a fling and your mother will never approve. Imagine the pain you’re causing her by continuing with an outsider who doesn’t understand our ways.”

“Mom has been dead for years, dad!” Kira shouts, her arms shaking with anger. She tosses her weapon to the uncomfortable maid who rips the sleeve of her black and silver dress on the sickle. “Luke and I love each other and we’re in a unique situation. The rules have to be bent and I’ve jumped through every hoop you put in my way. Caspar, negotiating what you thought were impossible trade agreements, training with the local guards, and cleaning some of the more disgusting areas of the manor. What else do you want?”

“I just-”

“I don’t care what you want anymore! I can’t believe you’re continuing this feud while our family is being murdered. Get your priorities straight, dad, or you won’t have an empire to rule over.”

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Steps to an Outline

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Snoopy by Charles M. Schultz

A few weeks back somebody asked me to write about how I create outlines.  I sincerely apologize for forgetting who asked this and which post the comment was on.  I searched, but couldn’t find it.  (I sense a post-publishing edit coming.)  Anyway, here’s how it all works out and I’ll use Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue for it:

  1. Get the idea or join a Dungeons & Dragons game.
  2. If in a game, get permission to use characters of other players.  Puppy dog eyes and purchase of person’s favorite food help.
  3. Make character, city, monster, and artifact bios in a notebook.  Then realize you might be going overboard.  Continue being insane and add as ideas form.
  4. Make a chapter by chapter outline with shorthand details that you can’t decipher in your later years.  Any dungeon traps should be mentioned, but NEVER write down how to solve them because OF COURSE you’ll remember 17 years from now.  (Young me was an idiot.)
  5. Start writing the first book.  Also realize that typing is faster than hand-writing, so put ‘Idea Book’ on disk.
  6. Leave disk in Computer Lab, return, retrieve, trip, and drop disk into sewer drain.  Cry in private.
  7. Years pass while writing, editing, and outlining whatever little head comes to your mind.
  8. Make a fort out the notebooks.  Put up ‘No Entry Without Pizza’ sign.
  9. Decide to make simple blurbs of each future book in case you leave this mortal coil before you’re done.  (Only for people who have about 30-35 book ideas in their head.)
  10. Streamline the character bios and use them to help create personal subplots.  Magic items and other special gear can be included in this too.  Cities are still a separate thing, but just a basic idea and landmarks can work.
  11. Keep writing the books and accept that things will change as you write them.
  12. Change your outlining system to create 2-4 sections per chapter with a ‘plot goal’ and events for each one.  Review to see where sections can be combined, omitted, or divided.  Check each chapter outline before you hit it to make sure it lines up with previous work.
  13. Finish writing a book and realize that you did a lot of long-term changes.  Rewrite the outline for the next book while changes are fresh.  Take a week before looking at it again.
  14. Repeat outlining, writing book, revising future outline, and resting.
  15. Make a blog post about your outlining method and evolution.  Realize around ‘Step 4’ that what works for you might not work for other people.  Start to wonder if you should get out more, see that it’s snowing, and decide to eat a Twizzler.
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Authors in the Sun – Short Stories wanted.

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Blog Tour: Will O’ the Wisp

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Today, I’m happy to host C. S. Boyack and his latest book release on tour this week. Take it away Craig!

Book CoverWill O’ the Wisp is the newest release from C. S. Boyack. It involves a mildly handicapped girl facing a mysterious threat. The wisp has been killing off Patty Hall’s family for generations, and she’s next on the list. It is suitable for young adult readers.

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We have a real treat for everyone today. Joining us is an honest to goodness Greek Muse. Lorelei, many of our readers think Muses are simply fables. Why do you think this is a common belief?

Lorelei: There are many Muses, be we are selective about those we inspire. Most people will never encounter a Muse, so we become something of legend.

Host: You work with an author, C. S. Boyack. Why did you choose him?

Lorelei: Craig has always been a…

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Short Stories and Cliffhangers

Click on the cover for a 99 cent book! New release from Jo Robinson.

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I read an excellent post about cliffhangers, and it’s got me thinking now.  Maybe I’m weird, alright then, if you insist – I am weird.  There are two things about me that have the potential to get right up some peoples nostrils when it comes to my scribbles.  I write multiple genres and I like to play sometimes when I write.  Nothing makes me grin wider than when I’m playing in the land of anything goes.  Short stories are generally where I play though, because experimenting with the style of voice you tell a story in, or popping in a cliffhanger at the end of a big fat novel is very likely going to incite rage.  With a series you have to have an ending to each book that leads you into the next book.  Sometimes this can be construed as not so much a cliffhanger as an unfinished book. …

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Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue Opening Rank

Kind of a tradition for me, but Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue got its first Amazon ranking.  Check out the number that will probably change in an hour:

Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #39,126 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)

Screenshot too, but couldn’t fix the quality:

First RankingA big thank you to everyone who bought a copy, helped spread the word, and are participating in the simple blog tour.  Fingers crossed the numbers go up.  Although history tells me to prepare for a yo-yo type of thing that will confuse me.

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Here is my interview with John W. Howell

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Name John W. Howell

Age Seventy-Four

Where are you from.

Born in Detroit Michigan and pretty much left there to go to college. Since then I have lived on all coasts of the US as well as Chicago and Indiana

A little about yourself `i.e., your education Family life, etc  

I graduated with a Social Science degree from Michigan State University and went to work for a large consumer products company. I went back to school and received an MBA from Notre Dame University in South Bend Indiana. I stayed in consumer products for over twenty-five years and finally took an early retirement. While working as a consultant I was hired by one of my clients a large telecommunications company where I spent ten years working on some fascinating projects. Happily married with three children and four grandchildren. My wife and I live on Mustang Island in the Gulf…

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LIVE ON AMAZON KINDLE- Legends of Windemere: Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue

LEGENDS OF WINDEMERE:
SLEEPER OF THE WILDWOOD FUGUE
LIVE on Amazon Kindle!

The final champion stirs and reaches out to any who can hear her voice. Yet all who heed her call will disappear into the misty fugue.

Awakening their new ally is only the beginning as Luke, Nyx, and their friends head south to the desert city of Bor’daruk. Hunting for another temple once used to seal Baron Kernaghan, they are unaware that the game of destiny has changed. Out for blood and pain, Stephen is determined to make Luke wish he’d never set out to become a hero.

By the time the sun sets on Bor’daruk, minds will be shattered and the champions’ lives will be changed forever.

Don’t forget to mark it as ‘To Read’ on Goodreads too!

Charles E. Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz

About the Author:

Charles Yallowitz was born and raised on Long Island, NY, but he has spent most of his life wandering his own imagination in a blissful haze.  Occasionally, he would return from this world for the necessities such as food, showers, and Saturday morning cartoons.  One day he returned from his imagination and decided he would share his stories with the world.  After his wife decided that she was tired of hearing the same stories repeatedly, she convinced him that it would make more sense to follow his dream of being a fantasy author.  So, locked within the house under orders to shut up and get to work, Charles brings you Legends of Windemere.  He looks forward to sharing all of his stories with you and his wife is happy he finally has someone else to play with.

Blog: Legends of Windemere
Twitter: @cyallowitz
Facebook: Charles Yallowitz
Website: www.charleseyallowitz.com

Read the Previous Volumes of Legends of Windemere!!!

BEGINNING OF A HERO

PRODIGY OF RAINBOW TOWER

ALLURE OF THE GYPSIES

FAMILY OF THE TRI-RUNE

THE COMPASS KEY

CURSE OF THE DARK WIND

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Wordless Cover Reveal! Sleeper of Wildwood Fugue on April 7th, 2015

The final cover art is here and I’ll be hitting publish before I go to sleep tonight.  To whet the appetite, I’m showing the main picture and giving the link to the Goodreads site.  Please help spread the word and get ready for tomorrow’s ‘BOOK IS LIVE!’ post that I will also send to volunteers once I have the Amazon link to add.

What do you think?

Visit SLEEPER OF THE WILDWOOD FUGUE on GOODREADS too!

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Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue Cover Teaser

So this is part of the cover for SLEEPER OF THE WILDWOOD FUGUE.  Jason will be doing the final touches today, so expect the ‘Book is Live!’ email tomorrow.  Always willing to take more volunteers for this.  I’ll make a final decision on when to post the debut before I send it.  Part of me wants to get this out immediately, but I need to think of weekly timing.

So what do you think?

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