Using Psionics in Fiction: Nosebleeds, Headaches, & Melty Brains

River Tam from Firefly

River Tam from Firefly

With the introduction of Dariana, I added a new type of power source to the human templates.  Basically, I opened the door for psionics to enter Windemere stories.  For those that don’t know what that means, think of Professor X, Jean Grey, and anyone else with mental powers. These don’t work like caster or priest magic, so defenses against those two types will do nothing here.  It still functions off the aura system in some ways, but that depends on the exact powers.  A telepath might not access as much energy as a body enhancer, but both would come in second to a psychokinetic or reality alterer.  There’s a lot that can be done here.  So here’s some tips:

  1. Giving your psionic everything is a mistake.  Even worse if you give them mastery and full power.  For one thing, it makes them unstoppable and unable to be tricked.  A reader will see anything going wrong for this person as odd because of their power.  How do you trick a telepath with no limits?  Can you really beat up a telekinetic that can lift a mountain?  This is an easy power category to lose control in.
  2. Never forget the range and limits.  Line of sight can be useful for the characters, but so can a simple ‘they know each other’.  One trick with psionics are mental tags that they can use to track people.  Yet you should try to put a range on these.  Could be anywhere from the same building to several mile radius.
  3. Side-effects!  Remember that this is a mental thing, which puts strain on the brain and body.  Nose and ear bleeds are the most common to show when things go wrong or are too tough.  Headaches work too.  Basically, things happening above the neck.  Though one that I want to use for a later character is that the more they use their powers, the weaker their grip on reality.
  4. Exhaustion is another thing to factor in.  I put this separately from side-effects because this is something that can (maybe should) happen over time.  The previous section was more about immediate strain.  Exhaustion builds up and can be undone by sleeping or meditation.  The rate of fatigue depends on the powers and uses.  For example, a simple surface scan for a telepath can have an imperceptible amount while rearranging somebody’s memory makes the character need a nap.
  5. Much like with casters and spells, psionics have a risk of backlash.  This is probably more dangerous than a backfiring fireball.  You can dodge or resist a spell even if it’s bouncing back.  When your own mind ‘rubber bands’ on itself, you might not realize it’s about to happen until the world is upside down and you’re tasting the number 9.
  6. One thing that’s common with psionics is that they aren’t common.  In fantasy settings, they get mistaken for casters.  Many are because they use spells to copy the effects.  A true, non-spell psionic should be an oddity that nobody knows much about.  The basics are okay for a learned character to know, but not the details unless they previously admitted to studying them.  In other words, give some mystery to the character in both power and origin.
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Teaser Tuesday: Why Did We Listen to You?

I admit that doing teasers from The Merchant of Nevra Coil is tough because I don’t want to reveal one of the big things just yet.  I might do it in next week’s Tuesday thing since I’ll be getting opinions next weekend on the blurbs.  That’s when I post them and lock down all the sharing until I delete the post the next morning.  Anyway, this is a fun scene that was born from a filler chapter or two getting cut.  Enjoy.

Sari by Kayla Matt

Sari by Kayla Matt

Covered in dirt and exhausted from their lengthy journey to Gods’ Voice, the champions quietly sit around the circular table. The open windows let in a gentle breeze that eases their aching muscles and cools some of their flaring tempers. A wide balcony sits outside and allows the guests to see most of Serab’s capital city, but none of the adventurers show interest in enjoying the view. Several sparrows flutter around the windows, their nests having been made under the pitted eave. None of the champions pay the noisy birds any attention as they silently ponder the argument that has been repeated over the last few days. Goblets of fresh water remain untouched as nearly everyone shoots angry glances and muttered curses at Luke who is the cleanest out of the group. Sari is busy picking twigs out of her hair and flicks each one at the forest tracker. Fizzle is the only one with a smile on his face as he lounges in a bowl of green and yellow apples.

“Cross the southern mountains, pass through the forests, and cross over the L’dandrin River to get here,” Nyx finally says, her violet eyes flickering with flames. She ignores the pleading expression on Dariana’s face and continues to revive the debate. “Why did we listen to you, little brother? It might have taken longer to get here by boat, but it would have been easier. I know you hate water travel because of your seasickness, but Gods’ Voice has a lot of river traffic. We could have caught a ship from Freedom and not arrived looking like we spent the last week wrestling ogres in a mud pit. All that trouble to arrival quickly.”

“Actually, I think taking a boat would have been quicker,” Delvin points out with a jaw-straining yawn. The warrior examines his armor sleeve as he tries to buff the fresh dents out of the silver plates. “We were on the road for at least two weeks. You’re thinking of the time Luke said it would take, which I believe was a week.”

“My favorite part was the bramble patch we fell into,” Sari mentions, taking a deep drink of water. The dirt vanishes from her body when she mutters a spell, the sensation of clean skin helping her relax. “Then again, the trolls were a welcomed bout of excitement since Nyx was bathing out of earshot at the time. Not that she could have helped since those river nymphs decided to toy with her. Don’t even get me started on the avalanche caused by those screech hawks. My calves are still crying from running so hard and that was five days ago.”

“On the plus side, we got to work more as a team,” Dariana states, feebly trying to defend Luke. She curls against her chair when Nyx and Sari turn their angry thoughts on her. “Then again, I’m still shrugging off the dark dreams from that necrocaster. He was a very strange and disturbing man. I think he wanted to breed with all of us. I don’t mean just the women, but the men and Fizzle too. Is that even possible?”

Timoran clears his throat, coughing up a glob of phlegm that he swallows to avoid disgusting his friends. “We could spend all day going over the utter disaster of our journey. One could easily laugh about the great champions of Windemere stumbling through the wilderness like amateur adventurers. Perhaps it is best that we leave these events in the past and agree not to talk about them. After all, we are all to blame to some extent.”

“Fizzle said to use portal from Helgard,” the drite interjects, apple juice dripping from his lips. He rolls onto his back and stretches his purple-scaled body, enticing Nyx to scratch his smooth belly. “Could go from Helgard to Garden then stay in forests. Mountains too bad. Why we no take portal?”

“Because somebody was scared,” Luke bitterly says, causing everyone to look at Timoran.

“I said you could blindfold me if you all wished to take that path,” the barbarian argues, crossing his arms over his chest. “I have become calmer about being around magic, but transportation portals are . . . unnerving. That still did not mean we had to traverse the southern wilds.”

“So . . . both of you are idiots,” Nyx bluntly states.

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Author Interview: Melissa Barker-Simpson (The Contract)

Natacha Guyot's avatarNatacha Guyot

Changing Worlds 2

Today, Melissa Barker-Simpson is with us to talk about The Contract, prequel to The Fractured series. I fell in love with the world and its characters so I am happy that Melissa accepted to be interviewed about this novella. The Contract is featured in the Changing Worlds anthology, which also includes Saunders’ Choice, a Natural Gifts Novella by Gina Briganti.

NG: Where does your love for prologues and epilogues come from? How did they happen for The Contract?

MELISSA: I know that prologues aren’t popular, but I’ve always felt they build tension and give me, as a reader, a little background into the story. It’s a kind of, here’s what you need to know before you begin your journey. Prologues are also great for setting up the here and now, by giving us a taste of the past. They are like a window, allowing us a…

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Interview: C. S. Boyack

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It’s midnight, and I’m standing in a snow-covered field, waiting for C. S. Boyack. Something howls in the distance. The light of the full moon reflecting off the snow is almost as bright as daylight. Almost. A man approaches, and I spot fur sticking out from the top of his jacket. This guy has definitely turned. I raise my arm to give the ‘fire’ signal to my marksmen. Wait, Boyack has a bushy beard. I take a closer look, and wave off the marksmen. The wind picks up, reminding me I’m not dressed warmly enough – bulky clothing would slow me down if a werewolf charged. I look down at my pad of paper and scratch out half of my questions. I want to get out of here.

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Many people daydream about writing a novel, but never write anything. What was it that pushed you over the edge?

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Monsoon McKreel

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Dr. Wilson Jay Tyree’s beautifully written picture book, Monsoon McKreel and the Rose is available for FREE Kindle download today and tomorrow. 

Go learn from a cute parable about self esteem, and enjoy the illustrations from Mrs. Becky Tyree as you go! This book is suitable for people of all ages as you discover the importance of self esteem and of building each other up!

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Long Delayed Meetings

Funny how it took me so long to get to this post.  To be fair, I made a note on a piece of paper with badly erased pencil on it.  Anyway, this is about characters that are connected, but don’t meet for a while.  For example, Kira Grasdon and Sari having a connection through the relationships to Luke Callindor and not meeting in person until Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue. It took 5 books to get to it, but there were reasons:

  1. Getting Kira into the same area as the heroes during Books 3-6 tended to be ridiculous.  It was too much of a coincidence.
  2. The exception to the above was Book 5, but Sari was ‘away’ while Kira was around.  By the time the two of them would have a chance, the adventure was over.  I didn’t want the big meeting to occur as an epilogue, prologue, or between books.
  3. The Sari/Luke connection needed more time to evolve.
  4. The Kira/Luke connection needed more time to destabilize.

The big point I see in these things is that timing is everything.  Too early with an important meeting and you lack something that makes it work.  Too late and people won’t have any more interest.  Like many things in writing and life, you need to find balance.  If not that then give really good reasons why the meeting can’t happen until it does.

The problem is that every book that passes while risk people feeling the inevitable meeting is anti-climactic.  Is there any way to avoid that?  Probably not because every person has a different level of patience.  I’ve had some readers who wanted Kira and Sari to face off in Allure of the Gypsies even though there was no reason for the former to be in Haven.  I think I’ve had requests for them to meet in every book and I did have scenes set up for it at one point or another.  It just never worked.  So again I come back to timing being essential for something like this.

Now as a reader, I do enjoy the wait.  There has to be a good payoff though.  A casual ‘hey! nice to finally meet you!’ doesn’t usually work for me.  Depends on the character personalities and reasons behind the necessary meeting.  Rivalries especially need conflict and tension for me to be interested.  Maybe, as a reader, I put a lot more faith into the author and accept that they know what’s best.  I’m far too easy going with books, so it’s hard to go into any more detail.

So, how do you handle big meetings between characters as a writer and a reader?

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Queen of Flame on: Guest Posting, Ranting, Fan-mail and feline feeding guide

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SHERLOCK ACADEMY Book Blast & Giveaway

cherrymischievous's avatarCherry Mischievous

The Book

Sherlock Academy by F. C. Shaw
Book 1 in the Sherlock Academy series
Genre: middle grade

About Sherlock Academy:

Teachers in disguise, secret libraries, hollow books . . .

All these and more await eleven-year-old Rollie Wilson at the mysterious Sherlock Academy of Fine Sleuths.

When Rollie and his best friend, Cecily, are invited to attend a school where children learn the art of detection just like the great Sherlock Holmes, they discover a strange burglary has been committed and a mystery is afoot. Determined to investigate, Rollie discovers that appearances can be deceiving, the truth can be hurtful, and friends sometimes turn into foes.

Does Rollie have what it takes to follow in Holmes’s footsteps? Can he use his skills to solve the mystery and save the school from an unknown villain?

Source: Info in the About Sherlock Academy was from the press kit from the…

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The Elf Killer – Part Two

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