The Benefits of a Mid or Late Series Detour Tale

For context, Dean dies repeatedly in that episode while the day repeats with only Sam knowing.  There is an actual reason for that to happen, which is revealed at the end and I won’t spoil the fun.  Seriously, it got to Looney Tunes level events in that one and I do not feel bad for laughing.  (I’ll make the Dean fans happy at the end of this.)

Anyway, I’m going to dive into the benefits of putting a lighthearted book/story/subplot into the middle of a lengthy series.  I call it a ‘Detour Tale’ since it takes the characters away from the main story while still making progress and eventually getting back on track.  After all, not every detour will get you lost and you’re still going to get to where you were going.  Just something came up and a new adventure was born.  That happens in real life and can happen in fiction as well.  An author simply needs to make such a thing worthwhile for everyone involved.

  1. The longer you go with darkness and despair, the harder it is to have anything positive happen.  It sounds strange, but you can write yourself into the cellar by always having bad stuff occur.  Not to mention it can wear on everyone involved.  A lighthearted story can help bolster the mentalities of the author, characters, and readers.  The fact that you’ll knock everyone down again is besides the point and such a move may have a stronger impact.  At least now the readers know you’re willing to have good and bad events happen.
  2. World exploration and building can be done if the event has a physical detour.  This means the readers get to see a new region with new cultures and feel like the world is an even bigger place.  This can increase the sense of scale when it comes to the main storyline.  Now it’s no longer the original locations, but this new one and possibly regions that haven’t been explored yet.
  3. You can have character development up the wazoo.  This downtime gives the heroes and villains time to reflect and recover from past events.  Self-reflection can lead to a change in world view or even an alteration of plans.  Maybe a hero loses their courage or a villain realizes they’re on the wrong side.  It’s actually a little easier to have these things happen in a quieter, less epic, slower paced tale.  Especially for someone like me that does a lot of action.  Honestly, not being on the main story doesn’t mean a character’s evolution pauses.
  4. Less used characters can take the spotlight for a bit.  Those that are always in the forefront can be moved to the back a bit while the heroes and villains that have yet to shine brightly can get some attention.  This is probably more for ensemble casts than a story with a solitary main hero, but you can use it to bolster supporting cast.  A bland secondary doesn’t really help a story, so focusing on them for a bit doesn’t hurt.  You might even find yourself with a new book and hero on your hands.  Another thing here is that you might have some information about the less used characters that such a story will help you reveal.
  5. A final note is that you can set up events for the future books.  It’s possible that something has gone a little off-kilter with the main plot or one of the characters.  So you can use this story to shake things up in a way that doesn’t knock over the entire chess game.  For example, you need to set up a certain event and it isn’t coming out right as long as you follow the main plot alone.  This event clears up a hole or adds a piece that will be important near the end.  A ‘detour story’ can take the characters away from all of the blockage and clear the stage for a set up.

Those are the big ones I can think of and I’m sure there’s more.  A major point here is to not overlook this tool if you have a lengthy series.  Might even work on a smaller scale with a ‘detour chapter’ when you have a long, heavy book or trilogy.  Now for the other thing that I promised:

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Teaser Tuesday: On the Outskirts of Haven

Stepping away from The Merchant of Nevra Coil since I’m not 100% certain of the release timing.  So I’m going with a section of Allure of the Gypsies.  Get a look at Luke and Nyx earlier in their adventures.

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Teaser Tuesday: Goddess on a Rampage

For today, I have part of the opening scene for Merchant of Nevra Coil.  What exactly is Yola going on about?  Nobody really knows, but they should probably take cover until it blows over.  Unless she decides to flip the continent of Shayd, which I’m sure she’s only done one or two times.

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Yola Biggs by Kayla Matt

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#RRBC Spotlight Author Blog Tour with Sara F. Hathaway

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I am very pleased to welcome Sara F. Hathaway Rave Reviews Book Club Spotlight Author for this week. You can visit her schedule here.

Day After Disaster: A Letter Home

To whomever finds this letter,

I sit here writing you now, hoping that this letter will be useless. Hopefully I have found my family still alive in this wreck of a world I must now navigate with only my horsey companions, Artaz and Kit. They were gifts given to me by angels. Good people who still exist and cling to a reality we all inhabited just months ago.

When the Great Quake hit I was at work. Just another day and another dollar. Nothing unusual to heading down into an old bunker that existed beneath the restaurant I worked at. Its constant cool temperature made it a perfect place to store the wine that the restaurant boasted from the local…

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Minutes Before Sunset Release Day!

Available now!

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Minutes Before Sunset has officially released!

Available through Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Goodreads, and everywhere.

(You can also pre-order Seconds Before Sunrise and Death Before Daylight)

Available now! Available now!

I’ve also make a special “thank you” video that you can now watch via my YouTube channel, Coffee & Cats.

Minutes Before Sunset, book 1

CoverTwo destinies. One death.

“Her kiss could kill us, and my consent signed our death certificates.”

Eric Welborn isn’t completely human, but he isn’t the only shade in the small Midwest town of Hayworth. With one year left before his eighteenth birthday, Eric is destined to win a long-raging war for his kind. But then she happens. In the middle of the night, Eric meets a nameless shade, and she’s powerful—too powerful—and his beliefs are altered. The Dark has lied to him, and he’s determined to figure out exactly what lies were…

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New Book Fanfare – Home at Last by Jan Sikes

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My Elf Killer Saga is Trending on ReadWave

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The Strange Before the Storm

I’ve mentioned a few times that Merchant of Nevra Coil (COMING IN AUGUST!) has a strange storyline for our heroes.  I’ve called it silly, but that’s not right.  It definitely has a different feel after the heaviness of The Compass Key, Curse of the Dark Wind, and Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue.  Are there dire straits, character development, and the usual action?  Yes, but there’s a lighter, odder tone to the whole thing.  Primarily because it pulls Yola Biggs the Chaos Goddess into the forefront and I couldn’t do that with something ‘normal’.

This isn’t something entirely unique though, but it’s more common in anime.  Before the heavy final act of a series, you may find an oddly lighthearted or bizarre one.  It doesn’t always have plot significance or any lasting effect on events.  That works for a visual medium like anime or a TV show (I’m looking at you, Supernatural!), but not as well for a book.  That requires some type of impact.  For example, Merchant of Nevra Coil does the following:

  • Reveals more of Yola and makes her a stronger character.
  • Sets up the events of The Mercenary Prince.
  • Brings closure to a few characters in regards to a past event.
  • Reveals more about gnome culture.
  • Shows the technology is slipping into Windemere.
  • Pushes a few more subplots.
  • Demonstrates the kingdom-wide influence of the heroes.
  • Gives the newest champion a time to shine.
  • Something with Fizzle.

That’s a lot for what some may call a ‘silly’ book, which is rather telling about how this can be used.  I’ll go into more details on Wednesday, but a book like this requires that the reader trust the author.  Have faith that this is being done for a reason that will alter the main story for the better.  Yes, the author might be doing something more zany to combat the residual effects of several darker storylines.  That doesn’t always mean that this type of story is without merit, but you will find that it isn’t for everyone.  It’s a risk and that’s why I’m talking about it this week.  I’m fessing up to this being an oddball idea that solved a few issues and turned into character development nirvana for me.

So, what do you think of the lighthearted or bizarre story that can turn up right before the main run for the end?  Personally, I find them interesting and they build up tension since I see it as a sign that stuff is about to go down.  The more upbeat the tale, the more devastating the drop for our heroes . . . Not that I’m planning to do anything horrific to them . . . Yeah, Stephen’s existence already shows that I’m not nice to my heroes.

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In aid of Macmillan Cancer Support- “You’re Not Alone”

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Have I mentioned that twenty-seven writers from around the world, including myself have entered an assortment of short stories for your pleasure, in aid of MacMillan Cancer Support? I probably did. Here are some more facts that you probably didn’t know and more reasons to buy even multiple copies. Just read the captions and look at the pictures!

[100% of the royalties earned or accrued in the purchase of this book, in all formats, will go to the Pamela Winton tribute fund, which is in aid of Macmillan Cancer Support.

The anthology is themed on relationships and includes tales from urban fantasy to stories that bring tears to the eye. You’ll find the book on your Amazon via these links: http://smarturl.it/YoureNotAloneAnthhttp://bookshow.me/B00Y5RCOOE]

P1130529 There are a lot of things you can do with this book:

Open a book group Open a book group

Read the stories to your pet Read the stories to your pet

Get a copy for everyone in the house Get a copy for everyone in the…

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Final Call for Volunteers

Quick post.

Last call for volunteers to help promote The Merchant of Nevra Coil soon after it comes out.

Let me know in the comments and thanks

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