Windemere Monsters: Doppelgangers

Doppelganger for D&D

Doppelganger for D&D

Who really knows how many Doppelgangers have appeared in the Legends of Windemere series?  Not many because revealing several main characters have been copies of the originals for most of the adventure is stupid.  I mean, could you imagine being invested in something for so long and then find that the characters you love are not really them?  (Any comic fans know what ‘big event’ I’m poking fun at here?)

These creatures might be in the wild, but nobody really knows.  There have been times when a hunter kills an animal only to see it transform.  Doppelgangers have bluish green skin that is slick to the touch and no facial expressions.  Yet it does have a mouth, which appears to bite a ‘victim’ and absorb their form and memories.  It is never a perfect change due to the mental aspect.  Many times a Doppelganger will take on the ‘idealized’ version of a person until they have a day to adjust.  Not to mention they need to learn the person’s behavior to make it a believable copy.  The change is done with the help of a colony of parasites that help them maintain and erase the forms.  Fritz goes into a long description in Prodigy of Rainbow Tower.

The role of doppelgangers tend to be decoys for the wealthy and powerful.  It is not a safe job and they are practically slaves.  Some are used as bodyguards though because they are very strong in their natural form.  Limbs can be stretch very far and reattach rather easily if severed.  They some regenerative powers too.  Many times a kidnapped decoy will revert to its normal form and kill the criminals, which makes these creatures assassins as well as spies.

One big part of the shape-changing ability is that they need to ‘taste’ the target and lose everything once they revert.  Another ‘taste’ is needed to regain the form, which is why some doppelgangers are given a lock of hair, fingernail clipping, or something to regain the form if need be.  This hasn’t always been the case.  Every once in a while, a doppelganger will be born that doesn’t need the ‘taste’ or even physical contact.  This is a prehistoric throwback since it can’t copy memories, but it has a superior transformation power.  When people come across one of these types, they either hire it as an assassin or try to give it a psychic item to give it the memory stealing ability.  This rarely works because doppelgangers have an aversion to magical items, which cause issues with their natural abilities.

As for out of story origin, the doppelgangers are a pre-existing creature.  Not only in D&D, but old legends where see your copy is a death omen.  I toyed around with including that aspect, but couldn’t get it to work.  The closest thing is that people would call seeing one in its natural form as a death omen.  Probably a criminal-only legend since they’d be most likely to fear such a thing.

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Raven’s Hold Part 24 #thriller #fiction

West Park Asylum

West Park Asylum

The elevator doors open to the dimly light basement hallway, which Ian swiftly enters to finally escape the cascading sparks. He reaches out to one of the deep gouges in the faded yellow walls and wonders if a bear is loose. It would not be the strangest thing he has recently seen, so he grabs a metal rod from a battered trashcan. Ian stares at the thick network of pipes in the ceiling, noticing that several of the valves dripping rusty water onto the warped floor. The few exposed bulbs that are working are set above crisscrossing boards, the wood nailed to the dense concrete. Approaching one of the strange barriers, he can barely discern the outline of an old frame. Squinting into the distance, he can only see one exit and carefully avoids the puddles to reach the polished door. The handle turns and the hinges move without a sound, allowing Ian to sneak in without being noticed.

A maze of cages and containers cause him to freeze and let the metal rod slip from his loose grip. The crimson lightning makes him think of Hell, which is enhanced by the howling screams drifting from the upper levels of Raven’s Hold. Shadowy forms move behind the bars and extend frail hands toward the newcomer. The nearest container shudders as whatever is inside pounds on the side and weeps. Ian moves away when he sees a stream of tears flowing toward the grating under his feet. Strong fingers grab him by the shoulder and pull him against cold bars, the other hand coming around to cover his mouth. He struggles against the prisoner until his thrashing causes both arms to pop out of their sockets and fall to the floor. A mournful wail erupts from the decrepit woman and she repeatedly bangs her head on the cage while Ian quickly gets away.

Keeping away from the cages and ignoring the noises from the containers, the young man weaves toward the brightly lit part of the chamber. The occasional raised voice echoes throughout the basement, but is devoured by the din created by the prisoners. For a brief moment, Ian swears he smells fresh pizza and someone is talking with their mouth full. Catching a glimpse of the distant area, he sees the end of a leather couch and a woman’s hand nervously tapping on the arm. Curiosity and caution battling in his mind, Ian is stopped when a familiar noise draws his attention to a small cage to his right.

The repetitive click of a camera forces him to get closer to the bars and his gloom-adjusted eyes make out the form of Rich. He can see that the bald man is becoming emaciated even though he has not been away for very long. The vacant look on his friend’s face remains unbroken even when Ian reaches over to tap his shoulder. A weak moan slips from Rich’s mouth as he continues clicking his camera, which is missing the strap and lens. With a stuttering sigh, the man leans forward to gnaw on the device and pays no attention to his departing friend.

Ian crawls under a cage with wheels to get a safe look at the source of the voices. He is not surprised to see Dr. Rutherford, the blonde woman sitting on the couch and glaring at her companions. She keeps a stern glare aimed at Dawn who is joyfully eating pizza and dancing to music that only she can hear. The brunette occasionally stops to throw uneaten crust at the doctor and unleash a flood of curses.

“As the person whose name is on the paperwork, I have every right to bring in any person I feel will benefit us,” Dr. Rutherford says, wiping some sauce off her cheek. She fixes her glasses and removes a piece of drool-covered crust from her lap. “Mr. Connors was perfect in the role of a low risk patient. His presence could have kept others at bay and a successful treatment would have cemented our declaration that we help others. Our more recent residents have all shown signs of being doubtful. Mr. Connors was part of the plan to keep us going and you ruined him, Ms. Addison.”

“I made him more fun, but I can’t take all of the credit,” Dawn replies while stripping out of her clothes. She bounds over to a closet to pull out a pair of crimson jeans and a black top, the garments fitting perfectly. “Besides, this lesson has nothing to do with him. I’ve gotten over you bringing him in without talking to me first. My issue is with Ginla . . . Cana . . . the sister. That’s a stupid move because, unlike the little puppy, people will look for her. You’re the one who put our home in danger.”

“I had nothing to do with her.”

“Then why is she here, Grace?”

“Because I wanted her here,” announces a deep, male voice.

Stepping out of a patch of shadows, a black-haired man joins the two women and finishes drying off from his shower. His slender body shows several scars that shift until they are where he feels like placing them. The stranger knows his mood will change his decision before too long, so he ignores the markings and wraps himself in a thick robe of feathers. Taking a seat next to Dr. Rutherford, he pats his lap and braces himself for Dawn to land on him. He kisses her deeply while his yellow eyes scan the area, the vibrant orbs pausing briefly on where Ian is hiding.

“Both of you must remember that this is my home,” the man calmly states while running a hand through Dawn’s hair. He hands a thick file over to the doctor, who quietly flips through the pages. “I appreciate all that you two do for me, but you’re not irreplaceable. My whims are what keep you here and possibly alive just as they do for the mice above. If I wish to do something new without your permission then that is my choice.”

“I understand that, sweetie, but I don’t like being in the dark,” Dawn coos, nipping at the man’s neck. A playful bite draws blood, which she quietly wipes up with a napkin. “This whole thing makes me feel like I’m being punished. I figured out a way to have fun with the little puppy even though I wouldn’t have chosen him. We don’t really send people home, Grace, so why bother faking it?”

“It’s all about keeping up appearances, Ms. Addison,” the doctor replies without looking away from the file on Ms. Nash. She smacks the man’s hand away when it creeps toward her shoulder. “There will be none of that. We’ve had this discussion before, Corvus. I’m here to help you and not be one of your broken playthings. That’s why I brought you Ms. Addison. Is she losing her luster?”

“I will eat your tongue in your sleep,” the brunette threatens with a territorial growl.

Corvus gently eases the woman off his lap and gets himself a beer from a cooler. “Please behave yourselves. I’m tired from having so much fun with the residents. It’s been so long since I’ve had a riot to interact with. Makes me feel alive and free instead of locked down here. Now, I believe you two are visiting to discuss Carla and Gina Nash. A beautiful creation, isn’t she? I erased her past life and replaced it with memories from that orderly with the head wound. There was nothing wrong with that one, but I wanted to fiddle. By the way, Grace, I need you to have one of our people dispose of the husk before it starts smelling.”

“I’ll put it in the usual place, but I hope you will answer a question for me,” the doctor replies, jotting down a few notes in the folder. She tucks it into her coat and reaches for a glass of wine. “Raven’s Hold is impossible to find unless invited. How did Mrs. Nash get here?”

“As you’ve guessed, I brought her here and that took considerable energy. Manipulating others from so far away is not something I do very often,” the man states while putting an arm around Dawn’s waist. “I do apologize for causing you trouble, but I was getting bored. Well I did agree to you bringing in Mr. Connors, I found him too boring for my interest. Like my love, I needed to turn him into my toy. That required some prodding and breaking, which required the sister. It really isn’t that hard to figure out.”

“What do we do with her now?” Dawn asks, licking some beer off Corvus’s lips. She sighs when he sits her in a chair, but her mood improves when a burger appears in her lap. “I say we turn her into a patient. No reason to hide it either. The riot can be the cause of her having a breakdown. What do you think, sweetie?”

“Possibly, but I want to use her for a few more things. One of which is rather immediate.”

Ian feels a chill run up his spine and backs out from under the cage, his eyes focused on the grinning man. Before the nervous patient can stand, he hears a stun gun go off and a jolt of pain strikes him in the back. Shuddering on the floor, he can barely make out Gina looming above him. When he tries to talk, she zaps him again and rolls him onto his back. By the time the cages and containers part to let Corvus approach, the orderly has Ian pinned to the ground.

“This one has certainly been an oddity,” the black-haired man says while removing a feather from his robe. “He’s been on the verge of belief since his first day, but he routinely stops himself. One more step is all he needs and we almost had him until Dawn threw a tantrum. I have to say that people have been truly disappointing me lately.”

“I’m sorry, but you should have talked me about it,” the brunette states while poking at a crying prisoner. She plucks a flower that sprouts from the woman’s hair and tucks it into shirt collar. “We can still push him if you want. It isn’t too late, sweetie. Don’t send me away because I was being cute.”

“I wouldn’t dream of losing you, my love,” Corvus declares in shock. Stepping away from the smiling woman, he puts his hands on Gina’s shoulders and runs his fingers along her tense arms. “Changes in faculty must be done. Someone has to pay for losing control. Perhaps you’re right that she has to go and Mr. Connors deserves a chance at redemption.”

“What about the hallway?” Dr. Rutherford suggests as she joins the others. Noticing Ian, she kneels in front of him and checks his pulse. “It was designed to give failed patients a slim chance of returning to the fold. It could be used for staff too. Give me some time to make a list of who is important and who is expendable.”

The clicking of Rich’s camera causes Corvus to twitch, so he stretches his arm to harmlessly pull the man through the bars. Callously tossing the wiggling patient next to Ian, he pushes Gina forward and gestures for her to examine both men. A wicked grin is on his face while Dawn dances around the cage. Dr. Rutherford catches the expression and moves to Corvus, who puts a friendly hand on her shoulder. Gina and the patients remain unaware of the silent understanding between their companions.

“It was a fun game, but it’s time for some people to leave the board,” Corvus announces with a stomp of his foot. Ian and Rich fall through trapdoors, leaving Gina kneeling on the edge of an abyss. “I hate losing my toys.”

“I’ll get you more,” Dr. Rutherford promises while adjusting her glasses. The grip on her shoulder gets tighter and she grunts in pain. “I will get to work on it right away.”

“No. You won’t, Grace. Good-bye, old friend.”

Another stomp of Corvus’s foot opens a hole beneath the doctor’s feet and she plummets into the darkness. Wiping his hands clean, the man lifts Dawn into his arms and whistles for Gina to join them at the couch. A large television is already rising from the floor and speakers are flipping lowering from the ceiling. Flickering to life, the screen reveals a hallway and three fuzzy forms sprawled on the floor.

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If I Can Twitch a Finger Then I Can Write

This has been a grueling week with appointments, disease, bad food, exhaustion, and ending on an unexpected haymaker to the crotch . . . with brass knuckles.  So I didn’t get as much stuff done as I’d hoped.  There was one highlight early on that I can’t talk about in public because it’s a situation in progress.  Could be amazing, useful, and/or nothing.  Still it’s something and I’m excited to see what happens.

Writing

Legends of Windemere: The Spirit Well is underway and about 27.27% done.  In other words, 6 out of 22 chapters have been written.  I lost Tuesday to mild food poisoning and only an hour of sleep.  Still twitching along too, so I only write when my mind is clear and I think things through when not at the file.  Some interesting things have turned up at the beginning and it’s becoming almost a mystery.  My brain is an odd thing lately because it keeps creeping over to the BIG REVEAL or BIG FIGHT when I’m not focused.  I spent a good chunk of Tuesday imagining how the final battle with the Baron goes and what happens to every character.  Mostly who gets the final blow and how.  Also who doesn’t make it out alive.  That’s not until next year though, so I’ll focus on the curious mystery that is turning up in Book 12.

Parenthood

It goes and my son has 7 pumpkins for the holiday.  We’re set for Halloween, but it’s looking like one parent will have to stay home for handing out candy.  That’ll probably be me and I’m fighting against the Yoda ears.  If I’m stuck in the house alone then I’ll write at the dining room table.  Reminds me that there’s the school Halloween parade and a few other events to take the kid to.

Also, my cellphone has become part of the bedtime rituals.  He noticed that I listen to music on Pandora when I shave or shower.  So he gets music (Black Mages station) when he behaves for everything leading up to his own shower.  Seems to work, but it means any texts I get during that time won’t be noticed.  Or they will and get answered by a soaped up 6-year-old.

Blogging

First of all, we’re coming to the end of the October stuff.  Only one day left of Monster Make, 2 days of Windemere Monsters, and a few more pieces of Raven’s Hold.  Thank you to everyone who has kept up with the story and I hope the ending is to your liking.  Next Saturday is going to have a discussion post about Raven’s Hold in regards to feedback and if I got anything right.  Seems Dawn Addison is very popular and I might have to find a home for her.  I keep switching ideas on if she’d work better in Windemere or Bedlam.

Another issue with blogging is that I’ve run out of Teaser Tuesday ideas.  The later books are showing too much in the way of spoilers and I don’t know what to focus on when I go for other books.  We’ll see what happens with that.  Any suggestions or character requests would be welcomed.

Finally, I’m toying with an idea for December posts.  November is already set up and I have 2 weeks worth for December, but it’s rather random.  I probably won’t be finishing writing this book until mid-month and then there’s all of the stuff for the possible release of Legends of Windemere: The Mercenary Prince.  So what would people think about a month of retro posts?  Kind of like a greatest hits from 2013 and 2014 that newer readers might not have read.  I’ve covered a lot of topics, so whenever people ask for me to write about something, I usually find it.  So feel free to give your opinion here.

Goals for the week?

  1. Write more of the book.
  2. Continue apologizing to my editor for abusing British slang in Crossing Bedlam.  In my defense, Lloyd did say the author had no idea what he was doing.
  3. Prepare for Halloween and rest.
  4. Stop writing with the back of my neck pressed to the edge of a wooden headboard.  It hurts.
  5. Dance like everyone is watching (i.e. No dancing.)
  6. ASH VS. EVIL DEAD ON STARZ!  HAIL TO THE KING, BABY!  (Trailer below. Graphic violence.  Enjoy.)

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Sunday Lunch Invitation – Claire Fullerton, Kim Gosselin and Alisa Belzil

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10 Things that happen when you write a plot twist #writers #SundayBlogShare

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Raven’s Hold Part 23 #thriller #fiction

West Park Asylum

West Park Asylum

Raven’s Hold has erupted with howls and screams as its residents are driven into a maddening frenzy. The darkness masks much of the destructive, but the hallways are still littered with body parts. Blood seeps out from under doorways and horrific shrieks can be heard from the gardens. The building shudders under pounding blows against its outer walls, the occasional shadowy giant wandering by the windows. Most of the staff try to hide in the office, but they know it is only a matter of time before the door is broken down. They can hear the whimpers of those trapped among the residents, but the sound is cut off by a glass-cracking laugh that rolls from every corner.

Terrified and desperate to find a place to hide, Ian sprints through the halls that have become a winding maze. With a drooling woman on his heels, he skids around a corner and dives away from another patient. The pair collide and tear into each other with sharpened fingernails, neither remembering their original prey. Their dying howls and curses ricochet off the walls to chase the sweating man through the shadows. As he trips over a mangled wheelchair, the approaching noises become gnarled claws that rip down his back. Instead of agony, a pulse of pleasure runs through Ian’s body and he curls into a ball.

“No. Don’t stop running,” he growls as several pairs of footsteps get closer. “Get on your damn feet and move, Connors.”

Ian uses a door to stand and pauses when it opens with a creak that reminds him of the ravens. Through the growing crack, he can see an abyssal darkness that chills his marrow. Still clutching the handle, he is knocked into the room by a charging man who is covered in crayon-made tattoos. Ian swings over open air while the other patient tumbles into the void, the sounds of crunching bones rising from the darkness. When a woman appears in the doorway, the shadows sprout four-fingered hands that catch her by the throat. Yanking her into the endless room, a jaunty whistle joins the popping that occurs when one of her body parts is bloodlessly remove and tossed into a hovering casket. Her head squeals with glee when it is punted into the coffin and her remains are loudly flushed into the abyss. A gust of wind shoves the door closed and Ian immediately sprints toward a flight of stairs.

After a while, he realizes that the steps are never ending and the sounds of chaos are becoming muted by an incredible distance. Turning around, Ian sees a churning pool of pristine water that beckons to him with the promise of serenity. The scent of lilacs hits his nose and he is about to descend the stairs until he remembers all of the previous threats. With a more cautious eye, he peers at the gentle waves and barely makes out the form of a body beneath the enticing surface. Earning a snarl from the building, the exhausted man takes a seat on the steps and quietly runs his finger along his scars.

“I don’t want to play games any more,” Ian announces, his voice surprisingly calm. The splashing from below draws his attention to a naked form, but he refuses to let his vision focus on the figure. “Let me guess. That’s going to be my wife since I admitted to Dawn that I’m still loyal. You know, I vividly remember the creation of every scar on my body. This one on my wrist was a pocketknife in a movie theater because I sat next to a father and his son. This one on my ankle was a fork that I slipped into my sock during the first Thanksgiving after I lost my family. I wasn’t very good at hiding it back then, so Carla caught me and flipped out.” Ian removes his shirt to make figure eights over his chest. “I kept getting more and more creative with my cutting. The pain wasn’t really pleasure and I never really felt a true release. In all honesty, my goal was to build up my courage. One day, I’d give myself a scar that was more horrific than the one on my heart. Sounds pathetic, but maybe something like that would make the loss more tolerable. People have no idea how broken I really am. Yet someone here figured me out. Have I jumped through enough hoops to meet the real ghost?”

Ian glances over his shoulder when he hears a ding and finds that an elevator has appeared a few steps above him. The doors open to reveal a padded interior, the cushions having been torn apart and the stuffing strewn across the floor. A fluorescent light flickers above and occasionally spits sparks across the ceiling. With his hands in his pockets, Ian steps onto the waiting elevator and leaves his back to the closing doors.

 

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Waiter, there’s a fly in my Macabre Macaroni

coldhandboyack's avatarEntertaining Stories

I have no idea where this one came from. I’ll just blame it on my Muse.

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Becky Clarkson left her friends three states away. Her father transferred when his company opened a new plant.

Late summer wasn’t too bad. The neighbor girl, Marcy, hung out with her a few times. They went to the county fair together, but Marcy ditched her for other friends.

Becky sat on the teacup ride alone, and stared into space. Her old friends wouldn’t have abandoned her. They’d be all over the big roller coaster together.

Becky’s sophomore year began with her as the new girl. Several girls were pleasant, but dismissive. The cliques and groups seemed to be carved in stone. Marcy hung out with the coolest girls, and Becky was forgotten.

Two weeks after school started, Marcy slid into the bus seat beside Becky.

“Pay attention,” Marcy said. “I’ve noticed that you…

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Coloring Time

estyree's avatarHere there Be Dragons!

The Time Chamber

By: Song Ji-Hye (Daria Song)

Published in the United States by Watson-Guptill Publications,

an imprint of Crown Publishing Group,

A division of Penguin Random House, LLC, New York.

(Originally published in Korea by the Business Books and Company, LTD.)

Copyright 2015

I have made mention before of how much I love the ‘new’ idea of adult coloring books. In fact, I even reviewed the first book in this coloring book series, The Time Garden, which can be found here.

Well folks, Daria Song has done it again. This book is gorgeously drawn, beautifully storied in a few short sentences, and incredibly imaginative. A fairy who lives in a cuckoo clock decides to venture out into the world of her friend, the little girl. Suddenly the most innocent and mundane of items turns into magic and the audience is taken on an adventure chronicled through images…

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A Rare Weekend Appearance of N. N. Light + Announcement #bookpromo #ASMSG #IARTG

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Saturday Morning Coffee – Variety with Sarah Vernon, Mary Smith and Nicholas Rossis

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