November/December 2016 Writing Contests

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Teaser Tuesday: Working for Passage

So, Teaser Tuesday is back and I’m going to do a little switching.  One day ‘Bedlam’ and the next day ‘Windemere’.  This should help spread some stuff out and garner interest for The Spirit Well next month.  We’re starting with good old Cassidy and Lloyd, who I hope will return to being published next year.

Mark Twain Riverboat

Mark Twain Riverboat

Walking along the deck of the Teal Empress riverboat, Cassidy does her best to balance a tray of drinks and not break an ankle in her heels. Having always worn sneakers, she feels ungainly and awkward in the shoes. The rest of her waitress uniform is much more tolerable, the black pants and sleeveless dress shirt reminding Cassidy of a tuxedo without the jacket. She is not happy with the crimson tie, which is continuously blown into her face whenever there is a strong wind. Moving among the relaxing gamblers and their families, she maintains a smile that her temporary boss insists will get her tips. She has already found that earning the plastic chips is easier when she finds a drunk and bends at the waist. None of the interested patrons have dared to go any further than compliments and brief stares since the mercenary still has her pistols on her hips. Even with the horrible footwear, Cassidy begrudgingly admits that she is enjoying herself and she would not mind going for another ride when she is not racing across the south in order to kill someone.

Unlike his friend, Lloyd is tempted to take his chances with swimming the rest of the way to New Orleans. The only thing stopping him is the sight of large alligators and his supervisor telling him about the time she had a leeches stuck to her back for two days. Being deemed scary and socially destructive by a lazy man in human resources, Lloyd has been assigned to the janitorial staff. His coworkers have taken full advantage of him being the new guy and not a fulltime employee. Every disgusting clean up job has been handed to the killer, including cleaning a body out of the paddle wheel. He is currently polishing the smokestacks, which he senses is a pointless job since they are painted. Instead of giving up and returning to the laughter of the other janitors, Lloyd takes advantage of the view and quietly watches well-dressed patrons below.

“Take a break, Mr. Mercenary!” shouts the supervisor over the walkie-talkie. The woman is standing next to Cassidy, who is counting her tips. “Your friend is at lunch and wanted to talk to you. Remember that we have you on septic duty after lunch, so don’t eat anything that you don’t want to taste again.”

“Aye-aye, Captain Pit Stains,” Lloyd replies before shimmying down the smokestack. He flexes his aching fingers, which are covered in polisher and filth. “This is all fun and games, but I’ll get my revenge one day. Not by my own hand. More in that the universe will act as my agent and have you get eaten by whatever animal you collect to ward off loneliness in your old age. I suggest hamsters because the suffering would last longer.”

“You seem to be making friends,” Cassidy mentions as the supervisor storms off to choose a new victim to boss around. She hands a cup of ice water to her friend, who drinks it so quickly that he nearly throws up. “I told you to take one of our new canteens. This is only our second day on here and you look like hell. Fake an illness or something to get out of work. It isn’t like this is a real job for us.”

“I will not rest until that employee of the month parking space is mine!” Lloyd announces, startling all of the patrons. A pair of jogging women chuckle at the outburst, but fails to return the man’s exaggerated wave. “These people are too stuck up, so it’s probably for the best that I’m kept away. Speaking of work, how are you getting so many tips? For someone who wasn’t happy about this, you’re racking up the trade-in chips.”

Cassidy bends at the waist to fix one of the straps on her shoes, resulting in a passing man tossing her another tip. “Apparently, these heels make my ass look amazing. Figured I’d use this to my advantage and earn us New Orleans beads. My coworkers have been telling me that the city has its own economic system that revolves around these necklaces. From the sound of things, Mardi Gras never ends there. Wish I could see the look on Cami’s face when she passes into a place of debauchery and excess.”

“Hoping she has an aneurysm?”

“No because then I couldn’t strangle the life out of her.”

“Your threats are getting milder.”

“Well, I’m running out of ideas.”

“I’ll give you some new ones over lunch.”

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Raven’s Game Part 31 #horror #Halloween #thriller

Detroit Theater Ruins

Detroit Theater Ruins

“Pssst. Wakey wakey, kitty,” Dawn whispers from the shadows. Her silhouette remains at the foot of the bed where the single light is unable to reach. “You’re not going to let this ruin our game. Especially since we’ve hit a new level of fun. Corvus and I decided to go our separate ways, which means you’re my new partner. Wake up and get out of bed. It isn’t like your limbs fell off.”

Stirring from a dreamless slumber, Gemma sits up and is surprised to find that all of her bandages are gone. Touching her face, she finds a satin patch over her damaged eye, the fabric giving enough to make her fear it will break. Swinging her legs off the bed, she gingerly steps on the floor and jumps back onto the bed. A black feather is stuck to her toes, more of them barely visible on the ground. Remaining in the circle of light, she faces Dawn and looks for something to throw. The shadows swallow everything that the detective could lift, the darkness receding to drag the items away.

“I’m never going to help you,” Gemma growls, her angry voice reverberating for several seconds. Crawling to the foot of the bed, she is still unable to get a clear look at the other woman. “You murdered hundreds if not thousands of people. I’ve no idea why I don’t kill you right here.”

“Because you love yourself too much.”

“What do you mean?”

“I said we were partners.”

The circle of light grows to encompass Dawn who is standing in a hospital gown decorated by a skeletal unicorn. She playful waves at Gemma before tapping on a barrier that is sitting between the two women. Standing within a large mirror, the brown-haired woman raises her arms to make the detective copy the movement. With a wicked grin, Dawn presses her body against the glass and draws Gemma to the edge of the bed.

“Now repeat after me, kitty. There’s never any fun in normal.”

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Happy Halloween 

Hope everyone has a fun and safe Halloween.  Doing this by phone so I hope the links come up as videos. (They didn’t, so I’ll have to do a fix.)

 

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The Last Day of October

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Hey all, it’s Nevada Day. We used to get the day off from school and everything when I was a kid. Of course, I grew up in Nevada.

It’s also Halloween, of course. Do you know how awesome it was to get Halloween off from school every year?

Alright, enough reminiscing. Time for some promotion. I promised myself I’d do some promo all during October. This is the one I never planned upon. See, I signed up for a couple of book blasts and one of them requires a sale. They suggested 99¢ or free.

I elected to make Will O’ the Wisp free for one day to support the book blasts. I’m kind of spastic, so it will probably extend to November 1st. For a little bit of insight as to why I chose free, visit my turn at the blog over at Story Empire. This is where I…

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Raven’s Game Part 30 #horror #Halloween #thriller

Hotel Salto

Hotel Salto

“Welcome back to the land of the living, Detective Cook.”

Gemma’s eyes open to see that she is in a hospital room, the walls a different color than the one in Heaven’s Nest. At first, she thinks Dawn has merely changed the scenery and created more equipment. It is not until she realizes that Captain Blythe is standing by the door with a large fruit basket from the precinct. Gemma tries to move away when he approaches, but her pain-wracked body is locked in traction. Raising her head, she sees that all of her limbs are elevated and in casts. Her breathing becomes ragged when her boss sets the gift on a nearby table and takes a seat. She calms down slightly when she notices the bags under the man’s eyes and a few days’ worth of beard on his chin. The detective is resistant when Captain Blythe takes the thermos off a tray and offers her the straw, but her thirst gets the best of her. She drains the container within a few minutes, the ice cold water making her stomach twist. Unable to curl up like she wants, Gemma can only squirm until the pain subsides.

“You’ve been in a coma for two weeks,” Captain Blythe explains as he lays out pictures from Max’s funeral on the table. He tries to put them where her good eye can see them with ease, but he finds that there are too many to put in a small area. “Heaven’s Nest collapsed and took nearly everyone with it. Counting you, ten people survived with injuries that most of have recovered from. We’re still trying to figure out how anybody lived through the disaster, especially you. Another survivor claimed they saw you go to the penthouse before the collapse, which means you fell the entire way to the arcade. Took the firefighters two days to get you out of the wreckage. The onsite EMTs almost declared you dead because of your injuries and a very faint pulse that only machines picked up on.”

“When can I talk to the survivors?” Gemma asks in a strained voice. She attempts to wiggle one of her fingers, the joint popping with every movement. “Sorry. Last thing I remember is trying to arrest Dawn Addison and then the building fell out from under me. Having some trouble acknowledging my situation, sir. Probably won’t be back on the job for a couple of months, so I’ll understand if this case passes me by. Still, it would be nice to hear if they recall anything. My mind is rather fuzzy.”

Captain Blythe chuckles and holds out a card for the injured woman to read, the printed message covered by signatures from her coworkers. “Besides you, only one other survivor is local. The others were from other cities, states, and countries. They went home as soon as they were able to travel since they either had loved ones to bury or family that wanted them home. I wouldn’t worry about it, Gemma. You’re right that this case is going on without you, but only because you’re too involved. Are you able to answer a question?”

“I will do my best, sir.”

“Do you know why Dawn Addison destroyed her own hotel?”

Gemma whimpers as she tries to nod, her head only accomplishing a painful jerk that locks her spine. She takes several deep breaths to steady her nerves and stares at the fruit basket to remind herself that she is not dreaming. Watching the face of Captain Blythe, she considers that Dawn is still playing games with her. Struggling to remember the last few minutes before plunging into a waterfall of debris, the detective feels a trickle of warm blood seep from her eye socket. Her boss’s horrified reaction helps to erase the last of her fear since she assumes he would be have a different reaction when under her enemy’s control.

“I have a vague memory of what happened,” Gemma answers, accepting a spoonful of what she hopes is chocolate pudding. The taste is bitter and she fights to swallow, which draws her attention to the rumbling in her stomach. “I was angry about Max’s death, so I went to confront her about it. There was something about her husband and then she had a mental breakdown. The building fell apart soon after she began screaming. How do you know Dawn did anything? We could never pin anything on her.”

“A computer was found intact and without any protection,” Captain Blythe replies, running his hand over his bald head. Nervously licking his lips, he gazes at the window that shows the morning skyline. “There was only one file on it, which was a message from Dawn Addison. She simply said that if she went down, the world goes with her. Residues from a variety of explosives were found in the wreckage, so she must have rigged the whole thing in case we managed to get anything on her. Probably hit a detonator when you were confronting her.”

Gemma feels her strength returning and manages to move her head enough that she can get a better look at her boss. “Let me guess. No trace of her anywhere. Dawn will probably turn up in another state or country after a few months.”

“That’s where things get a little creepy,” the man claims as he pulls a folded article out of his jacket pocket. Putting it on top of the pictures, he points at the one line obituary of Dawn Addison. “She was actually found a few feet from you. Her body was on a bed and looked rather comfortable if you ignored the piece of rebar going through her chest. A lot of dead ravens around her too. None of that is the creepy part. Two days after the body was taken to the morgue, it disappeared. I’m not talking overnight either. Sammy had just finished cleaning the body and went to get a tool to remove the rebar. Then the lights went out, she heard wings flapping all over the place, and the body was gone by the time the power came back on.”

“For some reason that doesn’t surprise me.”

“Why is that?”

“Death feels like it would be too normal for, Dawn.”

“Not sure what you mean by that.”

Feeling drowsy, Gemma unleashes a gaping yawn that pops her jaw. “Sorry, but I need to get some sleep, sir. Please tell Max’s family that I’m sorry for what happened. If I remember anything else, I’ll give you a call.”

Captain Blythe opens the fruit basket and moves it closer even though Gemma is unable to move her arms. He is about to pat her on the leg, but stops out of a fear of hurting her. Tucking his hands into his pockets, the tired man takes in the sight of the injured woman and takes comfort from the glint of defiance in her eyes. Unable to do anything more for her, Captain Blythe says his good-byes and walks away, his footsteps echoing from the hallway that is disturbingly quiet.

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A Final Piece to the Final Act?

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One thing I’m trying to figure out with Legends of Windemere: Warlord of the Forgotten Age is the acknowledgement and thanks page.  Do I do one?  If so, where do I put it?  How long should it be and who should be named?

Personally, I’m thinking after the story and including the players from the original game by name as well as a few others like Jason and Ionia.  It’s a tough one outside of that group because I’d be here all day if I named every author who helped me out.  Part of me wants to do the short and sweet here.

Let me know what you think about this.  Plus side is that I probably have a while to think about this.

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A Pocket Full of Poesies – A Review

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“A Pocket Full of Poesies” is a poetry book by a writer and dear friend, T. J. Therien, and I had the honor of receiving a promotional copy of it, with a delightful message inside.

This poetry book is very gentle and accessible. It is a book of love poems, but for me, it is different than love poetry books I encountered before.

More often than not, love tends to be over complicated in books, especially poetry books. There is hours and hours of narrative, where I get the feelings the emotions are not honestly described. I feel like I am simply being told what I want to hear or what the writer has been told to write to appear more sweet. This is not a book like that!

Tim’s love poems feel simply very real, very explosive, and very relate-able.And relate-able to the good parts, not just the sorrow…

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5 Tips For Growing Your Blog

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I know you hate stats but… don’t let all the bar charts fool you, this is a good post. And funny. Read it.

If you don’t track what you’re doing, how do you know what’s working? 

If writing books is what you wanna do, and creating a blog is part of your author platform, then occasionally you need to stop into the accounting office of your little book business and ask the number crunchers what the numbers say.

Might be good news!

Might not.

Here, we have some stuff that looks impressive.

i-was-there-once I’m kicking ass! Maybe.

With TWO full months to go in 2016, I have already exceeded the numbers for all of 2015! Woo hoo, right?

Well…

Yes. You folks have gathered here in greater numbers than last year, and I’m happy about that. You are getting the writerly stuff you need, having fun reading the…

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Raven’s Game Part 29 #horror #Halloween #thriller

Winchester Mystery House

Winchester Mystery House

The platform stops at the penthouse and tilts to gently slide Gemma through the open doorway. She finds herself standing in a narrow room with a single door that is made of dented metal and a small, frosted window. A pulse of fear stops her from taking another step until the ravens swarm in from the elevator shaft. Their wings graze her skin while they fly back and forth, their movements blocking Gemma off from going anywhere besides through the quivering door. With no other choice, she enters the penthouse and finds that there is nothing besides the master bedroom. The windows no longer have their glass, allowing a high wind to churn through the room and move the sheets on the vacant bed. All of the dresser drawers have been opened to reveal colonies of moths and the remains of clothing. The smell of paint draws Gemma’s attention to the walk-in closet, which is empty and colored a bright crimson. The flushing of a rattling toilet comes from the direction of the small bathroom, but there is no door that would give access to the room.

Alone and dressed in white, Dawn sits on the edge of the bed and gently strokes the empty space next to her. For a moment, the sheets seem to billow up into the form of a person, but deflates to make Gemma think it is nothing more than the constant wind. Two ravens sit on the headboard, only one of them moving while the other remains so still that it could be mistaken for being stuffed. Spinning the spoon in her free hand, Dawn dips it into a nearby jar and scoops up some of the jellified brain that is inside. She holds the bite over the pillow for several seconds before frowning and tossing the utensil out the window. The active raven soars after the shiny object, snatching it in its beak and obediently returning it to the hotelier. With a sigh, she returns the spoon to the jar and plants a passionate kiss on the pillow that lingers for a minute.

“My husband doesn’t like taking his medicine when company is watching,” Dawn explains as she comes within a few inches of her guest. She touches the detective’s crimson hair, her fingers leaving a glistening trail of dew. “Now, we need to discuss how the game will proceed, kitty. My husband can make the guests return to normal and forget the unpleasantness. Those who lost loved ones will believe they are here to mourn the loss, which happened somewhere else. All neat, tidy, and other words that mean the same thing. This still doesn’t tell me what to do about you. Wiping your memory means we start from scratch and we’ve come too far in our relationship to shake that Etch-A-Sketch of a brain in your widdle, bitty skull. My suggestion is that you take a day to inform your partner’s family about his death, pick up some fresh clothes, and meet me in the morning for another round. This time, I have this glorious test that involves an arsonist.”

Gemma steps around the other woman, her good eye locked on the empty bed. “You have an entire building full of hostages. Not to mention, I’m on the top floor and have already been launched out of your building once. Keep in mind that the instant you lose your leverage over me, I’ll take you out.”

“Still so angry. Did somebody spritz you with a water bottle?” asks the grinning woman before her eye patch blinks. Opening her mouth to speak, Dawn stops and stomps her foot as if she is being scolded. “I will not let me new pet go. Stop arguing with me, dear, because you’re too weak. No, I won’t give any of your power back until you apologize. Telling me I’m pretty doesn’t count because you tell me that all the time. You know exactly what I want. Well, if I make the unicorn myself then it isn’t you giving me a present. Take a note, kitty. Sometimes you have to force romance in a relationship.”

“I’ll take your word for it,” the detective replies in a dull voice. She squirms against the sensation of ants crawling around her skin and rolls up her sleeves to find one of the insects on each arm. “So, why is your husband sick with? Also, where is he?”

“Corvus is in the bed. Maybe he’s just being shy with you,” Dawn answers, a bead of sweat running down the side of her head. Grabbing the jar of brains, she tries again to find her invisible husband and meets with the same failure. “Being away from Raven’s Hold has made him very weak. Too much normalcy in the world for him to stay healthy. You see, he has the power to make everything a reality, which forced him to hide from humanity. He never thought his isolation would have side-effects. My husband was away for too long and now he needs to eat brain pieces to survive. Harvested just after the kill when they’re warm and still holding the burst of insanity that comes with facing death. Still, I hope one day to find a thalamus that will cure him completely. A special one that sings to our minds and allows me to give him back his great power.”

“Maybe it’s me.”

“I considered that, but you’re too normal.”

“Then, why am I even worth your time?”

“Because the truth is in your face and you still cling to what you think is real.”

“Sounds like a compliment.”

“Just a more eloquent way of calling you an idiot.”

Unsure of what else to say, Gemma turns her back on Dawn and gets within a few steps of the window. She rubs her badge while trying to put a finger on what feels more wrong than everything else she is seeing. The detective is surprised that she has become fairly numb to the strange happenings that surround the hotel. Whether illusions or truly the work of a supernatural being, she finds that none today’s events have yanked on her instincts more than something Dawn recently said. Fighting through a mental haze, Gemma pulls out her phone and takes another look at the notes from the wedding dress and tuxedo.

“You were born in 1980,” the detective whispers more to herself than the other woman. She spots the hint of a frown on her enemy’s face and returns to show her the pictures. “My partner found these notes right before he died. This is something you don’t want other people to know, but I still don’t know why. You’re a year older than your husband according to these notes. Now they could be incorrect or I’m misinterpreting them. Still, if I’m right then Corvus couldn’t have been around for centuries.”

“My bitch of a mother made those to hurt me,” Dawn hisses while backing away from the phone. She kneels next to the bed while a crack of thunder shakes the building. “My husband has been around for a long time. He made himself known to me when I was a child and then waited for me to find him. Back then, our times together were very short, but I loved him dearly. 1981 must have been the day we first met. My mother mistook that for his birthdate. Yes, I’m sure that was what happened.”

“Except she made mention of a few incidents prior to Corvus appearing,” the detective continues, her voice having to rise above the sound of flapping wings. A gust of wind threatens to knock her toward the window, but she hooks her arm around the bed’s footboard. “She called him your imaginary friend and I can believe that. I don’t see him. Nobody has ever seen your husband, except you. If he had such great power then wouldn’t he have taken you away as a child? Why did you have to find him if he could do anything that he wants?”

“Because I needed to mature,” the hotelier declares, her voice quivering. Prismatic tears slip from beneath her golden eye patch, each one burning through the sheet. “You lack the ability to understand us. He was alone and so was I. Then we became one and set out to make the world a better place. I live to follow his example. Your questions prove that you can’t even begin to comprehend the truth.”

Gemma swipes her phone until it stops on a drawing of a little girl standing alone in front of a bird-covered tree. “I think I understand everything. You’re the one behind all of this. Corvus was an imaginary friend that gave you an excuse for everything you did. The voice in your head that helped you avoid feeling guilty for taking lives. Whatever it is that you’ve done in this hotel or Vegas as been by your own hand.”

“Of course it was because he gave me his power,” Dawn replies with a laugh. Sliding her hand along the sheets, she abruptly stops and turns with terror in her eyes. “Corvus? Honey? Dear? Where did you go? Don’t listen to the kitty! She has no idea what she’s talking about. I beg of you to think about what we have. We found each other and now we’re not alone. Please don’t leave me with the normal people. They aren’t any fun. They’re always staring at me and treating me like a monster. Why are you abandoning me!?”

“Because he never existed, Dawn.”

“You drove him away.”

“How could I if I’ve never seen him?”

“Never any fun in normal.”

“So you’ve said before.”

“Never any fun in normal.”

“I’m placing you under arrest, Dawn Addison.”

“Never any fun in normal!”

Dawn’s voice hits a pitch that shatters the jar of brains and causes the two ravens to explode into a rain of feathers. She remains kneeling by the bed, her hands gripping the sheets that bleed from beneath her nails. More of her tears flow from her eyes to become streams of colorful acid that melt through the floor. Cracks run through the walls as Heaven’s Nest shakes and the roof begins to sag. The door to the elevator shaft falls off the wall, revealing brick and cement that Gemma has no way of breaking through. Screams from below cause Dawn to cry even louder, which shatters every glass object in the building. With a final sob, the crumbling floor beneath the two women gives way and they plummet into a horrific cascade of stone, metal, wood, and bodies.

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