Why So Angry, Hero?

Red from Angry Birds

Red from Angry Birds

I like writing angry characters.  Something about having a hero unleash their rage makes me put a lot more into a scene.  Yeah, I’m probably angry a lot myself, which is why I connect to this emotion more than others.  Then again, a lot can happen when somebody loses their temper.  They can make a mistake or defeat an obstacle.  Anger isn’t always a bad thing as long as you use it correctly.  I mean, it isn’t too far off from stubborn defiance and determination.

An angry hero isn’t very unusual because this tends to be the mode that most anti-heroes fall into.  Hulk, Punisher, Wolverine, Guy Gardner, Red (above), and so many others take their strength from losing their cool.  This makes it difficult for them to work within groups unless they’re the leaders or the dynamic is designed to accommodate them.  It really is hard to depend on a hero that might snap and go charging into a fight without thinking.  This action tends to force the others into a situation that they might have been trying to avoid.  For example, the plan is to sneak into the enemy base and make off with the new doomsday device.  Instead, the angry hero overhears two guards making fun of his mother and now you’re battling through an army of goons.  Worst part is that the berserker is rarely apologetic about their outbursts.

Most times this type of character is used to create friction among the other heroes.  They get along with others to a point, but they maintain a standoffish aura to make sure people know that they’re ticking time bombs.  It makes for entertaining tension, but I will admit that it gets old.  Most characters can’t maintain the rage-a-holic role for a full adventure and this gets even trickier if you’re doing comics, which is where they tend to be more common.  Sure, it’s fun to have them snap at others or create problems because their fists were feeling twitchy.  It really helps to bring a blossoming group together and force them to mature.  We’ve all had to figure out a way to deal with someone that works off one of the more troublesome emotions.  Heck, I’m sure most of us have been that someone at some point in our lives.  The thing is that, much like in real life, tension caused by a single person can get old and frustrating after a while.

Well, that’s another purpose for the angry hero.  I think being temperamental and overreacting to situations is fairly common.  Many people get angry about what is happening in their lives, so a hero that functions off this emotion can draw them into the story.  That person is reacting like I want to or have reacted.  More importantly, we get to see if they can overcome their rage, which can be self-destructive if allowed to go on for too long.  For example, I’ve met people who were always angry, but read a Wolverine comic where he was meditating, so they tried it for themselves.  This might be putting a lot on the shoulders of the character, but fictional heroes can be looked up to by the readers.  Them developing beyond their anger can give hope to readers that feel like they’re in the same situation.  On the other end of the spectrum, you can demonstrate what happens if you stay angry for too long.

In my own stories, the poster girl for anger is Nyx.  She began with a really short fuse that made her a danger to others.  She would even dive into fights without thinking and get herself injured.  Over time, she’s mellowed to a point where she gets angry for good reason and controls it.  Honestly, I think Nyx has spent so much time around Timoran that she’s inadvertently learned the barbarian way of using a primal rage as a weapon.  Although the truth is that she found a reason to be happy and naturally settled down into a more reasonable hero.  An evolution can be subtle like this where even the author wakes up one day to realize their berserker isn’t going wild at the drop of a hat any more.  It’s probably better this way, but that’s just me.  An intervention or severe beating can get the job done too.

Have you ever written an angry hero?  Do you have one that you remember or is a favorite?

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The Stories Around Us

Joan Hall's avatarStory Empire

Hello, SEers! Joan here. I’m excited about my first post with Story Empire and getting to know more about you, the reader. Today’s post is directed more toward beginning writers, but I believe all of us could benefit. So, without further ado…

Taken from the deck of the Norwegian Jewel, July 2012 Taken from the deck of the Norwegian Jewel, July 2012

Are you ever at a loss for words? I know I am. Those who know me may argue that point, but that’s another matter.

I don’t mean a casual conversation about the weather, whether or not you’re happy about who won the Super Bowl, or your opinion on the latest Hollywood blockbuster. I’m talking about the lack of story ideas.

I’ve heard new writers say they don’t know what to write about. Even seasoned authors sometimes face this dilemma.

So what’s a writer to do if the dreaded writer’s block happens? First, take a deep breath and relax…

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A Perfect 10 with Deanna Kahler

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

Today we sit down with author, Deanna Kahler. She did a great job of answering my ten questions and through those responses, we will get some insight into her life and work.

I hope you enjoy this week’s edition of A Perfect 10: A Conversation in 10 Questions with Deanna Kahler.

If you want to check out past interviews, you can find them in the following links:

A.C. Flory, Steve Boseley, Kayla Matt, Mae Clair, Jill Sammut

Also, if you are an author and you want to be part of this feature, I still have a few slots open for 2017. You can email me at don@donmassenzio.com


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  • Does writing energize or exhaust you?

I would definitely say it energizes me! Writing enables me to share my experiences with others and touch lives, so it is very rewarding. When a reader contacts you and tells you how…

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Chasing Bedlam Cover Art Teaser!

So it’s Super Bowl time here, which means guests and errands.  I’ll do my best to reply to comments, check emails, and handle tweets.  At least until the beer kicks in.  Joking because I have to drive someone home at some point.  This is going to hurt in the morning no matter what since the kid still has school.  Thank god it’s French Toast Stick day because it means I don’t have to cook him lunch.  Doesn’t save me on time, but it means I don’t have to fumble with the stove and a frying pan while half-asleep.

Anyway, here are two pieces and the combo of part of the Chasing Bedlam cover that I hope people enjoy.  Hoping to release the new book either next Friday or the 12th.  Having a little technical difficulties with part of it. Weekends aren’t going to be my friends for a while.  Enjoy:

By Jon Hunsinger

By Jon Hunsinger

By Jon Hunsinger

By Jon Hunsinger

By Jon Hunsinger

By Jon Hunsinger

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Autism, a Guest Post by Kate Hughes, author of Home

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Weekend of Whirling Dervish-Ness

Where to even start?  This week started out decently and then rolled into a chaotic blur of images that I’m still trying to sort through.  Part of this might be because 4 of the 5 school lunches weren’t stuff my son would eat.  So I had to leap out of bed, make his lunch, get him dressed, get him breakfast, and the usual stuff.  It snowed a bit earlier in the week and it’s been really cold, so none of us are interested in moving too much.  Getting this kid out of a warm bed is a challenge since he scurries under pillows and his mountain of stuffed animals.  If I do catch him then I can’t loosen my grip or I loose him again.  This is regardless of whether he has pants on or not.  Kids really don’t care if they’re butt naked as long as they’re doing what they want.

As far as work stuff, the week started with finishing an outline after meeting with the cover artist for Chasing Bedlam.  Some teasers will be going up tomorrow because we ran into some technical difficulties.  The new cover for Crossing Bedlam is a maybe for the debut day, which will be the 13th and promos going up on the 14th.  Not that anyone is paying attention to this series.  It’s weird that I get people saying they love the idea and like the posts on it.  Yet, the book hasn’t moved in months and I’m stuck at 9 reviews.  Kind of frustrating since I’ve heard some people over the last year say they finished the book and would review, but nothing.  Hard to get my hopes up there.  To be fair, none of my books are garnering much in the way of reviews even if they’re selling.

In other news, 3 of the 12 Ichabod Brooks short stories are finished.  At least, they should be since I’m typing this up on Friday before I write the final section of the 3rd one.  Also, I’m counting Starwind Egg, which I wrote last year.  It was fun getting back into the actual writing instead of planning.  Tuesday saw me complete 4 sections for Phantom Archer and I thought this would be amazing sailing.  Then the cold, errands, and plain tiredness knocked me back to my usual 3 sections a day.  My hope is to finish this by the end of the month and then ask for beta readers.  The release time would be June and I’ll see what I do for marketing.  Might leave it with the basics.

While writing Ichabod Brooks, I’m not working with the same level of detail that I usually do.  Each character is a sentence and the plots are only 3 sentences.  So I’m making up a lot as I go along.  This might explain why I’m slowing down a bit.  Each section is 2-4 pages, so I feel kind of worthless when it takes me 3 hours to get that far.  I still have vivid memories of the time I wrote Prodigy of Rainbow Tower and was cranking out 3 multi-section, 20+ chapters a day.  That was on weekends and weekdays would see one full chapter at night.  I’d stay up until 2 AM and still have energy for work.  The heck happened to that dynamo?  Maybe it was the breakneck speed of those days that killed him off.  Then again, I also had a desk to work out that instead of this bed with no back supporter and a downward view of the screen.  Not to mention I got into too many political chats and debates on Thursday, which really messed me up.  Might be stepping away from those until I’m done, especially since they never seem to go anywhere.

This weekend is going to be busy and I might not be around much.  A friend is coming over today and we haven’t hung out in a few years.  Fingers are crossed that nothing goes wrong like every other time we’ve tried.  He’s staying the night too because Sunday is the annual Super Bowl party.  Otherwise known as 4 people watch the game and everyone else talks until commercials start.  This event has been going on since I was a kid, so it doesn’t matter which teams are playing (unless it’s the NY Giants) and it’s all about relaxing before going back to work.  I don’t expect to be tweeting much during this period or selling many books.  Be nice, but it’s really an uphill battle these days.  At least I’m going to have a lot of fun and possibly have energy to get work done on Monday.  Not holding myself to that, but I have goals I need to achieve.

Like:

  1. Continue writing Life & Times of Ichabod Brooks.  Be nice to get another 3 short stories done, but the next 3 are rather meaty with a total of 21 scenes.  Although, I’ve noticed that some scenes are better combined, so we’ll see.
  2. Get everything ready to go for Chasing Bedlam.  I’ll probably take an hour to get the Amazon set up going and set up a post draft.  Think I’ll use the opening scene for the teaser.  Big thank you to the 14 volunteers for that debut.
  3. Biking, cooking, and the usual.

In downtime news, I’ve been watching the show ‘Lucifer’.  Well, I watched it when it debuted and kept going, but it’s really become a guilty pleasure.  It was the mid-season finale and I just can’t get the end of this scene out of my head because it was hilarious.  At least I thought it was.  Skip to the minute mark for the build up:

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The Real Cyrus, King Of Persia

This is a post on my sci-fi/fantasy series, Pearseus, and the real-life inspiration behind it. It’s actually a reblog, originally posted back in 2014. I am reposting because (a) it’s on…

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Meet Guest Author Richard M. Ankers…

Chris The Story Reading Ape's avatarChris The Story Reading Ape's Blog

How does one make an introduction when he hates talking about himself? Hm, I know, I’ll tell you what convinced me to give up everything to write. We’ll see how that goes because it’s something only I know.

It started with a Death.

richard-m-ankersI have a bad memory bordering on terrible, so when events stick in my mind, they’re significant. Peta was there from the start. She still is in one way or another.

One of my first memories of school was the day the headmaster announced during assembly that Peta’s father had died of a brain haemorrhage or something equally terrible. We were to give her space and respect. At six one’s comprehension of such things is sketchy, but we tried.

It was particularly cruel on Peta because she was brilliant. Clever, pretty, talented — she played the flute even then — she was everything I was not. Self-confidence…

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Partners in Fiction: Writing Duos of the Dynamic & Non-Dynamic Variety

Lucifer and Maze

Lucifer and Maze

Cassidy and Lloyd differ from most of my other stories because they aren’t part of an ensemble cast.  They’re a duet with neither character having a true claim to the main protagonist role.  Some chapters have Cassidy doing more than Lloyd and others have her along for the ride.  Typically, we have a main hero and a sidekick, but these two didn’t turn out that way.

I have to admit that writing a duo makes scenes easier to keep track of.  In Legends of Windemere, I have 6 champions and Fizzle at least.  In the Bedlam Series, I have only the two at minimum, which might be another reason why I find these books a lot more refreshing than the others.  Less juggling in that respect.  Yet, it’s also hard to make sure they stay on equal footing.  A sidekick is easy to push into a corner when you want to, but doing that to a partner weakens them.  For example, you can have Batman go on an adventure without Robin and nobody thinks anything of it.  Lloyd going off without Cassidy or vice versa doesn’t work too often because neither has been established as the main hero.  You can give them a reason to split up like fighting, kidnapping, shiny objects, migraines, etc.  That’s different than one simply not being there because the adventure had nothing to do with them.  Mess with one and you mess with the other.

One thing I’ve definitely learned is that you have to make them compliment each other while retaining their individuality.  Lloyd is a close range fighter with a wild personality and not much knowledge of the Shattered States.  Cassidy prefers guns and is more restrained in personality while being the expert on the region.  She can still fight with a knife or her fists while Lloyd has his paintball gun and an almost ninja-like ability to get within stabbing range.  They have their specialties, but do require each other to truly survive.  Maybe this is more suited for their genre since it focuses more on staying alive than accomplishing a quest.

I find myself flying by the seat of my pants on this one because I’m so used to working with more than two characters in most book chapters.  Looking like I have a lot of unlearning to do from my Legends of Windemere years, but I’m having fun with the new dynamic.  I can use this for when I have characters with similar relationships.  Not that the champions didn’t have this, but there were so many to juggle.  I keep trying to think of any partnerships that are similar to Lloyd and Cassidy, but they’re fairly unique within my pantheon of ideas.  At least with male/female partners. There’s no romance or even hints of such a thing between them, which makes them stand out and creates a different sense of equality to them.  Not really sure how to explain that, but I guess equality with romantic love is different than equality with friendship love.

It’s funny since this was originally going to be an ensemble story, but it got chopped down to a pairing.  Sometimes things just work out for the best.  So, what do you think about writing duos?

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Sally’s Cafe and Bookstore – New on the Shelves – The Viking and the Courtesan by Shehanne Moore

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