Guest Blogger Sue Coletta Acknowledges the Experts Who Help with Research

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Hey, gang, I’ve got crime writer, Sue Coletta as guest today. She’s got a brand new release ready to roll out with Cleaved and it’s up for pre-order at only .99cent. I was lucky enough to get an ARC copy of this book. Trust me, it’s one you’ll want to grab—then curl up and be thankful you’re safely inside, tucked away from the killers who populate Sue’s fictional worlds.

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Acknowledging the Experts Who Help with Research
by Sue Coletta

In the past I’ve been guilty of not acknowledging the numerous experts who’d helped my stories ring true. That’s a mistake. A short line in the acknowledgements of our books is the least we can do.

Since I have a new release, I’ll share the acknowledgment page from CLEAVED, Book 2 in the Grafton County Series (MARRED is Book 1).

Acknowledgement Page

A special thank you to all the…

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If You’re a #Tarantino Fan, You’ll Love Chasing Bedlam by @cyallowitz #bookreview #IARTG

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Rave Reviews Book Club Springtime Book & Blog Block Party #RRBC

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RRBC Springtime Book and Block party

Hello and welcome to the Rave Reviews Springtime Book & Blog Bock Party coming to you from Port Aransas, Texas.

Here’s What I’m Giving Away Today:

A Ten Dollar Amazon Gift Card to one winner. All you have to do is comment to be entered to win. The results will be published in a few days. There will be one winner on this stop.

You may want to visit other posts during this Rave Reviews Book Club Spring Book & Block Party as there are plenty of gifts, books, and surprises. Here is the link for the lineup.

https://ravereviewsbynonniejules.wordpress.com/rrbc-2017-springtime-book-blog-block-party/

In case you don’t know I have three books published which constitute the John J. Cannon Trilogy.

The first of the series:

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John J. Cannon successful San Francisco lawyer takes a well-deserved leave of absence from the firm and buys a boat he names My GRL. He is…

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Creating a Universal Amazon Link – One Link Amazon Sites in all Countries

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

I posted this tip a while ago and got some positive feedback. If you set up buying links for your books, many of you are probably posting Amazon links for each country that you think your book will likely realize some sales.

There is no need to do this.

I was getting frustrated when I ran a free book promotion weekend and experimented with placing a Facebook ad that reached out to multiple countries. My dilemma with doing this is that I didn’t have a way to post all of the links for the various Amazon sites in other countries on my ad without it looking clumsy.

I searched for a way to create a universal link for my book. A universal link, when clicked by a potential reader, is designed to take them to my book on the appropriate Amazon page for their country.

All they needed to do was…

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Invitation

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At five o’clock the table’s laid,
The kettle’s boiled,
The scones are made.
The china’s polished, silver gleams
All ready for a guest it seems…

Yet here I sit,
I’m all alone,
The inbox empty,
Silent phone…

Will no-one send a new guest post?
I’m not a very scary host.
I’ll always try to do my best
So why not come and be my guest?

Free promotion for writers, artists, bloggers, poets and photographers.

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7 Ways to Pass Time in Fiction

The Time Machine

The Time Machine

One of the toughest parts of an adventure story is traveling.  You can write about it if you want, but something has to happen besides walking.  There are only so many ways to shake things up with a fight before people wonder if you’ve played too many Final Fantasy games.  Random encounters are not your friend!  Insightful conversations can get overdone too.  There’s an old author phrase that you should be writing about the most interesting day of your characters’ lives.  If the adventure spans multiple days then you need to do something about the dull ones.  They can’t all have battles, excitement, and adventure.  So, what can you do?

  1. Fill every day with battles, excitement, and adventure.  Every second counts and the hero needs to bulk up before the finale.  Not physically, so much as having enough experience under their belt that they need to go up a few pants sizes.  Sure, they might get exhausted and worn down quickly.  You might have readers asking why they never stop to sleep.  Maybe you should let them take at least one day off?
  2. Time and space magic or technology.  Need to travel far, but don’t want to write several chapters of walking?  Then give them a powerful caster or a machine that can whisk them to their next destination without losing any time.  They instantly appear wherever they want to go.  No need for horses, camps, friendly conversations, or trail rations.  It isn’t like the townsfolk will freak out when the group appears out of nowhere.
  3. Teleportation can work too.  Same as #2, but with a higher risk.  That risk is the group appearing out of nowhere and one member is trying to share space with a brick wall.  I don’t think it was red before that guy arrived.
  4. Jump to a villain scene while the heroes travel.  Doesn’t hurt to check in with your antagonists and give them some attention.  You can even have them spy on the good guys to show that things are progressing off camera.  After all, the villain isn’t just sitting there waiting for stuff to happen.  Why should he be the only one stuck in the ‘time passes’ phase when he’s actually doing things?  Let the goody-two-shoes suffer in limbo for a bit.  Might do them some good.
  5. End the book and don’t publish an updated version or the next volume until the proper amount of time has passed.  Real-time reading, baby!  Wave of the future.  I swear it isn’t a way to nickle and dime readers out of their money.  It really brings the story together and makes you feel like you’re there.  As long as you go for a long walk for the same length of time as the characters.  Maybe we should sell treadmills or hiking boots with this idea.
  6. Open a chapter with phrases such as ‘a few days later’ or ‘after a long journey’.  Just clears everything up neatly and readers figure nothing important happened.  If minor stuff happened then the characters can talk about it.  For example, continuing to tease somebody about messing up dinner or the group angry at the leader for a shortcut that went through a bandit camp.  Opens things up for some comedy while not wasting time with things that aren’t really part of the overall story.
  7. Just keep writing and let your beta readers sort it out.  Maintain a swear jar that way you can buy all of the apology pizzas.
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Review of His Revenge by John W. Howell

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America loves John Cannon, its newest hero, and the President wants to present him with the highest civilian medal for bravery for saving the Annapolis midshipman from a terrorist plot to destroy them. While in Washington for the award ceremony, John unwillingly becomes an accomplice in another plan by the same group to attack the credibility of the US President and the stability of the worldwide oil market. There is no way out as John either becomes a traitor to America or causes thousands of innocent people to die if he refuses.

The second John J Cannon Thriller moves from a barrier Island off the coast of Texas to Washington DC, then to Northern California, and finally to Ecuador. John is on the receiving end of an offer he cannot, refuse. His avowed enemy Matt Jacobs now wants John to help him shake the reputation of the US…

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Opening Scene: Ichabod Brooks & The Island of Mirrors

Ichabod Brooks

Gasping and coughing, Ichabod Brooks drags himself onto the beach and flops onto his back. The sun beats down on his skin and hair, which steadily dry in the tropical heat. He can still see the pieces of the storm that knocked him off his employer’s ship with a wave that might have sunk the vessel. Ichabod doubts the paranoid noble is dead, the adventurer having seen the man scurry into a room designed to survive a wreck. Lifting an arm, he checks to make sure he is still wearing a ring of bluish green coral, his ragged breathing making him worry that the enchanted jewelry no longer works. He can see a spark within the polished material, so guesses that it has merely been overworked by the violent current. Pushing his hands into the sand, he finds the tip of his longbow and holds it up to find that all it needs is a new string. Feeling the aches fade from his muscles, he carefully moves every body part to make sure nothing is broken. A sharp pain is in his leg when he bends it, the source turning out to be a shell that is sticking into his calf. Slipping off his boots, he empties them of water and a baby remora that he gently removes from his heel. It is not until Ichabod is sure that he is unhurt and most of the seaweed is out of his black hair that he stands up to take stock of his situation.

The large island is dotted with trees that bloom into large flowers at the top, making the marooned man fear that he has been shrunk to the size of an ant. It is only when a colorful fly buzzes into his face that Ichabod assures himself that he has not been cursed. Waving the insect away, he is abruptly blinded when the clouds dissipate and the emerging sunlight bounces off a nearby mirror. Rubbing at his eyes, the adventurer keeps his head down and backs toward the golden-edged glass in the hopes of getting behind it. Once he looks up, another mirror forces him to face the ocean with blurry vision. Ichabod patiently waits for part of the sun to be covered before turning around, the reflective surfaces no longer a threat to his eyesight. Embarrassed that he failed to notice them first, he stares at the twenty more that are within sight. Clambering onto a large rock, he gets a better look at the coast and sees an endless variety of mirrors. Even a distant mountain glints in the returning light as if covered by hundreds of glass shards, the beautiful sight nearly mesmerizing the man.

Jumping down, Ichabod immediately rolls to the side and avoids an ivory rapier that sinks into the sand. The toxic blade leaves a black splotch in the beach as its owner frees it and charges the unarmed adventurer. With no string for his bow, the cunning veteran pulls two arrows out of his rawhide and granite quiver. He flings the crimson projectile at the chaos elf, who leaps away from the fiery explosion. The black-armored assassin lands on his feet and sprints toward Ichabod, who rushes to meet the poisonous weapon with the white arrow. Both men are sent flying into the surf by a blast of howling wind that explodes from the adventurer’s elemental weapon. Scrambling to their feet, the pair remaining standing in waist-deep water and wait for the other to make the next move.

“Are we really going to fight here, Jet?’ Ichabod asks the black-haired chaos elf. He slowly pulls out a bowstring to fix his longbow, his eyes never straying from his enemy’s blade. “I don’t think we have to finish what we started on the ship. In fact, I’d say both of our contracts are null and void. You were supposed to kill the noble and I was supposed to protect him from you. Not much point in continuing here.”

“Actually, I managed to tag her with the Cobra Blade before the two of us were swept overboard. Wait. Did you say him?” the assassin replies, taking a scroll out of his pocket. He curses as he reads his contract, which he is tempted to tear in half. “They either gave me the wrong name or the wrong gender. Serves me right for accepting job simply to get another chance to fight you. Took a while to recover from those broken legs you gave me. Bet you thought I couldn’t drag myself out of that ravine.”

“Wishful thinking on my part,” the adventurer says with a half-hearted smirk. A knot in his stomach causes him to examine his own contract, which brings a scowl to his face. “Looks like you’re not the only one who got tricked. My employer seems to have misspelled his name twice in our contract. Not sure how I missed that. Seems both of us have a reason to get off this island and renegotiate.”

Jet trudges back to the beach and yanks a crab off his boot, the animal flailing as it is hurled back into the ocean. “You’re right, but I’m not working with you. We’ve always been enemies and you’re the one person I can’t seem to kill. The two of us are fated to battle for eternity until old age or someone else takes us. So, it doesn’t seem right for us to be partners. Goes against our natures and the plans of the gods.”

“For the last time, we don’t share a destiny, you blue-skinned maniac!” Ichabod shouts, shielding his eyes from the bright mirrors. Hearing the assassin’s swinging blade, he calmly dodges the flurry of attacks until the chaos elf gives up. “This balance belt means I never slip, trip, or fall even if I bend in an unnatural way, so you can stop wasting your energy. Although, my back isn’t exactly thrilled with me now. That swim to shore really took a lot out of me. You don’t look very good either with those cuts on your face.”

“I’m pretty sure the saltwater cleaned them,” the killer declares as he uses his sword to adjust one of the nearby mirrors. Once the light is no longer bouncing off the glass, he gets close enough to examine his injuries. “I will admit that some of these look pretty deep, but it’s nothing a healing potion won’t fix. Got one right . . . it was on my belt. This is exactly why I hate taking jobs that involve boats. Far too easy to lose things. At least I still have a salve in one of my armor pockets.”

“I know you don’t trust me, but take this,” Ichabod insists, tossing a vial of crimson liquid to the chaos elf. He is about to assure the man that the potion is safe, but the killer downs the drink without a second thought. “Good to see you haven’t lost your insane level of courage. This is why I hate fighting you, Jet. Anyway, I have a suggestion. We don’t know what’s out there or how we can get home, so it might be smart for us to work together here. I mean, what if the only way off is a single boat?”

“Then we will fight to the death.”

“I thought we established that neither of us can kill each other.”

“Then one escapes and the other finds another way home.”

“In that case, the boat wouldn’t be the only escape.”

“Stop confusing me with whatever this is.”

“People call it logic.”

“Well, my people would call it being an ass.”

Ichabod draws an emerald arrow out of his quiver and aims it at Jet, the chaos elf lowering his weapon. The assassin slides the Cobra Blade into a cloth sheathe, which turns a dark green from the seeping poison. Knowing that the honorable adventurer will not shoot him in the back, the chaos elf turns around and chooses the nearest path to follow. Walking beneath a canopy of thick vines, Jet disappears into the thick shadows and does not reappear until he is far in the distance. Ichabod sighs puts the conjured arrow in a hook on his belt, the projectile unable to go back into the elemental quiver. Wanting to check the shore before heading inland, he holds up his hand to feel the breeze and goes in the direction that it is blowing.

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DEAR Sale, The AI Bundle And More

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