Timoran Wrath

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A noble warrior of the wild
So far from cold land tribe
Massive and intimidating
Until one hears his words
Wisdom in his mind
And compassion in his heart
They keep his rage at bay
Yet never think him weak
Or too drunk to know a trick
For cross this wild man of tender heart
And he will gut you like a boar

                                                                                                                                                                                                   

A little introduction to one of the new characters of Legends of Windemere.  Timoran has become one of my favorites to write because of his temperament.  He’s a great source of wisdom and calm, but he is a monster in combat scenes.  Very versatile from the author perspective with a great back story that will slowly be revealed.  Another thing I love about him is that he’s become my go to character for pointing out problems and keeping the others in line.

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Beyond a Trilogy

Book 4 of Ranger's Apprentice

Book 4 of Ranger’s Apprentice

With the looming release of Legends of Windemere: Family of the Tri-Rune, I hit a new area of writing:

BEYOND A TRILOGY!

For those used to long series, this might seem a strange thing to be aware of.  Harry Potter, Game of Thrones, Narnia, and so many series go beyond a trilogy.  So, this isn’t something rare.  Yet, it brings a new dynamic to a series that complicates the entire product.  Here is where you get into a tough spot of losing/gaining readers with every later book.  The readers that make it this far are invested in the characters, world, and story.  I would go so far as to say that this amps up the focus on the author’s abilities because you have to play a short game and long game at the same time.  A stable tale for the individual books with subplots and main plots that span the entire series.  For example, the destiny of Luke and his love life plot spans all of the books while Nyx fixing the fallout of Hero’s Gate is a 4th book only story.  Everything progresses with character development and main plot, but there is a story within the book that gives a sense of temporary closure at the end.

How is a trilogy different than a longer series?  Well, you have three parts, which makes things a bit easier for the ‘Plot Wave’.  The first book of a series is big on character introductions and you know that most of the main cast will be found here.  The world is set and the plot has some closure, but a big feeling of what is to come.  For example, Star Wars: A New Hope did all of this and while it had closure, it also showed that the war was still going.  The second book introduces new faces on both sides, pushes the main plot more with twists, and ends on a cliffhanger that promises the finale.  It’s a bridge book with some leeway in terms of closure.  (Empire Strikes Back)  The final book closes up all plots and subplots like Return of the Jedi.  Just like a stand-alone book, you have Beginning-Middle-End.

Percy Jackson: Battle of the Labyrinth

Percy Jackson: Battle of the Labyrinth

Adding a fourth book changes that dynamic because you have to extend the middle.  The first book can still be about character introductions, but some of the future main heroes might benefit from being saved for later.  The last book still can be all about closure, but you’ll probably have a lot of things to close up by the time you get there.  A challenge here is to make every middle book count.  They need to avoid feeling like filler and have a point, even if that point is simply character development.  This can get very tricky.  For example, I have two books in the series that deviate from the main quest.  They focus on an intrusive character plot that I can’t go into here.  These stories bring several characters to a new level of maturity, but there’s a risk.  Without the main plot taking a center stage, some readers may find the books pointless.  Others might be angry that their favorite characters aren’t the ones being focused on.  An issue in a long series is that favorites are chosen and some readers get annoyed if their preferred hero takes a backseat to others.  As I said earlier, going beyond a trilogy has a ton of risk with it.

Here are a few tips if you plan on going for the long series:

  1. Never doubt your long game.  Remember that readers won’t always know what you’re planning, so they’ll have an immediate reaction to your series.  It doesn’t matter to them that you know a twist is coming because they aren’t mindreaders.  All you can do is hope they trust you and keep chugging along.
  2. Foreshadowing is your friend.  Hard to do if you’re a pantser, but you can add stuff like this during an edit.  Series gain re-readability if there are clues to future events in the earlier books.
  3. Give all main characters subplots of both short term and long term variety.  This gives them depth and they can be carried through more than 1-2 books.  By short term, I mean a goal for a specific book.  By long term, I mean a main goal or obstacle such as a curse, romance, vengeance, etc.
  4. A book series can remain fresh when you introduce new characters.  This can be done in 2 ways. 1) stagger out your main character (both hero & villain) introductions throughout the earlier books.  Not all in the opening volume, but maybe get the majority of them out within the first quarter.  Cameos count.  This allows readers to get a feel for individual characters before others are introduced.  2)  New faces among supporting cast in every book that are specific to the contained story.  These will help enhance the temporary subplot and flush out the world by creating more inhabitants for the reader to connect to.
  5. Never be afraid to check what you’ve written to avoid plot holes.  This includes physical descriptions of characters.
  6. RETAIN YOUR CONFIDENCE THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE ADVENTURE!  (Same as #1, but worth repeating.)

Finally:

LEGENDS OF WINDEMERE: FAMILY OF THE TRI-RUNE goes live on MARCH 16TH!!!

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Family of the Tri-Rune Events!

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Thank you to everyone who helped with the Cover Reveal today.  I’m looking forward to when I can send the Blog Tour volunteers the schedule and HTML.  That one will have the title and author plates on the cover, but the book will be live by then.  Here’s what I have going on to entertain people and help spread the word:

Thursday Post-a-palooza

I have three posts going up tomorrow.  One is informative on going beyond a trilogy, so feel free to jump into the debate.  The others are a Timoran poem and a teaser poem about a character that I’ve kept in the shadows.  Even ‘Bob’ has received more mentions than this character.  Just my way of having fun.

Friday Prologue-a-palooza

The first part of Legends of Windemere: Family of the Tri-Rune will be posted throughout the day.  It’s a conversation between the gods about events past, present, and future with a good amount of foreshadowing.  I’d love to do the scene after, but the main baddie is still a spoiler for many.  Downside to a series is that the further along one writes and publishes, the less one can talk about it in public.  There will be minor spoilers in the posts, so I’m hoping to get a few responses, but know I’m asking for a lot.

Saturday Twubs-a-palooza

From 8-10 PM Eastern Standard Time, I will be in a Twubs Chat Room to take on questions.  This is run through Twitter and should be a lot of fun.  Hoping to get a good turnout this time, so the waiting to push that ‘Publish’ button flies by.  Here are instructions that will be reposted on Saturday:

  1. Go to Twubs Chat.
  2. Log In through Twitter or Sign Up with Twubs Chat.
  3. Search for the #windemerespeaks hashtag.
  4. Join in the conversation.

And there you have the fun for the week.  Looking forward to the Twubs Chat and hoping to see people there.  Enjoy the week and thank you for all your support.  Here’s Timoran Wrath again:

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

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Legends of Windemere: Family of the Tri-Rune Cover Reveal!

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Legends of Windemere: Family of the Tri-Rune is set to debut on Sunday, March 16th!!!

The magical adventure continues after Luke Callindor and his friends recover from their battles in Haven.

Nyx still has nightmares about casting the genocide spell in Hero’s Gate. Every night her heart is gripped by the sensation of hundreds of goblins dying by her magic. By the request of Lord Highrider and Duke Solomon, she is returning to fix the damage she caused. With Luke Callindor and Sari by her side, Nyx is ready to face the vengeful goblins and opportunistic thieves that plague Hero’s Gate. Yet, there is a darker threat that was born from her violated magic: The Krypters.

It is another action-packed, character driven story that will reveal one of our heroes has been lied to for their entire life.

About the Author:

Charles author photo B&WCharles Yallowitz was born and raised on Long Island, NY, but he has spent most of his life wandering his own imagination in a blissful haze.  Occasionally, he would return from this world for the necessities such as food, showers, and Saturday morning cartoons.  One day he returned from his imagination and decided he would share his stories with the world.  After his wife decided that she was tired of hearing the same stories repeatedly, she convinced him that it would make more sense to follow his dream of being a fantasy author.  So, locked within the house under orders to shut up and get to work, Charles brings you Legends of Windemere.  He looks forward to sharing all of his stories with you and his wife is happy he finally has someone else to play with.

Blog: Legends of Windemere
Twitter: @cyallowitz
Facebook: Charles Yallowitz

We’re still taking volunteers for the April blog tour.  So fill out the form HERE!

Read the Previous Volumes of Legends of Windemere!!!

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Cover by Jason Pedersen

Cover by Jason Pedersen

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Cover Reveal and Twubs Chat News!

Cover Art Teaser by Jason Pedersen

Cover Art Teaser by Jason Pedersen

Two Big Announcements!

To Cover Reveal Volunteers:

I just sent the emails with the Cover Art image.  There is no title or author name because Jason has a fresh idea for how to do those and the image is the more important part here.  It is in HTML with instructions, but don’t hesitate to email me with questions.  Please try to post it tomorrow.  I know this is a final hour thing, so it’s okay if you get it up on Thursday.  Thank you so much for all of your help and I hope to see most of you for the Blog Tour in April

To EVERYONE!

Remember the Twubs Chat from last November?  I see the crickets and two participants remember, which is nice.  Well, I’m trying it again this Saturday and this time you get to throw questions over Twitter at CHARLES E YALLOWITZ.  So it isn’t the characters getting grilled, but the creator.  I’ll post instructions on how to join in the fun, but here’s the timing:

Saturday, March 15th from 8 PM – 10 PM (Eastern Time since I’m in New York.)

I hope to see everyone there and answer questions while having a fun, spoiler free time.

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Post-Release Author

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I have a book!
It’s on the site and has a price!
Now I can relax
For a minute at the most
Submit to sites
Spread the word like fire
To strike with a bang
Burst onto those lists
Make it all worthwhile
Ignore the fear
And focus on the pride
Your book exists beyond your mind
Let the real games begin!

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The Debut

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That scary button
Pressed the night before
Publish
Dream is now reality
No turning back from fate
In the morning
Your book will be on stage

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Pre-Release Author

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All the ducks in a row
While the author feels headless
Are all edits in?
Is cover art pristine?
Blog tours and grand reveals
Dancing for help
Like a spastic monkey
Exhaustion comes and goes
All the pieces are in place
Yet the timing must be right
Spread the word
Ripen the excitement
To pick the juicy debut
And breathe

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What Do You Think of Returning to the Past

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A big part of Legends of Windemere: Family of the Tri-Rune deals with handling past mistakes.  One of the main characters made a big mistake in a previous book and now they’re about to face the consequences.  Part of the problem is that people despise the character for those events, so there’s a lot of complication in here.  This is even bigger than Luke facing his past in Allure of the Gypsies.  He earned all of the negativity that he got for running away from home.  This time, the person has already been suffering from that fateful decision.

When writing a series, you can use a lot of long-term foreshadowing and keep a few questions in the air by the end of a book.  This does have the risk of some readers demanding closure when you have it planned for another book.  Anyway, a series always your characters to make mistakes that seem minor in the moment and roll into a major plot point in a later book.  For example, destroying a thieves guild and letting one young member escape.  That character can come back as a new hero or a villain depending on how you work.

Personally, I love when past mistakes are revisited.  This allows locations and characters from the past to be brought back.  There’s some nostalgia that comes with that even if it’s under bad circumstances.  Honestly, I can’t really say anything other than I love foreshadowing and going back to the past in a series.

So, what do you think of books that return to previous locations to clean up past mistakes?

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