Raven’s Hold Part 18 #thriller #fiction

West Park Asylum

West Park Asylum

Ian’s eyes flutter open and he groans at the sight of the boring ceiling overhead. He can see the early afternoon shadows stretching across the walls of his room and hears other patients outside in the garden. A steady breeze is drifting through the window and heading out the open door, the sight of which gives him some relief. There is a dull pain in his arm and it gets worse whenever he tries to move the limb. It takes him a few seconds to notice the intravenous bag that he is connected to. A gentle hand touches his skin and carefully removes the needle, pressing the gauze to stop the minor bleeding.

“What happened to me?” Ian asks, his memories of the morning foggy and jumbled. A band of soreness across his stomach reminds him of the gurney, but he is unable to recall anything more than one hitting him. “I remember Rich having an episode at breakfast. Then I went into the hallway and . . . everything gets fuzzy after that. Maybe I got hit by something.”

“Mr. Garrett struck you in the head with his tray and you stumbled out of the cafeteria before falling into a gurney,” the orderly explains while she tapes the gauze down. Her dark brown hair acts as a curtain, preventing the patient from seeing her face. “It appears your time in the solitary ward and your stress have made you temporarily anemic. Probably something to do with your blood pressure, but I’m not really sure. I haven’t read much on it and I’m still trying to finish my degree. Try having some orange juice and a few cookies. Dr. Rutherford wants you to join the other residents for dinner in a few hours.”

“In that case, I’ll get some fresh-”

The pewter penguin dangling from the orderly’s neck causes Ian to lose his voice. When she turns to check him for signs of an anxiety attack, he gets a clear look at her familiar face. Even though there is no reason for her to be in Raven’s Hold, he has no doubt that he is looking at his sister. The staff uniform has a few indistinct stains and is frayed around the collar, signs that at least her clothing has been around for a while. The woman blushes at his piercing gaze and goes to clean up the medical supplies that are spread out on the floor.

“Why are you here, Carla?” Ian asks when he can talk again.

“I’m afraid you’re mistaken,” she responds while bringing him some water. She checks his pulse and frowns at the rapidly beat. “My name is Gina and we’ve met before. I’ve escorted you to some outdoor activities and watched you in the common room. It’s only been in passing, so I’m not surprised that you don’t remember me.”

“You look exactly like my sister,” the confused patient states before draining his glass. A dull pain starts behind his eyes, forcing him to lie down again. “She even has the same necklace, which I bought her when we were kids. This has to be some kind of trick. Are you in on some prank that’s meant to make me feel better?”

Gina takes a seat near his feet and puts some pills in his hand, tenderly closing his fingers around them. “You’re disoriented from having a difficult week and the blow to the head. If you think about what you’re saying then you will realize that it’s impossible for her to be in Raven’s Hold. All patients are invited and all staff members are handpicked by Dr. Rutherford. The location of this institution is a well-guarded secret. You sister could only get here if she was invited and we never allow family on the premises. There are too many liability risks. So you can see how you’re mistaken.”

“There is no way you look exactly like my sister and not be her.”

“I’m sure there are differences.”

Frustrated with the situation, Ian storms out of the room and slams the door behind him. He takes a final glance through the window at Gina, who is staring at him in disbelief. It is an expression that he remembers seeing countless times throughout his life. As nausea begins to overtake him, Ian wants to put as much distance between himself and his room as he possibly can. He jogs into the garden and takes a deep breath of the fresh air, the flowers filling his nose with a sweet scent. Taking a seat on the nearest bench, he puts his head between his legs and lets a panic attack overtake him.

“I have a new toy,” the ghost cackles, earning no reaction from its shuddering victim. “I guess this round goes to me.”

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Windemere Monsters: Snake Fiend

Nagas from D&D

Nagas from D&D

One of the first monsters that appears in Legends of Windemere are the Snake Fiends, which are based off the Naga.  This is a mythological creature, but I wasn’t 100% certain of that when I wrote the story.  The name kind of stuck.  Sadly, this monster gets very little attention since it shows up so early and doesn’t make another appearance until Book 10.  So they remain a mystery and it’s only recently that I did more with them.

Physically, the Snake Fiends have the hooded head of a human and a serpentine body with poisonous spines.  A long spike is on their tail and they have multiple hearts, so they are a force to be reckoned with if you’re a young adventurer.  More experienced warriors and casters see them more as a nuisance.  A constricting snake can’t do much against platemail and the poisonous parts wouldn’t get very far either.  So a Snake Fiend in the wild is more inclined to avoid travelers or hiss from a distance.  They are only aggressive when they feel safe.

Now the reason the Snake Fiends were used is because that was what appeared in the game and I never thought to change it.  Having them being underground creatures and a common treasure horde protector made sense.  They can burrow through the piles of treasure and sense movement on the ground.  In fact, you’ll learn that their burrowing ability is much more versatile than one would expect.  A Snake Fiend in a field or any terrain with deep soil can hold its own against stronger creatures by moving beneath the surface.  Using their vibration sense, they can use their tail spikes to stab from below.  Their eyesight is better in caves because direct sunlight is too strong, but the hood helps if they face the right direction.  There really wasn’t much depth to their design and habits.  Sometimes a monster is closer to a simple animal than a complicated threat.

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Raven’s Hold Part 17 #thriller #fiction

West Park Asylum

West Park Asylum

Rich flips the table to give himself some time to make a run for the door, but he is too panicked to watch where he is going. Banging into tables and stumbling over chairs, the gasping man barely makes it to the middle of the cafeteria before four orderlies surround him. He swings his battered camera at them, clipping the nearest one in the head and forcing her to back away. A brief moment of clarity comes over Rich when he sees the bleeding wound and he tries to stutter out an apology. The other three staff members tackle him while waving for a gurney to be brought over. Even with their combined weight, the adrenaline-fueled patient is able to break free and continue his retreat. He only gets a few more steps before Dawn whacks him in the head with a frying pan.

“What happened here?” Dr. Rutherford asks as she approaches with her clipboard. With a sigh, she takes the blunt object from Dawn and places it on a chair. “Thank you for the help, Ms. Addison. Now this is the second outburst from Mr. Garrett this week. Do we know what caused it this time?”

“He said his orange juice was turned to bile and death threats were appearing in his oatmeal,” the injured orderly reports while pressing a towel to her head. Leaning forward, she lets her boss take a look at the wound, which she is sure will require stitches. “According to his rants, the ghosts were angry at him for going into the forest last week. They have sworn to kill him and he wants to escape. Should we put him into the solitary wing until you’re sure he won’t be a danger to the others?”

“I’m afraid this is more severe,” Dr. Rutherford says as she flips through her notes. Putting a hand on Rich’s face, she lifts his eyelid to check for signs of a concussion. “Have Mrs. Warding meet me at the elevator with her equipment. We will have to do a full check of his body and mind, which can’t be done in the solitary ward. Mr. Garrett will have to be placed in the basement until he is better. It’s a shame because he was so close to throwing off his delusions and returning to his old life.”

“Can I come along?” Dawn asks while bouncing on her toes. “I want to see the basement again. It’s been too long and I think I left something there. Be a pal, Grace, and give me what I want.”

Dr. Rutherford sighs and waves for her staff to cart Rich away. “Maybe another time, Ms. Addison. This is too delicate a situation for you to be involved. I know this is upsetting, but I assure you that it’s for the best. You don’t want to get into any real trouble and be forced to go away, do you?”

Dawn’s face turns pale and her mouth opens slightly, a chortled squeak slipping out as she imagines leaving Raven’s Hold. Tears slipping down her cheeks, she backs away from the doctor and charges out of the cafeteria. The young woman shoves the gurney out of her path before ducking into a broom closet. Crashing and wailing can be heard inside as bleach seeps out from under the door.

“Ignore her and keep going,” the doctor tells her staff, snapping her fingers to highlight her impatience. “We don’t want Mr. Garrett to wake up in the elevator. He may get the wrong idea and panic again.”

Dr. Rutherford is so focused on her notes and the patient that she fails to notice Ian lurking around the corner. Ever since his release from the solitary ward, he has been trying to remain unseen by the staff and most of the patients. He quietly watches as his only friend on the island is carted away to the basement. The creaking of a door draws his attention to the opposite direction and he holds his breath when Dawn steps out of the broom closet. She is drenched in various cleaners and has an air freshener hanging from her neck. Something about the young woman puts Ian on edge and makes him crouch in an attempt to appear smaller. It is not until she dances away that he relaxes and returns his attention to his friend’s outburst.

Remembering Rich’s warnings about the mysterious lower level, Ian makes up his mind to follow them. Stretching his legs and taking several calming breaths, he slips into the hallway and creeps along the wall. With Dr. Rutherford and the orderlies already out of sight, he is able to move quickly, but he forces himself to walk at a casual pace. He knows there could be other patients peeking through windows or hiding behind doors. The last thing Ian wants is to get caught and be put back in the solitary ward.

“It isn’t like I’m causing trouble,” he whispers before ducking into an open door. He silently waits for the approaching guard to walk by and peeks around the corner to make sure the hallway is clear. “What kind of friend would I be if I didn’t try to check up on him? If Dr. Rutherford finds me then I’ll just say I’m concerned and hoping he’ll be okay. There’s no reason for her to be upset about that. Though I am talking to myself and acting like I’m doing something wrong. I should just remain calm and act like everything is fine.”

Ian stops when he hears wheels squeak to a stop nearby and he stands with his back to the wall. Using the glass windows in front of him, he watches Rich get carted onto the padded elevator. His friend is starting to stir and raise his hand, which one of the orderlies holds onto while whispering words of comfort. The clicking of the camera gets more rapid until the bald man is mildly sedated. Helping to move the gurney to the side, Dr. Rutherford squeezes into the corner of the elevator and presses the open door button to let an older woman to join them. The last thing Ian sees is the newcomer taking out a stethoscope to check Rich’s chest and the man weakly try to take her picture.

“I wonder why I’ve never been down here before,” the young man says while stepping into the open. He takes a few steps toward the elevator and grabs the wall as a wave of vertigo overtakes him. “Guess the stress is getting to me. Maybe Rich clipped me in the head with his tray when he flipped out. I was sitting right in front of him.”

A snake-like voice seeps from the walls to growl, “Or maybe you are where you don’t belong.”

“You again,” Ian groans as he slides to the floor. He massages his temples in a desperate hope to hold off a looming migraine. “You sound angry this time. Guess the resident ghost is territorial. I thought you wanted me to play your game. Well this definitely feels like a challenge since my only friend is in trouble.”

“I’m not in the mood to play. Go away.”

“Since you’re so adamant about that, I think I’ll check the elevator.”

“I’m warning you.”

“And what are you going to do?”

There is an eerie pause before the voice returns, sounding more bitter than enraged. “You are lucky that you are who you are. There is still fun to be had at your expense. I will forget that you’re overstepping your bounds and that your family has become an annoyance. Perhaps you need a lesson, little puppy.”

“My family?” Ian asks as the hallway begins to twist. “What do you mean by my family?”

Fire drips out of the ceiling lights and oozes along the rising floor while doors shatter from the pressure. Tiles crack and send splinters flying into the opposite walls, the holes bleeding like fresh bullet wounds. Ian closes his eyes in the hope of the hallucinations going away, but he still feels the world tilt around him. As if the building is being turned on its side, the ground becomes increasingly steep and impossible for the young man to maintain his balance. He clings to a door frame and looks down to see the elevator open like a hungry maw. There is nothing inside the lift and it patiently waits for Ian to lose his grip.

“I promise to behave if you stop this right now,” he begs while Raven’s Hold trembles. “Just leave my family alone.”

“Too late.”

The hallway violently spins and stops with a jolt that breaks Ian’s hold on the door. He tumbles down the hallway, his clothes slashed by jagged barbs that blend into the tiles. The hungry elevator gurgles as its potential meal builds speed and leaves a trail of blood along the floor. Curled into a ball and shivering in fear, Ian prepares to fall into the looming abyss. Instead, he slams into the elevator doors with enough force to daze him. Sprawled in the hallway, he gazes at his pristine surroundings and curses at the ghost’s faint laughter.

“That wasn’t funny,” Ian mutters while checking his clothes and skin for damage.

“I’m easily amused,” the voice states with another chuckle. “Though I don’t want you to see your present too early. Time to sleep again.”

The elevator opens to release the empty gurney that slams into Ian and shoves him down the hallway. He is rammed into the solid wall, which leaves him gasping for air. With the creak of metal and the popping of screws, the cart stands on its back wheels and flexes its front legs as if they are arms. It dances around like a boxer and throws a few feints, the roar of a crowd appearing out of a nearby intercom. More amused than scared, Ian can only make a nervous cough before he is punched in the face and knocked out.

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Sunday Lunch Invitation – Authors Helen Jones and Charles Yallowitz.

Swing by and grab a plate for a fun lunch.

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Raven’s Hold Part 16 #thriller #fiction

West Park Asylum

West Park Asylum

From the dock of Raven’s Hold, Grace watches the tiny ship capsize and its riders get sucked beneath the gentle waves. A faint shimmer around the edge of the island tells her that something is going on beyond her senses. Sipping at a margarita, she fixes her glasses and lets this brief moment of calm wash over her. When the mysterious haze around her surroundings has evaporated, Grace places her drink on the ground and watches the sun quickly get back into its proper position.

A bobbing object catches her attention as it nears the island at a suspicious rate. Carried on a strong current, the waterlogged purse is tossed on the gentle waves until it hooks the top of the dock’s ladder. Grace tries to finish her drink, but the margarita turns salty and putrid in her mouth. Hurling the melting glass into the ocean, the blonde grabs the bag to search for anything that can identify the owner. Finding the leather wallet, she takes out the driver’s license and frowns at the familiar name. With a mild curse, the doctor rummages for her phone and casually dials the number for the front office.

“Send a staffer to the shore with a wheelchair,” Grace says while she watches the tide bring in pieces of the boat. A severed arm with teeth marks catches her attention, but she ignores it when she sees it is part of a male. “We’re going to have an unexpected guest. At least we didn’t know about her. I can only guess at how long he’s been waiting for this little toy. This does explain a few things that have happened recently. Look for a woman to wash up onshore and bring her to the basement. Her rebirth must be a top priority, so tell him not to play with his food for too long. I’ll visit after my rounds and another margarita. Things are going to get messy around here.”

 

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Neil Gaiman: Why our future depends on libraries, reading and daydreaming

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How the &$^% did I get anything done this week?

I’ve probably been grumpier and snappier than usual.  Disease has run through the house and I wasn’t lucky enough to catch it.  That means I don’t have an excuse for taking naps, which I really needed.  My head is spinning from struggling.  Waking up a little before 6 AM to the sound of someone strangling a goose under water and not being able to fall back to bed is rough.  So I kept jumping right into Twitter, email, and blogging.  Doesn’t help that I pushed myself close to midnight a few times and spend most of the day keeping an ear out for trouble.  Just too many people in this house at times and I rarely leave the bedroom, which might be another issue.  This opening is really just spewing random stuff from my brain.  Let’s just say that I’m going to be limping to the finish line, which I’ve yet to locate.

Book News

I have Crossing Bedlam and Legends of Windemere: The Mercenary Prince on deck for publishing.  Both are in the editing and cover art stage.  I was thinking of the December being the release of whichever is first, but I really do need to end on the Windemere book.  Best to keep that series on schedule.  So Crossing Bedlam might be a February release.  Why that month?  Two reasons:

  • January is pretty bad for book sales and would be too close to Windemere.
  • DEADPOOL!  That movie comes out and Deadpool is an influence for Lloyd, so I thought it makes sense.  Probably won’t attempt to use the movie for promotion because I’m not that crazy.  This is more of a personal choice.

I did start writing Book 12 of Legends of Windemere and got through the first 3 chapters.  Might get a fourth done this weekend, but I’m having trouble getting my head together.  I have to say that it’s weird writing so far in the series.  Characters don’t have to be explained in as much detail and there’s less to set up than to finish.  With this being the end of the temple purifying and various personal storylines finished, I’m closing a few more doors and gearing up for the final 3.  Sounds like a lot for a finale, but 13 deals with a major problem that appears at the end of Book 12 and then 14 and 15 kind of run alongside each other.  Little teaser: Book 14 barely has the champions in it.  Wonder who could possibly be in Path of the Traitors.  😀

Raven’s Hold appears to be doing well here.  A lot of people like Dawn Addison, which makes me wonder if I should find a way to put her in another story.  It’s a challenge because she might not fit in Windemere since the paranormal stuff would seem less strange there.  In Bedlam, there wouldn’t be any ghostly events happening since it isn’t a magical story.  This will take some much needed thought and I already think I have an idea of what to do with her.  Won’t be easy.

Life

It goes.

Biking

It doesn’t go.

Anything Else?

The kid went through his first tooth pulling.  Wasn’t that bad since there was nothing, but an abscess behind the thing.  Must have hit it at some point and the dentist got it out before an infection could set in.  All went smoothly . . . except for the X-ray.  You see, humans have 24 baby teeth.  My son has 25 and the extra has decided that the gums are for suckers.  It’s heading up.  Not to the back of his mouth, but up.  Not as bad as it seems right now.  Once the nearby adult teeth are in place, we’ll take him for some oral surgery like I had when I was a teen.  They only have to remove his tooth.  For me, they had to attach a chain to the last of my adult teeth to prevent it from pushing out my two front teeth.  Imagine going in for a weekly chain tightening and there always being a sensation that there’s something metal sticking out of your gums.  Little guy has it easy.

Next week should be more of the same around here.  Hoping to get 4-5 chapters written and finish Book 12 by the middle of November.  Definitely won’t happen before the end of the month because this is a biggie.  That and I keep running out of steam.  Let’s get to that list.

  1. Get enough sleep to not die or go insane.
  2. Eat and drink enough to not die.
  3. Shower to wake up and not smell.
  4. Write 4-5 chapters of Book 12.
  5. Apologize to editor while she reads Crossing Bedlam and picks out my embarrassing typos.  😛
  6. Possibly start an Amazon campaign for Legends of Windemere: The Merchant of Nevra Coil.  Been rather lazy on that.
  7. Handle the homestead.
  8. Make a voodoo doll of 2015 and have it repeatedly stab itself in the groin with a screwdriver.  Too violent?
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The Latest Reason To Be Ashamed Of Myself

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“Thursday the Twelfth” is a 15k word parody about a down-on-his-luck killer in a horror book. Filled with absolute silliness, it is not recommended that you read this book if you are concerned with your sanity. For everyone else who is okay with being crazy, please proceed.

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What happens if the star of the horror book, the masked murderer, is arrested before he has the chance to kill anyone? A failing college student steps in to take his place. Can it really be that simple? Does the masked killer just walk up to someone and kill them?

Not quite.

Along with following all of the horror monster rules he learned at Psychotic Killer Camp, like:

The killer always gets up again
He always takes the stairs
He must never lose his weapon
He must enter through the most impossible entrance

He…

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Saturday Morning Coffee with Viv Drewa, Lord David Prosser and Edwina of Edwina’s Episodes

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Raven’s Hold Part 15 #thriller #fiction

West Park Asylum

West Park Asylum

Within the sudden storm, the tiny vessel is tossed and spun by the waves. Carla holds on tight while her muttering companion does his best to prevent the boat from flipping over. Kyle has given up trying to use the oars and shifts his wait while physically moving the screaming woman. He regrets accepting the offer to take Carla to Raven’s Hold even though he really needs the money she offered. For his entire life, the black-haired man has been told to never go to the founder’s property and he forgets the warnings at the sight of a large number next to a dollar sign. Peering over his shoulder, he can see that the island remains in the distance as nothing more than an indistinct blob against the darkness.

“This storm came out of nowhere!” Kyle shouts over the wind. An eddy spins the tiny vessel, leaving him disoriented and unsure of their original direction. “I don’t know if we’re heading the right way. Too choppy and rough to use the oars. How strong a swimmer are you, Mrs. Nash?”

“But which way do we go?” she asks, barely able to understand what he is saying. Kyle makes an exaggerated paddling motion with his arms, which turns into a flail as he almost falls out of the boat. “I know enough to not drown in a pool, but this is too much. There are lifeguards who couldn’t survive out here. Just keep trying to get to land! It doesn’t look too far away! I can even see lights!”

“Those are probably the stars, lady,” the terrified man mutters under his breath. A blast of lightning rips through the sky and briefly shows they are heading for Raven’s Hold. “Not to sound unchivalrous, but I can’t save you and myself. If we go into the water then you’re going to be on your own. All I can recommend is to not panic and try your best to remember which way is up.”

Carla squints at Kyle as if that will make his words clearer, but the wind and rain are too loud for her to understand anything. She assumes he is telling her that they are almost there or he will do what he can to keep her safe. A bitter chill strikes the back of her neck while deafening thunder makes her ears ring. Carla rubs her eyes when she sees howling faces rise from the frothy water and pop when their mouths open too far. With every flash of lightning, schools of fish leap out of the waves and bash themselves against the small boat. Another eddy spins the pair and does not release them until Kyle tumbles into the ocean. He breaks the surface for a moment only to be washed away by a powerful wave.

“I’ll come and get you!” Carla shouts as she grabs an oar and tries to steer the boat. She attempts to imitate what she has seen Kyle do, but she has very little control over where she is heading. “I can’t get anywhere! I’m sorry!”

The storm eases enough for her to locate the man, who is struggling to swim for the distant shore. Carla is relieved to see that he is alive and puts her hands to her mouth in order to call for his help. She freezes when a rumble of thunder comes from behind her and continues for over a minute. Not wanting to look over her shoulder, the terrified woman beats the water with the oar and prays that she can get to the island. Her movements are too chaotic to be of any use, so she is trapped within the current. Far ahead, Carla can see Kyle pointing and waving at whatever is approaching.

“I’m going to regret this,” she whispers before turning around.

Blocking her view is an immense tidal wave that she swears is crested with a row of sharp, foamy teeth. Lightning flashes above to pierce the incoming wall, but the holes are swiftly filled by the churning water. Numb and confused, Carla drops the useless oar overboard and sits in silence. She can hear Kyle yelling, but her mind is unable to understand his words. With a blank expression of utter defeat on her face, she turns to the man and wonders if either of them will survive. All she can think of doing is a feeble wave before the tidal wave crashes over them with the sound of slamming jaws.

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