Questions 3: Your Ghost in a Shell

I’ve spent the last two weeks listening to an anime soundtrack station on Pandora.  So I get a lot of Cowboy Bebop, FMA, and Ghost in the Shell.  The third one on that list keeps making me stop to listen because I don’t always remember how good the soundtrack was there.  This got me thinking about a few questions in regards to the Ghost in the Shell concept.  Not that one.  These:

  1. If you could put your mind into a cyborg body, would you do it and why?
  2. Do you think it’s possible for there to be a ‘ghost’ in a machine?
  3. How do you think people would react if cyborgs came into existence?

And staying on topic:

If you like the idea of cyborgs/robots and how they fit into the human world then click on the cover below.

Cover art by Sean Harrington

Cover art by Sean Harrington

The story stars Lisa Burton who can be found hosting a character interviewing radio show at Entertaining Stories.  Click on her her picture below to visit and say hi.  If you’re an author then look into being a guest on her show.

Lisa Burton

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Freebie

jorobinson176's avatarJo Robinson

I’ve finally added Nkoninkoni to KDP Select. I wanted to be sure of everything being legal, ninny that I am, after my rights reverted at the end of the contract with the rhino anthology publishers who asked me to contribute. Each invited author was given a selection of animals to choose from to use in their story, and I was chuffed to get the Wildebeest.

I like to play when I write short. It’s a fabulous way to explore new ways to write, or to use themes that you wouldn’t normally want to use in a novel length story. I had a lot of fun with this one, and now that it’s on Select I’ve made it free now and for the next three days, so if you’d like a copy, just click on the cover image and it will zoom you over to Amazon to download.

Nkoninkoni Cover

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Empress, on Lisa Burton Radio

coldhandboyack's avatarEntertaining Stories

Welcome to another edition of Lisa Burton Radio. I’m your host, Lisa the robot girl, and things are about to get freaky around here. Our sponsor today is the comic book, Empress written by Brian Barr.

My guest today is a private detective named Niles. “Welcome to the show Niles.”

“Thank you, Lisa. It’s a pleasure to speak to you from my office, not too far from Hollywood.”

“My bio says you were hired by a motion picture company to find a missing silent movie actress. What can you tell me about the circumstances leading up to her disappearance?”

“Well, I’ll try to speak about this without divulging too much confidential info, out of respect to the movie company that’s hired me. Apparently, there were a couple of issues with Zia and her company, in relations to the changes in the movie business. As we’ve noticed in the past few…

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VOTE NOW! Annual Bloggers Bash Awards NOW OPEN

Sacha Black's avatarSacha Black

VOTE NOWThis is it. The waiting is finally over.

The Bloggers Bash Awards are now open for voting.

We had a HUGE number of nominations, over 350, so thank you to everyone who took the time to nominate.

Voting Closes June 9th at 12pm. The winners will be announced on June 11th at the Bash. If you can’t make it then a winners post will go live at 5:15pm on June 11th.

Choose carefully, you can only vote ONCE per category. There are 10 awards, (so it’s a long post) make sure you vote in them all.

Good luck to all the nominees.

Disclaimer: The committee has done their best to coordinate the nominations and to ensure, where possible, we gave nominees a choice of which category they wanted to be in. Due to time constraints and limited resources this may not have always been possible.

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Quest in a Crate: Crowbars Included

LOTR and Monty Python

LOTR and Monty Python

Come in out of the cold and lets talk business.  Yes, I know it’s supposed to be warm, but the weather is acting up.  If it puts you at ease, several of my previous customers are trying to fix that.  Not sure how the one with five types of magical axes plans on doing anything useful, but I’m not the judging type.  As long as the check clears or the gold coins are real, I don’t care what you do.  So, what kind of quest are you looking for?

Been a long time since I sold a classic dungeon crawl.  They aren’t very popular as far as quests go since they’re straightforward.  Keep in mind that the monsters, traps, and loot are done through my sister’s company.  You get a discount though.  All we do here is come up with the reason for your quest and other details.  People think it’s easy to forge these things, but it’s a lot of slow and steady work.  Let’s get started with the reason for going into the dungeon.

Missing family member is a good choice and we have a sale on siblings.  Give yourself a brother or sister who disappeared into the dungeon.  Maybe they were the favored child and you were always in their shadow.  Rescuing them is a way to prove yourself and create your own identity.  True, it could also be a way to show them up and make your parents consider that you’re the favored child.  I get the sense that you have some issues going into this project.  If you have the money, I can give you multiple siblings and you can write down a bigger history.  Look, you don’t ask how I’ll make this a reality and I won’t ask why you’re licking your lips.

You might think we’re done now, but we need to pick the amount of stages and the scope of the quest.  It sounds like you want this to be on a personal level instead of the global scale that most adventurers want.  That means we can make things smaller in terms of ups and downs.  If this was a quest that would change the world then you would need it more like an adult roller coaster than one for youngsters.  You know, maybe a loop and some leaning turns, but nothing that will make you vomit.  Given that you’re using a dungeon, this can be done more through monsters and traps.  We can discuss the amount of levels to make those purchases easier.

You want nine levels and they have to be circular . . . Okay.  I think we know where we’re going here.  I’m just going to put you down for a Dante Special.  That should cover most of what you want and we’ll alter what’s needed.  No, I’m not disappointed in you making my job easier.  Just wanted a challenge since people always take the easy way out when making a quest.  Save the princess, face Hell, save the world, blah blah blah.  Yes, that line in the contract does say you’ll give me whiskey.  Don’t question my methods, kid.

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Cover Art Teaser for ‘Tribe of the Snow Tiger’

The title really says it all.  Hoping to get the book out around June 1st.  It’s on a Wednesday, which might be a tough debut day.  Feel free to volunteer for the ‘Book is Live’ post.  Also give an opinion on the best day of the week to put out a new book because I’m scratching my head while leaning toward a Friday.

Anyway, here’s the teaser, which is more of a progress report:

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Tuesday Teaser: Fun in Bedlam (Crossing Bedlam Available for #99cents)

Not too long ago, I wrote and published a story called Crossing Bedlam.  Well, here is an excerpt from that and a reminder that you can grab the whole story for 99 cents.  Just click on the cover below.

Crossing Bedlam by Jon Hunsinger

Crossing Bedlam by Jon Hunsinger

“We don’t mean you any harm! Seriously, we come in peace!” Lloyd announces over the megaphone from the zoo parking lot. Standing on top of a truck cab, he continues shouting while waving his paintball gun in the air. “Again, I have been asked to put your minds at ease. Please come to the front of the zoo, preferably on a rooftop, and listen to what I have to say. Best that you leave the guns behind because they can be a distraction. So, where was I? That’s right. We come in peace and don’t mean you any harm! Scouts honor. Though not the kind you’re thinking of. More of the kind that transforms with twirling and comes from space. They didn’t have many cartoon choices in Rikers.”

With dawn having only recently broken, most of the Guardians are groggy and confused thanks to the rude awakening. Those who were on the night watch are more aware of the situation, but remain quiet and quietly go back to their tents. As far as they are concerned, Lloyd is a harmless man with a megaphone that wants nothing more than attention. Nobody knows where Amur is hiding or if he knows about the disruption, his tigers having been roaring since the obnoxious noise began. Due to Lloyd firing paintballs around their feet, the animals that spent the night in the parking lot have run back into the zoo. The only living thing that he has managed to hit is one of the guards, the woman succumbing to the itching powder and ipecac combination within minutes.

The Guardians are beginning to lose interest in Lloyd when the roaring of an engine erupts from the eastern side of the zoo. Monkeys screech from their island while the remaining rhino charges toward the zebras and giraffes. Birds fill the sky as the reinforced fence is taken down by a heavily armored van. A pack of motorcycles and sports cars follow the larger vehicle through the wreckage, all of them honking horns to scare animals out of their path. Bullets ping off metal as the Guardians scramble to defend their territory, but they only manage to take down one of the bikers down before the invaders split into smaller groups. None of the defenders are sure what to do without their leader and they are not entirely dedicated to killing the Metal Minstrels. As the vehicles move further into the zoo, the gunshots become fewer and only one other gang member is struck through her car’s windshield. It is only a shoulder wound, which one of her passengers tends to with a bandana while the others continue firing into the air.

Moving without an escort, the van careens toward the entrance pavilion with the intention of bringing Lloyd into the fight. Tyler clambers onto the roof of the vehicle, knocking on the driver’s side window to let Rose know he is in position. The gang leader leaps onto the pavilion and rolls to avoid slipping into the falling rubble created by the van smashing through the structure. Four of the guards remain at their posts and are slow to react, only one of them fully clothed and ready for a fight. Tyler shoulder rushes the slowest of the Guardians and knocks the woman off the roof before she can react to his presence. The agile man whirls around to slam the butt of his shotgun into the face of another enemy, who crumples into a groaning heap. Cocking the weapon, Tyler hopes the noise scares off the other two enemies, but one of them raises their rifle. The boom of the pink shotgun echoes across the zoo and the blast has enough force to send the dead man toppling into the wreckage. The final Guardian drops his weapon and attempts to retreat, but the van returns to collapse the pavilion section his is standing on. Tyler leaps back onto the vehicle while the entire building crashes to the ground, those inside or on top trapped in the ruins.

“That was awesome!” Lloyd shouts while he hangs out of the sliding door.

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My Permafree Experience: a Guest Post by M T McGuire

If you read the cool comments under my posts, you may remember a dialogue I had with author M T McGuire, where I offered her a guest post spot if she’d share her experience making her book, F…

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Heroes Divided: The Headaches of Diverging Plot Lines

Scooby and Shaggy

Scooby and Shaggy

In Tribe of the Snow Tiger, the champions are divided into two groups.  One goes with Timoran to his homeland and a smaller one goes to the southern jungle.  Anyone who finished reading The Mercenary Prince knows the situation.  Needless to say, it’s a bit of a mess and headache . . . for the author.

I’ve had to do balancing acts between characters before, but this one was a bit different.  The smaller adventure will lead into events for Book 11 instead of closing up with the main story.  Not the nicest thing to do to readers, but it was the only way to get both stories told without squishing and rushing.  There was always a question about if I should hamper one tale to salvage the other or injure both.  A ridiculous question that I thankfully answered with none of the above. I had to develop a few tricks that might come in handy for other authors that find themselves in a similar situation.

  1. Choose one of the stories to be the focal point.  This one will take the lion’s share of the book while the other is used for a ‘break’.  It helps to make this decision before writing or you risk blurring the two stories.  Yes, that is very much a plotter/planner concept, but it’s really just a ‘this is the real tale’.  Keep in mind that this is only when the two stories won’t intersect until the very, very end.
  2. The smaller story can be used to create tension in the main story and portray time passing.  For example, you have a chapter of the big story end with a badly wounded hero trying to limp to a healer.  Then you have a chapter of the smaller tale show what the other heroes are doing.  It allows you to return to the injured character after they’ve mostly recovered or woken up from the injury.  You also leave the smaller story with tension, so it’s a lot like a ping pong game.
  3. While the bigger story has plenty of time to move along, the smaller one will probably need to be condensed.  If you switch tales every chapter then you run the risk of hampering the flow of both.  By having the smaller one come up every couple of chapters, you maintain the flow of both.  One thing that helps is to have the smaller story chapters have a beginning, middle, pseudo-end each time.  They have an obstacle and get over it to the next one at a realistic, but faster rate than those in the main story who have more time.
  4. Have the heroes mention each other even if they aren’t together.  With some stories, you can have them talk, but you don’t need to make it this obvious.  Simply revealing that they are concerned about each other can go a long way.  It retains the idea that things will come together again and the heroes aren’t separated forever.
  5. Keep in mind that the smaller tale can end on a cliffhanger because it will lead to something bigger.  While the main story is the one that you’re pushing to full closure, the smaller one doesn’t need to go that far.  Part of it is to lead into another big adventure for the heroes.

Now, I know this is a dangerous thing to do because there is a current hatred toward cliffhangers.  Seems a lot of people don’t want to be left in suspense when it comes to stories.  At least a vocal minority.  That’s the risk an author has to take in a series when facing a situation like this.  The alternative is to cripple one tale and clog the other or simply leave out the smaller story entirely.  Personally, I’d find that second option to be awkward when you reach the events the smaller one was aiming for.  You have to explain everything that happened off-camera, which can result in info dumps.  In the end, a risk will be taken no matter what.  Guess all I can really do is brace myself and hope the adventures are gripping.

I did really enjoy creating the Judges.

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