Fictional Friendships: As Hard to Forge as Real Ones

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Minion!

I was trying to find a way to bring up this subject in a fun way. Your definition and requirements for friendship might be very different from mine.  Even in fiction, you might see somebody as a bad friend to the protagonist while I see them as a good friend.  A very fluid topic that plays a major role in The Spirit Well.  So, I’m going to pose a question, answer the question, and see what people say in the comments.

  1. How important to you is friendship in fiction?
    As a writer of ensemble stories, this is a core focus because your heroes need to be friends to some extent.  Yes, you can have tension and squabbling, which puts a few more in the category of coworkers.  A Wolverine/Cyclops type of relationship where they butt heads in private matters while backing each other up on the battlefield.  It is easier to work characters as close friends that border on a family like I do with the champions.  It removes that subplot of issues that can get overused at times and make it seem like friendship only exists in fiction to be broken.  Even in what I read, I find myself enjoying characters that get along more than fight.  This could also stem from me getting sick of the drama of reality.
  2. Should friendships move quickly or slowly when writing?
    YES!  Honestly, this depends a lot on the characters themselves as well as their situation.  There might not be the luxury of taking their time with friendship like when Delvin is thrown into the champion prophecy.  Luke and Nyx started out with friction and developed a partnership through shared misadventures.  Meanwhile, Timoran was an outsider for most of his debut book until it’s revealed that he’s one of them.  Then, he fit in rather quickly.  When working with groups, it helps to have a character that brings everyone together and smooths the edges.  On the other end of the spectrum, you can let it go slowly since forced relationships are very easy to pick out.
  3. Can villains have friendships?
    Of course they can, but it really depends on the type of villain.  Most antagonists are arrogant, paranoid to some extent, emotionally withdrawn, and see other people as tools instead of friends.  This makes a friendship difficult to create unless you soften the villain.  For example, Sesshomaru (demon) in Inuyasha becomes more of an anti-hero when he is traveling with Rin (little girl).  A way to avoid this is to have the friendship be pre-existing even if one of the characters hasn’t appeared yet.  Maybe the antagonist calls on this person to help after several failures.  Both of them are evil, but there’s a bond that is stronger than their own flaws.  This is a key to nearly every friendship.  The connection has to be able to withstand the flaws of those involved or it will collapse rather easily.
  4. What do you look for in a fictional friendship?
    Personally, I like seeing characters that back each other up regardless of them having a personal issue.  The broken friendship twist is how you make new rivalries and villains, which can be undone down the road depending on what happened.  Accidents and misunderstandings occur in real life, so I don’t see why they shouldn’t happen in fiction too.  There is a natural feeling to seeing people shift and change while remaining beside each other.  At least if they’re working toward a mutual goal or facing a common enemy that neither can defeat alone.  I guess it does happen where two people will self-destruct and both go down because they can’t go it alone.  Yet, I see that happen a lot in fiction and would rather see friends that work through the hard patches instead of getting consumed by them.
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The Story Behind Naked Alliances with Guest Author S. K. Nicholls

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I am very pleased to welcome an old friend to Fiction Favorites. She has a new detective novel and I invited her to come and tell you about it. So Susan Nicholls the post is yours.

Thanks, John.

The people at the Parliament House, a gay resort complex in Orlando, Florida, highly influenced the writing in Naked Alliances. The complex has seven bars with different themes, a full service restaurant, hotel suites, a pool, and the Footlight Theater. My husband and I attend the comedy shows and performances at the theater. My characters, both the private investigator and his sidekick, an exotic dancer, were developed based on personalities we had met at the complex. The community service by the Parliament House after the Pulse Shooting was highly commendable.

I had been writing deep, philosophical, dark novels with bittersweet endings and was falling into a funk. My husband, who…

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Guest Post with C.S. Boyack: Lisa Burton and Dariana in ‘Shopping Day’

(Today we have C.S. Boyack and Lisa Burton the Robot Girl from Wild Concept, which is available on Amazon.  Also, don’t forget to check out Legends of Windemere: the Spirit Well to get more of Dariana.)

Roaming the stalls of Gaia’s bustling marketplace, the two women still manage to garner attention from the locals. Dariana’s silver hair and side-tied shirt make it impossible to hide from her reputation. The telepath ignores the stares and whispers, her powers working hard to filter out the thoughts and words of the locals. She repeatedly glances at the elegant redhead that is walking next to her, the woman seeming at home among the shops. Even among the elves and calicos, Lisa Burton the robot girl stands out due to her otherworldly beauty. Many of the citizens can sense that she is not what she seems, but they do their best not to stare and come off as rude. It is very difficult considering the intricate tattoo on her right leg.

“I’m sorry, Lisa, but it is strange interacting with you. Instead of thoughts, I hear echoes when my powers reach out. It’s a habit I need to stop since I don’t have to worry about everyone attacking me anymore. I’ll stop now. Still, how does your mind work? It’s oddly refreshing to have to ask questions instead of getting answers in secret.”

“I don’t know if you’ll understand the terminology, but I’m basically a walking-talking computer. Logic software helps me make decisions. My emotional software is new and unique, and can be adjusted to help me fit in. At this point in life, it almost never gets adjusted.

“So tell me about yourself, Dariana. It must be hard receiving so much information from everyone. Do you ever want to just shut it off for a day? I mean it’s kind of nice being here away from the constant stream of data the internet brings me. Oh, look at these pretty silks.”

“The urge to simply turn my mind off or cast myself into the astral void is rather tempting. I would probably be lost outside of my body for two decades if I really put my mind to it.  The . . . background noise is the worst, but I have a ring to help. You have to look carefully because it’s glass and blends into my skin. With this on, I can get through the daily thoughts and ward off the stronger emotions, especially those of my friends.

“By the way, these are overpriced unless the merchant, who is hiding behind that rack of pants, is willing to negotiate after I called him out. Sorry, I’m not really sure how haggling goes. Sari says I don’t have to worry because I cheat, but I’m still curious. How do people in your world take to you? Closest thing we have here are golems, which are magical servants. It’s obvious that you’re something much more.”

Deciding to go elsewhere, the women wander along the stalls. Having very little downtime since her awakening, Dariana investigates anything that catches her eye. She examines a pair of shoes with stiletto heels, unsure of how any mortal can wear them without breaking an ankle. Stopping at an enchantment shop, Lisa tries to analyze the ingredients of the various potions. Heading to the back of the open air store, they take their time with a wall of silver charms and jewelry.

“I’m not actually a servant. I was created as an experiment; what they called a concept model. They wanted to see if they could create something with actual humanity, but it worked a little too well. I saw the value in myself and started making my own rules. There isn’t any magic involved. It must be hard being a champion. I mean lots of people here have magical skills, psychic powers, and stuff, but they expect something from a champion. That must never go away.” She selects an elaborate silver hand mirror.

“There aren’t as many true telepaths in the world as one would think. Many are casters with a mind magic specialty instead of natural gifts. They don’t stand a chance against me, which is something I’ve had to prove far too often. It’s funny that I never really thought about the expectations of a champion. The others have that because they’ve lived a life in this world. I spent most of my time in slumber until it was my time to wake up, fail, and get put back under. This is the longest I’ve been awakened since my teenage years. Nobody really pays attention to me because of that since I have no reputation like the others. I will do my job, see the world, and fade into the shadows when my role is done. Guess I’m like you in a way. An experiment, but I’m one that doesn’t really have any options.

“Sorry, I didn’t mean to get sad. Try the ruby earrings that have a small fire enchanted. It’s harmless and only for show. Though it will keep your ears warm during cold nights.”

Viking Lisa

Viking Lisa

Lisa reaches out her hand and removes the enchanted rubies from the wall. “Those are beautiful. I brought some dwarven gold from a trunk in the basement of the writing cabin. Do you think they’ll accept that here? I mean it is real gold.”

Dariana leads the way to the counter, her hands tucked into her pockets. “I don’t think there will be a problem.  Long ago, gold had to be in specific forms with special brands. Certain kingdoms had certain values that shifted as power changed hands. Nowadays, there are diamond spheres and gems at the top of the global currency. I’m sure he won’t be too much of a problem.”

“Seven gold pieces,” the fat old man behind the counter says.

Lisa bites her lip and turns to Dariana, who grinds her heel against the floor and says, “Sorry about that. It doesn’t hurt to ask again.”

Lisa moves her hand across the vendor’s face. “These aren’t the droids you’re looking for.”

“Two gold pieces, and not a silver piece less.”

Lisa pays the merchant, drops the earrings into her purse, and touches Dariana’s hand. “That was incredible.”

“Thanks, but I really don’t like doing stuff like that. You’re a guest, so I’m more than willing to help you get a fun souvenir.  It’s just that I come from a . . . difficult family. Nyx assures me that I’m not like them, but one never knows when temptation is all around.  This is another reason I’m careful with my powers and tend to use them on myself more than others.”

The women make their way to a tavern and are shown to the premium table. The barmaid takes their order and leaves.

“I never tried to resist my powers,” Lisa says with a smile. “They’re just upgrades really that help me through life. I made a bunch of money counting cards in various casinos. I figured someone has to win, might as well be me. I think we have to be ourselves. That’s how I live my life. We make mistakes and we adjust.”

Dariana scratches her head, which bobs from side to side. “That is an interesting way to look at life. Being bound by destiny has caused me to narrow my actions and view of the future. Never really had a sense of self now that I think about it. Definitely never tried to have unbridled fun until I met my new friends.”

“Maybe after we finish our drinks, we can look for some sharp pointy things. Craig loves that stuff, and maybe I’ll buy him something.”

“A blacksmith five streets over is having a secret sale if you know the secret word. It’s pineapple and his wife sells dresses upstairs. Maybe I’ll give it a look too.”

Lisa holds out her mug. “Is it really pineapple, or are you having fun with your powers?”

Dariana clinks with her own mug. “Sorry. I should have been clearer.”

“This is going to be harder than I thought.”

*

Craig Boyack 01I was born in a town called Elko, Nevada. I like to tell everyone I was born in a small town in the 1940s. I’m not quite that old, but Elko has always been a little behind the times. This gives me a unique perspective of earlier times, and other ways of getting by. Some of this bleeds through into my fiction.

I moved to Idaho right after the turn of the century, and never looked back. My writing career was born here, with access to other writers and critique groups I jumped in with both feet.

I like to write about things that have something unusual. My works are in the realm of science fiction, paranormal, and fantasy. The goal is to entertain you for a few hours. I hope you enjoy the ride.

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Dariana Revisited . . . Unless I Never Gave Her Origin to Begin With

Dariana by Kayla Matt

Dariana by Kayla Matt

The Spirit Well finally brings Dariana into the spotlight!  So, let’s meet her.

I keep saying it, but I’ll repeat myself once more.  Dariana is a walking spoiler in terms of her origin and history.  In the game, she had barely joined before the whole thing ended and she’s definitely changed the most.  At first, Dariana was a half-angel psychic martial artist who had a shaky relationship with her father.  She started as innocent, but quickly gained an attitude.  This caused a small issue because this mirrored the book version of Nyx.  I didn’t have to worry about this until Sleeper of the Wildwood Fugue when she debuted, so I had plenty of time. So, what did I come up with?

I’ll leave the spoiler stuff for later when I put it behind a ‘more’ cut.  Dariana is an immortal, but can still be killed if she takes enough damage.  Healing isn’t as quick as a god, but it’s above average.  Her physical attributes are up there too, but she keeps herself restrained out of fear of hurting people.  The restraint comes from her telepathy, which she uses with a lot of variety.  Aside from reading thoughts, Dariana can alter perceptions, wipe memories (even on herself), produce hallucinations, track anything with a working brain, and effect her own body.  One of Dariana’s most common tricks is to turn off her pain receptors before a fight, which means she feels it later.

The thing that makes Dariana different from the other champions is that she is almost addicted to suffering.  The others have their dark histories, but she has been around for centuries.  Being a long-running champion, Dariana has spent most of her life asleep and the waking parts are filled with watching people die.  Due to her origin, she is very special and there’s a reason she tends to be the lone survivor.  This didn’t leave her with time for friends and developing social skills, which is why she apologizes so quickly and isn’t sure of people at first.  Being a telepath, she uses her power to get around some awkwardness, but rarely goes off on her own.  Without a special ring, she is left open to strong emotions and there have been incidents in her past when left undefended.

Fighting style-wise, Dariana stands out in Windemere because she doesn’t have any physical weapons.  Not unless you count her fists, elbows, knees, and feet.  Her powers help a lot, but she still boils down to a martial artist in a world of swords, spells, and arrows.  I never gave her a true style like Luke with his focus on blocking with his arms like they are swords and attacking with legs.  Figure she’s been around long enough that she’s learned multiple styles and just uses whatever comes to mind.  There are times when Dariana doesn’t bother dodging or blocking, which goes back to her subconscious addiction to suffering.

So, what about those spoilers?  Well, here we go for those that want to step forward:

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Smorgasbord Christmas Party – Guest Hugh W. Roberts – I Believe in Father Christmas

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Ichabod Brooks and the 12 Stories

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So I did a three sentence synopsis/mini-blurbs for each of the chosen Ichabod Brooks stories.  Well, except for Ichabod Brooks and the Starwind Egg since that’s on the blog.  Still wondering if I should delete it or leave it up even though it’ll kick off the collection.  Anyway, I wanted to share and might end on a Bedlam note.  I have a bit before I have to decide on that:

Ichabod Brooks & the Phantom Archer

Being an honored champion of the past, Ichabod is traveling to Yew Cove to judge an annual archery contest.  Things go south when a ghostly assassin begins killing the other contestants.  All it wants is a duel with Ichabod, but there might be more to this specter than anyone expects.

Ichabod Brooks & the King of Nowhere

A call from a friend leads Ichabod into the path of an emerging cult.  They are determined to erase the kingdoms and boundaries of Ralian, uniting the lands under a single banner of lawlessness.  His only ally is the strange King of Nowhere, the very man who started it all.

Ichabod Brooks & the Island of Mirrors

Waking up on an island covered in mirrors, Ichabod is trapped with an old enemy.  They must work together to survive the local flora and fauna long enough to escape.  Is this nothing more than Ichabod’s usual run of bad luck or is there another reason he has been brought to the uncharted island?

Ichabod Brooks & the Yellow Ogres

Ichabod is ready for a week to himself, but the arrival of a desperate orc throws his plans into the furnace.  A tribe of yellow-hued ogres are kidnapping shamans for a mysterious ritual, which could throw all of nature into chaos.  If Ichabod wants to get home and finish his chores before his wife returns from her mother’s, he may need an old monster hunting friend to lend a hand.

Ichabod Brooks & the Resurrection Bowl

This is a job that Ichabod wishes he could pass on, but the poison in his veins has him locked into the contract. The target is a legendary artifact that can revive the dead without failure.  All one needs is a sacrifice and the ability to survive the abandoned prison that it has been hidden inside of.

Ichabod Brooks & Toy Tower

Long ago, a mad inventor created a tower full of traps and toys that the world has never seen before.  Those who reach the top are rewarded with a unique gift, which has driven many parents to challenge the tower.  Forced under contract, Ichabod will try his best or risk ruining his reputation as the man who finishes his jobs.

Ichabod Brooks & the Jester Flute

Ichabod has always had a shaky relationship with bards, but this job threatens to make him fear them.  Following a trail of bizarre events, he cannot trust what he sees and hears as reality turns against him.  All because a bard decided to steal a cursed flute and play a few innocent notes.

Ichabod Brooks & the Orphan’s Shadow

Hired to escort orphans to their new homes, Ichabod and the other hired warriors see this as an easy job with a a heartwarming payoff.  As usual in his line of work, a wrinkle appears as the children begin suffering from a strange disease.  Forced to stay in a roadside temple, Ichabod must uncover a secret before the source of the disease gets really mad.

Ichabod Brooks & Zaria’s Kiss

During the Great Cataclysm, the central temple of Zaria fell into the ocean.  Rumor has it that the holiest of the Purity Goddess’s relics was trapped inside and has yet to be recovered.  With feuding friends at his sides, Ichabod is ready to find out and finish the job that nearly got away.

Ichabod Brooks & the Vixen of Errenshar

Ichabod has made many enemies throughout his career, but none have been as tenacious as Olivia Thorne.  Wanting to claim him for herself, she has tricked him into the wonderful city of Errenshar.  This a dance they have done many times before, but Olivia always has a new twist that will give Ichabod nightmares for a month.

THERE YOU HAVE IT!

That’s what I have so far and I’m going to start working on main characters, his gear, and the events in a bit.  As far as Bedlam goes, I’m editing Book 2, but also trying to think of what to do about Book 3.  It’ll be a 2018 release, so I’m trying to decide between the Christmas adventure or one where they have to protect a railroad that is supposed to run across the country.  Not sure where to have that last one travel from and to though.  There was a third option, but I’m not sure I can do that any more without a lot of backlash.  Shame since it would have been fun.

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The Trouble with Series – Guest Post…

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One of the best things to do as an indie author is to write a series. People like reading them, and it makes your author page look much better when you have more than one title to your name.

For most of us, writing our first book is a Big Thing. Finishing it, whether after six months or six years, does not immediately change your mindset into ‘published author’. It’s often only much later that you read the advice about series and start to think of the sequel.

Even the most successful authors fall foul of this. I was at a Crime Writing event last year (Noirwich), where the well-loved British writer Elly Griffiths confessed that she had never expected her first book, The Crossing Places, to lead to the long run that is the Ruth Galloway series. If she had, she wouldn’t have packed so much into…

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