Raven’s Dawn Part 14 #horror #thriller #Halloween

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Christ’s College in Cambridge

Jennifer stops when she sees Charlene leaving the sorority house, the administrator dressed in an ebony pantsuit. Her mouth goes dry when the woman turns to her and waves before ducking into a waiting taxi. The confused student watches the vehicle go by, the windows too dark for her to see what is going on inside. She continues to stare until it disappears around the corner and a rumble of thunder snaps her out of the trance. Cautiously heading up the uneven walkway, Jennifer looks around for the sisters and is freaked out that there are none on the patio or in the windows. The shades have been drawn to prevent anyone from seeing inside, which is unusual for the daytime. Getting to the door, she calms herself down with some breathing exercises and takes the pause to listen through the keyhole. The two actions offset each other, so she goes inside with the same amount of tension she had several minutes ago.

To Jennifer’s horror, every sister, pledge, and friend of the sorority has gathered on the main floor of the house. A sea of scowls and whispered curses meet the nervous theater major when she closes the door and steps further inside. Intimidated by the massive crowd, she stays near the wall and attempts to inch her way upstairs with her head down. Jennifer gets to the first step when the mob parts and shows her what they have prepared for her arrival. The other students have brought all of her belongings to the center of the lounge, which has been cleared out of furniture. Several of the silent students have bottles of lighter fluid, their hands dripping from enthusiastically dousing the pile. Those with matches are standing near the windows, a mad glint in their hungry eyes. Jennifer opens her mouth to speak when one of her former friends steps forward to slap her across the face.

“Don’t you dare try to say that you don’t want any trouble,” the freckled student hisses like a cornered cat. Tying back her blonde hair, she returns to the mob and signals for them to continuing bathing the pile in lighter fluid. “Charlene is revoking our charter because of what you did. She said our parties and acts of vandalism have been tolerated long enough. You killing Natalie and James was the final straw that they couldn’t overlook. Now, we all have to be punished when our only mistake was letting a psychopath into our home.”

“I didn’t kill anyone,” Jennifer timidly argues while she massages her aching jaw. She ducks when another sister tries to hit her again, but a kick to her leg knocks her to the floor. “Let me talk to Charlene tomorrow. Coach Warner said only I had to leave. He didn’t tell me anything about this, so let me fix it. At least let me get my photos and some of my clothes. For god’s sake, how can any of you think I killed Natalie and James? Do I really look like I have the strength or even the ability to do that?”

“You are a theater major, so you could have been faking it,” says a drunken voice from the middling of the pack. Emboldened by the nods of agreement, the short girl pushes through the crowd until she can grab Jennifer by the ear. “You ruined our futures, bitch. Charlene isn’t going to let us off the hook so easily. She thinks our influence drove you to kill, so she’s keeping an eye on all of us. This might even be noted on our records, which is something I didn’t even think was possible or legal. All because Natalie hurt your feelings?”

“She was trying to drive me out of the house.”

“Then you should have left.”

“I didn’t want to leave. This was my home.”

“Well, you sure as hell didn’t care enough about us to commit murder off the property.”

“I didn’t kill anyone!”

“Nobody believes you, O’Connor, so stop wasting your breath.”

With a high-pitched whistle from the seniors, those with the matches get close to the soaked pile and begin setting it on fire. Cheers go up as clothing ignites and posters swiftly turn to ember-tinted ashes. Sparks fly from the computer and television, which release foul-smelling pops as they burn. An acridness fills the air as Jennifer’s collection of makeup and paints melt into puddles, the stench making her think something toxic was added to the mixture. Blocked from getting close, the theater major can only watch everything she owns go up in smoke that lingers around the ceiling. Staring at the thickening cloud, the thought of suffocating crosses her mind, but she is kicked whenever she attempts to move or speak.

It takes a few minutes for the furniture to start crumbling, which causes the pile to fall apart and spread toward the crowd. Those closest to the bonfire do nothing to get out of the way, their legs struck by the fiery refuse. With screams, most of them fall back in pain, but three pitched forward and land in the flames. Having shown no concern for getting lighter fluid on themselves, the students ignite as quickly as the posters and struggle to get back to their feet. One of them becomes trapped beneath the desk, her shouts for help falling on panicking ears. The other two get free and lunge to their friends for help, but they only spread the flames and force the rest of the crowd to shove all of them into the inferno. With the added fuel, the bonfire licks at the ceiling and pumps out smoke that smells of burning flesh. None of the sisters try to escape even though their eyes are filled with terror, the only time they move being to prevent Jennifer from crawling away.

The tension snaps when one of the pledges tackles a senior into the flames, the pair battling while they burn. Jennifer huddles in the corner as violence breaks out throughout the main floor of the house. Those who are too scared to fight are chased upstairs where the smoke is so thick that only their choking silhouettes can be seen in the cloud. One of the newer members comes falling to the foyer, her neck snapping on impact. Nobody else emerges from the second floor, their faint gasps and coughs lasting for a few minutes Others fight blow for blow, the brawls typically ending with both people falling into the growing inferno. A high-pitched scream startles everyone as one of the seniors rips off her best friend’s arm and begins beating her with it, foam flying from both of their mouths. Cheers rise up at the scene as more try to tear into their opponents with a primal ferocity. Throughout the bloodbath, the fire continues to spread as if driven to swallow the entire building.

A finger falling on her leg snaps Jennifer out of her fear and she tries to make a mad crawl for the door. Staying low to avoid the smoke, she mutters every prayer that she can remember, including fictional ones for movies. Hearing footsteps coming towards her, she turns around to see the short sister approaching. Jennifer tries to move faster, but her ankle is grabbed and she is dragged toward the bonfire. Grabbing an umbrella, she twists her body and flails at the other student’s hands. The weak blows have no effect on the student whose eyes have become glazed with an oily film. Charged from the side, the sister lets go with one hand to lash out and snap the neck of her attacker. Out of ideas and stricken with fear, Jennifer opens the umbrella in the hopes of hitting the other woman in the face. Instead, the ribs extend and stretch to form a mouth that snaps off the upper half of the student’s body like a crocodile. Horrified by the unexpected event, the theater major drops the umbrella and scrambles under a table.

“Please be a dream,” Jennifer whimpers while staring at the hand on her ankle. She gingerly pries it off and nearly throws up before she gets free, the severed body part seeping onto her shoe. “This doesn’t make any sense. Fire . . . People shouldn’t be able to do any of this. It’s insane. I’m going to die in the middle of insanity. Unless this is a dream. Maybe I fell asleep on the bus. After all, none of this can happen. It’s not real. It’s not . . . normal.”

“Never any fun in normal,” a voice coos from a wall outlet.

The chaos freezes in midmotion as a chilling laugh rolls down the stairs and blows out all of the windows. Fed by the rush of fresh air, the inferno explodes and rapidly consumes everything in the house. Dancing figures can be seen in the flames, their movements matching those of the faint arm that extend from the smoke over. Charred bodies fall to the floor while Jennifer closes her eyes, a sudden sense of weightlessness the last thing she feels before passing out.

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Monster Maker Fun 2017: Creations Donated by C.S. Boyack

The following three have been donated by C.S. Boyack:

Mantiscles

A name the can stir giggles in even the manliest of men.  At least until these poisonous shellfish strike at a speed you wouldn’t expect from something without legs.  They have a dark red shell that is smooth and shaped like a normal muscle.  Mantiscles can usually be found among their more harmless relatives, which allows them to wait patiently for prey without being noticed.  While defenseless on land, they are able to open a hole in the bottom of their shell to release a burst of compressed water. This shoots them about ten feet where they will float back to the seafloor. The reason they don’t is because they only do this to reach a fish, octopus, human, or whatever else is swimming by.  A mantiscle will open the front of its shell just enough to strike out with razor sharp claws that resemble those of a praying mantis.  In fact, many thought such an insect was hiding within the shell, but it’s really nothing more than a stomach, heart, and poison sac.  The poison is injected by a needle that remains in the prey and fuses to the skin.  As the victim dies within fifteen minutes, the mantiscle starts draining fluids.  Removing one requires cutting out a chunk of flesh and it is still capable of launching itself again a second after it releasing its previous hold.

Barbary Shrimp

Found on the Barbary Coast, these plump delicacies are dark blue with red tails that are edible as well.  Many claim that the tails taste like cherries while others swear it’s rum, which has caused a few minor street fights on the coast.  In the wild, they are typically only eaten by crabs and one species of gull.  Once every ten years, Barbary apes have been known to migrate to the shores where the shrimp are washed up to release their already fertilized eggs.  For the most part, there is very little difference between them and other species of shrimp besides color and taste.  There is a rumor that they are all females and only five males exist in the deeper waters.  A few sailors have sworn that they have seen a man-sized shrimp with a mane of water-resistant hair.  To date, nobody his taken them seriously and there is no concrete evidence of this.

Cave Duckers

As expected, these animals live in caves and they get their name from having to duck in order to move.  Tall and muscular, it makes little sense when these strong beasts prefer to live in tight quarters.  Even with their squat legs, they are still tall enough to repeatedly scrape their heads against the ceiling.  When walking, the Cave Duckers have to suck in their large guts in order to bend forward.  The bulk ends up going to their back and condensing to create a layer of thick hide that protects their flanks.  So, what could possibly cause these animals to live in a place that doesn’t suit their size?  While they are predatory, they require calcite to stay alive.  This building block of limestone is found in stalactites and stalagmites, which the Cave Duckers use similar to how other animals use salt lick.  There is evidence that the calcite helps strengthen their eyesight for when they have to wander outside to catch prey.

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Two unmissable FREE romances set in Greece

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Effrosyni Moschoudi-Freebies | From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's booksGreek award-winning author, Effrosyni Moschoudi, is one of my closest author friends–and, it turns out, a distant cousin. She is now offering two of her books for FREE right now. Both are perfect choices for lovers of romance and all things Greek! What makes this offer particularly special to me, though, is that one of my own stories is included in Facets of Love–a brand new short story collection you won’t find published anywhere. It is an exclusive book for Effrosyni’s mailing list readers. Join the list by leaving your email on her website and receive the book in a few minutes. The author sends out emails very sparsely and your privacy is guaranteed!

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Her second FREE book is The Ebb, an award-winning novel set in Corfu. It is $0.99 on Amazon but can be downloaded for FREE in other e-stores as well as a PDF file from…

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Alienation Blog Hop Tour 2017

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Hell Bent

Welcome to the Alienation BLOG HOP TOUR.

Please take your seat and strap yourself in, as we take you on an intergalactic tour. You will be amazed, entertained, and educated. Manoeuvre through the cosmos and be astounded at all you see. Hunt down the hidden words that will get you to your final destination where a one-of- a -kind award awaits one lucky traveller.

You are here to celebrate the release of Alienation, book two of the humorous Sci-Fi series, Starstruck.

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Sally Webber’s dream is coming true: Zander is back and taking her out for a night on the town–on a planet hundreds of light years away from Earth.

But when an accident separates her from her alien tour guide, she’s thrown into the seedy underbelly of an insane city where nothing is as it seems. Suddenly lost and desperate to get back home, Sally is willing to do anything…

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Raven’s Dawn Part 13 #horror #thriller #Halloween

(Running out of funny things to post here for the links.)

Ohio University

Coach Warner stands on the other side of the soundproof study room, his unblinking eyes never straying from Jennifer. A ring of black hair is around his head, which has been polished to shine when struck directly by the hanging lamp. Taking off his green jacket, the teacher exposes his burly arms that makes the student think of a tattooed bear. He casually rubs his precious collection, which are a patchwork of pictures that vary in style, color, and subject. Scratching at his leg, Coach Warner reveals that he has more on his legs, which are toned and look like they could kick through concrete. Satisfied that the silence has done its job on Jennifer’s nerves, he takes out a folder and drops it on the table. Pictures of Natalie and James’s dead bodies slide toward Jennifer, who clenches her eyes shut and looks away.

“Either you didn’t do this or you’re a better actress than your grades imply,” the Coach says, his chiseled face showing no sign that he is joking. Taking a seat, he pulls out a notepad and repeatedly taps a pen on the cover. “Now, the police seem to think you’re the one behind this. I told them they’re wrong, but my word isn’t going as far as it should. Too many people are aware of your roommate’s attempts to drive you away, which gives you motive. At the very least, you will be taken away for a while in order to be watched. That is unless you can give me an alibi or something that shifts the blame to someone else.”

“Why is the hockey coach doing an interrogation?” Jennifer asks, blurting out the first thing that comes to her mind. A wave of fear ripples through her body when the teacher snarls, his eyes appearing to turn black. “I snuck into the library and slept in one of the study rooms. There was too much noise in the house and I didn’t want to drag my friends into this. How can anybody believe I did this? James was snapped in half and suffocated while Natalie had her eyes gouged out by glass that was found lodged in her throat. Whoever did this had to be insanely strong and have cuts on their hands. Neither of those apply to me.”

“I agree, but the police have no other suspects,” Coach Warner mentions while he watches her face. Seeing her avert her eyes from the pictures, he nods his head and scrawls a barely legible note. “To answer your first question, I am here because I have some contacts with the police department. Old friends who owe me favors, but a double homicide with this amount of brutality is too much for them. Word has already spread and some people are thinking you’re a blossoming serial killer.”

Shoving the pictures away, the weeping student puts her head on the table. “I can’t believe this. Did I hate Natalie? Not really. We didn’t get along, but I only wanted her to stop bullying me. Killing her would have been a ridiculous and stupid move because of exactly what is happening now. Our problems weren’t a secret, so I’m the logical suspect. Did it ever occur to the police that she was angering other people and one of them waited until I was in a position to take the blame? I mean, we’re dealing with insane scenarios, so why not go into a full conspiracy theory? Natalie made an enemy of someone with the strength to snap her beefy boyfriend in half like a twig and then kill her with broken glass. How about it being two killers? Anybody talk to Bigfoot and Bloody Mary yet?”

“This is not the time to get angry and irrational.”

“It’s the perfect time for that!”

“Have your outburst, but I still have a question.”

“I don’t need your permission to get upset!”

Coach Warner leans back in his chair and stares at the young woman, her body quivering from fear and rage. He considers putting the pictures away, but he prefers the sight of them keeping Jennifer on edge. The man’s eyes narrow as he examines every movement and inch of her for hints that she is lying. While he doubts that she has the strength to kill James, Coach Warner can think of at least two of her friends who could work together to do the deed. As far as Natalie, he knows a thick pair of gloves would have protected the red-haired student from injuring her hands. Although, he doubts she could have accomplished such a meticulous murder without getting hurt in the struggle.

“I will see what I can do with the police,” Coach Warner finally says while attempting to soften his voice. Hating the sound and feeling phlegm in his throat, he goes back to his stern and gravely tenor. “There is only one piece of information that I need. You said that you snuck into the library, which is something administration will overlook. No sign of you on the security cameras, so I need you to tell me if anybody else was in the building. Did you see Marcy, a janitor, or even another student?”

“Didn’t even know there were cameras,” Jennifer sheepishly admits. Feeling a little more comfortable with the promise of help, she leans back and stares at the hanging lamp. “I didn’t see anybody since I didn’t want to be caught. There were voices from the basement. Not sure if they were the janitors, but I did hear Marcy. Possibly Charlene too, which was weird. To be honest, I was really tired and could have been wrong. None of them knew I was there, so I don’t think this can be of much help.”

“Actually, I should be able to work with that,” the teacher replies as he finishes his notes. He taps his fingers a few times while considering other questions. “Please go back to the sorority and wait in the lounge for one of us. Your time as a pledge will be over, but Charlene is already looking for another room. Aurora Chambers is an option since we recently learned that her roommate dropped out. We’re sorry about the delay, Ms. O’Connor. Thank you for being patient with us.”

Happy to get out of the room and find something to eat, Jennifer grabs her bag and hurries out the door. The lights flicker and start to dim as Coach Warner collects the pictures, the man taking a moment to examine each one. He licks his lips at one that shows the lopsided bed, which the police never took a second look at. Putting the folder in his satchel, he is stricken by a mild pain in his skull that rolls to the base of his spine. It takes several minutes of the sensation running up and down his back before he falls to his knees. Taking in a gasping breath, Coach Warner looks at the window that has been blackened from the outside.

“I was told that we had more time, but you are in charge,” he whispers, blood-tinted drool falling from his mouth. Scratching at his arm, he winces when he almost pulls off one of the tattooed skin patches that have been grafted to his own flesh. “Most of them aren’t ready, but things can be pushed ahead. I agree that patience is not easy to maintain. We will do what we can to increase the speed of our work. Thank you and I look forward to seeing you again. It has been far too long for all of us.”

Coach Warner waits until the aches in his body fade away before he stands, his legs shaking slightly. Keeping his eyes on the window, he backs out of the room and closes the door as softly as possible. The instant the deadbolt clicks, a flock of ebony ravens burst off the side of the building and let the sun shine into the empty lounge.

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Unintended Concequences, on #LisaBurtonRadio

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Lisa BurtonWelcome to this week’s edition of Lisa Burton Radio. The world recently learned of something the Japanese call Karoshi. This is the situation where people are worked to death. Several deaths have been labeled as Karoshi in recent weeks.

What would it take to get to that point? What goes through someone’s mind as the symptoms take over? We’re going to talk to someone who is very near that point today. “Welcome to the show, Trish Clayton.”

“Hello, Lisa. ‘Karoshi’? Is that what they call this insanity? I guess having a label for it is rather handy for some. Make no mistake, Lisa; there is nothing about this entire situation that a sane person wouldn’t have problems dealing with. I’m not certain about my ability to step back from this on a personal level, and that’s hardly a point from which to assess anything rationally, is it?”

“Let’s not be…

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Sally’s Cafe and Bookstore – New on the Shelves – How Polly Became a Pirate (Polly’s Piralympics) (Volume 1) by Jann Weeratunga

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Raven’s Dawn Part 12 #horror #thriller #Halloween

(Anybody call for a link to yesterday’s post?)

Benedictine College

Jennifer staggers down the walkway of the sorority house, her awkward movements caused by fatigue instead of alcohol. One of the sisters starts walking toward the younger woman, a joyous grin appearing at the thought of yelling at someone. She skids to a stop when her potential victim yawn so wide that the sound reminds everyone of a lion. Wavering on her feet, Jennifer rubs her eyes and makes it to the door where she nearly falls asleep with her forehead against the poster-covered wood. She slaps herself in the face and gets inside where she holds up a textbook as a sign that she was studying. Approached by two more members, she breathes in their faces to prove she has not been drinking. The mixture of soda and hot peppers nearly knocks one of them out, the other struggling not to gag. She remains in front of them until they jerk their thumbs at the staircase and go back to a paused video game.

With a lopsided smile, Jennifer takes the steps by twos and stays against the wall to avoid falling over. Making way for a group going out for the night, she gradually goes down the hallway. She pops a cough drop into her mouth as she reaches her door, a pang of anxiety striking her stomach. Putting her ear against the lock, Jennifer carefully listens for movement and voices. Hearing some shuffling and muffled words, she knocks three times and wiggles the knob to give her roommate a warning. When her neighbor steps out, she puts a finger to her lips and waves the drunken girl away. Bracing herself for the worst, the red-haired woman opens the door and walks into a situation that she has always feared.

“Dear God, you’re naked and on top of him,” Jennifer blurts out as she turns her back on her roommate. To her chagrin, a new mirror has been hung from the door and she is forced to close her eyes. “Most people put something on the doorknob or leave a note. Even so, I knocked and made enough noise to let you know I was outside. You could have at least thrown something over yourself or . . . dismounted.”

“Nothing can be done in the heat of the moment,” Natalie casually says while she gets off her nervous boyfriend. She smacks his hands when he tries to cover himself up, but he manages to pull the covers up to his neck. “Don’t be such a prude. Not like you have anything she hasn’t seen some version of. Well, I’m not done with our romantic evening. So, you either go somewhere else or try to sleep over there. Keep in mind that staying here will result in me spreading the word that you’re a voyeur.”

Unable to keep her eyes closed without falling asleep, Jennifer does her best to walk further into the room and avert her gaze. “I’m too tired to deal with this, but you’re not giving me much of a choice. Please stop being a bitch to me for tonight and I’ll give you the room tomorrow. I just want to sleep. If I go to the lounge then all the noise will keep me up and I won’t be able to get to my classes.”

“Don’t say a word because you’ve already disappointed me once tonight,” the black-haired roommate snaps, stopping her muscular boyfriend from speaking. Moving to remain in the other girl’s line of sight, she puts her hands behind her back to help push out her chest. “I don’t really care about your classes. Flunk out and let me get a single because this place would be better without you. Always practicing your lines and never let me smoke in here. I should be with my best friend down the hall, but they had to put me with you. The only way I can get rid of you is for you to quit as a pledge or as a student. Considering how much I hate you, I want you out of the school.”

“Why do you hate me so much?”

“Because you’re annoying.”

“We’ve only known each other for half a semester.”

“And it feels like years.”

“Fine, I’ll try to sleep in the lounge. Have fun bumping herpes sores.”

Jennifer angrily slams the door behind her, which causes the mirror to fall and smash against the floor. With a victorious smile, Natalie locks the deadbolt and skips over to the bed where she yanks the covers off her boyfriend. She is about to crawl onto the narrow mattress when a cold breeze strikes her skin and threatens to calm her down. The irritated woman reaches over to turn off her roommate’s desktop fan and violently yanks the plug out of the socket. Using a scissor to cut the cord, Natalie drops the broken device in the garbage and happily skips back to the bed where her boyfriend is starting to fall asleep. A stronger blast of cold air hits her, the frigid gale giving her goosebumps and making her shiver. The blinds move to reveal the open window where a raven is calmly sitting, its back to the room.

“Get lost, bird,” Natalie hisses as she shoves the animal away. Closing and locking the window, she flips off a person outside who pulls out a camera to take her picture. “Why did you turn on the fan and open the window? We barely did anything that would make you work up a sweat. Wake up, James, because I’m not done with you.”

“Weren’t you a little too mean to her?” the young man asks while grabbing a nearby water bottle. He gets up to stretch his legs and rub his back, the cheap mattress and box spring making his muscles ache. “I know that you don’t like her, but having sex to get her out of the room might be a bit too far. Kind of tough to stay in the moment too. Not that seeing you naked isn’t helping, but I keep fearing that she’ll come back in.”

Tiptoeing to the door to avoid the glass, she closes the chain lock and rattles the knob to prove it will not open. “Even a key can’t get her back inside, so she’s gone for the night. Look, I’m really sorry about putting you in an awkward position. Let me make it up to you for the rest of the night. All I ask is that we have sex in her bed. Give me that one gift and I will make it worth your while for a month.”

“That’s why you changed her sheets,” James mutters as he wonders if he has any control over the situation. Eyeing the other bed, he notices that it looks more comfortable than the creaky one that his girlfriend was given. “My back and knees could really use a break. Not that I’m saying we stop, but the springs over here keep poking me. Do we have to tell her that we did anything? That sounds like something you could get in trouble for. I mean, me and the guys have certain rules when it comes to this. One of them is that you don’t have sex in a roommate’s bed unless you’re ready to buy them new sheets. After all, things happen when you really get into it like that time last week.”

“You’re never going to stop gloating about that one,” the black-haired woman says, a faint smile on her face. Running a finger along Jennifer’s desk, she sits in the chair and shifts until she is comfortable. “As far as I know, there is no rule against it, but I would only get in trouble if she finds out. You’d never tell her about what we’re doing because you don’t want to upset me. My back would appreciate the change too. Please, let me ride you on my roommate’s bed, which has a better bounce.”

James hesitates until Natalie licks her lips and stretches her arms over her head, a lustful look in her eyes. Unable to hold back his desire, the young man finishes his water bottle and grabs a condom from a jar. He gives a final look at his girlfriend, who shows no sign of changing her mind. As she gets to her feet, James pulls back the heavy blanket and jumps into Jennifer’s bed. The instant he lies down, the bed snaps shut with enough force to break his spine and slowly suffocate him in the soft material. His toes stick out of the top of the folded mattress, only one of them twitching.

Natalie grabs James’s flailing arm and tries to pull him free, but the limb tears off at the shoulder. She chokes back a scream out of fear of being blamed for what she assumes is a horrible accident. With people knowing about her aggression and pranks toward Jennifer, it would not be a surprise for anyone to consider she boobytrapped the bed. Her mind spiraling into paranoia and panic, Natalie drops the arm and backs to the door. The soles of her feet are sliced up by the broken mirror, the pain momentarily snapping her out of her fear. She turns around to undo the chain, but her arms shake too much for her to get it open. Backing to the middle of the room, she looks down at her bloody footprints. A burning pain runs through her body and she holds up her hand to watch a glass shard come out of her palm. Coughing up blood, Natalie feels more of the mirror pieces weave their way through her insides. Amazed that she is aware of what is happening, the black-haired woman collapses to the floor and reaches out to take her boyfriend’s severed arm. The last thing she sees is her vision splitting as two shards slowly push out through her eyes.

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Monsters of Windemere: Calicos

Aisha Clan Clan from Outlaw Star

The above picture might not be the best example since the calicos of Windemere aren’t super strong, easily angered, hard to hurt aliens.  I’ve been using these cat-people since Legends of Windemere: Beginning of a Hero.  They could be considered monsters in some fashion, but it’s probably better to call them a species or race like elves and dwarves.  Calicos don’t appear like random encounters or roam the wild since they’re civilized.  Instead, you have characters like Theresa Marley and Conrad Deviltongue who happen to be members of this race.  They even make an appearance in The Life & Times of Ichabod Brooks if you want to go take a look.  So, what are they?

I’ve already said cat-people, but there’s always more than that.  You have so many versions of this that range from frightening lycanthropes to stuff from Japan that you don’t want to look at on a work computer.  The calicos are in the middle, which still doesn’t sound good now that I said it.  Physically, they are built like humans and are normally very slender, except when they get older and more homebody.  They have small retractable claws, tufts of hair on their ears, some have whiskers, and they all have tails that can be thin or thick depending on their subspecies.  Not that they have alternate names since they’re all called calicos.

Small aside here is that I had the hardest time figuring out what to do about the pants and skirts they wear.  A skirt with the tail means it would be lifted up all the time and a hole felt incredibly restrained.  Imagine having your pointer finger put through a tight hole in a glove all the time.  I assume it would be uncomfortable or annoying after a while.  So, the calicos have special pants and skirts that have a dip that goes below the base of their spine to grant freedom of movement for their tails.  Connected to this, I ended up designing weapons that could be strapped to the tail.  As of this post, I’ve only come up with a small dagger put over the tip, a chain that looks like a decoration before unfurled, a whip, and an axe head.  Not sure what else I can do, but who knows what the future holds.

I’ve yet to introduce the full Calican society and I’m not sure people have picked up on what ‘Calican’ means.  It’s a work in progress, I guess.  So far, I’ve revealed that they’re capital is in the Cerascent region and they are a major trading power.  My hope is to have some future series take place there and show more of these people.  They’re actually one of the oldest Windemere races, so the pre-Cataclysm stories might showcase them more often.  Still, they have shown an attraction to being warriors that specialize in stealth and speed, which means there are bound to be thieves out there.  I already know that their capital will be a walled city too and they’ll have some sailing expertise.  Nothing like the halflings, but the calicos have been traveling and trading long enough to be talented navigators and sailors.

The origin for this species isn’t as flashy as I would have liked, but that seems to be the case with many monsters.  In fact, it actually stems from a different series that was eventually absorbed into Windemere.  I had 11 heroes and 11 villains who were chosen by the gods to do battle and show if good or evil is strongest.  A cat-girl was one of the main heroes and she caught my attention again when I was thinking about making some ‘unique’ races for Windemere.  Since I was carrying her over, I decided to do the same with her species.  So, the calicos came over with the fireskins, placids, and a few others that were wiped out by the Great Cataclysm.

Wait, that isn’t the full origin?  How did I come up with calicos for that other series?  Uh, I was big into anime at the time, a friend kept yelling cat-girls when we were hanging out, and I decided that I needed cat-girls.  Also . . . I really liked the character that’s pictured at the top of this post.  (Sorry if that’s a let down.)

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Opening in media res

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Hi gang, Craig here again. In my last post, we went over the opening to your book. The nutshell explanation is to take it easy with the volume of characters, make the reader care, and introduce a problem.

I wanted to include starting in what’s called Media Res, but that’s a bigger post. Now here it is, funny how that works out. There are some great reasons to do it, and some reasons not to as well.

There are probably better authors who could write about this. I needed a post, and dammit, it was my idea.

In Media Res is ancient Klingon for, I have to bore you for a while, so let me start with something exciting.

In the good old days, we used to meet characters in their everyday world. I liked this, and occasionally still do it myself. Similar to my last post, it was…

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