Poetry Day: I Dare You to Comment

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(Well, this is a dark one.  Came from a really rough time where I was using poetry to just get my emotions out.  Definitely needed the release. Reading it over, I definitely remember the job that caused this poem.  Very glad I left before I broke and am now at a place that I love going to.)

Another day passes

With the horrific dance

That is my daily grind

Working in a cage

Where I am poked

And prodded

I feel no respect

No sense that I should stay

All I feel is rage

My inner, shrieking beast

Driving me to destruction

Reminding me of dreams

Hopes I once held dear

Raped and butchered

As if they asked for it

Leaving them deformed

Twisted by the pain

That pushes me to despair

Forcing me to strive

And stumble

To find a reason to go on

A single reason

Not to drive ahead

Smashing into a bus

Or spinning off an overpass

Damaging my body

To match my shattered mind

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About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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20 Responses to Poetry Day: I Dare You to Comment

  1. L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:

    Wow. Well, I’m so glad your current job is the polar opposite of this one!

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  2. noelleg44's avatar noelleg44 says:

    The opening statement reminded me of a lovely young woman I knew when we lived in CA. She greeted everyone with a smile and a nice word or two, but committed suicide later that year. I never found out why.
    I’m glad you are out of that job!!!

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  3. That was a dark place for sure.

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  4. Sounds like a truly toxic workplace.

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  5. ospreyshire's avatar ospreyshire says:

    That poem is sadly all too relatable. I certainly had jobs from hell that seemed heavenly at first. Some of that stuff could also apply to situations outside of work.

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  6. Oloriel's avatar Oloriel says:

    Poems like this one, when someone asks, is what I’d say is the releasing power of poetry, for the stress and turmoil we cannot and should not release in other ways. I am mighty glad you left the situation that made you feel like this.

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  7. V.M.Sang's avatar V.M.Sang says:

    Like isn’t really the word to use for this one, but there’s no alternative.
    A powerful poem full of raw emotion.

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  8. Did we used to work together? I’m still there.

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  9. Jennie's avatar Jennie says:

    Very powerful, Charles. I hope writing this gave you some relief.

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