The Joys of Food . . . in Fiction

Alice in Wonderland

Alice in Wonderland

One thing I’ve seen brought up a lot when it comes to adventure fantasy is: what and when do the characters eat?  Oddly enough, you don’t see meals that often and the heroes never go hungry unless it’s essential to the plot.  Starvation and hunting are very useful plot points to show how difficult it is to survive in the wild.  Yet, it’s almost a passing thought and you don’t see it delved into.

In a series that I’m still reading through, Ranger’s Apprentice, there are several times where the characters talk over coffee.  I use something similar where meals are the backdrop for important meetings.  I can never say my heroes go hungry unless Luke does his thing that can burn through most of his caloric intake.  There are points where I think I overuse the setting, but it does make sense.  Preparing or in the middle of an adventure, the break you take to talk is a time to eat too.  Not much different from the real world.  We celebrate events with food, have food at meetings, and even give away some food as prizes or thank yous.  You do get a cookie for giving blood, right?

Personally, I see food in fiction as another window into the world.  If your story is on Earth then you can look up real dishes that relate to your characters’ cultures and locations.  If your story is another world then you can go wild.  A fish that’s as spicy as a ghost pepper?  Apples that can satisfy you for an entire day?  Everyone living creature (and unliving) eat something, so it’s an area that is worthwhile investigating.  The scenes where they come up can be used for character development too.  For example, Nyx loves spicy food and Sari isn’t too big a fan of seafood.

So, what do other people think of food or eating being included in stories?

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Leaving Arcadia Part One

Part One of the story ‘Leaving Arcadia’!

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By This Post, I Swear I’ll Finish Book 8! (If Not, I’ll Cry.)

Maybe I spent too much time in Florida, but I always get drowsy when it gets hot.  That might be why I’ve been having so much trouble writing the last week or two.  It hits early afternoon and I feel drained.  The scenes aren’t that emotional until recently, so it’s not like that.  The slowness of June doesn’t help any because it brings the usually doubts and fears out of my psyche.

I’m 3 chapters away from finishing Book 8’s first draft.  Then I will either dive into Book 5 editing or reading/outlining for a week.  It depends on other factors and what condition my brain meats are in.  The problem is that this is going to come down to the wire and it wasn’t long ago that I would have finished by Wednesday.  Now it’s Friday unless I get hit by a distraction.  So, I’m a little anxious and worried, which I’m trying to keep out of my writing.  My hope is that I can edit Books 5-8 through summer, release Book 5 during that time, and get to Book 9 by late summer/early fall.  With the completion of Book 9, it means the books for 2015 are all in first draft stage at least.  What can I say?  I like being ahead on this.

Truthfully, part of me has been wanting to go anti-social on WordPress.  Stick to my own blog and ignore everyone else, but I haven’t hit a point where that side wins.  I think this is stemming from not getting a break from people, so I want to curl up in a ball for a few days.  The stupid part of this is that I know I’d feel lonely if I do this.  Not sure if there’s a name for this or how to truly explain it.  Maybe coming closer and closer to the self-appointed deadline is making me edgy, especially with distractions aplenty rearing up over the last month or two.

In blogging news, I’m going to ask a question of anyone who has read the ‘Legends of Windemere’ books.  Even if it was only the first one.  Explanation first: The last week in July will be the one where I do ‘action scene’ excerpts, which leads to the revelation of ‘Bob’.  This may also be the lead in to Book 5’s debut, so a cover reveal might throw this off.  That doesn’t change the question.  Here it is:

WHAT IS YOUR FAVORITE ACTION SCENE FROM ANY OF THE LEGENDS OF WINDEMERE BOOKS?

I’m hoping to have 5 excerpts and the ‘Bob’ one for that week.  Again, this might change depending on the Book 5 cover art status.  So, I’m happy to see which scenes stick out in people’s minds.

Goals of the Week:

  1. Finish writing Book 8.
  2. Defensive Driving Course next Saturday.  It was rescheduled.
  3. Read more of Ranger’s Apprentice: Halt’s Peril.  Have been reading in the afternoon due to toddler not letting me write in peace.
  4. Outline and character design if I finish book writing early.
  5. Continue biking unless I mucked up my ankle worse than I thought.
  6. Give up trying to move toddler from ‘Frozen’ to ‘Tangled’.  The little guy is happy, I enjoy his dancing during the credits, and he’s having fun.
  7. Ignore Amazon rankings and people who report my rankings to me.  I was doing good on that first part until I received a few messages asking if I was okay with my books tanking.  Seriously, people, I don’t need that kind of a stress and aggravation.  If I’m not screaming that my world is over then you can assume things are NOT as dire as you presume.
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Works in Progress: Tears of Gola

Dragonball Z Cast

Dragonball Z Cast

Long ago, I started designing characters and stories for a series that put all of my friends in the role of hero or villain.  It was supposed to be in a world where the 20 Gods (10 evil/10 good) chose champions to battle in a contest to see which side was stronger.  Each champion would be transformed into an enhanced being or they already had these powers, which is how they were located.  All of the heroes were chosen from the same school, so they had connections even though they weren’t originally friends or had seen each other in years.  A key point was that one of the two female leads who were hunting for the other chosen had a bad transformation.  Her mind was turned into that of a child, so she’s very innocent.  Anyway, there were subplots a plenty.

Then I merged everything into Windemere and a few things happened.  These heroes and villains helped create an explanation of why there’s so much magic in Windemere.  They answered the question of how the gods recovered from a war with many losses, which is where ‘The Ascended’ came from.  More cities and species joined Windemere like the calicos and fireskins.  Still don’t remember what I changed the ‘Beasts’ into.  Also unsure if having a goddess named Wildcat would be too cheesy or not.

Looking at the story now, I’m not 100% certain how to pull it off.  I’m having trouble doing scenes with 6-7 characters involved and making sure everyone gets a voice.  Maybe I’ll master this in time, but this series would inevitably become more massive.  I’m looking at scenes with at least 10 heroes in the room.  It’s a slow build to that level over the trilogy, but it hits that eventually.  I might have to kill characters off at key points as the adventure continues.  It’s now about rescuing Gola and freeing the Plane of Magic from the Dark God and his minions.

Looking over my notes again, I have 13 on each side and only 1 or 2 die prior to the final book.  I spread out the appearances, but not the deaths.  At least the heroes get split up a lot in the final book, but this is still a hefty problem.  I hate to adopt another pain in the ass story since I have so many, but this one has already been established through some of the Legends of Windemere scenes.  Unless I can get away with not telling it . . . but I worked so hard so far.  Ugh.

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The Shadow

Amazing poem written by a talented 8-year-old.

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Some Other Social Media Sites

Pinterest, Tumblr, Instagram Icons

Pinterest, Tumblr, Instagram Icons

There are many other social media sites.  I went into detail with the ones I use the most often.  Several I simply connect to my blog and leave it at that.  Here are a few more that you might want to play around with.

Pinterest

I do use Pinterest a lot more than the rest of this list, but I’ve never really done more than the basics.  It’s great for visual artists.  Authors can play around with it, but it’s really about the pictures.  You can ‘Pin’ books directly from their Amazon page, which makes the ‘Pin’ a doorway to the page.  It can help other authors to ‘Pin’ their books and make an album for eBooks.  Take some time to wander Pinterest and ‘Repin’ things that you like and build up a few boards.  The truth is that you can utilize this social media site without going back to it after you set up.

Google +

I remember when people were swearing by this and telling me how great it is.  ‘Better than Facebook’ was the pitch.  Haven’t heard people talking about it as much since then and I never figured it out.  The ‘Hangout’ feature was useful for chatting in groups, but I still can’t be entirely sure that I’m on my page as the owner or a guest.  Still, I have it connected to my blog and get a few comments from time to time.  I use it mostly for sharing news from other authors and sites.

Tumblr

Like the child of blogging and Twitter?  Another one that I attached to my blog, it’s a lot harder to interact on this social media site.  It’s very visual, so long chunks of writing don’t get much attention.  It’s definitely in my ‘every little bit helps’ category.  In fact, I think that’s going to be the phrase for a lot of what’s coming.

Instagram

I actually don’t use this one because I don’t do a lot of camera stuff.  All I can think is that it helps if you’re into selfies.

Youtube

If you can make a video and post it then go ahead.  I lack the know-how to do this and I’m pretty sure I’m boring.  Also, I wouldn’t be able to edit these things and I routinely think faster than I speak, which causes issues.  This is very useful for all you skilled or curious high tech people.

LinkedIn

I’m on there and never really do anything.  My blog posts go there, but it’s a lot about job networking.  I joined a few fiction writing groups and nothing really came of it.  I will give it credit for being in-depth with skills and resumes.  Though it doesn’t strike me as artist friendly.  Also, I’ve been snapped at a few times for endorsing people on the ‘wrong’ skill or when they didn’t want to be endorsement.  That’s a minefield I don’t need.

Path

Connected to blog and have no idea what it is.  The set up was there on WordPress, so I did it.

That’s all I can remember right now.  Did I miss anything?

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Twitter: Brief, Simple, and Kind of Scary

Twitter and Angry Birds (Yahoo Image Search)

Twitter and Angry Birds (Yahoo Image Search)

People are scared of Twitter for some reason.  At least those that haven’t tried it and even then there are various levels of interest.  The social media site has a reputation for being inane and pointless because of how it gets presented.  Truthfully, much of it is inane and pointless because it’s highly limited.  I don’t really understand how it got so big with only 140 characters to work with.  Then again, I say a lot and don’t use a lot of text lingo, which would make it easier.

A very useful trick with Twitter is that you can tweet directly from your book’s Amazon site.  All you have to do is add a hashtag or two along with a hook.  It takes a little time to get into the hang of writing catchy hooks.  Make it catchy and give a hint of what will happen.  Utilize your subplots and teasers for this because the Amazon link takes up some of the space.  I don’t always include the book title since it’s either in the link or there’s a connected pic/blurb from that link.  Try to create a handful of tweets that you can repeat through over time.

Unfortunately, Twitter feeds can be clogged even more than Facebook Groups.  You could make hourly tweets, but people will stop following you because it’s just too much.  Others simply won’t pay attention.  I try to make a promo post every 3-4 hours, but I don’t stress if I’m thrown off.  Hootsuite is another site that you can use to prepare Tweets in advance, which can help if you’re going to be away for a day or two.

Perhaps the most powerful ‘tool’ on Twitter is the hashtag.  These are the words with # in front of them.  You can use it for your genre (#romance, #fantasy), the reader (#nook, #kindle), various Twitter groups that retweet specific hashtags, and anything you think people will search for.  The more general the better because your average person might not look for #hobgoblin or #romanticboatridedowntheriver.

The big downside and danger of Twitter is that people will get bored if all you do is promote your books.  Connecting it to your blog can help mix things up, but some people want to see a human being there.  This is where I fail because I can never think of anything to say within 140 characters.  I write, spend time with the toddler, and do things that I don’t want to announce to the world unless I can tell it like a story.  So, this is definitely a social media site that works very well for the less verbose.

Just like with blogging and Facebook, it’s very useful to Retweet the promos of other authors.  The goal is to promote books that you find interesting and get a retweet in return.  I’ll admit that it doesn’t happen as often as one would like because some people are busy and others simply don’t even try.  Again, that’s not a good pitch for Twitter, but it’s exposure.  Let me just say that NONE of the other social media sites has the same level of networking and genuine interaction that blogging has.  At least in my experience.

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A Knights’ Passage – Now Available on Amazon Kindle

New fantasy compilation on Amazon Kindle! Also hard copies are available.

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Facebook: Land of Books, Promos, and Selfies

Yahoo Image Search

Yahoo Image Search

This is a tricky mistress to use.  I’ve seen many  authors (mostly romance/erotica) use Facebook very successfully.  I’ve also seen many authors get nowhere even when they do the same thing as the successful people.  There’s also a bigger dark side here than other social media sites.  You see a lot more battling for some reason.  It’s strange with Facebook because there’s such a casualness to what people post here that some forget their manners or that other people can see things.  I know that doesn’t create a great pitch for Facebook especially since it’s known for security issues and their ‘pay for advertising’ thing only gets your Author/Book page ‘likes’ and not usually sales.  Still, there are 3 things you can use Facebook for that takes a little more effort than most of the other sites:

Author Page

This can be a key component to your social media network.  Unlike your regular page, this is what you connect your blog to and post about your projects.  You focus on writing here and keep it separate from you personal account, but try to get your friends to help spread the word of your Author Page.  The key to this site is getting ‘likes’ because that’s how people see it.  Personally, I rarely get activity on mine.  I get a few blips whenever I write about my books.  Yet, I’ve seen some authors (mostly romance/erotica) get huge followings and run their Street Teams, Blog Tours, and Cover Reveals through their Author Page.  It helps to make friends with people here and talk shop.

Groups!

Facebook has tons of groups and some of them allow for book promos.  Others are places where authors of the same genre or interest or from every walk of life can discuss their trade.  It might take a little time to find them and you’ll have to put effort into interactions at your own rate.  It is VERY important to know if a group allows for promos or if it’s only for discussions.  You can get banned or reported to FB for doing the wrong thing in the wrong group.

A question here is: How often do you post in these groups?  I used to do a morning and an evening post.  Recently, I’ve been limiting it to an evening post every day and maybe two posts on a Thursday/Friday.  Some people only do it once a week or once every few days.  The problem with these groups is that postings happen very quickly and you’ll get knocked out of the newest 20 within 4-5 minutes.  You could post every hour and become majorly obnoxious, which would do more harm than good.  I’d say once a day and experiment with timing to find what works for you.

One final point with these types of groups and promos is that you shouldn’t make your posts too long.  I use the book blurb of my works from time to time.  Personally, I think you should go for short, clear, exciting, and eye-catching.  If you can show a little humor or throw in foreshadowing then go for it. I use hashtags from time to time even though I don’t know if people use them on Facebook.  Doesn’t hurt.

Sharing!

‘Like’ has become synonymous with Facebook because people hit that damn button for everything.  Yet, there’s a more powerful button on Facebook that authors should try to use and convince others to use.  The ‘SHARE’ button.  It’s right there with ‘like’ and ‘comment’, but it seems to only get used for memes, politics, and anything that even remotely looks like cleavage.  So, if you see an author in a group trying to promote a sale or their new debut and you like the look of it then hit that ‘SHARE’ button.

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Sale!

Get ‘Me and Billy the Kid’ while it’s on sale!

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