Origin of Lloyd Tenay

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Deadpool & Carnage from Marvel Comics

Deadpool & Carnage from Marvel Comics

Lloyd Tenay is the serial killer that Cassidy frees and has as a partner during Crossing Bedlam.  He has a strange origin for both his name and his characterization.  We’ll probably have to go piece by piece here.

The name is the easiest since I’ve had this one on paper for a long time.  Lloyd Tenay first appeared as a hologram computer system in a superhero story.  Then I made him a time traveler in the revamp of that story.  After that he became a government liaison, a time altering madman, an alien, and then I dropped him from the superhero stuff entirely because I felt he was a weak point.  So I grabbed the name for this new guy and it worked surprisingly well.

Unlike Cassidy, Lloyd was more flushed out before I began writing.  He stemmed from the two characters above who are some of my favorites from when I read comics.  I loved Deadpool’s humor and almost joyous glee when fighting alongside an almost suicidal level of confidence.  Carnage is a villain who had the level of brutality and intimidation that I wanted Lloyd to have.  Lloyd’s body type is similar to Cletus Cassidy in that they’re both tall and kind of lanky.  Sometimes I hit the mark and other times I didn’t, but it all seemed to work for the character.  I wanted him to be a whimsical being of chaos who has now stepped into a world that is as crazy as he is.  Almost like he’s come home and wants to make sure people know that a new monster is in town.

One aspect of Lloyd that I attempted was making him a 4th wall breaker.  This didn’t work out as planned and turned more into a spouting of real world pop culture references.  It did should a part of his psychosis where he openly claims to be a character in a fictional story.  This isn’t true 4th wall breaking because he has an explanation for it and he doesn’t talk directly to the audience.  He has a ‘logical’ reason for why he thinks he’s a main character in a story.  Honestly, this is probably for the best because I learned quickly that the 4th wall is a dangerous thing to play with.  Some people want you to go to ‘Family Guy’ level of insanity that destroys the actual story while others don’t want you to tap at the barrier at all.  I think Lloyd being a character who believes he’s a character without knowing for a fact that he’s fictional works better.

People might be wondering why a murderer is tagging along with Cassidy instead of killing her.  There are a few reasons that came about for this, but only one gets admitted to in the book.  Lloyd has no idea what’s going on since he was in jail before the blockade and collapse happened.  He sees Cassidy as his guide, which he is sure is a safer term than sidekick.  She knows the world and it’s made clear that he’s in the dark, so self-preservation tells him to be nice.  Lloyd also isn’t really anti-social and he enjoys having a friend.  The fact that she’s as efficient a killer and can be as ruthless as him is an added bonus.  A final reason that I came up with on the fly is that Lloyd would be a recognizable name since he was an infamous serial killer.  It would be like if Charles Manson was walking around.  Cassidy acts as backup and almost a calming factor when people realize who they’re facing.  After all, Lloyd might have mellowed if he’s traveling with this young woman and that consideration is enough of a pause for her to get an opening shot off.

Finally, weapons were a big consideration for Lloyd.  Cassidy had the guns and explosives, which made me want to have Lloyd go for blades and spontaneous weapons.  Being a murderer, I felt it would make sense for him to enjoy a close kill.  Unlike Cassidy who kills solely to survive, Lloyd takes joy and excitement from it, which means he wants it to be very hands on.  I gave him a lot of knives and an eventual machete, but this posed the problem of how he would work against people with guns.  The answer was a paintball gun with specialty ammo like curry powder, black pepper, bleach, and ipecac.  Lloyd is remarkably patient, so hiding until he gets that one shot to the face is something he would do.  He does leave the gunfights to Cassidy and takes small shots when he can, so he’s fully aware of this limitation.  Curious to see how that evolves.  It’s all about how he handles the situation, I guess, which means it’s a good thing that Lloyd is incredibly smart.  Almost feel sorry for anyone who messes with these two.

Now for the cover art teaser.  Keep in mind he has not been put in the cover scene yet:

Lloyd Tenay by Jon Hunsinger

Lloyd Tenay by Jon Hunsinger

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Thursday – A Little Personal – Call for Beta Readers

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UNCLE JOHN NEEDS YOU FOR A BETA READ

I am currently at a point with the third book in the John Cannon thriller trilogy where I would appreciate some input from beta readers. As you may know My GRL, His Revenge and now Our Justice will make up the complete story of John Cannon and his ongoing challenge with the billionaire Matt Jacobs.

Here is the blurb

Matt Jacobs is the money and power behind a splinter terrorist group out for justice to repay atrocities he believes committed by the West on his Palestine homeland and people. Matt despises John for continually thwarting his plans and would like nothing better than to kill him. He comes to realize it is better to use John to help carry out his vendetta. His latest scheme is to use John’s hero status as a conduit to eliminate the President of the United States. John is prepared to…

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Questions 3: Changing for the Sake of Changing

Dr Evil

Dr. Evil

These questions stem from two things.  One is that I’m editing and that requires making changes.  The other is that I accidentally clicked on the link that led me to the ‘new’ WordPress post maker.  This thing is terrible.  I see no borders to the area I’m writing in and it seems you have to type in the schedule time.  So this post might not even go off.  I have no idea if I can add YouTube videos to this since the option is no longer listed under media.  We all know these problems, so the questions:

  1. Have you ever caught yourself making changes for the sake of making changes?  Did you keep them?
  2. Do you feel it is harder for you to accept changes or fight against them?
  3. Is there a risk of changing something so much that you lose interest in the project and how would you avoid this pitfall if it exists?

Oh my god!  I can’t use this any more.  It’s terrible.  So sterile and bizarre.  Like my laptop forgot to load chunks of the screen.

 

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Musiville Needs Your Love: Free Download

Musiville, the second children’s book in the award-winning Niditales series created by Dimitris Fousekis and me, will be free between January 27th and 31st on Amazon. This is to to encourage …

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Origin of Cassidy

Ripley from Aliens & Sarah Connor from Terminator

Ripley from Aliens & Sarah Connor from Terminator

Cassidy has very little influence beyond ‘tough young woman with guns and a penchant for cursing’.  At one point I imagined here betraying her allies because she has no use for them, but that quickly died off.  So really I had a lot of trouble giving her depth beyond their goal and action scenes.  She’s the one with the guns, has a knack for explosives, a big desire to survive, and rather tame in personality.  Part of this is because she’s standing next to Lloyd and has to play straight man to his insanity.  This is where her ‘Shut the f$*% up, Lloyd’ catchphrase comes from.  So, what can I say about Cassidy?

I want her to show that she is fully capable of defending herself and still has room to grow as a character.  She spends Crossing Bedlam under her mother’s shadow and it’s hinted that she might have spent a lot of time shielded from the worst.  Yet she’s still pretty broken in terms of not getting attached to others and having no qualms about killing an enemy.  There’s a scene where she has to face a biker gang in a fast food restaurant that really demonstrates that she’s a force to be cautious of.  I think that’s a big part of her characterization too.  Much like the action heroes of old, Cassidy reveals herself more by action than words.

This isn’t to say that she’s stupid or turns to violence immediately.  She’s the one who put the entire journey together and acts as a guide for Lloyd and the readers.  Early on, you can tell that Cassidy is big into making deals and staying out of trouble until she knows what the problem is.  The polar opposite of her new friend, so there’s going to be some friction there.  It is hinted that she might have dependency issues at times, but that stems from her never being on her own. There’s comfort in having a companion when the world has gone insane.  Although she also occasionally hints that Lloyd is more property than friend.

Just writing this, I think Cassidy is a hard one to pin down in this book.  You’re catching her soon after her mother is killed and she’s put her plan into action.  The best way to explain it is that she starts out in a transition state and her journey will help her reach a point where she can move on.  Hints of a more vivid personality and demeanor appear, but usually in action scenes.  So Cassidy could also be an adrenaline junkie or just as crazy as Lloyd.  Really hard to explain fully without spoilers.

I know it sounds like a lot of guesswork here and that’s odd for a character’s origin.  It’s only that Cassidy appeared in my mind with no prompting, so she doesn’t have a template like most of my characters.  Her origin is that of a thought stepping out of the mental mist and it’s still coagulating.  I do want her to be tough and confident, but also show a touch of vulnerability like the other characters.  Her world has been ripped apart in more ways than one and multiple times in her life.  She reveals that she lost a baby brother in the first year of the chaos and her father disappeared after he got the family settled.  Her mother did whatever it took to keep them alive, housed, and fed until they had some semblance of a life.  Now that’s been taken too and one of the first things Cassidy does is trade the apartment that she’s called home for a decade along with most of what’s inside.  She’s kind of cutting ties and on a journey to sever the final string before moving on with her life.

A lot of this has to inferred though because the characters don’t blatantly show their emotions and thoughts very often.  So maybe this post will give people another side of Cassidy and also help me evolve her when I write a sequel.  No idea which story to take for that though.  So many choices.

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Teaser Tuesday: At the Hands of Stephen

Taking a full chunk of The Mercenary Prince‘s prologue here.  Gives a hint of what will come and I realized I hadn’t mentioned Trinity in a while.  Hopefully it gets people stirring about the book.  Really isn’t much else to do to set this up.  There are some spoilers as usual, but nothing as major as *censored for your reading pleasure*.  Good to finally get that off my chest.

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

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Two #KindleFire #Giveaways and a book recommendation.

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Just a quick post to give everyone the heads up on a couple of giveaways. The prize in both is a lovely Kindle Fire. Oh yeh. The first is the freekindlegiveaway.com ‘Discover’ Giveaway and this week we are mostly discovering, Science Fiction! Sqeee! (including my book)

To quote the site: ‘This Giveaway is a DREAM for the true Bookworms who participate! Not only do you get a chance to win a Kindle Fire OR a Gift Card/Paypal Cash…but everyone who enters will receive FREE books and special bookish offers!’

There are 20 other smashing science fiction authors taking part who will be discounting or giving away their books. They will get in touch with you after the giveaway has ended to let you know what discounts or freebies they are offering.

You can find the giveaway here:

http://www.freekindlegiveaway.com/discover-giveaway/

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Origin of the Shattered States

From Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy Movie

From Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy Movie

To be fair, the events leading up to the story of Crossing Bedlam isn’t as severe as seen above.  It’s only the United States that gets hit and I’m even iffy on calling this post-apocalyptic since the rest of the world is fine.  Still that’s the closest category or genre I can use besides Rated-R, action, buddy comedy adventure.  Don’t think Amazon has a list for that.

Now a little background on what the ‘Shattered States’ are and this is all that is known in the books too.  The rest of the world got fed up with the United States for some reason and decided to put it in a timeout.  Walls on the northern and southern borders are heavily armed to prevent escapees.  A global fleet patrols the waters to recapture or kill anyone who tries to escape.  Your fate depends on which member of the fleet you run into.  Some time after the blockade was put up, Washington DC got nuked and that ended the Federal Government.  It’s been a decade since that happened and the remaining locals are doing what they can to survive.  Various cultures have appeared around the nation with some coming right out of fiction.  Trade has taken over actual currency in every place, except Nevada.  Due to still having resources, foreign businesses still make deals with local traders and use special passes to exchange necessities.  Even with all of this, the place is a mess and most people do what they can to survive.

The ‘Shattered States’ wasn’t always like this.  The idea actually came about long ago as something entirely different.  I wanted to keep the same area origin, but focus on a group who were trying to reunite the country.  The leader was ruthless, but the POV character was his second-in-command.  She was a mercenary with more compassion than her leader and the freedom to make big decisions.  I guess she is similar to Cassidy, but only in gender and toughness.  There was a large cast of characters taken from all across the country with specialties and stories.  Every state had dangers, primary uses, and resources for trade.  I spent a week looking up what each place was known for and how that would survive the collapse.  The stories were even plotted out.

Then I realized I was going too political with the story and got bored.  The notebook remained in the middle of the pile and the back of my mind.  I still liked the idea of having the broken world, but not that story.  Then I watched Mad Max: Fury Road . . . and nothing changed.  For a year, ‘The Shattered States’ was a dead tale that would fade away into my personal obscurity.  So, what happened?

Dean Winchester

Dean Winchester

Seriously, I’ve got no idea how this came about.  I was on the exercise bike and I started thinking of a story where a woman traversed a dangerous landscape.  She was a good person who teamed up with a bunch of criminals, so there was an aspect of her falling to their level.  The longer I thought about it, the more the other characters fell out of the story and only two remained.  I still wrote up an outline with all of them, but quickly noticed that I barely touched on the others.  In fact, I seemed to only focus on their death while the other two had meat to them.  The woman had turned into a survivor type in my mind and I really wanted to pair her off with a psychotic, unpredictable maniac.  So Cassidy and Lloyd Tenay appeared with no quest or world to call their own.  Coming up with her wanting to bring her mother’s ashes somewhere was easy, but I still didn’t have a location.

It was the character’s apathy and not caring about how their world fell apart that brought me back to ‘The Shattered States’ notebook.  Everything I needed for a foundation was already written.  The politics I didn’t have the mind and patience for weren’t necessary with these two.  Why would a serial killer and survivor give a thought to events that were bigger than them?  Neither felt like they could save the world or even that it was worth saving.  It wasn’t that type of story any more and I really got into coming up with wild adventures along Interstate 80.

The series became entirely about Rated-R fun and ‘The Shattered States’ certainly exploded under this idea.  There is a level of wackiness to the violence and adventure along with moments of seriousness.  It all kind of fell together along with other pieces that reveal a bit more of the world as your read along.  As far as the original idea, that is probably dead in the water.  That group might be operating somewhere, but Lloyd and Cassidy might never meet them.  If they do then I don’t see them joining up or even getting involved unless supplies are offered.  Lloyd might be running out of graphic t-shirts by that point and Cassidy is always looking for new guns or CD’s to stop her companion from singing.  The crazy bastard can’t carry a tune at all.

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