Announcing my new editing service

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Welcome to my shingle-hanging announcement, folks! As of today, I’m open for business as an editor of indie books destined for publication on Amazon et al.

I’m calling the operation Indie-Scribable. Indie for the indie part, and “scribable” for scribes. Clever, eh?

Come on over and have a look at my brand-spanking-new website.

I haven’t talked about it on the blog, but for most of my career I was an editor. I started at a medical publisher back in St. Louis, copyediting three or four different journals — such learned organs as Investigative Ophthalmology and Visual Science, the Journal of Allergy and Clinical Immunology, and, my favorite, the Journal of Enterostomal Therapy! Oh joy.

After that I was managing editor of the American Heart Association journal, Circulation, and then the Journal of the American College of Cardiology.

Yes, I paid my dues in the…

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From Fantasy Author to Researching Author

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Crossing Bedlam required that I do something different in both preparation and writing.  As a fantasy author, I never had to do more than look up various weapons and any pre-existing monsters I was using.  Half the time I didn’t have to find more than a picture since the magic system was mine, the world was mine, and the characters were mine.  Windemere is all in my head, so ‘research’ resembles meditation or sleeping while sitting up.  Yes, that second one has been assumed at times.

The Shattered States is the real world after a disaster or whatever you want to call what happened.  So I can’t go making up states, cities, landmarks, and creatures.  There are the Half-Deads and escaped zoo animals, but everything has to be in the real world.  I had to look up the workings of a paintball gun, various vehicles, weapons of all types, clothing, and even religion for one scene.  These weren’t even the most difficult pieces and I’ll tackle the big one in a bit.

One thing I learned in regards to research is that it helps to do as much beforehand, which is a duh.  Yet, one should be ready to pause or find a break to look up a spontaneous addition.  For example, there is a part where remote controlled drones are used in a contest.  I had to look up pictures of these and figure out if they were a viable tool for the situation.  This was not planned, so it caused a delay in that day’s writing.  Not a bad thing since I know what to look for and have some info if I want to use them again.

Gandalf

Gandalf

The hardest part of Crossing Bedlam was geography.  Need a new city or landmark in Windemere?  Listen to music and create one around the scene that I’m writing.  Need a new city or landmark in the Shattered States?  Gotta get my tush to Google Maps and scroll along Interstate-80 or wherever the action is to find something that fits what I’m looking for.  There’s a scene in Reno, NV that had me searching for any kind of warehouse or mall structure just off I-80.  I stumbled onto a very cool area in Indiana that worked as a protected hospital, but I’m forgetting the name.  All of this took days of zooming, scrolling, and switching between Google Maps and Google Earth.  These areas had to found again at the point of writing too, so I could get the descriptions close and decide on how the action would work.

And it got more difficult the further I got from Long Island.  That’s my area, which I know without the help of a map.  I’ve been to New Jersey and Pennsylvania too.  After that, I’m in the dark about cultures and specifics.  I figure I can get away with some of it since those would be different after 10 years of anarchy.  Yet I still needed to know about the terrain and what you can find in the regions.  Cleveland, OH was a headache because I couldn’t find much about the interior of the Rock ‘n Roll Hall of Fame.  The zoo map made the later action easier at least.

Now, many people would say I shouldn’t write about areas that I’ve never visited.  Well, that kind of kills the story, doesn’t it?  Can’t really make the long trip either with the kid and not much in the way of spendable funds.  So I have to work with what I can get my hands on, which is a lot of maps.  Is it perfect?  No, but I calm myself by saying that I’m working with an imperfect world.  Still, I do hope to make things easier for myself in future books.  I think there’s one more cross country adventure, but it’ll be much different than this one.

So, what was the biggest amount of research you’ve done for a story?

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Indie Author Services

jorobinson176's avatarJo Robinson

I’m making very good inroads catching up with my emails, but still not all clear there. I want to thank you all from the bottom of my heart for your loving and kind wishes, and I will get to each and every one of you. I’m not quite at warp zoom speed yet, but I’ll get there. I have to get stuck into earning an income from what I do straight away (to avoid the whole camping out under a tree thing), so I’ve had my head down for a while sorting out my website. I’m launching my services now at really low prices to begin with to get a feel for costing, and I’ll adjust them upwards a little later, so grabbing them now even if you only want them for later would be a fabulous idea. I’ve taken down my pre-made book covers page here, and replaced it…

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Not a blog tour – lunch with Helen Jones

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It was all Helen’s fault… we wouldn’t have been at St Albans at all except we were meeting her not too far away. Having said that… just look what we would have missed! So we had plenty to talk about as we regained the car in the rain and headed off in the general direction of lunch and the third of the meet-ups we had planned with blogging friends.

This time we were meeting Helen Jones, author of the fantasy series The Ambeth Chronicles… and if you haven’t come across her yet, have a wander over to her blog, Journey to Ambeth.

We were far too early and debating whether or not to get a table. We needn’t have worried… Helen was already there too … a wave, a smile… and, for me at least, it felt as if I was meeting an old friend. The three of…

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Smorgasbord Open House – Meet author Christoph Fischer

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More on Facebook Ads: Other Authors’ Experience

I will conclude this 3-part special on Facebook ads by sharing other people’s experiences. David Penny’s Experience I recently came across a great post by British author David Penny. He…

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Snow, Editing, and the Looming Inevitable

(EDIT: Guess what I plan on seeing for Valentine’s Day!  If you said Deadpool then give yourself a cookie.)

Yes, I have Crossing Bedlam coming out next weekend as long as things don’t wrong.  I mean, it isn’t like I have a history of last minute disasters or plans getting crotch-punched   soon out of the gate.  Sure, my plan to get the books for this year edited before next weekend and the kid’s break is dead.  I mean it’s entirely possible (nope) for me to edit (HA!) a 276 page book by Friday (HELL NO!) even though I have some appointments (OF COURSE) and the Super Bowl (GO, BEER & HOT WINGS!) kills the weekend.  Let’s just say I’m sticking to the idea that pizza is my reward for getting things done on time.  So . . . no pizza for me until I get to start writing Ritual of the Lost Lamb and see if I can meet that deadline.

As you can tell, things didn’t go smoothly this week.  I’m not exactly sure where things went wrong.  I remember a few arguments because people around here are tripping over each other.  Got a much needed haircut that took a chunk of the day since I prefer to walk there instead of drive.  Then the snow/ice/sleet/rain/afternoon warmth of yesterday that cancelled school.  The kid being home wasn’t a problem because I had to drive my dad to a doctor’s appointment . . . in the storm.  Talk about harrowing since it was terrible visibility, idiots on the road, ice patches, and this is the first time I’ve driven in a snowstorm since 2014.  Not to mention this comedy of errors:

  • They coned off part of the parking lot at the doctor’s office, so that only part of it was plowed.  It was set up after we went inside, so guess who owned the lone car that was on the wrong side of the cones.  My dad also said we could stop at McDonalds like I promised my son since it didn’t look ‘that bad’.  At least until we hit one parkway that had us driving INTO the storm and that was just nerve-wracking.  We almost got stuck in the unplowed parking lot and there were ‘obstacles’ in the road home.  To make matters even more amusing, the plows went down our block and cut me off from the driveway and parking on our side of the street.  Don’t worry though.  By the afternoon, we cleared those spaces and I hopped in my car to take the space . . . which the mailman took before I could finish my u-turn.

On the plus side, I got to claim the one outlet in the waiting room.  The chairs were uncomfortable and I kept thinking people were watching me, but I did get some editing done.  Only thing that went wrong was that ‘Bohemian Rhapsody’ turned up on Pandora and not singing to that is a battle.  The other people in that waiting room didn’t seem too happy to be there and me breaking into an off-key version of Queen probably wouldn’t have helped me.

That’s been my week and I’m hoping next week is lower key, so I have even a sliver of a chance to get my editing done.  The kid gets a week off after Valentine’s Day, which means I won’t be doing much writing then.  Maybe starting on a plan for Chasing Bedlam and getting posts ready for March.  Well, I’ll be promoting the new book too, but I’m learning that there’s only so much I can do there.  Money is tight, which means I have to cut some paid ads and I still have no Facebook luck.  Needless to say, I’m stressing a bit and hoping things fall into place.  There are other things adding to the stress, but I’m not going to get into them here.

So, what is the plan?

  1. Finish editing Charms of the Feykin.
  2. Start and hopefully finish editing The Spirit Well.
  3. Fiddle with future ideas.
  4. Clean and prep for Super Bowl.
  5. Watch Super Bowl.
  6. Hopefully publish Chasing Bedlam.
  7. Watch ‘Deadpool’ next Sunday.
  8. Reclaim the Deadpool plushie my sister got me and the kid claimed after 5 minutes.
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Deadpool

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How Video Games Can Transform Your Writing (Guest post by Author Allison D. Reid)…

Awesome post and a great topic.

Chris The Story Reading Ape's avatarChris The Story Reading Ape's Blog

No, I haven’t lost my mind, and I’m not a video game addict either—I am totally serious. I’ve been passionate about writing my whole life; participated in writing groups, gone to conferences, taken more classes on writing than I can remember, and even majored in writing in college. But it was through a video game that I learned to really be a story teller and develop characters that breathed a life of their own.

Find a game where you can roleplay with others.

I’m not talking about your standard shoot-em-up, follow the canned story line from point A to point Z until you defeat the big boss kind of game though. I’m talking about the open-ended kind. The games that give you an interactive world full of other players, and opportunities to challenge yourself by building skills and going on quests, either of the game’s making or your own. The…

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The Fine Art of Cursing

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Minion Meme

Warning: Crude language ahead.

This might not be a long post because it feels like a simple topic.  Just like sex and violence, cursing is a personal preference category.  Some people freak out when you say ‘damn’ while others laugh when you say stuff that is a lot more vulgar.  It’s rather interesting how we have a saying ending with ‘words will never hurt me’ and we also have a list of words you can’t say in most situations.  Most of them have mundane versions that you can say or you can use #*^@! instead.  I’m sure nobody can figure out what f*ck or sh^t is.

Unlike sex and violence, cursing seems to stem a lot more from manners than dangerous activities.  I think this comes from us wanting to act and be perceived as mature.  Swear words are for ruffians, criminals, the ill-educated, and certain classic authors. Personally, I don’t think the use of cursing is always a sign of low education and intelligence.  Some people are amazingly cunning with their use of swear words.   Again, that’s just a personal opinion and that’s really all you hear on the topic.

What does this have to do with Crossing Bedlam?  Well, I use a lot of swear words in there.  Mostly ‘fuck’ and it even has a place in Cassidy’s catchphrase, which is ‘Shut the fuck up, Lloyd!’.  The others show up from time to time, but it’s weird.  I’ve used the mundane versions for so long that those have become second nature unless it’s a specific situation that makes me think of them.  For example, I think Lloyd says butt and rear more than ass.  Yet, it seems those are still not as bad as the terrifying f-bomb that will peel the wallpaper, boil your goldfish, mismatch your socks, and make your dear grandmother cry even though she spews curse words like a she has a permanently stubbed toe.  Did I have a point here?  Maybe.

I think choosing to use or not use swear words is an important one.  Not because of your own preferences, but for the story and the opinions of your readers.  Swear words won’t work in Legends of Windemere for some reason.  They just don’t feel right like they do with Crossing Bedlam.  I made the conscious decision to use them instead of doing something like this:

Adventure Time

Adventure Time

I have to stand by that decision and make it clear from the beginning.  For no other reason that people hate being surprised by potty-mouth.  Also I really shouldn’t make any apologies for this decision.  So does anyone else use curse words in their stories or refuse to even touch them?

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Questions 3: How Would You End the World?

One of the difficult things about Crossing Bedlam was deciding how to throw the country into chaos.  There are many things to factor in that ranges from geography to psychology.  Not to mention technology, sociology, anthropology, and tons of -ologies.  You really have to take the world and rewrite it in a way that will work for the story and work off your own view of reality.  So every author will focus on something different like resources, rebuilding humanity, madness of the survivors, or whatever will get their story moving.

  1. How would you write the end of the world or a country?
  2. What would you retain from the old world after the collapse?
  3. What is your favorite aspect of post-apocalyptic/post-disaster worlds?
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