A Pocket Full of Poesies – A Review

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“A Pocket Full of Poesies” is a poetry book by a writer and dear friend, T. J. Therien, and I had the honor of receiving a promotional copy of it, with a delightful message inside.

This poetry book is very gentle and accessible. It is a book of love poems, but for me, it is different than love poetry books I encountered before.

More often than not, love tends to be over complicated in books, especially poetry books. There is hours and hours of narrative, where I get the feelings the emotions are not honestly described. I feel like I am simply being told what I want to hear or what the writer has been told to write to appear more sweet. This is not a book like that!

Tim’s love poems feel simply very real, very explosive, and very relate-able.And relate-able to the good parts, not just the sorrow…

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5 Tips For Growing Your Blog

Dan Alatorre AUTHOR's avatarDAN ALATORRE

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I know you hate stats but… don’t let all the bar charts fool you, this is a good post. And funny. Read it.

If you don’t track what you’re doing, how do you know what’s working? 

If writing books is what you wanna do, and creating a blog is part of your author platform, then occasionally you need to stop into the accounting office of your little book business and ask the number crunchers what the numbers say.

Might be good news!

Might not.

Here, we have some stuff that looks impressive.

i-was-there-once I’m kicking ass! Maybe.

With TWO full months to go in 2016, I have already exceeded the numbers for all of 2015! Woo hoo, right?

Well…

Yes. You folks have gathered here in greater numbers than last year, and I’m happy about that. You are getting the writerly stuff you need, having fun reading the…

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Raven’s Game Part 29 #horror #Halloween #thriller

Winchester Mystery House

Winchester Mystery House

The platform stops at the penthouse and tilts to gently slide Gemma through the open doorway. She finds herself standing in a narrow room with a single door that is made of dented metal and a small, frosted window. A pulse of fear stops her from taking another step until the ravens swarm in from the elevator shaft. Their wings graze her skin while they fly back and forth, their movements blocking Gemma off from going anywhere besides through the quivering door. With no other choice, she enters the penthouse and finds that there is nothing besides the master bedroom. The windows no longer have their glass, allowing a high wind to churn through the room and move the sheets on the vacant bed. All of the dresser drawers have been opened to reveal colonies of moths and the remains of clothing. The smell of paint draws Gemma’s attention to the walk-in closet, which is empty and colored a bright crimson. The flushing of a rattling toilet comes from the direction of the small bathroom, but there is no door that would give access to the room.

Alone and dressed in white, Dawn sits on the edge of the bed and gently strokes the empty space next to her. For a moment, the sheets seem to billow up into the form of a person, but deflates to make Gemma think it is nothing more than the constant wind. Two ravens sit on the headboard, only one of them moving while the other remains so still that it could be mistaken for being stuffed. Spinning the spoon in her free hand, Dawn dips it into a nearby jar and scoops up some of the jellified brain that is inside. She holds the bite over the pillow for several seconds before frowning and tossing the utensil out the window. The active raven soars after the shiny object, snatching it in its beak and obediently returning it to the hotelier. With a sigh, she returns the spoon to the jar and plants a passionate kiss on the pillow that lingers for a minute.

“My husband doesn’t like taking his medicine when company is watching,” Dawn explains as she comes within a few inches of her guest. She touches the detective’s crimson hair, her fingers leaving a glistening trail of dew. “Now, we need to discuss how the game will proceed, kitty. My husband can make the guests return to normal and forget the unpleasantness. Those who lost loved ones will believe they are here to mourn the loss, which happened somewhere else. All neat, tidy, and other words that mean the same thing. This still doesn’t tell me what to do about you. Wiping your memory means we start from scratch and we’ve come too far in our relationship to shake that Etch-A-Sketch of a brain in your widdle, bitty skull. My suggestion is that you take a day to inform your partner’s family about his death, pick up some fresh clothes, and meet me in the morning for another round. This time, I have this glorious test that involves an arsonist.”

Gemma steps around the other woman, her good eye locked on the empty bed. “You have an entire building full of hostages. Not to mention, I’m on the top floor and have already been launched out of your building once. Keep in mind that the instant you lose your leverage over me, I’ll take you out.”

“Still so angry. Did somebody spritz you with a water bottle?” asks the grinning woman before her eye patch blinks. Opening her mouth to speak, Dawn stops and stomps her foot as if she is being scolded. “I will not let me new pet go. Stop arguing with me, dear, because you’re too weak. No, I won’t give any of your power back until you apologize. Telling me I’m pretty doesn’t count because you tell me that all the time. You know exactly what I want. Well, if I make the unicorn myself then it isn’t you giving me a present. Take a note, kitty. Sometimes you have to force romance in a relationship.”

“I’ll take your word for it,” the detective replies in a dull voice. She squirms against the sensation of ants crawling around her skin and rolls up her sleeves to find one of the insects on each arm. “So, why is your husband sick with? Also, where is he?”

“Corvus is in the bed. Maybe he’s just being shy with you,” Dawn answers, a bead of sweat running down the side of her head. Grabbing the jar of brains, she tries again to find her invisible husband and meets with the same failure. “Being away from Raven’s Hold has made him very weak. Too much normalcy in the world for him to stay healthy. You see, he has the power to make everything a reality, which forced him to hide from humanity. He never thought his isolation would have side-effects. My husband was away for too long and now he needs to eat brain pieces to survive. Harvested just after the kill when they’re warm and still holding the burst of insanity that comes with facing death. Still, I hope one day to find a thalamus that will cure him completely. A special one that sings to our minds and allows me to give him back his great power.”

“Maybe it’s me.”

“I considered that, but you’re too normal.”

“Then, why am I even worth your time?”

“Because the truth is in your face and you still cling to what you think is real.”

“Sounds like a compliment.”

“Just a more eloquent way of calling you an idiot.”

Unsure of what else to say, Gemma turns her back on Dawn and gets within a few steps of the window. She rubs her badge while trying to put a finger on what feels more wrong than everything else she is seeing. The detective is surprised that she has become fairly numb to the strange happenings that surround the hotel. Whether illusions or truly the work of a supernatural being, she finds that none today’s events have yanked on her instincts more than something Dawn recently said. Fighting through a mental haze, Gemma pulls out her phone and takes another look at the notes from the wedding dress and tuxedo.

“You were born in 1980,” the detective whispers more to herself than the other woman. She spots the hint of a frown on her enemy’s face and returns to show her the pictures. “My partner found these notes right before he died. This is something you don’t want other people to know, but I still don’t know why. You’re a year older than your husband according to these notes. Now they could be incorrect or I’m misinterpreting them. Still, if I’m right then Corvus couldn’t have been around for centuries.”

“My bitch of a mother made those to hurt me,” Dawn hisses while backing away from the phone. She kneels next to the bed while a crack of thunder shakes the building. “My husband has been around for a long time. He made himself known to me when I was a child and then waited for me to find him. Back then, our times together were very short, but I loved him dearly. 1981 must have been the day we first met. My mother mistook that for his birthdate. Yes, I’m sure that was what happened.”

“Except she made mention of a few incidents prior to Corvus appearing,” the detective continues, her voice having to rise above the sound of flapping wings. A gust of wind threatens to knock her toward the window, but she hooks her arm around the bed’s footboard. “She called him your imaginary friend and I can believe that. I don’t see him. Nobody has ever seen your husband, except you. If he had such great power then wouldn’t he have taken you away as a child? Why did you have to find him if he could do anything that he wants?”

“Because I needed to mature,” the hotelier declares, her voice quivering. Prismatic tears slip from beneath her golden eye patch, each one burning through the sheet. “You lack the ability to understand us. He was alone and so was I. Then we became one and set out to make the world a better place. I live to follow his example. Your questions prove that you can’t even begin to comprehend the truth.”

Gemma swipes her phone until it stops on a drawing of a little girl standing alone in front of a bird-covered tree. “I think I understand everything. You’re the one behind all of this. Corvus was an imaginary friend that gave you an excuse for everything you did. The voice in your head that helped you avoid feeling guilty for taking lives. Whatever it is that you’ve done in this hotel or Vegas as been by your own hand.”

“Of course it was because he gave me his power,” Dawn replies with a laugh. Sliding her hand along the sheets, she abruptly stops and turns with terror in her eyes. “Corvus? Honey? Dear? Where did you go? Don’t listen to the kitty! She has no idea what she’s talking about. I beg of you to think about what we have. We found each other and now we’re not alone. Please don’t leave me with the normal people. They aren’t any fun. They’re always staring at me and treating me like a monster. Why are you abandoning me!?”

“Because he never existed, Dawn.”

“You drove him away.”

“How could I if I’ve never seen him?”

“Never any fun in normal.”

“So you’ve said before.”

“Never any fun in normal.”

“I’m placing you under arrest, Dawn Addison.”

“Never any fun in normal!”

Dawn’s voice hits a pitch that shatters the jar of brains and causes the two ravens to explode into a rain of feathers. She remains kneeling by the bed, her hands gripping the sheets that bleed from beneath her nails. More of her tears flow from her eyes to become streams of colorful acid that melt through the floor. Cracks run through the walls as Heaven’s Nest shakes and the roof begins to sag. The door to the elevator shaft falls off the wall, revealing brick and cement that Gemma has no way of breaking through. Screams from below cause Dawn to cry even louder, which shatters every glass object in the building. With a final sob, the crumbling floor beneath the two women gives way and they plummet into a horrific cascade of stone, metal, wood, and bodies.

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Preparing for the Home Stretch: Final First Draft

For the 2’s of people that have stuck with me this month, Raven’s Game will be ending on the 31st.  Hope people have been enjoying it.  Having the late day post has certainly helped me clear up time during the day for other projects.  One can only imagine what I would have accomplished without the dental issues, exhaustion, family emergencies, abrupt cold, and other delays.  Anyway, I’m thinking of posting about Raven’s Game on Thursday to get feedback.  I’d do it earlier, but things will be a little busy at the beginning of the week.

What’s going on?  Halloween, silly!  Tomorrow I get to rest up and Monday is my son’s Halloween parade then trick-or-treating.  Flipping a coin to see if I do biking in the morning since I’ll be walking a lot.  Going to be homework, dinner, costume, and then out once both parents are accounted for.  It was on Wednesday that we kind of had a dry run with a Safe Trick-or-Treat at the high school.  He had fun, but there was a lot of noise, colors, and movement.  It was sensory overload for him, so he was in a daze from beginning to end.  You basically start at one side of the school and walk through the different sections to get candy.  Only managed to get one picture:

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He looks a little distressed, but he was happy.  This was the halfway mark of the event and he loosened up near the end.  Unfortunately, you can’t ease into it because of the crowd that is at the front.  It’s only when the flow thins out that it becomes easier for a kid like him.  Once we were in the lobby, he was jumping around and asking for a piece of candy.  Then he danced with his reflection in the door, which is good to see because it means he snaps out of the funk within seconds instead of hours.  Trust me when I say this is great news for him.

Now, it’ll be Tuesday when I get into the next project that will be repeatedly defined as bittersweet. That’s when I begin writing Legends of Windemere: Warlord of the Forgotten Age.  I have a post going up in December that talks a little about this, but I’m waiting until I really finish before I take a Thursday to talk about writing ‘The End’ on Legends of Windemere.  It’ll be a year before it’s published, but there won’t be any more first drafts with Luke, Nyx, Sari, Timoran, Delvin, Dariana, Fizzle, and their friends in their adventures.  Some will die and others will retire, but this is really where their story ends.  It’ll be hard to say good-bye even though some will appear in cameos if I continue writing.  That’s something to think about, especially since I might start 2017 with the one-shot book to close up loose ends.  Might not publish it until a year after the series ends though.

Outlining the final book was the big project this week.  Took me until Wednesday because the original was 26 chapters long and I chopped it down to 19-20.  We’ll see if the condensed stuff works or I add to it, but I needed a lot of ground to cover.  Not to mention I didn’t understand some of my own notes.  The hardest part was the last day where I was piecing together the battle that spans several chapters.  It isn’t a simple slugfest, but a lot of tricks, turns, and chaos.  This is mostly listing the notes to hit like big injuries, deaths, etc.  Hardest part was figuring out the final act of the fight.  Last chapter was easy with the closing section and ‘8 years later’.  There’s another issue that I’ll post about tomorrow because I’m still unsure what to do with it.

A smaller project of the week was scratching my head of the superhero stories, but I’m sure people are tired of that chat.  Just sorting the heroes and thinking about how to put things together.  Not to mention if I keep them in Windemere or not.  Anyway, the real next project after Windemere will probably end up being prepping the outlines for the Dawnfang series, War of Nyt.  Need to double check the spelling since it was ‘Realm of the Night’ for a decade before I realized it didn’t make any sense.  This series will be darker than Legends, but I’ll be keeping my humor in there at some points.  Not sure of the source since Clyde and Mab aren’t really big on jokes.  Although, Mab can be insultingly sarcastic at times.  The comedy may have to come more from the supporting cast or Clyde could have a warped sense of humor.  After all, he killed a human with an ear of corn once, so he can’t be all bad.

Goals for the week

  1. HALLOWEEN!
  2. TRICK-OR-TREATING!
  3. Start writing Warlord of the Forgotten Age
  4. Continue biking in mornings.
  5. Read more ‘Fairy Tail’ manga.
  6. Try to avoid the election crud.  Keep hearing the phrase ‘how low can you go?’ in my head.
  7. Poke at the superheroes a bit more.  Really need to kidn . . . find a sounding board around here.
  8. Resign myself to the fact that it’s no longer shorts and t-shirt weather.
  9. Resign myself to the fact that guys get shafted when it comes to long-sleeved graphic shirts.  Superman, Batman, Avengers, rock bands, beer, and most of those on some kind of gray background.  At least for the places I have coupons with.  I can wear my solitary graphic shirt only so many times in a row.
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Raven’s Game Part 28 #horror #Halloween #thriller

Lalaurie Mansion

Lalaurie Mansion

“I hope you realize that shooting her might not work,” Max says as he looms out of the solid wall. The yellow-tinted ghost scratches at the gash across his throat, which drips harmless, star-like blood. “You only have two choices, Cook. Go back downstairs and call to apologize or keep climbing and make things worse. I guess you could climb up and apologize in person. That might be better.”

“Nice try, but Max wouldn’t suggest any of those options,” Gemma replies while she hooks her arm around the ladder. A violent tremor shakes the building and a cart full of towels falls into the shaft. “I take it you’re listening, Dawn. At first, I thought all of this was done by special effects or hallucinogenic gases that are pumped throughout the building. Then I went to that abandoned play area. Made no sense that the kids were safe while the kidnappers were stumbling into traps. Let’s remember that they had to have been down there for hours, so why didn’t they set anything off before? I’m thinking it was for my benefit because you don’t want me to leave the game. That means, you’re not going to kill me until you have to.”

“Does she have to?” asks the phantom while drifting toward a door. Max throws them open in time for a woman to fall backwards and plunge into the shadows. “Guess you’re not going to shoot her. What about Corvus? Any plan for him?”

“You will find out when I get there, Addison.”

“My name is Max.”

“Max is dead and I’m not in the mood for this game.”

The spirit shrieks as it is torn in half, balled up like a piece of paper, and launched through the distant ceiling. With a dull groan, a metal flower pot from the rough falls into the fresh hole and rapidly bounces around the shaft. Gemma watches to see if it will hit her, but the movements are too chaotic to be sure. Clambering up a few more feet, the detective leaps for the open doorway and scrambles onto solid ground. She is about to take a look at the flower pot when it hits the ladder and ricochets toward her. With less than a second to react, she jumps to the side with enough force to go through the wall. She scrambles back into the hallway in time to see another guest emerge and get decapitated by the projectile. The body scratches where its head used to be, shrugs, and returns to its room as if nothing has happened.

“Still have forty floors to go,” Gemma mutters while she wipes what she thinks is plaster dust off her clothes. Getting some in her mouth, she is surprised to find that the powder is really sugar. “If your intention is to make me continue playing the game then you’re failing. How about you act like an adult for once and tell me what’s going on? None of these shocking events that have become tedious. Just stop throwing this tantrum and we’ll talk.”

“Do you promise to listen?” Dawn asks from a loudspeaker.

“As long as you stop hurting everyone.”

“Consider it done, but the doors stay locked.”

“How do I get up?”

Grinding gears echo from the elevator shaft as a platform rises, smears of blood on the tiles from those that fell. Stepping onto the shaky lift, Gemma rubs her badge and stares into the darkness above. A black feather falls on her face before small lights appear in place of the missing ladder. Their shadows moving along the ground, the ravens fly in tight circles that mesmerize the detective. She shakes her head clear when the platform moves, the corners creating sparks as they drag along the walls. The ascent is slow and jerky, which makes Gemma fear that she has walked into a trap and will be dropped at any second. She stands with her legs wide and changes her position whenever the platform dips even an inch.

A chorus of snake-like hisses makes the detective draw her gun and watch for serpents falling from above. Instead, all of the doors open and she drifts by to see the guests returning to their rooms. None of the people notice Gemma as they march out of the stairwells, their faces devoid of emotion. Whenever she passes the hospital floor, she sees that all of the employees are standing in the hallway. The unmoving figures resemble statues with their heads tilted back to stare at the ceiling and arms spread out. As the detective continues to the penthouse, the only sounds that remain are the cawing of ravens.

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Friday Book Round-Up: Charms of the Feykin by @CYallowitz #FridayReads #Fantasy #POTLReads

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Raven’s Game Part 27 #horror #Halloween #thriller

Thornewood Castle

Thornewood Castle

“What’s happening, Max? Are you still there?” Gemma asks in a panic. Sitting at the bar, she pushes her drink away and heads for a corner table to avoid the curious stares of those around her. “It sounds like a tornado over there. Did something shatter? Come on, old man, and talk to me.”

With an old-fashioned click, the phone turns off and begins rapidly pinging as twenty photos arrive. Gemma cycles through the pictures that are mostly of a hazy figure standing amid a storm of blurred papers. One shows her the dress and tuxedo, which she thinks are hanging from a rack until she zooms in to their necklines. The clothing is hovering off the ground, each one having an arm around the waist of the other. Feeling sick and anxious, the pale detective swipes to the final picture. She nearly crushes the phone when she sees Max’s body in a pool of his own blood, a narrow slit across his neck. A serene smile is on his face, but the image remains agonizing to his partner.

“This is my fault,” Gemma whispers as her quivering hand puts the phone down. Grazing the screen, she moves to a picture with Dawn’s name and the string of numbers. “If I hadn’t kept pushing this case then you would still be alive. I should have stopped when things got weird or done the investigation myself. Probably can’t even call the precinct or your family to let them know without causing more trouble. The worst part is I’ve seen so much death and insanity lately that I can’t bring myself to cry. All I can think of doing is putting an end to this, but I don’t even know where to start. What did you find that got you killed?”

Scrolling through the pages, Gemma zooms in on the drawings to see if they have any common theme. She feels ridiculous analyzing the scribbles of a child, especially since they tell her nothing more than Corvus has been with Dawn for decades. It is not until she comes back to the notes and switches from one to the other. Squinting at the screen, she enlarges part of it to find that Max missed some pieces of the missing information. Gemma tries every filter she can find in the simple photo program until she catches a ghost of two letters. Seeing the ‘D’ and ‘O’ makes her take a shuddering breath and believe that her partner died getting her the last piece of information she needed to face her enemy. Staring at the image, she still struggles to come up with a theory that would explain everything.

“Date of birth for Dawn is 1980 and it’s 1981 for Corvus,” Gemma says, noticing that a waiter is bringing her a free drink. She turns off the phone to prevent the man from spying on her and pretends to take a sip of the rum. “What is so important about Dawn being older than her husband? It’s only by a year too. Not like she would be the first woman to marry a younger man. This has to mean something else.”

With a giggling ringtone, Gemma’s phone goes off and she looks to see that Dawn is trying to call her. Not wanting to lose her train of thought, she ignores the call and closes her eyes to concentrate. The first thing she imagines is Max dying on the floor, so snaps out of what was the beginning of a trance. Confused on how her mind drifted away so quickly, Gemma is about to stand when her phone goes off with a loud barking noise. Muttering a curse, she turns the device off and tries to figure out where she can go for privacy. There appears to be a lot more people in the hotel and she wonders if people have been drawn to the location because of all the murders and disappearances. For a moment, the detective considers that such an outcome was Dawn’s goal the entire time. Remembering how much the woman loves her game of murder, Gemma has her doubts about this being about money.

When the phone goes off a third time, the noise is a raging scream that sends a crack through the back of the protective case. Gemma jumps at the thrashing in her back pocket and struggles to get the device free. The machine is hot to the touch and threatens to melt her skin, but it cools once she answers. A calm sigh drifts from the other end of the phone and mixes with the rumble of distant thunder.

“I’m so sorry to hear about your partner,” Dawn says, pausing to let the sound of clinking glasses carry over the phone. She blows a kiss that leaves a faint spot of wetness on the red-haired woman’s cheek. “Anyway, now we have nobody else to get in our way. He made the mistake of talking to my mother and getting her opinion on me. Thought she would only mumble incoherently and not send him to a place that people should stay away from. Now about my next riddle.”

“Save your breath and leave me to do my job,” Gemma angrily snaps. She is about to hang up the phone, but her temper and stress gets the best of her. “You know what? To hell with your psychotic game. I’m coming up there right now, Dawn. Either I’m going to arrest you or shoot you in the head. My mood and interest in keeping my job will determine your fate. No amount of crazy crap is going to get in my way unless you strike me dead here. Then that ends even the remote chance of your sick fun continuing. So get your affairs in order and kiss that imaginary husband of yours good-bye.”

A growing light gives Gemma enough of a warning to toss the phone away, the device exploding and scaring everyone in the lobby. With a terrifying screech, the angel statue’s wings spin and the body gradually melts into molten metal. Several people standing too close are scalded and their screams cause people to rush the doors. All of the exits are locked and those who grab the handles for too are electrocuted. The shock is not enough to kill them, but they collapse in a twitching heap that makes escaping more difficult. Another chorus of shouting erupts from outside where the pool is boiling enough to fill the area in choking steam. Those unable to get out of the water fast enough are cooked, their bodies floating on the surface like disturbing buoys. Fear and panic is setting in as the guests swarm the stairs and elevators in the hopes of finding an upper window to jump from. Explosions from the restaurant sends food flying into the lobby while those in the bar are left to drown in a rising flood of alcohol. Through it all, the employees continue to do their jobs as if people are not dying around them.

Sprinting toward Dawn’s private elevator, Gemma is unnerved by how easy it is for her to get through the crowd. The doors open as she comes around the front desk, but a desperate couple rush on before the detective can get there. With a loud snap, the cables give way and the lift plummets into the depths of the building. Gemma can hear the guests’ screams echoing throughout the dark shaft as she comes to the edge. A ladder is on the far wall and she can see that her badge is hanging from one of the rungs. Taking the invitation, she leaps over the pit and begins the long climb toward her enemy.

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It’s Lisa Burton, on Lisa Burton Radio #RRBC

Check out Lisa on her radio show. Always looking for new and exciting guests.

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Welcome to another edition of Lisa Burton Radio, the show where we talk to the characters that bring the stories to life. I’m your host, Lisa the robot girl, and I find myself without a guest again.

Several of you sent in emails that you thought a show where I talk about myself would be a good idea. It’s not the normal kind of show, but I’m going to go with it for this week. In fact, I have an idea involving your emails, and I’ll talk about it toward the end of the show.

I have a bunch of interviews lined up, but you know how authors are, they want to time them for the book release, or a big promotion they have coming up. I don’t blame them, I was in a story or two myself. I’m always looking for characters to interview, so don’t be afraid to…

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Raven’s Game Part 26 #horror #Halloween #thriller

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Ravens sit in the leafless, solitary tree as Max approaches the abandoned house. The collapsed side is nothing more than rotted wood and crumbled stone. Pieces of rusty appliances are scattered about the wreckage, which is swarming with insects. Shards of glass are around the edge of the area, several of the pieces stabbed into the earth like daggers. A trio of mice scurry out from under the wood and race to the nearest bush before a hungry raven can catch them. Only two make it to safety while the third is snatched off the ground by a bird that is faster than Max’s eyes can follow. The standing part of the house is protected on the damaged side by a tarp that remains still even when the wind blows. Cracked paint and rotted shingles show the building’s age and lack of maintenance. Webs cover the windows that are barely held in place by frames that are soft enough to push a finger into. Two bricks can be seen on the roof, the final parts of a chimney that is now collapsed and covered by dirt.

To Max’s amazement, the front door does not fall off its rusty hinges and he simply steps through the entrance. An electric buzz runs throughout his body, reminding him of the time he got a mild shock from changing a light bulb. Creaking can be heard from every room, but there are thuds upstairs that make him think animals are upstairs. The few furnishings left behind reek of mildew and urine, which Max assumes are from cats like the dead one he sees in a nearby fireplace. Pictures line the walls, but all of them are empty and broken, the glass shattered in identical patterns. Grabbing his phone, he sends a quick text to Gemma along with a photo of everything he sees.

“I’d call, but I don’t want to lose power again,” Max mutters while he jams a piece of wood under the door. He tests the stairs that were cut in half by the collapse, the wood giving an inch when he puts his full weight on it. “Even in daylight this place is creepy. Again, I wish I was in your shoes, Cook, because a fancy hotel beats this every day. Even if you’re the guest of a psychopath.”

Seeing nothing of interest downstairs, Max carefully climbs to the top floor. The stairs creak and crack beneath his feet, threatening to fall away. He glances over the edge to see that he would plunge into a collection of jagged wood, so he walks as carefully as possible. By the time he reaches stable ground, the detective is sweating and gasping for breath. Pushing the first door open, he finds a bathroom with a sunken floor that is flooded with rain water. Croaking frogs jump around the foul-smelling pools, their tadpoles giving the illusion of shifting darkness beneath the surface. Taking a picture and moving on, Max searches a closet full of decaying towels and old cleaning supplies. The remains of a photo album is in the back, but the only thing that has survived intact is a picture of Dawn as a newborn.

“One more door,” Max whispers, noticing that there is light coming from inside. He gently opens the door and stands in awe within the doorway. “What the hell?”

The spotless room of a small child is meticulously laid out, complete with colorful curtains that billow regardless of the lack of a breeze. Crayon drawings cover the walls, which are wood panels that gleam with fresh polish and are found nowhere else in the house. Taking pictures as he goes, Max finds clean clothes in the drawers and fresh school supplies in the desk. A hat rack in the corner shows markings similar to those one would see on a wall when measuring the height of a growing child. Tiny glass figurines of unicorns and ravens are along the two windowsills, the animals put into pairs that look outside.

Looking under the perfectly made bed, Max finds several boxes that are filled with toys that are mostly naked dolls. When he takes a picture, the flash reveals a hole in the floor that is big enough for him to hook the plank with his finger. He pulls out a long, cardboard box that is covered in birthday wrapping paper and adorned with a black bow. Drawing a pocketknife, the detective carefully opens the old present and pulls out a full-sized wedding dress and tuxedo. The clothes are still in pristine condition, so he lays them on the bed. Turning them over, he finds one has a post-it with Dawn’s name on it and the other has a similar note for Corvus. Squinting at the faded papers, he can barely make out that was once something else written on them. Reaching into the plastic coverings, Max pulls them out and finds a pencil to help reveal the lost information.

“For the love of god!” he shouts when his phone goes off. Seeing that it is Gemma, he answers and puts the device on speakerphone. “Hope you’re enjoying all these pictures. I talked to Kate Addison who considers her daughter a monster. Not evil human, but a genuine creature of darkness. Seems she tried to abort the baby three times and failed. I’ve no idea what to make of any of her ramblings since you’d think she was talking about ghosts or whatever this would count as. Oh, and the husband is an imaginary friend named Corvus. His name is on a bunch of the drawings and this tuxedo I found. Trying to find out what the faded scribbles are. Any news on your end?”

“I’m just tired, old man,” Gemma replies with a yawn. He can hear her putting ice into an empty glass and hopes she is not drinking before lunch. “I’ve no idea how to explain what happened last night, but maybe her mother is right. What if we’re doing with something that isn’t human?”

“Then we catch her and let a jury figure out the next step,” Max replies in a half-hearted attempt at humor. He scowls at what he sees on the papers, unsure of their meaning due to the messy handwriting. “The note for Dawn has a ‘B’ followed by one nine eight zero. The one for Corvus has a ‘B’ followed by one nine eight one. These mean anything to you? I’ll send you a picture in case the way they’re written is important.”

“I’ll look them over at breakfast.”

“Probably going to bring these clothes to the precinct.”

“Just be-”

The phone is cut off by static that turns into a screeching wail that rattles the windows and door. When the device sputters and jumps to the floor, Max leaves it behind and goes to gather the clothes into his arms. To his surprise, the empty sleeves whip at him and create burning welts with their buttons. Backing away, he is knocked into the wall when one of the windows explodes outwards by a powerful gust of wind. The ravens can be heard cawing as they circle the building and wait for the chaos to end. Another gale comes out of the hallway and whips around the room to remove all of the pictures from the walls. Churning and howling, the pages become a condensed twister that the detective can barely see his way through.

“This is-”, Max starts to say before his throat is slit by one of the flying papers. Holding his hand to the gushing wound, he collapses near his phone that has stopped screeching. Unable to respond to Gemma’s shouting beyond wet gurgles, he opens a photo of his family and stares at it until his eyes close.

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