Independent motion – can you help?

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What would you give to make a dream come true if you woke to find yourself living a nightmare?

What would you feel if you could never again walk on a beach? Or go out alone in the snow…feel the stillness of a wood or cross a field?

And then, you found a way…

In 2009, my son was a successful young man with a bright future… until he was stabbed through the brain in an unprovoked attack and left for dead in an alley.

He was found almost immediately by passers-by who saved his life. By the time we arrived at the hospital, Nick was being prepared for emergency brain surgery. We were allowed to see him, for a few minutes, to say goodbye. He was not expected to survive…


Over the past couple of years, many in the blogging community have come to know my son and know…

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Raven’s Game Part 18 #horror #Halloween #thriller

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Even though nobody is looking in her direction, Gemma feels like she is being watched by several eyes. Stopping at Dawn’s private elevator, she sees reflections of the stuffed ravens in the polished metal. All of the fake birds are aimed in her direction, causing the detective to grip her leather bag to her chest. With a quivering hand, she uses the key to open the doors and gingerly steps inside. Imagination running wild, she expects the floor to give way or blades to erupt from the walls. Instead, the elevator closes and a lullaby plays over the loudspeaker, the song soft and lilting. The smell of roses and chocolate seep through a vent until the lift gets halfway to the penthouse. A loud crunch makes Gemma jump before the smell of smoke and cooked meat waft in from above. Low groans and gentle whimpers can be heard beneath the song, which has become harsher in an attempt to drown out the other noises.

“This was a bad idea,” she whispers as she reaches out to push the stop button. A tremor of electricity goes up her arm and numbs the muscles while the elevator moves faster. “Why did I think I could plant bugs in the room? She gave me the key and had to know I would try something like this. Damn it, I’m getting desperate and sloppy. Now she might get angry if I don’t do this.”

The elevator comes to a gentle stop and a bell rings before the doors open, a muffled voice talking about lingerie and golf clubs. Gemma is about to step on the plush, white carpeting when a sign drops from the ceiling. Telling her to remove her shoes, the simple warning dangles on thin strings that give it the illusion of floating. Bending down to take off her boots, the detective notices that the floor panel moves slightly and guesses she set off a pressure plate. Peering into the space between the elevator and carpeting, she can see a rusty hook has caught on some thin wires. Leaving her shoes on the lift, Gemma steps with a little more confidence since she is now sure that Dawn’s tricks are not supernatural.

Wandering the penthouse, she is surprised to find that many of the rooms are barely furnished, except for a stunning bathroom. With a chandelier above the ruby-studded tub and a wine cabinet built into the back wall, Gemma wonders if Dawn practically lives in this place and ignores the rest. She picks out a few places to leave a bug before searching the rest of the apartment for her enemy’s elusive husband. Most of the bedrooms have nothing more than a desk, an uncomfortable cot, and a trashcan. The walls are painted a dull tan that reminds Gemma of the neutral tones of a hospital instead of a lavish apartment. An old television and stained couch sit in the living room, neither of them showing signs of recent use. She is surprised to find a collection of VHS tapes that are covered in a layer of dust, except for a row of unlabeled ones that could be home movies. Empty birdcages are everywhere, most of them having black feathers that are warm to the touch. She notices an open window and assumes that the birds spend the day outside before returning at night.

“Where is this supposed husband?” Gemma asks in a low voice.

Feeling a breeze come from a large picture of a raven on an apple tree, she gets closer and runs her hand along the edge of the frame. With a dull click, the work of art shivers and slides into the wall to reveal the master bedroom. A king-sized bed takes up a lot of the space, the sheets a flawless crimson beneath blankets of the purest black. Pink pillows with unicorn horns sewn into their tops are against the headboard, which is shaped like a seashell. The walk-in closet is filled with dresses, costumes, and accessories that smell like they are fresh out of a laundromat. Searching the two racks, the only article of clothing that would be for a man is a nicely tailored suit in the back.

A chill running up her spine, Gemma returns to the main room and only peeks inside a tiny bathroom that would be more suited for a prison cell. Out of the corner of her eye, the detective thinks she sees something move beneath the sheets and blankets. Putting her bag on an oak dresser and drawing her gun, she tiptoes to the bed that remains unchanged. Focused on where she saw movement, Gemma shrieks when a scaly creature rushes out from under the dust ruffle and grazes her feet. Leaping away, she tries to catch sight of whatever she startled, but it has already disappeared. A low groan makes her jump again before the toilet gurgles and the sink faucet leaks for a few seconds.

“This place is creepy and there’s no husband here,” Gemma says to herself. Opening her bag, she goes about hiding listening devices and tiny cameras around the penthouse. “Just one of each in every main room. Not sure what I plan on finding, but it’s better than nothing. Maybe I’ll put extra in the kitchen.”

Entering the room of porcelain counters and stainless steel appliances, Gemma feels a wave of warmth hit her face. She checks the stove to make sure it is off, but none of the burners do anything more than click in vain. Standing to the side, she opens the oven and is shocked that her arm is hit by a burst of cold. The detective hides the devices in well-stocked cabinets and among the rural decorations, some of which have obviously been made by a child. Gemma stops at a pull out apron rack and considers bugging the seven, pristine garments. Checking each one, she can see that they are missing pockets and too thin to be useful. A whiff of bleach comes out of the narrow opening as she pushes the aprons back into the wall and she hears liquid getting sprayed once the rack is locked in place.

Holding the final camera, Gemma heads for the refrigerator and slides the device into a bowl of fake fruit on the top. When her elbow touches the freezer handle, she feels her skin stick to the metal for a brief moment. She touches the same place and watches as a thin trail of slime comes away. The rest of the refrigerator is clean, so she finishes setting the final bug before checking inside. To her mild amusement, the freezer is stocked entirely with orange-flavored ice pops that have been unwrapped. Their sticks are embedded in perfectly shaped ice cubes that are a light pink color. Running a finger along one of the treats, she shudders at the sour taste and spits into the sink. Reaching out to the lower section’s handle, a strange stench emerges when she opens the door a crack. Gently closing the refrigerator, the detective tries to place the smell that reminds her of the morgue.

A prickling sensation on the back of her neck causes Gemma to slowly turn around, the flicker of movement across the doorway making her heart leap. Creeping toward the entrance, she hears skittering across a solid surface and a repeated tapping. She steps out of the kitchen and finds herself facing twelve giant ravens. The birds are perched on the empty cages and she can hear flapping wings in the other rooms. All of them stare at her as she reaches back into the kitchen for her bag and walks back to the elevator. With the animals following her every movement, Gemma uses the key and jumps into the elevator as soon as it opens. The sound of their ear-wrenching caws echoes down the shaft as she returns to the lobby at what feels like an agonizingly slow pace.

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Smorgasbord Autumn Reading – Crystal Ball Persuasion by Lesley Fletcher

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Raven’s Game Part 17 #horror #Halloween #thriller

Drake Hotel

Drake Hotel

Making a brief stop at the bar, Gemma orders two cocktails and carries them to the pool where she sees Dawn. The sight of the other woman, who is wearing an old-fashioned swimsuit and bright yellow floaties, makes her skin crawl. Before she is spotted, the detective slips two sleeping pills into the hotelier’s drink. Swirling the alcohol, she takes the long away around the pool to give the medication time to dissolve. Many of the splashing children point at the gun on her hip, their parents moving them away until they spot the badge. Ignoring the sea of stares that follow her, Gemma takes the seat next to Dawn and offers the spiked cocktail. The brown-haired woman refuses to accept, her eyes peeking over a pair of large sunglasses.

“Consider this an apology for cheating in our game,” the smiling detective says, taking a sip from her own drink. Placing the cocktails on a small table, she leans forward with her elbows on her knees. “Though to be fair, you didn’t say I had to work alone. My partner was already helping me, which I’m sure you know about.”

“Good point. Though there is a difference, kitty,” Dawn replies while pulling a long straw out from behind her back. It takes a minute for her to get it into her drink, which she quickly drains. “Wow. That’s a tingly one. Where was I? Oh yes, the reason why I had that man cooked and served. First of all, the grocery delivery didn’t include bacon, so I needed to improvise. It isn’t always fun being charge. Second of all, your partner is looking into me and staying on the outside. He’ll never find anything worth talking about. The handsome dish, on the other hand, was in my territory and helped you solve my riddle. That was made specifically for you and I’m so hurt that you shared my gift. Okay, not that I hurt right now. Getting a nice numbness going on from something.”

“I still plan on stopping you,” Gemma states, making herself comfortable on the sagging lounge chair. Putting on her own sunglasses, she watches the sky where a collection of clouds circle the hotel. “I hope you realize that this game can continue for only so long. At some point, my boss will decide that I’m wasting my time and put me on a different case. That’s if he doesn’t suspend or release me. Not sure how you expect to win or keep being entertained.”

Dawn rolls onto her side and curls into a ball, her eyes fluttering to stay open. “You sound like my husband. He wanted me to stop causing trouble, but I think it’s because he has a bad headache. I’m like a unicorn. Rare, unique, and unable to be contained. This game will end when I say it ends or forget it’s going on. You’ll be fine as long as you stay within the rules. Next time I give you a riddle, I expect you to do it on your own.”

“What happens to me if you forget?”

“Kitties are much smarter than puppies. I’ll let you live . . . or kill you.”

“I won’t go down without a fight.”

“That’s the type of show that my husband and I prefer.”

A scream from the pool causes Dawn to sit upright and resist the sleeping pills, her eyes widening as she scans the crowd. The disturbance is coming from a crowd of barely clothed men, who are fighting in the water. It is a friendly wrestling match, which is fueled by alcohol, but they are constantly bumping into the other guests. Children are pushed against the wall and their parents struggle to get them to safety as the grunting battle gets more heated. Snapping her fingers, Dawn calls for the lifeguards to get involved. She whistles at the men and women in bright yellow swimsuits, who easily drag the drunks out of the water. The crowd parts to let the complaining guests get escorted back into the building, all of them being shoved into a room marked by a thumbs up symbol.

“Some people really need to grow up,” Dawn states, her drowsiness returning. She smiles when her companion hands her another drink and nods to the empty glass in Gemma’s other hand. “You drink a lot faster than me. I owe you another riddle. Let me think for a second. This is so yummy and . . . eye-fluttery. Here’s the riddle with some drool and slurring. With one eye, I watch my prey. Old and young and man and woman. All are in my sight. Yet the one I truly want is just beyond my grasp. That was pretty.”

“And sounds like more gibberish than the last one,” Gemma says as she watches the hotelier follow her movements. Leaning far to the side, she guides Dawn into lying down and getting more comfortable. “I’ll go back to my room and work on the riddle. There really isn’t anything else for us to talk about.”

“It’s weird how people scream,” the other woman whispers, a tiny hiccup making her body jerk. She reaches out to caress a small object that only she can see before casting it over her head. “Some people holler at the top of their lungs like whatshername with the veil. Others don’t make a noise like Demarcus Lang. His wife did scream, but then kind of locked up. I guess that was the poison more than the fear. There are also those who fight back, which I haven’t managed to find here. To be honest, I prefer the screamers because the noise makes me feel like I’m at a concert.”

Inching closer, Gemma keeps her enemy’s eyes on her and does long blinks to help her fall asleep. “I really don’t like you. Despise is a good word, but only because I can’t think of anything stronger. Your games are going to end either with me arresting you or putting a bullet in your head. So enjoy the fun until you make a mistake. That’s when I’ll tear your entire world down. Does that scare you?”

“Your lips are so shiny.”

“I think you need a nap.”

“This has been a taxing day.”

“Sweet dreams.”

“Go check on my husband, would you?”

Gemma is surprised when the key to Dawn’s private elevator is pushed into her hand. The warm metal is slick due to a layer of suntan lotion and sweat, the keychain a heavily chewed rabbit’s foot. She carefully takes the offering and slowly backs away while searching for a sign that the snoring woman is trying to trick her. With a sudden whimper, Dawn rolls over and stretches her leg until a pop causes the limb to flop onto the lounge chair. Deciding that she has nothing to lose, Gemma pockets the key and hurries to the public elevators to get some equipment from her room.

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Rebirth of the Monster Maker (Submissions by C.S. Boyack)

(Submission by C.S. Boyack)

Tarscrit

Created from a Placid, which is a being made out of water, and a Bluecap Sprite, which is an earth fairy.  This combination happens when a Placid seeps through the soil and washes over a Bluecap.  Their magical energies merge to create the Feykin species known as the Tarscrit.  It is raised by the Placid parent due to a connection since both are liquid in appearance.  A big difference is that while a Placid is water, a Tarscrit resembles sticky mud that many mistake for tar.  Hence the first part of the name.  The ‘scrit’ comes from the sound it makes while digging through the earth.  It is rare for one of these Feykin to leave the underground because they can harden very quickly.

Malig Knight

These Feykin have mysterious origins because nobody is sure what they look like out of their armor.  Some people think they are the same species while others believe they are merely an organization of different Feykin.  The only proof that they are born from fairies is that they have praying mantis-like wings that are contained within the hinged backside of the armor.  Malig Knights are found on the continent of Canst’s Fields and they are nomadic.  Most times they avoid interacting with other species, but they are attracted to battles.  It is said that they gain strength from being near dying bodies, but people doubt this because they only kill during a battle.  They all use swords that they coat with an elemental energy, which is different for each one.

Alpine Bats

Designed to bring life to the Frost Barrens, the creator forgot that there are no mountains or caves in that region.  So, these chimeras flew north to the Crysvale Tundra and Pynofita Forest where they have become a nuisance ever since.  These animals have the wings, feet, and ears of a bat, but the body of a grizzly bear.  Not a full-sized grizzly bear, but one that has been shrunk to the size of a sewer rat.  Unfortunately, Alpine Bats think they are gigantic and will attack anything that looks edible.  They are one of the few chimeras that can breed naturally, which has led to them becoming an epidemic.  A summer hibernation helps keep them in check as well as a generous hunting season.  The creator is still in jail until he can clearly explain what he was thinking.

Moleverines

This burrowing chimera is bulky and has blackish grey fur, except for pure black and white on its head.  It looks similar to a skunk because of its coloration, but it lacks the scent glands.  Some of Moleverines are found in forests while others the plains, which determines their diet.  They tend to be carnivores, but will eat berries, insects, roots, eggs, and honey.  Now, you’re probably thinking this sounds exactly like a badger.  Well, that’s exactly how it acts and looks.  In fact, the creator thought that nobody knew what a badger was when he tried to pass this off as his own.  You would think the story ends there, but there is a rumor that he really did create a Moleverine before he died in poverty.  This beast looks like a badger, but has a bite that causes petrification and can pick up a scent from fifty miles away.  It is also capable of imitating the singing voice of a human to draw prey closer and, oddly enough, sticks to show tunes.

Undead Lichen

Lichen is a simple, crust-like plant that grows on rocks, walls, and trees.  You would never think it would be anything more than what it seems.  Yet, there is a species that is categorized as undead and Feykin.  This happens when a fairy that is older than 200 years dies on a bed of lichen.  The plants unwittingly absorb the blood for sustenance, which makes them vampiric in nature.  It gives them a red hue and makes them release blood-sucking spores if stepped on.  Undead Lichens are able to transfer their curse to other creatures to create fake vampires.  These infected drink blood for nourishment, lack all of the powers of a vampire, and can be cured with simple magic.  Still, there’s a high chance of getting killed before people discover the cause.

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Sally’s Cafe and Bookstore – Book of the Week – The Body in the Snow – A Bebe Bollinger Murder Mystery by Christoph Fischer

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20 Questions with Christian Freed

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Don Massenzio Today we sit down with prolific author and fellow upstate NY native Christian Freed. He is going to tell us about his early ambitions as an aspiring author and share some of his work with us. Please enjoy … Continue reading

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Raven’s Game Part 16 #horror #Halloween #thriller

American Horror Story

American Horror Story

Sitting on a bench in the park, the two detectives tried to enjoy the warm sunlight and cool breeze. Gemma’s report is still sinking in as Max watches a group of children run around a nearby playground. He pulls out a picture of his kids, both of them too old to join in the lawless game of tag that is resulting in a collection of skinned knees and elbows. A flock of pigeons wanders around the walkway where they snap up fallen food and wait for the quiet pair to throw pieces of bread. It takes several minutes for the birds to realize that they will have to look elsewhere and they leave in unison. The sound of flapping wings and cheering children fail to puncture the gloom that has come over the detectives.

“Seems Ms. Addison has a thing for cannibalism,” Max finally says while chewing on his empty pipe. Tucking the picture into his jacket pocket, the man leans back and stares at the sky through the branches. “Then again, I’ve no idea what we’re even dealing with. The idea that she’s drugging people to act insane is farfetched, but there’s no alternative. Possibly a gas being pumped through the hotel, which gets triggered by stress? That could explain Mr. Anders, the Langs, and what you’re seeing.”

“It doesn’t cover anything we just saw,” Gemma states, rubbing her thumb against her badge. She finds herself unable to take a lot of comfort from it or her firearm being returned for the rest of the investigation. “So the chief said I’m not on leave, but I’m to stay at the hotel to figure out what’s going on. Get the feeling that this is going to be the case that kills either my career, my sanity, or both. Still no idea why anybody would do this.”

“Because they’re a mentally disturbed psycho,” her partner declares with a laugh. Drawing the attention of a jogger, he nods his head to the young woman and lowers his voice. “I don’t like throwing this idea around. The idea of dealing with a person who simply enjoys killing doesn’t sit well with my ulcer. Give me a motive beyond bloodlust because that’s something a jury can wrap their heads around.”

“Do you really think this will end with her on trial?”

“Don’t go there, Cook. You might not come back.”

“It’d be worth it to stop her.”

“And if the murders continue anyway?”

Cursing under her breath, Gemma gets off the bench and jams her hands into her pockets before walking toward a pond. She kicks rocks out of her way while Max remains a few steps behind. Several times, the young woman’s hand swings down to graze her firearm, but never does more than a subtle tap. The last thing she wants is for somebody to think she is about to draw the weapon and cause a scene. Gemma considers handing the gun over to her partner and getting rid of the temptation, but she is sure it will be needed at some point. For a brief moment, she wonders if a bullet would even stop Dawn. Shaking her head clear of the ridiculous thought, she stops near the edge of the water and looks across at the loud traffic.

“I need to know more about her,” Gemma admits while unwrapping a stick of gum. She holds the minty snack between her lips before using her tongue to roll it into her mouth. “There is nothing that makes sense about her. She is always doing something different at that hotel, but it’s never what you would expect the boss to be doing. Did she get a degree in business? What about chemistry? How did she get the money to open Heaven’s Nest? Now I’m the one rattling off questions.”

“Well, Dawn Addison is practically a ghost because she never did anything beyond existing until now,” Max answers, flipping through a notebook. Running his finger along the barely readable scrawling, he gives a helpless shrug. “She was born and raised out in Suffolk County where her mother still lives. Homeschooled until she went to a public high school and not on social media, so there are no friends to talk to. One year at a community college with no major before dropping out. Random jobs, traveling around the country, and many stays in psych wards covers everything until she ended up at Raven’s Hold. Her fortune came about after that and I still have no idea how. I thought it was mob ties at first then I found evidence of her inheriting it from the doctor who ran the asylum. A grainy video shows her as a lottery winner in Oregon too. International trading is another possibility, but damned if I know what she was trading.”

Thinking her partner is making a joke, Gemma carefully takes his notebook and reads through his notes. “Can’t believe I know how to read your chicken scratch. I wouldn’t be surprised if most of what you’re finding are lies created by Dawn to throw people off. She wants to be entertained and have fun, so this would be a maze with a lot of dead ends. We really need to focus on her childhood since the rest is straightforward. You said her mom still leaves out on Long Island. What about her father?”

“Louis Addison died when she was two,” Max answers while handing Gemma a folded article. He taps at the picture of a house, the entire right side having collapsed into rubble. “I don’t know anything about the man other than he worked and barely saw his family outside of the weekend. Neighbors said he was a loving husband and father, which is the usual responses. Nobody could explain the freak accident. One night, he was in the kitchen while Ms. Addison and her mother were upstairs in a bedroom. Whole side of the house caved in and crushed Louis, who was found with a beer still in his hand. The whole thing is considered a cold case that I’m sure the local precinct has forgotten.”

Reading over the article, Gemma pulls it closer when she sees the image of a dark-haired man in one of the house’s surviving windows. A blink causes the figure to be replaced by partially open curtains and cracks in the glass. Two ravens are flying in the distance and seem to gently flap their wings without moving forward. Peeking from around the corner of the house, the detective can see a small girl with a single pigtail and chocolate smeared across her face. It takes the detective a second to realize how clear the old photo appears to her, which becomes blurry when she coughs. Cautiously handing the article back to her partner, Gemma takes a shuddering breath and rubs her eyes to stave off a headache.

“You need to get some sleep,” Max mentions while offering an anxiety pill. Taking one himself, he watches two ducks chase each other around the pond. “I’m going to head out tomorrow to talk to the mother. Her name is Kate Addison and she works at the local library, which means a quiet setting. Just hope she’s nothing like her daughter. Charge your phone and keep it on because I want to be able to contact you quickly. I’ll do the same if you need me to get you out of there.”

“I’m sure it won’t come down to that, but thanks,” Gemma replies as she stares at the pill. With a tired sigh, she hands it back and tucks her hands into her pockets. “Probably should head back and see what Dawn has in store for me. After last night, I’m sure she has a new challenge ready and I can’t bring anyone else into this. Though I do want to put a plan of my own into action.”

“Thanks for making me the sole passenger on your trip to hell.”

“You would have come along anyway.”

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Cross Promotion for December Tuesdays

Step Brothers

Step Brothers

I’m out for the day since it’s good weather and I promised a little boy in a Superman costume that we can go to the Zoo.  That’s just why I won’t be responding very quickly to comments here.

On Thursday, I mentioned that I wanted to do character interviews in December.  These usually fail, but I wanted to try a new method.  It was suggested that I have my characters chat with characters from other books.  This is similar to C.S. Boyack’s Lisa Burton Radio . . . in a way that a Granny Smith Apple is similar to a Red Delicious.  The only difference here will be that it’s going to be more of a sit down chat in a Windemere location instead of a radio show.  This is also why I’m going to say upfront that, if this happens, Lisa will get first interview and choice of interviewer/ee.  Seems only fair since I’m stepping into her arena.

Now, this is how this would work:

  1. You comment or email that you’re interested.
  2. We discuss the particulars in an email chain before starting up the chat.  Explain the characters involved, who your character will talk with, and the location.  Maybe choose the questions in advance.
  3. I’m still trying to figure out the chat part.  I want this to be a natural back and forth, so it might be we go paragraph/question/answer back-and-forth in the emails then I’ll transfer it to a Word doc.  My goal is to have 3 questions per character.  I’m more than willing to even turn it into a ‘Coffee Talk’ thing instead of an interview.
  4. The post will have a Windemere book at the top (probably The Spirit Well since it should be new at the time) and the guest author’s book, bio, and social media links at the bottom.
  5. Postings will be on the Tuesdays in December.  If I get a bunch of interests then I’ll carry it into January and however long I need to go to give everyone a turn.

I’m going to be honest again here.  I will still be doing a poll to get the top 4 Windemere characters by the end of October.  This is in case things fall through and I need to go with the original plan.  So, please comment below if you’re interested.  Windemere characters will have to be first come, first serve.  Don’t really want 4 Nyx interviews.  Oh, and Fizzle might not be an option since he recently appeared on Lisa Burton’s Radio Show.  If I go this route then he could make cameos if I see an opening.

Hope everyone has a fun day.

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Secrets To Getting Reviews For YOUR Book, REVEALED! BookTuber Elizabeth Hebb Tells All

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