7 Helpful And Fun Ways To Create Characters

A helpful list for character building.

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#Guest post – Charles E Yallowitz author of the Legends of Windemere series

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Michael and I are thrilled to have Charles E Yallowitz, author of the 15-volume Legends of Windemere series, visiting us here at Robbie’s Inspiration. Gregory is also excited about Charles’ visit as he loves fantasy books and I have ordered the first two books in this fantastic series for him – lucky boy!

Charles has just released the last book in the series and, I must say, we are really impressed by the cover and blurb.

Blurb

Whether in darkness or light, every path inevitably comes to an end.

As Gabriel, the Destiny God, determined centuries ago, his chosen will face Baron Kernaghan for the fate of Windemere. Through many victories and losses, the champions have stood together and prepared for this great battle. Now that the Baron’s influence stirs those with evil hearts, they have run out of time and must travel to Shayd. Yet, there are more secrets…

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When More Than a Sword or Axe Will Do

The Glaive From Krull

First of all, my wife is the one who introduced me to this movie that we own, watched once, and I still can’t remember.  One of those really corny fantasy ones that involved finding a special weapon to save the world.  That’s why I’m bringing it up now in a post about unique weapons.  In Legends of Windemere, I only have Kira and her kusari-gama and Lord Highrider with his giant maul.  Yet, there is a long tradition of bizarre weapons in fiction.  Some of them truly exist like the previous example and others are entirely made up like the glaive above.

The most important thing to consider when creating or choosing a unique weapon is how it functions.  You have categories like range, melee, blunt, edged, piercing, slashing, heavy, light, and even the materials.  Weapons don’t have to stay in one category either.  For example, take Kira Grasdon’s kusari-gama:

  • There’s a little range due to the length of the change, but it is predominantly a melee weapon.
  • One end is a club that gives her a blunt attack.
  • The weapon is fairly light in weight and designed for speed, which makes it built more for speed.
  • The chain can wrap around her around to give her a defensive shift.
  • The sickle side can be swung at various lengths for lashing.

That’s a lot in one weapon, but that’s what happens when you work with something beyond the basics.  Yet, even a sword can have more than piercing/slashing if you remember that the flat side or hilt can be used for a blunt attack.  As you can imagine, this also means the character needs to be trained unless you attempt a prodigy, which increases the chance of criticism.  People don’t always like a character that is a natural at something, especially when it turns out to be an odd weapon.  Something beyond the standard swords, axes, and spears are hard to wrap one’s head around in terms of simplicity.  This is why you would also need to consider the tactics that stem from using such a weapon.  Although, one way around this is to go for a minimalist action method instead of describing more than stab, block, and hit.

No matter what, this requires a lot of research and thinking on the part of the author.  For many warriors, the weapon is what determines everything else.  Their armor needs to give them enough movement and flexibility to wield their weapon effectively.  Strategies require an understanding of strengths and weaknesses.  A great way to understand this is by comparing Luke Callindor with his sabers to Timoran Wrath with his great axe.  Both have minimal or no armor because one works with speed and the other requires a greater range of motion than he would get with platemail.  So, even their similarity stems from a crucial difference.  Luke will dart around a battlefield looking for openings while Timoran is more inclined to use his strength for a frontal assault.  These changes are fairly normal weapons too, so you can easily see how something more complicated would force various changes.

There are two ways to do research here and it really depends on the type of unique weapon that you choose:

  1. If it’s a weapon that actually exists then you can easily find resources such as videos and written explanations.  I’ve found that YouTube is a greater tool here because seeing it gives a better idea than reading about it.
  2. If this is a weapon that doesn’t really exist then you need to sit back and imagine how it would work.  One method is pretending to fight in slow motion against imaginary opponents to get a ‘feel’ for the weapon.  You might also be able to find a real world equivalent by considering those previously mentioned categories.  As nice as it is to be free with this, there is a higher risk of confusing the reader since they need you to explain the weapon more than if it was something they were familiar with.

Personally, I like the traditional weapons and the more unique real world ones.  Yet, there are times I like making alterations and designing something special.  The best example now is in War of Nytefall where Clyde occasionally uses a serrated sword connected to a gauntlet that fuses to his flesh.  It also vibrates quickly to give a ‘chainsaw’ effect.  I still haven’t settled on the full name of it. Right now, it’s being called a Gauntlet Sword and it really only works for someone like him.  Kind of like a slashing and piercing weapon that is used almost like a fist at times.

So, what are some of the oddest weapons that you’ve seen in fiction?

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Legends of Windemere: Warlord of the Forgotten Age – Guest Post by Charles E. Yallowitz #Fantasy #Magic

Thanks for letting me be a guest. Have a fun week.

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I’m thrilled to welcome Charles E. Yallowitz for a guest post about magic systems.  Charles recently released Warlord of the Forgotten Age, the last entry in his fifteen book Legends of Windemere series.  Fifteen books – what an accomplishment!

Thank you to Teri for offering to host a guest post and helping to promote Legends of Windemere: Warlord of the Forgotten Age.  This is the final book of my fantasy adventure series, which has spanned 15 volumes.  One of the most key factors for the series has been the magic system.  Spells have flown, rituals have been done by both sides, ancient traps have been sprung, and enchanted items have been wielded throughout it all.  This is to be expected since I made Windemere a high magic world and it all started with a simple system that eventually grew into something larger.

The original idea begun with the…

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I’m a Guest on Mind, Pen, And Spirit

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Show Me Yours …

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Hello SErs! Already, we’re a week into 2018. I hope you’ve all gotten off to a great start. For today’s post, I’d like to take a look at showing rather than telling.

How you choose to write your narrative can make a huge difference to your finished book. It can make the difference between grabbing  a reader or sending the cat to sleep.

Just this week, I received a book for editing. Intended as a fictional work, it actually read like a thesis. Written in a dry, passive, and distant manner, it showed no obvious POV voice at all and read more like a list of events. All a great shame, as its premise shows great promise. So, what can turn this around? What’s the difference between showing and telling?

While our choice of POV can affect how close up and personal or not we get with the characters, we…

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Claws of Wind

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A roar from all around

Precursor to pain

As the icy wind cuts deep

Surpassing clothes

And driving through flesh

Stabbing at the bone

We wish to stay inside

Because the gale always finds skin

Yet we never get our wish

And march whimpering

Into the embrace of icy claws

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Meet Guest Author, Gregg Savage…

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I have ended up here, because I managed to earn myself a bonus year of life.


Somewhere between October 13, 2016, and October 13, 2017, I convinced myself that I was 37, and not 36, years old. During a trivia game with some friends, I was asked my age. Having never been one to shy away from repeating the figure, I confidently replied that I was 37, to which my astutely mathematical friend responded that, since I was born in 1981, this was incorrect. In line with modern customs, I promptly asked my smartphone assistant to tell me my age. “You are 36 years old, Gregg,” the assistant responded in a slightly unsettling, motherly tone.

OK. So, I was never going to be a late-blooming mathematician, but, I did score a bonus year and that was pretty neat. It was August 2017, so I had up until October to figure…

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Time to Crack the Knuckles, Open the Laptop, and . . . Never Mind

(Video chosen by 8-year-old who won’t stop singing the chorus.)

The first week of 2018 has come and gone with me feeling like time is nothing more than a human construct.  There isn’t a single difference between 2017 and 2018.  I really don’t want to go on a negative rant, but then I wouldn’t have a post.  There will be a positive at the start and end though.

Let me first say one positive of the week is that Warlord of the Forgotten Age is doing okay.  Selling decently for a holiday and early year release.  I’ve given up on the Top 100 list because it’s just insane what goes on there.  Erotica everywhere along with books that seem to show up, get 40-50 positive reviews in 1-2 days, and get to the top of the lists like a rocket.  No idea how they do that.  So, I’m just happy to stay afloat and that’s still iffy right now.  Overall, I’ve sold 33 copies of the finale, which isn’t too bad.  A lot of my promos are starting to kick in now, which I hope will give it the opening boost.

Now for everything else that happened:

  1. Another review disappeared from Beginning of a Hero.  No idea which one, but it does seem to be a positive.
  2. My son went full tantrum when it came to getting on the bus.  It was to the point where we couldn’t get his shoes or jacket on, so we had to wave the bus on.  As soon as it left, he would snap into a state of happiness and start getting ready for me to drive him to school.  Part of it is because he likes me driving him, but a deeper issue is that he’s terrified of throwing up on the bus.  This caused chaos with my mornings where I either planned to crawl back into bed or dive right into editing War of Nytefall: Loyalty.  He takes the bus home though, so it’s only in the morning.  Monday will be the next test for this.
  3. I had to rethink my biking in the morning because of this issue.  It used to be 30 minutes every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.  I’m going to change it to 15 minutes every day of the week and see if that works better.  This might not be a negative, but it tells me that my days give me less time than they did even a year ago.
  4. SNOW DAY!  I should have seen it coming for Thursday since that was the actual storm.  No idea what went wrong either.  I did shoveling and then it I couldn’t get a moment of peace to edit.  There were other adults around, but my son is obsessed with a Lego Batman game that he only plays with me.  Nobody could talk him out of playing and I was told I could edit in the morning then play in the afternoon.  Didn’t work out that way and I was derailed until the evening, which was tough as well because somebody, not the kid, was chatty.
  5. SNOW DAY AGAIN!  Oh come on!  I understand that there was worry about the roads being dangerous.  The temp being in the negatives sucked too.  It’s just that I really needed to edit since this book has some plot holes that require me to focus and not take extended breaks.  At least I think so, but the one person who has read the book simply shrugs when I ask.  Think they just went through the motions or took so long that whatever happened at the start was forgotten like when I write it the first time.  I spent the day running errands and playing the game.  He gave me 1.5 hours to edit in the morning, but it was like the day before with me waiting for him to walk into the room with questions.  I really pray next week has no breaks and he gets on the bus with his motion sickness bracelets.

The other positive is that I heard back from a cover artist for War of Nytefall and we’re working on a theme for the overall series.  I like what she’s suggested so far, which involves a story-related symbol on each one.  It’s more simplistic than Legends of Windemere, which makes some sense since it isn’t the same kind of adventure.  There are still great battles, but they have a different flavor.  I’m looking forward to when the book is fully edited and the cover is ready to go.  The plan is early April for the first one, which I hope gives me time to recover enough funds to do a proper promotion.  Not 100% certain what that means any more since I don’t get a lot of sales and reviews using social media and the usual sites.  Still, I’m being optimistic about this since I’ve wanted to debut Clyde for years.

Goals of the week?

  1. Finish editing War of Nytefall: Loyalty.
  2. Be more consistent with biking.
  3. Hope:  No driving kid to school.
  4. Review the outline for Quest of the Broken Hearted.
  5. Set up a file for Quest of the Broken Hearted because I want to start writing the day after Martin Luther King Junior Day.
  6. Look over outline for War of Nytefall: Lost because I don’t want to take extended breaks.
  7. Read more Trigun Maximum.
  8. Possibly sleep.
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Smorgasbord Saturday Meet and Greet – Bloggers Watering Hole.

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