The Week That Felt Like a Month

This has been a busy week with a lot of appointments and tasks.  For some reason, it feels like it’s been longer than it actually was.  On Monday, we had enough snow for a school delays and that feels like it was a month ago.  I’ve been trying to figure out what caused this weird time event, but it might just be a busy life.  This week had everything from faculty meetings to the regular weekly events to doctor appointments.  At least it started with a blast last Sunday.

I don’t have any pictures to share, but my parents and I took my son to ‘Aladdin’ on Broadway last Sunday.  This was his first Broadway show and my second, so we were both excited.  Had a nice lunch beforehand and then got on line.  It was an autism friendly showing, so they had people walking around giving out sensory toys.  My son ended up getting 4 because he would hand one to me or my mom then be offered another by a different person.  The last volunteer was told that he had a few of the toys, but he asked for a purple one anyway.  It was okay and he forgot about them once the show started.

‘Aladdin’ on Broadway has many differences, but it was cool that Jafar was played by the original voice.  Just wanted to throw that out there.  Abu and Raja (monkey and tiger) weren’t in the story.  Although, they showed a picture of Abu at one point.  Instead, they were replaced by three friends and three handmaidens respectively.  Honestly, they were so good and entertaining that I forgot they were in place of previous characters.  The changes to the story worked really well and there wasn’t anything out of place.  Genie was fantastic and the songs were memorable.  It is a challenge not to sing along with the familiar ones.  The carpet ride was a great setpiece too because they’re on a giant carpet that goes up into the air.

Another big change that I’m giving its own paragraph is Iago.  In the movie, he’s a parrot, but they made him a person in the show.  At first, I wasn’t sure how this would work, but he had to be my favorite part of the whole thing.  The actor’s delivery of lines and voice was what I would imagine a human version of Iago to be.  He was hilarious and the way he moved had me focusing on him every time he was on stage.  Don’t get me wrong.  The entire cast did a great job and this is coming from a guy who isn’t a fan of Broadway shows.  Yet, I think Iago really stood out for me.  Guess I do tend to become a fan of sidekicks and secondary characters a lot.

I wish I had more to talk about, but I had a lot of busy days that left me drained by the time I got home.  Only managed to write 2 blog posts for April and didn’t touch my books at all.  Friday night was supposed to be the start of a writing weekend, but that life event took a turn.  I needed to just settle back and talk to friends with the hope of clearing my head for tomorrow.  Next week doesn’t look very promising for writing at night, but I might be able to do some more blogs.  I have a list of topics to cover April and May, which still takes some of the edge off.

Oh!  I did reach 1,000 posts in a row on Thursday.  I’m going to keep going.  Tomorrow might break it though since I’m going to be posting my War of Nytefall: Rivalry blurbs then deleting them Monday morning.  Just hoping to get some insight since I’m rusty there.

Got a new messenger bag too.  It’s smaller than my previous one, which I’m retiring due to the bottom starting to fray.  That and there a few too many memories tied to it, which are starting to sour.  Think I need to do some more fresh starts in some aspects of my life that aren’t at my core.  It’s hard to explain since I can’t go into details.  Look at the bag:

Seven Deadly Sins Messenger Bag

That’s the symbol of Meliodas the Dragon Sin of Wrath from Seven Deadly Sins.  He isn’t my favorite, but that’s the only bag from the anime/manga.  I’m hoping to find patches or pins of the other 6 symbols then attach them to the bag.  Probably put Ban, Diane, and King on the back.  Escanor if I can fit him.  Merlin could go under the leather flap and then Gowther can go . . . somewhere.  This plan might fail if the patches are too big since the bag is smaller than I expected.  Pins might be better and then I could possibly add other anime symbols.  Might be overdoing it since this is something I’ll be carrying around school.

Well, that’s really it.  Feel like I’m not doing much to report.  I was thining of talking about my superhero series since I’m eliminating a few characters and that changes the overall dynamic.  I haven’t had any time to look into the whole thing so it would be sloppy to present it to the public.  Let’s dive into the goals of the week:

  1. Writing this weekend.  Finish chapter 5 of War of Nytefall: Eradication and get through Chapter 6.  Maybe push into Chapter 7 if I can.
  2. Work hard at job.
  3. Continue reading Yu Yu Hakusho.
  4. Get back to biking.
  5. Try to relax since my stress levels have been high.
  6. Test out blurbs.
  7. Set up some April blog posts.
  8. Finish getting tax stuff set up and sent out.
  9. Get a little extra sleep.

Add-on: So, I woke up this morning to being told that there are issues with one of my books.  Specifically, I do not have a Logical Table of Contents (NCX).  Yet, I’ve checked the Word file and the Kindle file.  The ToC that I have works with the links sending readers to the proper chapters.  Anybody able to clarify this?  The book in question is Legends of Windemere: Allure of the Gypsies.  The strange thing is that this book was put out with its ToC back in 2013, so I’m surprised Amazon said something now.  Is this something that was reported by them or a reader?

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7 Tips to Being Precognitive

Philip J. Fry

Don’t we all wish at times to be able to see even a little into the future?  Guess not everyone, but it could have some advantages.  You’ll definitely know about the weather or traffic.  Waking up will tell you if it’s worth getting out of bed.  No more paying for movies since you can see the ending . . . Well, I guess we already have the Internet for that one.  Still, this would be a fun power, but with a lot of danger.  Maybe one needs a few guidelines to using precognition.

  1. Be careful who you talk to about your powers.  Sharing your gift so openly is bound to attract the attention of unsavory folks.  Not only gamblers, but criminals of all kinds who want to see if they can get away with things.  We’re talking cheating on your math final all the way to jaywalking.  Probably some other evil stuff too.
  2. It doesn’t hurt to use subtly use your powers for a little edge.  Nothing too obvious, but you can always pay off debts and bills when they get too high.  Just need to look into the right future and place yourself accordingly.  Playing sports can be tricky too here because you might always know when and where the opponents are coming.
  3. As long as you don’t need physical contact or an in-person visual, you can probably tell futures over the Internet.  Hide your voice and location then put yourself out there to do your thing.  It is okay to say that you can grant wishes too because many people might not know the difference between that and precognition.  Oh, try to make sure you’re paid under the table to avoid the government peeking in on your abilities.
  4. DO NOT LET THE GOVERNMENT KNOW YOU CAN SEE THE FUTURE!  Seriously, I don’t have to tell you how bad an idea this is.
  5. Regardless of how tempting it is, avoid looking at your own future.  Besides the loss of any sense of excitement about life, you can easily run yourself into an existential crisis here.  Did your future factor in that you would look into your future or did looking into the future change what you saw?  Could you have avoided this fate if you didn’t give in to curiosity or was this inevitable?  How many diverging timelines exist in reality and are you making more with every viewing?
  6. Just accept that people are going to mix it up with telepathy at times.  No idea why this happens.  Precognition is seeing the future and telepathy is reading minds.  They don’t really go in the same bucket outside of being psychic powers.  At best, you can see into the future to get an idea of what the other person is going to say or do, but their thoughts are blocked.  Maybe you should just have a sign to carry around and show people when this comes up.
  7. Use your powers to stop you from making a 7 Tips to Precognition list.  This didn’t work out nearly as well as I had expected.  I think.  Maybe it’s what it was meant to be and I had no choice in the matter.  Is there a seer in the house?
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The 2019 Interview Series Featuring David Faucheaux

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Derailing Bedlam: Trust Us. We’re Semi-Professionals Part 1 #fiction #adventure

As usual, here is your warning that this story has cursing, sex (not graphic), innuendo, and violence.  It’s my Rated-R action adventure called Derailing Bedlam.  This is the fourth outing (third official) for Cassidy and Lloyd, so feel free to click on one of the two covers to see how it started.  Each one is 99 cents!

Cover by Jon Hunsinger

Cover Art by Jon Hunsinger

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When Friends Fight in Fiction

Luffy vs Sanji

So, I’ve been reading a lot of manga and watching a lot of anime over the last year.  I also watched a bunch of a movies and TV shows.  One thing seemed to show up a lot and that was a plot or scene where friends fight.  I saw it was Luffy vs Sanji in One Piece, Meliodus vs Ban in Seven Deadly Sins, Superman vs the Justice League, and the list keeps going on as long as the story was action-based.  Even those that weren’t had at least a yelling match between friends.  So, why does this keep happening?

All I can do is look at my own stories and see if I’ve done it, which had me running through Legends of Windemere.  Luke Callindor and Nyx fought during their first encounter, but I don’t remember any real throw down among the champions.  Maybe it’s been so long that I forgot, which is possible.  For some reason, I seem to always want to through body switching or mind control into the scenario.  This removes a lot of the real tension and weight of the fight because at least one combatant isn’t in their right state of mind.  I know some much later books on my ‘to write’ list will have some feuding friends that tests the relationship, but I don’t think I really tried this yet.

I might have answered my own question too.  These types of fights result in a massive test of the relationship.  Instead of a simple debate or disagreement, two established friends have decided to come to blows.  In some stories, this is explained as men only being able to settle differences with their fists.  This gets used even if one or both of the men are actually women.  It works off the personality type that needs to either give or receive a thrashing to see clearly, which isn’t that common a thing in reality.  At least, it isn’t one that can legally settle problems the way they want to.  For this, you really need to establish the right culture, world, and characters for it to work.  Beyond that, you have friends who have come to a major impasse and lose their tempers.  Some fights can be for one of their own good to stop them from making a mistake and others are to see who will get their way, but the result is always a change.  Real people and characters don’t get into a slugfest and stay the same.

Change is an important part of this event too.  It can show how the two characters have changed in a way that they are not as compatible as they once were.  A fight may be the catalyst for a new stage of growth between them too.  As weird as it sounds, they might need that release to get over a hill that would erode the entire story.  Much of this depends on personality and the stress put on the characters over the course of the journey.  If you have one becoming cynical and the other staying optimistic then you can see an easy source of conflict.  A fight could result in one finding more positivity in the world and the other seeing that there is more darkness out there than they realized.  This still borders on being something that only happens in fiction, but it’s been done a lot as a method of character development.

Personally, I think you need a long build up for this type of scene to work.  It has to be done in stages if you want a good emotional payoff:

  1. You need to establish the relationship as something solid and deep.  Having casual acquaintances get into a fight lacks the same weight as best friends.  An example that will get me in some trouble is Iron Man and Captain America.  In the comics, they had been friends for years with a lot of established history.  So, the Civil War story line in the comics had a lot of emotional impact because they were truly close friends that decided to resort to violence against each other.  In the movies, (at least to me) they never really hit that note with them butting heads in Avengers 1, actually battling in Avengers 2, and then the big war.  Forgetting the opinions on why I could be wrong here, I think an issue is that there wasn’t enough time put into establishing a truly solid bond between the characters.
  2. Gradually build up the issue that will cause the conflict.  Don’t drop something into the mix and then have them begin fighting.  That will seem out of character because they were tight only moments before.  Have them voice differing opinions to each other or secondary characters.  Give them some solo time where they make decisions that will feed into the looming conflict.  As time goes on, make it clear that there is one thing that these friends will disagree on.  This way, the actual event feels like an inevitable point of the story.
  3. Do not go overboard if you want to maintain the relationship.  There are some things that you cannot come back from.  We’re mostly talking about friends fighting and then staying friends here too.  Not one going villain and the other staying hero.  You need to make sure the issue is not so big that they can never go back to being friends even if it’s not as strong a bond.  It can even come from a third party who manages to snap them back to their senses.  Helps to do some research into previous uses of the plot ‘twist’ or consider your own friendships.  Talk to your best friend about what would happen if you two were in the situation and you might find an answer to this part.

As I start working towards War of Nytefall: Rivalry, which has a version of this, I’m curious to know what people think of this topic.  Have you ever written a fighting friends scene?  Do you think this always has to end in the death of a friendship or can it be done without sacrificing the entire relationship?

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Expanding on living documents

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Hi gang, Craig here again. I’ve written about my living documents here before. You can check out this post from 2016. I’m still a big believer in living documents, but it’s become more of an expanded library now.

Turns out, these don’t have to be limited to documents. My story boards are living documents, in a way. They evolve slowly, and I harvest them when they’re ripe. You can read more about story boarding here.

My newest one is Pinterest. I know we’re supposed to use everything for promotion, but I find that tiresome. It’s also overlooking some genuine value in the format.

I started off making book specific boards. Those are helpful when it comes time to write a story. Maybe there is a setting, or car, or something you want to use in the tale. It’s nice to have a reference point or two.

Then it occurred…

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New Release – Here Be Unicorns Bundle – Preorder #Unicorns #Bundle #Fantasy

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I am delighted to announce the forthcoming release of the latest in the Here Be series. Here Be Unicorns From fable to legend, these wondrous beasts enchant us. Healers or harmers, no one truly…

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Teaser Tuesday: Casing the Joint #vampires #fantasy

Cover Art by Alison Hunt

Not much to say about this part from War of Nytefall: Loyalty.  Enjoy.

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Free Story: Two’s a Crowd

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*** Read Infinite Waters for free on Kindle Unlimited ***From the blog of Nicholas C. Rossis, author of science fiction, the Pearseus epic fantasy series and children's books

In April 2018, I posted my thousandth post on this blog. To celebrate, I started sharing here all my short stories. Every couple of weeks, I’ll be posting one story from my celebrated Exciting Destinies series for you to enjoy. With over 30 stories so far, I hope you’ll have lots of fun in the coming months!

This week, it’s “Two’s a Crowd,” a story from Infinite Waters. Click here to read some more free stories.

Two’s a Crowd

“Can you believe that idiot?” I spat the words as soon as I slammed the car door shut.

“Honey, that idiot is your older brother.” My wife looked at the mirror and patted her lips with her index finger. She opened her purse, oblivious to my rage.

“Older brother? He’s, like, ten minutes older than me!”

Susan pressed her…

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The Decoy/False Protagonist: Fooled You!

Gurren Lagann

I kind of stumbled onto this concept while looking for something else.  I don’t actually remember what I was searching for because this was more interesting.  At first, I thought I did it with Beginning of a Hero when I introduced the paladin, but Luke Callindor had shown up first.  It was also clear that he was the hero of the story, which means I haven’t attempted a False/Decoy protagonist yet.  Now, what is this?

A False Protagonist is a literary trick where the author creates a hero that they build up as the main character.  At some point in the story, this character is either eliminated or turned evil to reveal that he/she/it is not the true protagonist.  Various methods of removal include death, memory wipe, disappearance, retirement, crippling injuries, or simply giving up.  This is typical done for shock value, which is why it’s called a trope, but it still works.  Now, the real protagonist could be a supporting character or someone that shows up with a connection later.  Normally, the audience has already met the real hero or at least has heard of them.  This character carries the story to its finale in a way that makes sense, so you need to work on a good transition.

You do have some risks here because people might become so attached to the False Protagonist that they refuse to continue.  An example here is Gurren Lagann, which has Kamina as the hero for the first leg of the story only to be replaced by Simon who proves to be the real protagonist.  This worked because they were friends and Simon stepping into the role felt natural.  Still, I’ve met many people who liked Kamina so much that they stopped watching after he was gone.  Is there a way to counter this?  Not perfectly because you can’t force readers to bond with every character.  Everyone picks their favorites and gamble on those characters getting a lot of page time as well as surviving.  So, a False Protagonist really needs to be done with the idea that you’re going to lose some readers with the transition.

Personally, I find this technique intriguing and keep thinking about how many times I’ve run into it.  Probably not as much as I believe since I read a lot of stuff this is fairly straightforward.  Video games do this a bunch like Metal Gear Solid 2 and Final Fantasy X, which I enjoyed.  Not really sure I could pull this one off either.  Partially because I blog a lot and love introducing characters, so I’d probably ruin it by accident.  The other is that I tend to be fairly straightforward and blunt.  Yet, I could probably pull it off for a few chapters if I put my mind to it.  There is one story where I was thinking of doing that, but the blurb might out me as well as the series title.  Guess there are some tricks I’m simply not designed for.  Wonder if Crossing Bedlam counts since it starts with Cassidy having a team and then Lloyd kills everyone except her.  Eh, I’ll count it for now.

So, what do you think about the False Protagonist?  Have you ever used it or do you think you will?

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