Voices from Inside the House . . . Because We Can’t Go Out

This week was crazy.  We’d be doing schoolwork nonstop from 8 am until 1 or 2 pm.  I know people suggest breaks, but then it draws out longer and I get a child who is crying about not having any fun.  Those small blips of fun aren’t easy to break out of and they prevent more time-consuming things from happening.  For example, we play video games for an hour or two after a full day of work.  Can’t use those between things because you can’t just start and stop easily.  Nope, we have to hunker down and barrel into the workloads, which might be more next week.  Needless to say, nobody is really happy about the situation.  Guess that’s a plus because anyone who was enjoying it would be driving the rest of us insane.

After my son finished his work, I’d jump into my own stuff.  I was usually keeping up while he worked.  Slipping away to do things while he practiced drums or read to his grandma helped me keep up with things.  Chat apps are going to be used to give lessons, so both me and him will have to factor those in.  My only hope is that a system is made to allow for work and not drain both children and parents during a stressful time.  I understand the need to keep the curriculum going because it’ll be a disaster if we return to find that nobody has made progress.  Yet, we aren’t doing kids a service when we drive them into the ground with work.  Not a popular opinion, but I’m seeing my son wear down and get difficult by the end of the week.  By the time he gets to his mom, he’s nearly burnt out and wanting to play.  We don’t get spring break too, so there’s no time for rest or recovering our energies.

As you can guess, I got no real writing done because of everything going on.  My nights were spent with the TV and jigsaw puzzle if not in a meeting.  I collapsed fairly early, but was usually woken up by my phone going off.  My mind wasn’t able to focus on writing even though the outline for Savagery was finished last weekend.  I did finish all of the planning for the fantasy tip book, so I’m up to figuring out a name.  Everything I come up with is either too clinical, too silly, or lacks the necessary oomph.  There are so many fantasy writing books out there that I need something to draw people in and establish mine as unique.  Usually, I’m pretty good with titles, but I’m having a really big problem on this one.

I’m almost done preparing posts for June, which is great.  It means I don’t have to worry when things go crazy in May.  I should start in on July too, but I’m in need of topics for that month.  Feel free to suggest.

What else is going on?  My 40th birthday is on Thursday, which is also the second night of Passover.  I have a post going up, but I don’t know what it’s about.  Too lazy and out of it to check.  (WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP TEXTING ME!?)  Can’t go out for dinner and family is staying away.  It’ll just be me, my parents, and my son.  It sounds like we’re only going to do Passover and leave it at that.  So, I turn 40 with no fanfare, which people have pointed out is a pathetic complaint given the situation.  I guess it is, but I’m still annoyed that there’s practically nothing going on at all.  It’s been suggested that I do a big 41st birthday next year, but it’s not the same and I feel like that would be even more pathetic than me being sour about this year.  A lot of people with birthdays in this time period are getting shafted.  Some are stuck alone while others have family who may or may not want to acknowledge the day.  Overall, it’s like a lemon juice being poured into a seeping wound right now.

What do we have for goals?

  1. Try to start writing Savagery
  2. Figure out a title for the fantasy tip book
  3. Finish the June posts
  4. Schoolwork for my son
  5. Schoolwork for me
  6. Try to have some fun
  7. Birthday and Passover
  8. Jigsaw puzzle
  9. Build up the energy for a real goal post next week
  10. Maybe do a Sin story outline.  That series needs a title too.  ‘Sin’?  ‘Ethereal Soul’? ‘The Ether King’?  (Sin uses the Ether Crossbow as a weapon.)

Final news:  Long ago, I bought a bottle of Writer’s Tears whiskey.  I said that I would finish it and fill it with salt water.  Viola!

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Time for a Freeby

coldhandboyack's avatarEntertaining Stories

Everyone is self isolating, if not outright quarantined right now. It get’s boring, even for those of us who can work from home.

Add into that, a whole bunch of people who lost their jobs and are trying to file for unemployment right now, and we could all use a break.

Reading is a good way to spend a few hours, and all authors would love to have you check out their wares. I don’t want anyone to accuse me of taking advantage, so I’m going to do a free promotion. Even folks who lost their jobs can take advantage of a freeby.

Don’t freak out on me just yet, because I set it up to run on Monday. This post is just so you can line up ahead of time, while practicing your social distancing skills. I’ll run out another post when it goes live.

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My Book Categories

Dammit, Zoidberg!

So, I got to thinking about how most of my books fall into umbrella categories.  These are groupings that range from massive to small, but it does show I have a weird series of patterns:

  1. Core–  Legends of Windemere, Quest of the Brokenhearted, War of Nytefall, Sin, Darwin, Elysium Saga, War of the Tainted, Ruins of the Zodiac Gods, Ryusuke, and the Grand Finale.
  2. Mylrixians– Project Phoenix, Savior, Psi-Child, Gearhead Princess, Ninja Never Wins, Rose of the Damned, Charioteers, Starlets, and Serum.  These are all of the superhero ones and there could be others in the mix.
  3. Windemere History– Gods’ Fall, Tears of Gola, Gabriel’s Song, Blundering 7, and Selenia Trilogy.  One could probably put War of Nytefall in here too.
  4. Organizations– Coven of the Grey (Witches), Monster Hunters, Ruin Divers, Wraith Slayers, Brian Hunter, Enigma Eye, Phi Beta (no idea if this is right), Garden of the 4 Sisters, and Lords of Hyperscape.  These are all various groups that range from a type of specialist to military to a fantasy sports thing.
  5. Kingdom Builders–  Sutyra, Tiara Wars/Sword of Bone, Keys of Eden (100 monster search), and Lions of Trune.
  6. Wandering Heroes–  The Druid, Jack, Angel of Tears, and Child of the Hunt.
  7. Ichabod Brooks–  The man deserves a category.
  8. Fae Tales . . . These guys do seem to be way out in left field since I’m no longer sure if I’m going to do this one.  Been leaning towards adding the fairy stories to the Garden of the 4 Sisters or pepper other series with the characters from this since I never locked in a real idea.

So, that’s really it.  Funny thing is that I’m writing this in early January, but I’m starting to get an idea of giving each of the unpublished ideas a Sunday post.  Make that the ‘Future’ day whenever it’s open.  I already did an overview of the Mylrixians.  By now, I’ve probably done a bunch of Keys of Eden beasts too.  Anyway, this is what I’ve got in the pipeline and would love to finish writing before I die.  And people wonder why I get so twitchy when I go without writing.  Having these many ideas flushed out in my head and a sense of my own mortality isn’t fun.

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5 Dramatic Techniques to Transform Your Writing

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cover of Dramatic Techniques for Creative Writers by Jules HorneALLi, the Alliance of Independent Authors, recently published a post on dramatic techniques by Jules Horne, author of Dramatic Techniques for Creative Writers.

With a background in scriptwriting, Jules is perfect for explaining how the dramatic techniques used in theaters and movies can power up your writing and make your storytelling bolder, more engaging, and more compelling. After all, these techniques have been test-driven for centuries in front of unforgiving live audiences, and they work!

Here are five ways you can use them to transform your fiction writing.

1.    Dramatic actions

‘Dramatic actions’ isn’t about car chases, swashbuckling and hair-raising stunts. It’s a specific term to describe the underlying objective (‘want’) that’s driving your character.

Using dramatic actions will bring greater clarity, momentum, and tension to your scenes. It will stop your characters from wandering aimlessly, by clarifying a clear, driving throughline for each moment.

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How to Publish with KDP: Part Seven A

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Hello SErs. Harmony here.  Here is the first part of the seventh installment in the post series dedicated to taking a step-by-step look at how to get your finished manuscript from your computer and on sale on Amazon in both ebook and paperback.

If you’d like to take a look back at the previous posts in this series, please click on the links below:

Outline: https://wp.me/p7OGru-29c

Part 1 (Software for Writing) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-29t

Part 2 (General Formatting Necessities) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-29J

Part 3 (Ebook Conversion) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2ah

Part 4 (Paperback Formatting) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2eS

Part 5 (Image Software for Making Book Covers) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2gi

Part 6 A (Using Amazon’s Cover Creator Tool for eBook) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2gQ

Part 6 B (Making your own ebook cover to upload to Amazon) : https://wp.me/p7OGru-2hQ

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Immortal Wars: The Summoning Part 13 #fiction #throwback

(Previously on Immortal Wars.)

Disclaimer: Immortal Wars was the book I came up with and wrote in high school.  I hadn’t even hit college by the time I wrote the first two books.  That means I hadn’t developed my style yet, wasn’t good at self-editing, and the story was fairly basic. So, you’ve been warned that this is the ultimate author throwback segment for my blog and will show my author origins.  FYI-  I put the first book (The Summoning) through a Print-on-Demand publisher and the second one (Light, Blood, & Tears) never saw the light of day.  Enjoy!

In the center of the blazing sun is a gigantic white globe.  It is almost as big as the Earth’s moon and it is covered with glass windows that reflect the sun’s firey light. This enormous structure has been around long before the sun was created and only its computer system knows who made it.  The intense heat from the sun has no effect on the base.  In fact, the heat originates from the sun base.  In certain areas of the base there are strange golden towers that jut out of the sphere like metallic trees.  These are the sensor arrays of the guardians’ base of operations, which is better known as the Sun Base.  Every now and then a black light appears around the sphere and disappears after a few seconds.  The ebony light is the unbreakable energy shield that protects the base from solar flares and most kinds of hostile invaders.  The shield also has the unique ability to cloak the base from all forms of sensors and certain space signals.  It gives the sense of nothing being in the center of the sun and that there is an incredible amount of heat at the very center.  The sphere of glass and metal is armed with lasers and solar flare cannons that float around in the sun’s surface just waiting for an unwanted ship or creature to try and invade the base.

In one of the many white-walled hallways, a flash of dark amber light appears.  When the light fades away, Solix and his four stunned companions find themselves in their brand new home.  The teenagers’ first reaction is a long silence of awe, which is broken by a loud, mechanical voice.

“It looks like you have returned successfully, Solix.  If he has not told you anything about me yet then I will introduce myself.  I am the station’s central computer system.  You may call me SEAS,” says the computer when he finishes identifying the new arrivals.

“SEAS?  That sounds familiar.  Does that stand for anything?” asks Ed as he stares at a blinking monitor on the wall.  The lights on the monitor form a blue, smiling face that bounces around the screen like a rubber ball.

“I do not see how you could recognize my name because I am one of a kind.  Only a few creatures from Earth know of my existence and they are your enemies.  But to answer your question, SEAS stands for Sentient Energy Adapting System.  But that is far too long a name for you to say over and over and over again.”

“No kidding.  Where do we stay on this thing?  A large place like this has to have thousands of rooms filled with cool gadgets.  Or at least some weird aliens,” says Kelly while she looks into a nearby room filled with computer screens.  There are pictures of different areas of the solar system on the screens and very large one at the back of the room that is blank.

“Sorry but there are no aliens here.  Only SEAS and the other robots.  Not many people come to visit this place anymore.  All of you will stay in the recreation room until your bedrooms have been prepared.  The room Kelly is looking into is the sun base’s video room.  It is used for scanning the solar system for any hostile activities or any potential problems.  But you can take a lengthy tour later.  Now, if you will follow me, I will bring you to the room that I want you all to wait in,” explains Solix.  The sun guardian quickly walks down the hallway while removing his yellow cloak.  A small hook descends from a hole in the ceiling in order to take the cloak from Solix.  When he stops at a big, black door, the heavy looking door effortlessly opens and the four newcomers are left awestruck for the second time this day.

“This place is huge.  You could probably put our entire town in here and never notice the missing space,” whispers Steve as he looks at the room before him.  On one side of the room is an arena, in which you can play any kind of sport that you want.  The arena is also used for the guardians’ battle training sessions and workouts.  Other areas contain video games, exercise equipment, and obsidian tables and chairs.  A tall six-armed robot sits behind the bar and turns around as soon as the door hisses open.

“I will privately speak with Miss Tavinowsky first.  Feel free to order a drink or use the multi-sport arena.  The controls are on the doors’ consoles.  Try not to cause any unnecessary trouble,” says Solix.

“Not that I care, but what kinds of sports can we play?” asks Delila.

“Anything you want.  The arena’s database has a list of thousands of games and training scenarios.  Although, I would not advise any of you to play with the training scenarios until your powers have been discovered.  You might find Venutian soccer a very interesting sport.  When I was young, it was my favorite pastime.  Of course, the difference between this and the Earth version is that the goals are nothing more than two small holes in the arena’s walls and the gravity is that of the Earth’s moon.  Have fun.”

Solix leaves with Kelly nervously following him to a glass elevator.  The three remaining immortals cautiously walk into the dark multi-sport arena.  As soon as Ed types in the number code that he finds for Venutian soccer, the white lights go on and the gravity changes.  It takes a few minutes for the three teenagers to get used to the new level of gravity.  When they are finally ready, the computer creates three holographic opponents that look like humanoid cats.  Once a green, metallic ball is shot out of a hole in the floor, the awkward game begins.

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Check This Out: WordStirs

L. Marie's avatarEl Space--The Blog of L. Marie

With me on the blog today is another of my awesome VCFA classmates, the delightful Laura Byrne, who is here to talk about her news website, WordStirs, which she maintains with her son, Tim.

     

El Space: Four quick facts about yourself?
Laura:
• I’m a former sports editor and writer, whose athletic son had to remind her that there is more at stake in the world than the score of any given football game.
• Tim is a former finance student and current consultant, who plans to drown the world in unbiased, simple news so we can stop beating each other up at family dinners, and get back to arguing about important things, like whether or not ketchup should be refrigerated.
• We are a mother/son partnership that somehow works, despite a few notable differences. Example: Tim lives in Manhattan in an apartment the size…

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Jonah, on #LisaBurtonRadio

coldhandboyack's avatarEntertaining Stories

Lisa Burton

Welcome to another edition of Lisa Burton Radio. I’m your host, Lisa the robot girl, and I’m excited to be on the air in this time of national crisis.

Many of us are sequestered away right now, and that leaves room for a bit of reflection. I think we can all form an idea of what that’s like. Which brings me to my special guest today. “Welcome to the show, Jonah.”

“Hi, Lisa. Thanks for inviting me.”

“My bio says you’re alone on an island somewhere. To be honest, that sounds like a dream come true to many people. What can you tell us about that?”

“Oh, yeah, dream come true. Let me tell you about that. It’s anything but a paradise. The whole island is covered with tangled brush with thorns and stinging nettles. And that doesn’t even include the poisonous flowers that burn the skin horribly. But the…

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Ask-the-Author . . . Wait . . . Why Did I Write That?

I make my blog subject list and schedule posts pretty far in advance these days.  It’s because I really only have time to blog on weeknights and want to keep that part far ahead.  Clears writing time on the weekend.  Anyway, I got to today and saw . . . Ask Author.

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I can’t figure out if I was going to simply do a Q&A here or I had something specific in mind.  Truth is that it’s April Fools Day.  I feel that if I do anything seriously then people might mistake it for a joke.  Best to keep it simple.  Besides, I figure the joke will be on me if I leave myself open to questions.

So, ask away and I’ll respond as soon as I can.  Wednesdays can be pretty crazy until the evening.  It can be able the blog, my books, writing in general, or almost anything else that isn’t too personal.

(Was I supposed to do this, turn off comments, and say April Fools?  I really need to put better notes on these things.)

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Teaser Tuesday: Thief on the Loose #fantasy #adventure

Here’s a fun little piece of Legends of Windemere: Family of the Tri-Rune!  Finding it harder to put action pieces up than I expected, so I don’t think I’ll be able to stick to that idea every time.

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

“You sure the thief went this way?”

“As sure as I can be.”

“This’ll be the tenth time we cornered him.”

“I don’t think it’s a him.”

“I don’t care what’s between the thief’s legs. I’m tired of this one making fools of us all week.”

The seven guards slowly step into the crate-filled alley, their swords drawn and their shields held out. The rising sun casts some light into the mouth of the alley, but it is not enough to destroy all of the shadows. A shaggy cat screeches and scampers out from its hiding place as the guards continue their cautious advance. They stare at every shadow, each guard looking in a different direction. After ten minutes, they reach the back of the alley where the white brick of a house blocks their path.

“At least you guys are persistent!” shouts a deep, baritone voice from behind them. “The guards in Rodillen usually give up the chase after three days.”

The guards spin around to see a muscular shadow stepping out from behind a nearby stack of wooden crates. They are about to charge when the shadow holds up its fist and casually waves with its other hand. A nervous murmur passes through the squad of guards before the mysterious thief turns to run out of the alley. They start to follow, but the swaying towers of crates begin crashing to the ground as the thief runs by them. Before they can get out, the guards are trapped under a heavy pile of crates filled with pillows, empty bottles, and other random trash.

Racing across the street and ducking into another alley, the muscular thief weaves his way through the shadows. Eventually, the shadowy figure leaps onto a low ledge and proceeds to gracefully bounce between the two closely set buildings. Grabbing the edge of the roof, the thief flips out of sight and rolls into a crouch. The sun washes the muscular figure away, leaving a slender form clad in a full-body leather suit. She casually tucks her short, blonde hair behind her pointy ears before stretching her arms over her head.

“Come home, Flitter,” the elf whispers into the wind. She sits down on the roof to count the money she stole during the night while a young barn owl swoops out of the sky. The small beast lands on her head, leaning forward to stare into her golden eyes. She pulls a dead mouse out of one of her belt pouches and hands it to the hungry owl.

“You did a good job finding marks,” the thief says, dropping her new wealth into an empty pouch. “Still, we should find a way to gather more attention. It’s been a week and the guild has been quiet. In Rodillen, I would have been threatened or recruited by now. These guys seem to be pickier.”

The barn owl begins making noises as it excitedly hops along the far edge of the rooftop. The thief creeps over to the bird and peeks over the edge to see the seven guards standing in the street. In the middle of the guards is a large knight with orange hair and a pronounced lower jaw. A fancy war hammer is strapped to his waist, but his hand is gripped on its handle in case he needs to draw it quickly. He begins pointing around the street, sending the guards to search the surrounding area for something or someone. The thief grins as she realizes that she has gained the attention of a fully-armored knight. After watching the knight for a few minutes, she notices that his left gauntlet is a lot thicker than his right gauntlet.

“I think I found a way to get some attention,” the thief whispers, licking her ruby lips in anticipation. “I need you to draw the guards away, Flitter. The knight won’t move until they call for his help. Get them about ten blocks away and fly high to look for me because I’ll probably be on the run.”

The owl hoots at her and walks to the center of the roof before taking to the air. Its shadow transforms into a faint, humanoid silhouette bounding over the rooftops. She patiently waits for the sound of the guards shouting that they see something. Using her ears to track the differing footsteps, she listens for all of the guards leave the area. To her relief, she never hears the heavy steps of the knight. Reaching into her dark velvet and leather boots, she pulls out a vial of thick, red liquid and a strap of flesh-colored adhesive cloth with a horizontal slit through the middle. Still listening for movement from the knight, she sticks the cloth to her neck and covers the entire area with the red liquid. The liquid starts to shimmer and flow down her chest as if it is seeping out of a wound. To anyone who takes a quick look at the thief, it would appear that somebody has slit her throat.

“Time for a performance,” she chuckles, stepping off the roof over the alley and drifting down to the ground. As soon as she hits the ground, she slams herself against a stack of boxes and screams at the top of her lungs. The scream cuts off with a horrifying gurgle as she stumbles and trips her way to the mouth of the alley. She pitches forward, landing face first on the ground and sending the fake blood splattering ahead of her.

“Help me,” she whispers, reaching toward the towering knight, who is swiftly approaching. Her other hand squeezes her neck, squirting some of the fake blood through her fingers.

“Hold this to your throat,” the knight urges her. He presses a soft, yellow handkerchief to her wound to stop the bleeding. “I will get you a healer immediately.”

The thief grabs the knight by his left wrist when she feels him attempt to move. “Please don’t leave me. It’s getting cold and dark.”

“You need a healer if you are going to survive,” the knight insists. He looks around the street to see if there is anyone he can call to for help.

“You’re very kind, but the wound is too deep and I’ve lost too much blood,” she says, her voice getting so low that the knight has to lean in to hear her. “Just don’t let me die here alone, sir.”

“My name is Lord Highrider,” the knight says, gently stroking the elf’s head. “I promise to stay with you until the end. Can you tell me who did this to you?”

“I was attacked from behind,” she answers with a weak, trembling voice. Her eyes suddenly go wide and she tries to point across the street. “Him . . . that guy has my blood on him. I can see it on his arm.”

Lord Highrider tries to hold the panicky elf down without causing her pain while he turns his head to look across the street. A few people have left their homes to go to work or get some early shopping done, but he doesn’t see a man with blood on his arm. In fact, it is only women on the street and all of them have stopped to stare at the gory scene. A suspicious feeling washes over the knight before he suddenly notices that he no longer feels the dying elf in his arms. He looks down to see that his gauntlet compartment has been pried open, the hidden money pouch no longer inside.

“Guards!” the knight shouts, his voice echoing along the street.

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