
Anchorman
(So, this is a poem depicting a scene in Beginning of a Hero. It was one that kept evolving with giving more to secondary characters and leading up to Luke Callindor making a big mistake. There’s some childish humor in it too, but I think it works given the setting.)
Divided in pairs
By the stern instructor
Forced to depend
On the skill of another
Teamwork
The crucial skill
Essential to survive in battle
The drill is simple
Two on two
An even match
Yet for some
The difficulty rises
When paired
With a rabid rival
He is fast
While she is strong
A perfect pairing
But neither one
Can stand the other
And their foes
Are their mirror image
It starts off foul
Arguing
And working alone
Tempers flair
When she uses him
As a blunt weapon
To smack the larger boy
Their teacher shouts
And threatens
Promises of labor
In the distant swamp
Filled with mire
And monsters
Feared by all the class
A change is sensed
They work together
Keeping the others
Off balance
Until the moment’s right
And they divide
To battle one on one
She wrestles with the big man
His massive strength|
Against her corded muscle
Both backed
By Giant’s blood
Pummeling each other
Like warring bears
Her ally has the girl
The princess of the class
She backs away
From his flurry of attacks
Stumbling like a fool
Yet mysteriously
Always out of reach
The big man cries
As his knee is buckled
His partner runs to help
Forgetting
Where she is
And that the fleet-footed boy
Is standing in her way
He reaches out
To grab her arm
Missing as she weaves
Yet his hand is full
Of her simple shirt
That tears away
And ends the day’s lesson




A creative way to write a scene synopsis. 😊
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Thanks. 😁
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Charles, this captures that perfect balance of training drama and comic relief. The tension building from the rivals forced together, through the accidental weapon use, to the final torn shirt it all flows naturally.
The scene feels lived-in, grounded in the small frustrations and mistakes that make combat training feel real.
Clever choice to end on an accident rather than heroic mastery. 💙
Much love,
Khadija 💕🤗
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Thanks. Given the story, I felt accident worked better for the barely trained hero than skilled victory. He had to grow into that.
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