7 Tips to Having Enemies Become Allies

Spider-Man and Venom

The temptation to turn a popular villain into a hero can be pretty strong.  To do this, you need to make the two enemies stop wanting to kill each other.  Might not be an easy task because just saying ‘they get along now’ doesn’t work.  You have to put effort into the change.  So, what can help with this?

  1. If this is your main villain, you need to replace them with a new threat.  They can’t just walk away or be defeated then come back to be friendly without there being a new antagonist.  Otherwise, you have a big hole in your story structure.  You can’t just throw anyone or anything in there too.  The new threat needs to be as strong or stronger than its predecessor in terms of danger and impact on the overall story.
  2. A mutual enemy isn’t always needed to begin this new relationship.  This will have to appear at some point since the main goal of the story will be to overcome whatever the new threat is.  Yet, the former enemies might bond in a different way even before the newest big bad appears.  Maybe one searches for the other to get answers or some kind of item for their own use.  The former villain might show up for forgiveness if that can be seen as something they would do.  Fun to just play with the concept. Of course, this is fairly difficult to accomplish, so the ‘uniting against a common foe’ is the easiest path.
  3. If the former enemies are forced to work together, they probably shouldn’t be getting along perfectly. They ex-villain will especially be prone to not rushing to help their new ally. Self-serving habits don’t disappear quickly, so they will have to be eased into acting like an actual hero. Grandstanding and not working as a team would be common as well, but not to a point where they should be losing with no chance of recovery.  It could be something as simple as getting in the way or not listening to a plan because they have a better idea.
  4. Insulting banter and sarcastic mockery at failures is always a way to go.
  5. A source of friction can, and probably should, be that these two characters will have different methods.  At least at first.  The ex-villain may start off cruel, violent, and prone to use their former methods for good.  This would make them an anti-hero, which could pit their morality against the established hero.  For example, they could argue over killing or the use of torture.  Part of this storyline would be the villain growing out of their darker habits and/or the hero stepping out of their own comfort zone.
  6. If the history between these characters is highly toxic, you might have a lot of trouble selling the new alliance.  That doesn’t mean it’s impossible, but you’re going to have to explain why they aren’t holding grudges.  In fact, they might be doing that for a very long time until a big event causes them to rethink things.  Maybe the ex-villain nearly dies saving someone to show they’ve changed. It could be a conversation followed by an act of redemption.  This really depends on what happened because there are definitely some acts that cannot be forgiven.
  7. There is a challenging option to have this alliance be one-sided.  The former villain might be forced into the partnership, so they aren’t really friends.  They will continue working together until they no longer have a mutual enemy.  Another possibility is that the former villain is working towards redemption by aiding the hero, but they are repeatedly denied any credit.  They will continue taking action in the hopes of earning what they want, but never get it.  It means they’re still ‘allies’, but only in that they are superficially working together.
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About Charles Yallowitz

Charles E. Yallowitz was born, raised, and educated in New York. Then he spent a few years in Florida, realized his fear of alligators, and moved back to the Empire State. When he isn't working hard on his epic fantasy stories, Charles can be found cooking or going on whatever adventure his son has planned for the day. 'Legends of Windemere' is his first series, but it certainly won't be his last.
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9 Responses to 7 Tips to Having Enemies Become Allies

  1. L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:

    Great tips! As I read them I thought of Plastic Man. We mostly know him as a hero, but he was a criminal first. On The Brave and the Bold, he constantly fights the temptation to steal stuff (and sometimes gives in to the temptation). In some episodes, he had friction with Batman who would catch him stealing. I also think of Black Adam who kills people and has tension with heroes.

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    • I always thought Plastic Man was a good guy as soon as he got his powers. I know his background was that of a criminal. I’m thinking more the comics though where Batman says he’s possibly the most powerful superhero on Earth. Black Adam doesn’t play well with anyone.

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      • L. Marie's avatar L. Marie says:

        Yes, we know him more as a hero. That’s why I like his portrayal on BTBATB because he’s still tempted by crime. I also think of Loki, not from the show but from the second movie where he teamed up with Thor against Malekith. But his baser instincts eventually rose up again.

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      • I never knew what to think of MCU Loki. Felt like the popularity of the actor caused them to shift the character to hero.

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  2. These are good points to bear in mind in any character-to-character relationship where a degree of competitiveness exists. Thanks, Charles.

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  3. I’m getting a little Cassidy and Lloyd vibe here. These are great tips and make for some fun stories. You kind of make me want to try this.

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