Review: Legends of Windemere: Prodigy of Rainbow Tower by Charles E. Yallowitz

Danielle Taylor’s review of Prodigy of Rainbow Tower. 5 Sword Rating and great praise. Thank you, Danielle!

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***I was given a copy of Prodigy of Rainbow Tower by the author, Charles E. Yallowitz, in exchange for an honest review***

Genre: Fantasy, Action/Adventure

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18222147The action-packed, humor-filled, dramatic sequel to ‘Legends of Windemere: Beginning of a Hero’.

Battling through a demonic assassin and an army of monsters, Luke Callindor has survived his time at Hamilton Military Academy. Now, Luke and his friends must leave the safety of the academy to escort Duke Solomon’s heir down the L’dandrin River and into the safety of the city of Gods’ Voice. Joining them for this journey is Nyx, a powerful caster apprentice of Rainbow Tower. With her talent for combat magic and her short temper, Nyx will prove to be a challenge for Luke and all of their enemies.

Who will survive the harrowing trip down the L’dandrin River? And, who will be the one to break Luke’s trust?

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No Rhyme or Reason

The song has nothing to do with what I’m about to say, but I like it.  Not sure what is so catchy about it.

Anyway, I’ve toned down my number checking with a morning/noon/dinner/evening check.  Most times I go looking to see if a I have a new 5-star review that I can put into a Facebook blurb.  This is dangerous because it means I have to see when I get negative reviews, but that’s besides the point.

Last night I went to bed with both books in the 7,000 and nowhere near the lists.  This morning I woke up in the 5,000 and back on the list.  In fact, Prodigy of Rainbow Tower leaped into the 50’s on the eBook Fantasy list.  What does this mean?  I’m not really sure because I have no idea what the algorithms mean.  Sold over 20 of each book so far this month, so I’m thinking these are the factors:

  • Rate of sales
  • Amount of sales
  • Time book is out
  • Royalty amount

Not 100% certain on that last one.  Yet, I do see a burst in the numbers when I sell quickly.  The same level of burst in month two can have a weaker effect during month three.  It’s an interesting factor, which might not be heavy in the equation.  After all, there are a lot of books that have been out for years that are ruling the tops of the lists.

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One Man’s Cliche is Another Man’s Entertainment

Classic Cliche

Classic Cliche

Definition of cliche: a trite, stereotyped expression; a sentence or phrase, usually expressing a popular or common thought or idea, that has lost originality, ingenuity, and impact by long overuse.

One of the biggest accusations that’s been sent my way is that I use cliches.  Well, one problem with genre writing is that there are standards and traditions that you really need to use a few of.  If you don’t use some of the ‘cliches’ then you’re not in the genre.  For fantasy, this can include magic, swords, medieval setting, and the overall atmosphere of the book.  My point here is that you can find at least one cliche in every book.  Although, this depends on the reader.

A person who has not read much of a genre won’t know the cliches.  A halfling thief like Nimby can be a cliche to hardcore fantasy readers and a unique character to somebody new to the genre.  This leads me to believe that cliche is really subjective and in the eye of the beholder.  I know this is not a popular thought because a lot of people hold onto their hated cliches more than stuff they like.  God forbid something you claim is cliche is proven not to be.  Such a revelation ruins worlds for some people.

Still a little confused?  Here is where this idea came from.  Nimby is a halfling thief, which is a rather standard Dungeons & Dragons character type.  I pushed for an interesting character, which requires readers to move beyond the archetype.  Well, a few people sent me messages about how Nimby was an utter cliche and they hated him.  Fair enough, but they had some advice within the same message.  This was that Nimby as the retired thief should have been utilized as a red herring for the reader.  Suspicions should have been thrown on him that he was the Hellfire Elf in disguise or working with the demon.  Really?  The retired thief being the assassin everyone is looking for is considered a cliche, especially the way that was being suggested.  I’m not against using this tactic in a story, but to point at a character as cliche and then suggest I add another ‘cliche’ to him is rather odd.

This is why I think cliche is in the eye of the beholder.  Every reader has different experiences with reading and different books in their background.  This brings a varied perspective, which can include a ‘cliche’ not being a cliche to them.  It’s the mindset that everyone has seen something before that irks me at times because that isn’t true.  We throw this accusation out as fact when it’s really a subjective opinion.  It can drive an author mad trying to figure out what’s a cliche and what isn’t.

Is there a way for an author to get around this?  Yes.  Just write what you love and avoid plagiarism because that’s not the same as cliche.  You’re going to be influenced by what came before you.  That will show.  Put your own twist or mark on it, but understand that some people will ignore that twist/mark in favor of finding cliches.  There are readers who purposely read to point out what a new author has ‘taken’ from those that came before and to harp on this.  They’re part of the literary world, so take your lumps and enjoy writing what you love to write.

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Syndicate Shout Outs! #7

Give a look at these new Indie Authors curtosey of the Literary Syndicate.

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Syndicate Spotlight #8: Moorehead Manor

Syndicate Spotlight on short story Moorehead Manor by David McMullen-Sullivan. Get into the Halloween mindset with this horror story.

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The Thinker

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The review is scared
Honesty is a must
No book is truly horrid
Or perfect in every way
The stars are secondary
To this critic’s words

A positive is shown
Along with what needs work
Favorite characters
And weak subplots
Lengthy thoughts and ponderings
Showing a depth of view

These reviews hold meat
To feed an author’s growth
No stroking of ego
Or destruction of heart
Simple truth of word
Overshadowing the rating


This is part of a set going up today about the different review types I’ve seen.  This isn’t saying any are good or bad, but there are interesting perspectives on some of these review types.

 

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Mrs. Poe Available as of Today

A great Edgar Allan Poe book is available today!

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Hey everyone–just  a reminder for all of you that are interested in this

great book–Mrs. Poe by Lynn Cullen is out today! You can get a copy here:

 

Mrs. Poe

 

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Papi Talk!… With S.K. Nicholls

Check out this interview with S.K. Nicholls!

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The Despiser

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The taste of bile
Within their mouths
At every word you wrote
This book is an abomination
Upon the literary world
Now it must be skinned

Accusations of cliche
And why it pales to others
Immature and bland
Too much action
Too much chatter
The descriptions are too long

A scathing review
With hurtful claims
This author should be banned
Or replaced by a mangy cat
Insults and declarations of hate
Over reasons for dislike

The author takes these barbs
Accepting they exist
Some people will be hateful
As you offend their tender rules
Let them rant and rave
With no depth to their debate


This is part of a set going up today about the different review types I’ve seen.  This isn’t saying any are good or bad, but there are interesting perspectives on some of these review types.

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The Praiser

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The book is closed
Yet their mind remains
Trapped within the world
Adventuring with characters
Who have become close friends
They must be shared

A review is born
Five stars are shined
Yet something’s a little off
No details given
Only blind praise
This book has no flaws

A joyous event
That makes the author smile
Though others frown
Claiming this praise false
Made by friend or kin
With no proof to back them up

Still the review has merit
A fan is always welcome
Telltale sign your path is true
And your words can touch a heart
These are for the author
To give them strength against the storm

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

This is part of a set going up today about the different review types I’ve seen.  This isn’t saying any are good or bad, but there are interesting perspectives on some of these review types.

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