The Barbarian City of Stonehelm

Machu Picchu

Machu Picchu

Tribe of the Snow Tiger will introduce a new region of Windemere, which is the edge of the northern mountains.  This is just beyond the border of Serab and is mostly wilderness, but that doesn’t mean it’s devoid of civilization.  This is where Timoran’s people live in the city of Stonehelm.  I used Machu Picchu as a picture because they are similar in appearance and being remote.  So, what does this place look like?

Stonehelm Region

Stonehelm Region

Ignoring my horrible map-making skills, this is the general area for Stonehelm.  The mountains curve around with the city tucked into the crook.  After writing the book, the valley is straighter and probably a lot shorter.  I added some guard towers and tiny bushes in there too.  You can see the far end from the city, which has a massive wall on the western side.  The other sides are protected by the lower mountains with the backside having a fortress built into it.  This is where the Snow Tiger King and Queen live, but the structure has the public library on the top floor and is flanked by the family towers of the high ranking generals.  Don’t think that this is total classism because the towers are also used for emergency supply storage and bunkers in case of an attack.  If a family refuses to allow these things then their honor is damaged and their rank is given to someone more worthy.

The buildings are all stone with thatched roofs and they don’t get bigger than one story unless they’re inns.  Nearly every house has a penned area for livestock or crops, which is shared among the people.  This is included with the hunting and gathering that is done in shifts.  Most of the gatherers are children who are lead by the shamans who teach them what can be eaten.  There aren’t any casters in the barbarian tribes, but the shamans fill the void.  These people communicate with spirits and use the natural energy of the land to create spells.  Shamans are like a combination of casters and priests in that they pray for power, but it’s to spirits more than the gods.

The surrounding area does have some clumps of forest and several watering holes that are used during the lean seasons.  Most days, the hunters travel onto the northern plains and hills where they can find elk and dread boar.  Something else that the hunters do is keep an eye out for wild brew ingredients.  These are herbs and berries used to make Ifrit mead, wild rum, and the non-alcoholic drinks that are given to outsiders and children.  Keep in mind that nearly every culture in Windemere has unique drinks.  Yet, the barbarians have another reason why they brew stuff that gives a warm sensation to the body.  Winters can be brutal with winds whipping off the colder regions to the east.  They live in a region that can be struck by sudden snowstorms, so it’s a necessity to have something that will give you a little internal warmth until you find shelter.

If you read the books and met Timoran then you know that these barbarians aren’t the ‘Big People Smash!’ types.  They’re warriors, but also philosophers and artists among other things.  A reason for this is because their ancestral rage is very dangerous.  These non-warrior activities actually help temper the barbarians and make it less likely that they will snap.  This is also why Stonehelm is a developed city instead of a crude town like most outsiders expect.  A push for more civilized activities has led to a unique culture even among the barbarian tribes.  Most of those around Windemere are fine with letting their primal natures fly, but the Snow Tigers went in another direction.  One has to wonder why that is.  Maybe the answer is in Tribe of the Snow Tiger.

Seriously though, there is a secret about Timoran’s tribe that came out of nowhere.  Not that it doesn’t make sense, but I didn’t see I was heading toward it when I created Stonehelm in the first place.  It was a fun twist that I think does a lot for Timoran and his people.

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Calling Authors – Come and be interviewed

Unknown's avatarDon Massenzio

InterviewBack in February I put out a plea to authors that might want to be interviewed on my site. A lot has happened since then. One thing is that the number of followers for my blog has grown exponentially. I attribute the popularity of these authors as one of the contributing factors for this growth.

As we wind our way through May, I am coming to the end of my scheduled interviews. Beginning May 16th, I will have openings in my schedule to interview additional authors.

I’ve learned a lot from the interviews conducted thus far and I will be making some changes going forward including adjusting my questions so that we can dig further into your work and your background and really give your readers and potential readers insight into what, how, and why you write.

It’s been a rewarding experience for me and I hope that it has…

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The Return of Dawn Addison?

Haruhara Haruko from FLCL

Haruhara Haruko from FLCL

I mentioned over the weekend that I was thinking about Dawn Addison from Raven’s Hold.  Then the week got away from me, but now I’m back to post this for the . . . wow, those are horrible stats.  Well, moving on.

At the beginning of the year, I ambitiously said I’d write a sequel for Raven’s Hold and post it on the blog throughout October.  For those that didn’t read it, this was the supernatural thriller I attempted.  Scary things happening in an asylum, main character is trying to escape, and bad stuff happens.  Dawn Addison was one of the bad guys and she really stole the show.  This character was insane, fun, devious, very memorable, and probably the best thing to come out of the story.  So it was a shame when this year started off so poorly that I announced that I wouldn’t be doing any more.  To be fair, 2016 has really sucked.

Anyway, I’ve been trying to find a place for Dawn and it hasn’t been working out.  She is a rather unique character and I’d have to rewrite her.  In the Shattered States, she’d lose the supernatural stuff, which is a big part of her mentality and drive.  She could be a figure that they run into and she thinks there are ghosts, but then everything would be either traps or coincidences.  Dawn kind of loses her menace at that point.  In Windemere, the supernatural stuff would be rather common for that world and her insanity wouldn’t really factor into that being around.  Why would anybody be surprised that there are ghosts in a world where you have dragons, zombies, orcs, elves, vampires, trolls, and all manner of monsters?  That includes ghosts too.

I considered having her make a small appearance in every series.  Just a strange wanderer through my mind that has no impact on the story.  For example, Dawn appears to have a chat with Lloyd before he moves on.  Then people see her asking for Nyx’s autograph before disappearing.  Rather silly and pointless.  This was when I thought she could be a character who is roaming dimensions in search of something.  This did get scrapped because I do like her as a villain.

So, what am I thinking and hoping to get feedback on?

I’m considering another attempt at a sequel that will be posted day by day in October.  This would be an unedited manuscript since I still have so much on my plate and this is still in the planning stages.  The new story is that Dawn is back to killing in the real world and only a detective considers her a suspect.  The story is a race to stop Dawn from completing a list and each person dies in a bizarre or brutal way.  A big part is delving into Dawn’s past and discovering what drove her to Raven’s Hold.  She will still have strange things happen around her, which leads to death and mayhem.

The problem I’m having is deciding on the setting.  Having Dawn get chased around a big city is fun, but I think she worked better in a contained area.  So I was leaning toward having her in charge of a hotel that appeared overnight and is very popular.  It’s an easy way for her to get victims too.  Probably have a few deaths happen off the premises like a zoo incident or one where the target is convinced to leave by the cop.  This might turn into a rather open game of cat and mouse with Dawn routinely teasing the cop.  I mean, how do you arrest someone for murder when it was done in a way that can’t be explained?

All of this is because I can’t get Dawn Addison out of my head.  She really should be used again and get her full story told.  What do people think?

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Let’s visit Ambeth, on Lisa Burton Radio #RRBC

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It’s time for another edition of Lisa Burton Radio. I’m your host, Lisa the robot girl.

Today’s show is sponsored by the Ambeth Chronicles Series, by author Helen Jones. Make sure to thank our sponsors by visiting their sites and checking out their books.

My special guest today is Denoris, Dark Lord of Ambeth, and counsellor to the High King. Sounds like a pretty sweet job to me. Welcome to the show Denoris.

“Um, Denoris? Why are you staring at me like that?”

<Laughs> “I’m sorry, what do you mean, robot girl?”

“I was built in a concept lab, and am an electronic human being. Don’t you have those in Ambeth?”

“Fascinating. Well, that explains a lot. No, we don’t have any robots in Ambeth, but I can think of a few things I could use a girl like you for. I quite like strong women. Shame about…

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7 Signs You Might Be a Channeler

Fullmetal and Flame Alchemists

Fullmetal and Flame Alchemists

For those of you who don’t know, a channeler is a special kind of magic user found in Windemere.  They absorb the ambient magic and use it, along with their own, to cast powerful spells.  So, how do you know if you’re a channeler?  Here are 7 ways to figure it out:

  1. You get the odd feeling that going too long without casting a spell is bad.  Not the ‘getting rusty’ type of bad.  It’s more that you’re pretty sure continually absorbing magic and not releasing any of it is putting the world in danger.  Thankfully, this is always solved by your sneezes including a bolt of lightning.
  2. Even if you get the incantations and gestures wrong, the spell still happens without much of a problem.  Nobody can understand how someone with such horrible memory and eye-hand coordination can still pull off complicated spells.  Good thing nobody has figured out that you aren’t even trying and are merely muttering Dwarven recipes instead of actual spells.  They’d probably get more annoyed if that came to light.
  3. Magical items and you do not get along.  You’ve yet to use one that doesn’t make it difficult to cast spells afterwards.  The teachers say that it’s natural for students, but you have a feeling that they are lying.  Probably because they look worried whenever you mention a coldness in your body until your magic returns.  Not to mention the times you melted, unraveled, exploded, or flat out erased an artifact because you swear it insulted your mother.
  4. Anyone using Magic Sight around you is temporarily blinded by your aura.  It’s gotten so bad that you carry apology cards around just in case.
  5. Illusions are the bane of your existence.  If you are this powerful being of magic then seeing through these things shouldn’t be a problem.  Yet you routinely run into doors that aren’t there, flee from illusionary monsters, and have conversations with the fake guards that are placed on the wall.  Even worse, those illusionary people talk back and you enjoy their company more than real people.
  6. A strange, brown-haired woman with a red bird keeps invading your dreams.  She talks about magic and how you need to reach your potential.  Though her real desire is for you to get off your butt and have some kids.  Something about her not being patient for the next generation, but you tend to wake up halfway through her lecture.
  7. After all the spells you’ve hurled and caster duels you’ve won, an important fact comes to mind.  You trained to be a warrior and have never read a spellbook in your life.  Now that you think about it, you’re not even sure how you got in this position.  This might explain why the rest of the adventuring party keeps sending you ahead as a scout.  Also why they never show up until the fight is nearly over.  Maybe it’s time to renegotiate that contract.
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Teaser Tuesday: Old Friends at Night

Finding teasers from Tribe of the Snow Tiger is really tough.  So much reveals the secrets in the story, so I can only take parts of side adventures or from before the big reveal.  That happens early on, so I don’t have much.  I’m hoping to release this book soon, but searching for an excerpt showed several typos.  Guess I’m editing instead of writing the new book and I hope I can do it within the week.  This is more of a search for missing words and typos, so we’ll see how it goes.  Anyway, enjoy the reunion below.

Timoran Wrath by Jason Pedersen

Timoran Wrath by Jason Pedersen

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