The Moral of the Story

Funny thing about stories with morals is that we typically grew up with them.  Then, we get upset when entertainment has messages.  Sure, there’s a trend of the message overshadowing the fun, but I’ve seen people get upset at the slightest twinkle of a moral.  Why is that?

Well, I’ve thought about this long and hard.  Not really.  It just popped in my head and made my own theory.  When we are younger, the morals we are taught tend to be fairly universal.  We are also too young to critical think our way into diving into an Internet flame war over things.  As adults, we have a ‘stable’ moral code, which we hold onto with no real attempt to change it.  Right is right, left is left, wrong is wrong, and nobody can change our minds.  This might happen subconsciously, especially if we run into something that may force us to introspect.  One thing I’ve learned in my 43 years is that humans hate gazing into their own psyche and admitting their own flaws.  It’s painful and brings past actions into question.

The funny thing is that every story has some kind of moral or message.  Characters need a moral code in order to be seen as more than 2-D.  The more nuanced they are, the more interesting they can be.  People who are very ‘black and white’ in their mindset have trouble with nuance, so they can take things the wrong way.  Still, authors really need to consider a character’s moral code in order to give them more meat.  Feels like you can’t win in that situation since you’ll inevitably have a character who acts in a way that readers don’t agree with.  If it isn’t a villain, you’re in trouble.  After all, authors are judged by the morality of their least noble non-villain.

An interesting aspect of fiction is that there really is a moral somewhere in them.  Fairy tales are blatant since they are for children, but those for adults use these as themes.  It is either the full plot or for an individual character.  These morality struggles are designed to get audience’s thinking and talking, which can lead to revisiting the story for more information.  At least, this is how it used to be, but there has become an issue of messages being so blunt that there is no real discussion.  It makes people declare that they hate messages in their entertainment even though you find it everywhere.  For example:

I played a simple game called ‘Kirby 64: The Crystals Shards’.  You play as Kirby who is a pink puffball that eats everything and can steal abilities.  The story is that he has to help a fairy girl find pieces of a broken crystal to fix the galaxy.  I think because there isn’t any dialog.  Anyway, it’s a game where you can only go forward and back as well as eat or use abilities to defeat enemies.  Is there a message?  Yes, you can see one in the small parts where Kirby needs help from one of his three allies.  It’s small and innocuous, but it does show how one can’t save the galaxy without a little help.

Did that sound ridiculous?  Maybe, but that’s how morals in fiction tend to work once you get older.  Authors expect their readers to be thoughtful enough to figure things out and develop their own answers.  If they miss it, the story could still be entertaining, but there might something missing to bring people back.  This is difficult to pull off these days since many people find their echo chamber and stay in there.  More often, adults feel like they’ve matured enough in their morality and don’t have to consider any other possibilities are nuances.  The parade of bludgeoning messages doesn’t help since it makes people dig deeper into their dens.  So, I think this makes the addition of morals nearly impossible in some genres.  At least, nothing that could be taken in a variety of ways and isn’t ‘good is good and evil is evil’.

Anyway, what do you think about morals in fiction?  Are they even possible in a world where everyone is out to be offended?

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What’s Happening in the Writer’s World–March

Jacqui here at Story Empire with the March edition of “What’s happening in the literary world?” Writing used to be simple: Get an idea. Write (or …

What’s Happening in the Writer’s World–March
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Happy Leap Year!

I’m pausing the poetry for a week. How often do you get to make a Leap Year post?  Yes, I know it’s once every four years.  That’s not my point.  I think.  Eh, I just wanted an excuse to post some funnies for it.  Also:

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ALL LEAP YEAR PEOPLE!

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Happy National Pancake Day!

Yup.  It’s National Pancake Day.  Supposedly since I seem to remember it showing up more than once last year.  Anyway, I always enjoy pancakes even though I shouldn’t eat them very often.  Carbs are really heavy in my stomach.  It’s also busy right now, so I figure a holiday post is better than trying to phone in something deeper.  Enjoy.

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Guest post – Mae Clair – The Keeping Place #newbook

I’m very pleased to have the very talented author Mae Clair as a guest. She has a new book and would like to give you the details. If you have read …

Guest post – Mae Clair – The Keeping Place #newbook
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Mindset — How To Connect with Readers

The writer’s mindset has everything to do with how the story resonates with the reader. We’re all familiar with Robert Frost’s famous quote, right? “…

Mindset — How To Connect with Readers
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Questions 3 and Look Back at ‘Allure of the Gypsies’

Cover Art by Jason Pedersen

This book is when the champions storyline finally came to light.  Legends of Windemere: Allure of the Gypsies had a lot of changes happen to the heroes, including a few power upgrades.  I felt that this story was easier to write than the others, but it came with a bunch of issues.  Most notably, the introduction of Sari and her affect on Luke’s relationship with Kira.  More on that later since that was a major sticking point for people.  Anyway, this book had some challenges that I feel I handled rather well.

The biggest challenge was that this was stepping into the main story.  There were hints and clues about it in the previous volumes, but now the heroes were aware of what they were getting involved with.  It had an impact on everything because the weight of the adventure was heavier.  Windemere was now at stake or at least the continent they were on.  The gods were getting as involved as they could and Luke Callindor was being forced to face his past.  It sounds chaotic when smashed together like that, but I took my time fleshing out all of the plot points.  This is why Allure of the Gypsies ended up being longer than its predecessors.  I had a lot of closure, foreshadowing, new paths, and character development to put into the story.  Maybe I bit off more than I could chew, but I always have an issue with ‘Act 3’ sections.  Not sure why any chapters or books that are a multiple 3 give me headaches.

This book also got me my first really negative reviews and a few personal attacks.  I’ve mentioned before that Kira Grasdon and Luke Callindor were never supposed to have a relationship, but they clicked so well in Beginning of a Hero.  Originally, Luke and Sari were supposed to have a simple, clean, unchallenged relationship, which was incredibly boring.  It also didn’t seem to fit Sari when she showed up since she was heavily traumatized and I never got the feeling that she was going to settle down out of fear of getting hurt again.  This is why I had Kira come from a culture where a person has multiple partners (dating and sexual) until they are married.  It’s to make sure they find the right person since her culture was nearly destroyed by rampant cheating and the ensuing divorces.  This was always supposed to be something that Luke was uncomfortable with and agreeing to since he wants to make Kira happy.  I made this clear in the second book, including how she wasn’t thrilled with it either since they couldn’t follow the introduction of partners protocol.  Felt like I had all of my bases covered to explain what was happening without admitting that they are supposed to have a tragic love triangle.

I was wrong because I didn’t expect Kira’s ‘lover’ causing such a stir.  Forgot the idiot’s name, but he was supposed to be the opposite of Luke.  Brash, insulting, and an unrepentant asshole.  He was chosen by Kira’s father and he supposedly slept with her at some point.  Looking back, the timeline doesn’t even make sense for how this guy and Kira could have hooked up.  Funny thing is that some readers believed this guy and demanded that Luke murder him in cold blood.  I had always been toying with the idea that this guy was lying after she rejected his advances, but so many people turned on Kira (who never showed up in the book) that I felt like that option would come off as desperate.  I’m still amazed at how some people turned on Kira, Sari, and Nyx within this scenario, but nobody actually hated this male character for gloating about his conquest.  Not openly.  Sadly, Kira never recovered from this book she was never physically in and I got a lot of hateful comments and messages over the whole thing.  Keep in mind that this was a romantic subplot that was just starting and one of the characters did not appear to add their side to the story.  This is why I won’t go near complicated love triangles again.

Yeah, that debacle is what I remember most from Allure of the Gypsies and it nearly made me want to quit publishing.  I’m thankful to the people who gave me positive feedback even with some criticism.  Would I do things differently?  Long term, I would probably not try to repair Kira’s image and continue with my original plan.  You have three characters (Kira, Luke, and Sari) who are immature and learning making mistakes like a normal person.  I should have held to that a lot more.  This book certainly taught me that I can’t please everyone and bowing to those who are enraged won’t help because they’ve already made up their minds.

Questions 3:

  1. Do you think characters should be allowed to make childish mistakes in fiction?
  2. What would you say to someone who has suffered a major trauma?
  3. If you were a ghost, what’s the first thing you would do?
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Questions 3: Happy National Fairy Tale Day

Maleficent

Today is National Fairy Tale Day!  I was going to do a bunch of memes, but I thought it would be more fun to let people comment on the subject.  Most of us grew up with some fairy tales.  They aren’t always the same ones, but we know of them.  Fairy tales span cultures to teach children lessons and entertain.  Many adults love them too since it reminds them of younger days.  So, let’s get to the questions.

  1. What is your favorite fairy tale from childhood or adulthood?
  2. What do you think makes a great fairy tale?
  3. If you could have any item from a fairy tale, what would it be?
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Words that pack a punch – part 2

Hi, SE’ers! I’m back again with another common word we use in our writing. I hope today’s post will give you new ideas on alternate words that can …

Words that pack a punch – part 2
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Lego Haul from 2023

I actually finished these sets during the 2023 Holiday Break.  Some people may have seen them on Instagram.  I already had a bunch of ideas for Sunday posts, so I kept these for a day when I didn’t have any ideas.  They weren’t challenging, but they were relaxing and I needed that.  Rumor has it that this summer will see the release of a ‘Barad Dur’ set, which is from Lord of the Rings.  That’s the tower with Sauron’s eye on top.  Going to save up for that one while trying to figure out where I can put it.  Enjoy these pictures though.

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